Aids
04-11-2005, 01:25 AM
im not very good at modeling cars or for that matter anything but this is a nissin 350z crits plz
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y59/volkofsky/350z1.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y59/volkofsky/350z1.jpg
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Aids
04-11-2005, 01:43 AM
im not very patient with modeling so i cant go slow heres another updatehttp://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y59/volkofsky/350z2.jpg
Aids
04-11-2005, 02:34 AM
heres another update some wheels ambient occlustion
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y59/volkofsky/dabigone.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y59/volkofsky/dabigone.jpg
exidge
04-11-2005, 11:57 AM
Ye and I'm not very polite so I can't say that's nice what I see.
Come on, if you want to make this car .. make an effort. About some crit: Just compare the original pics with yours ...and you will see.
Come on, if you want to make this car .. make an effort. About some crit: Just compare the original pics with yours ...and you will see.
Cyberdemon
04-11-2005, 01:35 PM
Unfortunately car modelling requires a lot of patience. I think its pretty obvious if you compare your car to any of the 350Z models or photos where all the problems lie.
Your panels are all completely flat, none of the lines are accurate, and the topology of the model is clearly in bad shape.
It's a good start, but you said it yourself that it was fast, and thats the results you'll get.
If you want to get better, the only choice you have is to be patient and spend alot of time making sure every vertex and every edge is where it should be. If you don't want to take that time then it stinks to try and have people critique your work, if you're not even willing to critique it yourself first.
Your panels are all completely flat, none of the lines are accurate, and the topology of the model is clearly in bad shape.
It's a good start, but you said it yourself that it was fast, and thats the results you'll get.
If you want to get better, the only choice you have is to be patient and spend alot of time making sure every vertex and every edge is where it should be. If you don't want to take that time then it stinks to try and have people critique your work, if you're not even willing to critique it yourself first.
Rookz
04-11-2005, 01:43 PM
Unfortunately car modelling requires a lot of patience. I think its pretty obvious if you compare your car to any of the 350Z models or photos where all the problems lie.
Your panels are all completely flat, none of the lines are accurate, and the topology of the model is clearly in bad shape.
It's a good start, but you said it yourself that it was fast, and thats the results you'll get.
If you want to get better, the only choice you have is to be patient and spend alot of time making sure every vertex and every edge is where it should be. If you don't want to take that time then it stinks to try and have people critique your work, if you're not even willing to critique it yourself first.
couldnt have said it better
people that say "oh, i made this fast" piss me off, because most of the time what they produce is really low quality, and by saying "oh, i made this fast", they pretty much try to get you to say "wow that is totally cool for the amount of time spent on it", or if you say something bad about their model, they just say "well...i did say i made it fast...", in most cases anyway
Your panels are all completely flat, none of the lines are accurate, and the topology of the model is clearly in bad shape.
It's a good start, but you said it yourself that it was fast, and thats the results you'll get.
If you want to get better, the only choice you have is to be patient and spend alot of time making sure every vertex and every edge is where it should be. If you don't want to take that time then it stinks to try and have people critique your work, if you're not even willing to critique it yourself first.
couldnt have said it better
people that say "oh, i made this fast" piss me off, because most of the time what they produce is really low quality, and by saying "oh, i made this fast", they pretty much try to get you to say "wow that is totally cool for the amount of time spent on it", or if you say something bad about their model, they just say "well...i did say i made it fast...", in most cases anyway
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