Master and Servant 2D Entry: Sandro Falcone

[Maipiu]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1112972454_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1112972454_large.jpg)

Hi,
this is my Entry for this challenge.
This is the first sketch made with my wacom Graphictable...next updates come soon.

greetings Sandro FASA

[Maipiu]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1112972849_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1112972849_large.jpg)

This is the Finaldraw,coloring come next ;)

Sandro FASA

[Maipiu]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1112973124_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1112973124_large.jpg)

This is the first stage of coloring,i use Photoshop for the coloring.Important for me is the selection tool in Photoshop,so i can make great curves and lines and color the shadows...

greetings FASA

[Maipiu]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1112973492_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1112973492_large.jpg)

This is the next stage of coloring,the last one come next....I hope you like the final image ;)

Greetings FASA

[Maipiu]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1112974106_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1112974106_large.jpg)

This is the Final Image,i have worked 2 Days for all....i like this image very much...and i hope you like it too.
This is my Final Entry for this Competition....

Make the force are with you all ;)

Greetings Sandro Falcone FASA

[Maipiu]

Here is the higher quality image.....i hope sooo much that you like it ;)

greetings bye FASA

http://www.necluria.com/alinahase_fertig.jpg

[Maipiu]

Hi the idea of this image is really crazy.
An Woman that think she is an Bunny in a world of Fantasy and her servant an little Fable Woman with Wings that`s delivery his Master`s Food.
Sorry my bad English ,i`m practize it.And this is an possibility to write and explain my thoughts in the English language.

Feel free to comment my Work..and constructive critics are wellcome.....and questions about the draw and the draw techniques that i use are welcome ;)

My Name are Sandro and i`m Italian Artist that live in Germany....i`m 28 years old.

Feel free to write me...and please sorry that i have post the final Image so soon.
But im proud to post other materials that you want see....also write me ;))

Greetings Sandro Falcone FASAhttp://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon7.gif

[Slav]

hi there fasa good work although if i could suggest a few things...



1. i am not sure what's going on when it comes to her head... or whets on it. very unclear.

2. the background looks like you took a random image and ran it through a filter in photoshop.

3 the carrots seem to be pasted in ... something like floating in the scene not actually in it...

4 the grass looks to repetitive and is not convincing.



at closer look the image over all just doesnt seem to be done.

best of luck and i hope you tighten your image up well done this far.

[Maipiu]

Hello Slav,

thanks for your interest for my Draw,and i`m happy that you like it.
Your questions are interesting for me and your crits welcome.

1.She looks dreaming and crazy and really she doesnt know what he do,she is an crazy Master,sooo crazy that she have the force to controll little Fairy cratures....my thougt was to draw an picture that are crazy and beautiful in one.

2.The Background are Drawn with big pensils in Photoshop ,but i have found the referenze in a Book and i have used this referenze to paint it in the background,yes you have right that the stile of the background is a little bit another of the foreground,my goal was to give the background not the priority,the backround are only to give the drawing an Athmosphäre.

3.The carrots,are not pastet but really paintet,but i used referenz to redraw the strukture and color and highlights of this.

4.Yes u have right......gives an possibility to change the final image?this was an Mistake from me to post it soo soon...sorry....gives an possibility to update the final postet image?

@Slav
Thanks for your post...fell free to write me your thought`shttp://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon12.gif

Sandro

[TerianSilva]

Hey Fasa,

this is a nice piece and I see you put a good bunch of work in it but I think you have the talent to improve it a bit more. You work incredibly fast but why not takin' the left time to make it even better ;)

My general suggestion is to add more definition overall.

The teeth are a good example. They are only a near white shape. They would look much better with specular and shadows.

Take a closer look at the eyelashes. They look too similar.

There are some other points to mention but I am sure you see these by yourself.

Greets,
marcus

[Maipiu]

Hello Teriansilva,

Thanks for write me and post here and your interest for my Draw,

you have said the right and i acceppt your critics...i must take more time for my Pictures.

And do more details in my Work.....yes i will do thishttp://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon4.gifhttp://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon12.gif

Thanks to you Terian

greetings Sandro Falcone FASA

[pariah3D]

I like the overall idea and the image so far, but I also would recommend you to spend some more time into the final image.

I think the image needs much more shading. The basecolors are good chosen so far, but I think you can shade much more detail out of it especially at the teeths. Because I know some of your traditional art pieces, I know you can do that much better than in this image :)

Moreover I´d suggest to smooth the contours out a little bit, to reduce the crossing of the colors and the hard contrast a little bit.

To improve the shadows an lighting, painting an invisible light source into the image is a good trick, so you know where the light is coming from and how the shadows fall.

[Maipiu]

Hello Pariah,

hi thanks for your critics...i hope i can correct my mistake (i have post my final to soon),
so that i can correct and realize your critics and so Draw an better picture.

Thanks to all for your interest and critics... ;)http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon7.gif

Feel free to write me and to give me critics...

Sandro FASA

[Maipiu]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1113092433_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1113092433_large.jpg)

Hi,

i have updated the final image,but this Picture is not really the final...i was happy when you can give me more constructive critics,so that i can make an really interesting Picture.

Thanks to all

Greetings Sandro Falcone FASA

[Maipiu]

And here in a better Quality ;)

http://www.necluria.com/alinahase14e.jpg

[Eraxion]

Hi,

there are some things about the light and the shadows you should change.
the shadow of the flowers on each leaf is to strong and colorless.
those kind of "material" as the leafs is more transparent.
the carrots looks like them are glowing. also they re to glossy.
i would make the grass much brighter. bring more movement in it. its really static.
as already mentioned, make the edgeds and contours a bit softer.

crazy idea...keep it up!

[Maipiu]

Hi Eraxion,thanks for your posting...and thanks for your constructive critics.

Yes the shadows are really to dark i will correct this and make it more transparenthttp://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon13.gif
And yes more live must in the Picture....have you ideas...what i can do?
Ok i will give my best to correct this points....

Feel free my Friend to continue to give me critics.....thankshttp://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon7.gif

greetings Sandro

[Maipiu]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1113098249_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1113098249_large.jpg)

Hi here an optimation of my Picture,i have blurred the background to focus the bunny masterin...and i think that give the picture more reality...i think and more live....and i have corect the lightning...i love warm colors....

Please fell free to give me constructive critics...thanks to you

Sandro Falcone FASA

[Maipiu]

Here an better Quality Picture

http://www.necluria.com/alinahase14hd_big.jpg

[Schlee]

It looks very good. I like this kind of art.

The gloss effects are used very well and they are fitting.

For me personally this is a beautiful picture. I can feel and see the passion of the painter(FASA) in this image.

Great work!

[Schlee]

double post... sorry

[Maipiu]

Hi Schlee,

thanks for your nice post.I`m so happy that you like this Picture.
Feel free to give me critics.....thanks you ;)

Greetings

Sandro Falcone FASA

[Slider|SD]

Hey Sandro (FASA),

good to see another pic here from you!
You know, I always like the pictures and models you make! :)
Once again, you did a very good job!

Your friend,
Stefan

[Maipiu]

Hello Slider,

nice to see you here,thank you very much for your visiting my Competition Entry.
Thanks that you like the Picture,and that you like my Work....

When you have critics about my Entry please fell free to write herehttp://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon13.gif

See you

Sandro Falcone FASA

[Maipiu]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1116195662_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7312/7312_1116195662_large.jpg)

This is my endImage for this competition.
I hope you like it.

greetings FASA

[Prs-Phil]

hi there FASA,

I like the idea of the image, it has potential. A superhot women, laying halfnaked in a nice field on a sunny day in the mountains, innocently nibbling on a carrot with her servant constantly bringing her more so that she never runs out.

Allthough the idea is good. I might not have the artistic insight of a Schlee (who remarkably speeks your english and seems to have registered the same day you posted your secondlast update and since then NEVER posted again) that can feel and see the passion in this painting but I would say there are still some things missing.

Like the background, very precice usage of filters but I still think it got a bit out of hand, very dominating the background seems to be.

I´m also not such a fan of generic gras, the gras seems to repeat itself in the same size, lenght and direction across the picture.

The chick is kinda hot, so you haven't really shot passed the idea of making a hot chick in a field.
Personally, I´m against plasticalsurgery, because I like women that are natural, not women with plasticlike fake lips, it just looks so framed on a women.
But, when a women can grab me tight like she could with theese manly and seemingly partly photosourced and a bit repainted hands then I´m in heaven. (and a photoquality view onto these pornstar tits)
They must seem to be magical to, because I cant see the carrotactually beeing held by her fingers, so she must have really good control over her jaw or it is just the wind.

But hey, one really good thing. The way you captured the carrots. Wow perfect, they look so juicy, clean and natural, they could be out of an advertisment of a grocerystore. Fantastic, and the harmony, all the carrots seems to be the same, wow, I guess Schlee will agree with me here.

Hey I´m beginning to like this piece, I can see so many new things.

I also love they way you have brought across the servant. Damn, if I had one of these buggers flying around my head I would flyswat it to.
The movment of the her and the carrot looks very believable. I esspecially like the lowreseffect you have put onto the smaller carrot creating and illusion of movement but you can still it is from the same brand and place as the bigger carrot.

Still the overall look is consistant and the urge to take off her steel brah does get larger if the fear of getting shockfrostedburned by these 2 katees on her head that are burning snow O_o wouldn't be greater.

Well, as my eyes glide over her perfect hair across to these psyichadelic eyelashes I have to take my attention away form this piece of work and in the words of Schlee " I can feel and see the painter in this image"

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