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trailerpark
09-30-2002, 12:41 AM
Going to colour this, looking for critiques. I know it was a bad idea to make the foot and hand touch, ill fix that while colouring but any other critiques would be great!
Titan
10-02-2002, 04:18 PM
I like the drawing style, reminds me of the old dominoes pizza gnome!:)

tough to critique, if youre going for a toonish style, then who is to say whats wrong?

the only thing that really sticks out to me is the fact that it might be a little over rendered...too much interior line work that more less isnt needed.

if youre gonna color it, I would lighten up onthe rendering lines to showof more of the color..
trailerpark
10-06-2002, 05:23 PM
Just an update, any critiques would be great!
rason
10-06-2002, 06:11 PM
awsome

the first pic you tried to hard with the hand on the left


second pic, well............is jus awsome








moral of this smoking kills us :thumbsup:
trailerpark
10-06-2002, 07:35 PM
thanx rason! ya im going to fix the hand, when i start adding colour to it going to pull alot of the lines out!
rason
10-06-2002, 07:44 PM
np


i also like the fact the you used orange



i was thinking green but that would look realy ****ed up :p


so good call:beer:
trailerpark
10-07-2002, 01:14 AM
another,update, Any critiques welcome
dmcgrath
10-07-2002, 07:07 PM
Excellent stuff, This is more along the lines of what I suggested for your last piece. Using that heavy linework, but making it colors instead of just black. Really cool. Finish it and ill give you some more of these.


:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :thumbsup:
trailerpark
10-07-2002, 09:35 PM
Thanx dmcgrath. I did apply your advice from my other post to this one. after I'm done this one. I'll do the same to my leprechaun!
trailerpark
10-08-2002, 08:47 PM
another update, mucked around with the hand. not sure if i like the colour of the finger nails.
trailerpark
10-10-2002, 12:02 AM
another update, other hand
heAdKAse
10-11-2002, 08:27 AM
good job buddy. cant wait to see it done:airguitar :buttrock:
trailerpark
10-14-2002, 06:55 PM
another update, bad picture 50,000 bytes, post link when done. cant figure out which colour to use for letters, critiques would be great
trailerpark
10-19-2002, 09:06 PM
another small update, Any critiques welcome
TRi-14
10-19-2002, 09:35 PM
wowsers, interesting style my friend :) i like
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