Master and Servant 2D Entry: Mohammed Abourabe

[abourabe]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1112822526_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1112822526_large.jpg)

hi
this is my sketch I drawing it directly in photoshop I hope this idea
is good enough and I wish a good luck for me and for everybody .

[Groady]

I'm pretty impressed so far. I take the wizard guy is sending the other guy into some kinda battle? Keep it up.

[CoreyArtE]

Hi ! Nice concept sketch and welcome to the competetion!

[artjunkie]

Very nice sketches... lovely style. Can't wait to see this one develop. Cheers!

[abourabe]

thanks for reply my friends !

[abourabe]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1112991015_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1112991015_large.jpg)

I just add some colors and refine the outline
I think I will be put a castle behind them what you think ?

[abourabe]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1113049854_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1113049854_large.jpg)

this is a stick design for the servant guy .
I just want to put some details through this stick .

[abourabe]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1113157801_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1113157801_large.jpg)

a little update it still need more and more work .

[abourabe]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1113424927_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1113424927_large.jpg)

a little update about details .

[W-I-L]

I like your soft style... what is the story?

[NOOB!]

that looks excellent!

[arkinet]

great job...m not sure about that extensor muscle of the left arm though, its kinda iffy.

[abourabe]

thnx for sharing NOOB - WIL - arkinet and everybody .

actually this story talking about the wizard master and you can see his servant run away .
my be you think the wizard master is sending his servant into a battle or somthing like that
but not . actually the servant guy escape from his master after stealing his power stick .
any way the both tale is suitable for me .

[madone01]

some serious toning going on here nice work

[W-I-L]

thats great... i can just hear the servant saying 'hah ha i have got ur stick.. what yoiu going to do now.. ' in a really childish way/// hee hee!


but serioulsy the idea is better than just sending into battle and you are handling the toning well...

[vilius]

the servant is great! but i would do something with the background.. but thats just my opinion

[abourabe]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1113508575_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1113508575_large.jpg)

hi
a little update .
I add some details to the servant and stick and I'm now thinking about the background . what you think ?

[cha0t1c1]

looking great, I like the update :thumbsup:

[bigjoe]

Great job of shading. Try an ancient ruin background with columns. That might work for ya. Nice work, I'm watchin this one!!

[abourabe]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1113766545_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1113766545_large.jpg)

Hi and thanks for comments my friends.
ok this is the main view and yes its need more and more work.any way I think to but a ancient castle behind that tow
guys . I think it will be a good idea .

[cha0t1c1]

hey, thnx for dropping by... I'm looking forward to see the finished piece...

[korayarts]

good consept and colarin good luck...

[dioxide]

Instead of "Power Stick" let try "Scepter of Domination." Remember, the judges expect a story, and would want something convincing.

[abourabe]

thnx for comments everybody .
actually I like (Scepter of Domination) it will be a good idea !

[abourabe]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1113934602_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1113934602_large.jpg)

hi there .
now I'm working on the background it still need a lot of work .

[W-I-L]

looking good.... no crit. keep pushing it

[grafik]

very good work!!! impressive the detail level! good luck and keep up!


my MASTER & SLAVE:
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?p=2138465 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?p=2138465)

[abourabe]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1114264329_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1114264329_large.jpg)

hi there a'm almost finish the mountains
behind the two guys .
thnx everybody .

[redfrog]

mountains look great. you have a nice soft illustration style. the only suggestion i would make is to maybe have the style a little more ominous as it would go quite well with the angle you are using for the viewer.

[Robert Longfield]

Great work so far. The only thing that I can see that can use a little work, would be the old mans right ring fingure, it looks bent out of place next to the pinky finger.. I have the same problems with hands.

[abourabe]

thank you kindly Redfrog and Robert .
I really appreciate your suggestions about the fingers and to add a little
more ominous to the piece . and now I will see what I can do for that .

[abourabe]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1114375265_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1114375265_large.jpg)

hi there
I know the hand of old man need some work but I want ask you guys
if that red tone is feat will here or not . what you think ?

[abourabe]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1114541804_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1114541804_large.jpg)

hi there .
a little update but it still need mor details .

[abourabe]

ok
I think the red tones is good but I will add some blue and violet .

[abourabe]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1114878652_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1114878652_large.jpg)

hi there.
I will but some smoke and clouds behind and between that two guys and some of details .
any comment is must welcome .

[abourabe]

ok
I thnk the clouds need more refine .

[abourabe]

I think blue tones will be good at the sky ?

[abourabe]

actually I dont like the sky I think the clouds is very thick .

[kenan-atassi]

Man!:applause:
your style is very nice
i love your harmony colors

[abourabe]

thank you Kinan for support .
I really appreciate it !

[abourabe]

I will refine the sky and but some lightning between the clouds .

[AlyFell]

Hi Mohammed, The detail on the mountains is looking great, and I like the heavy sky, it adds to the atmosphere. Not sure about too much red though... I assume you're using Photoshop. A little trick for colour which you might know already is create a new layer over everything, fill it with an arbitrary colour, red maybe, select 'overlay' in the layer options and take the opacity down to about 12 or 15%. Then open the 'Hue/Saturation' option and play with the slider bars. It can give a complete new ambience to a pic. You can then erase and darken or highlight to bring out areas.... Looking forward to updates! :)

[abourabe]

thank you ( Aly ) for advice I'm really feel happy to check out my pic .
I appreciate it very much . and you will see the update very soon I hope .

[ilusiondigital]

Great colours, and great drawer

[abourabe]

tnx Victor .
your comment is very nice I appreciate it a lot !

[abourabe]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1115589169_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1115589169_large.jpg)

( the servant )

[abourabe]

ok.
just 2 or 3 days and I will finish it .

[abourabe]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1115926399_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7278/7278_1115926399_large.jpg)

hi there .
I think I very close to end . I want to thank everybody in cgtalk especially my friends . and I will submit the story soon .
cheers and thanks for dropping by !

[AlyFell]

Wow! Great update Mohammed. Looking excellent... :)

[abourabe]

thnx Aly I'm very glad for this .

[abourabe]

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the story :
from a long time there was a wise man rule the kingdom of holy mountains .
he had a faithful servant . but one day he stick up the scepter of domination from
his master then he became a greed one . and he want to rule everything but the wise
old man can observe him through the scepter . so he go to punish him and
return it back to keep his kingdom save .
I hope you enjoy it and thanks for time .

[abourabe]

I dont no way the image is so small .
anyway its done and I send it with high res.. . actually I want to thank everyone help me and support me it was very helpful for me .. I want to say too this challenge is really fantastic experiment !

[anostudio]

Salam:thumbsup:

Great and good Job Mohammed i like your style :bounce: .. that realy good :thumbsup:

Good luck :thumbsup: bitawefik inchallah :thumbsup:

[abourabe]

thank you anostudio for comment and good luck for you too !.

[AlyFell]

Yeah! Well done Mohammed! You got it in! Good luck and thanks! :) Hoshcha Kaliniz (is that right...?)

[abourabe]

Aly thanks for support . and about Hoshcha Kaliniz its not right .. sorry for that . you know ? I dont know why my pic is so small ? anyway thanks Aly and good luck

[SolidAhmed]

well done dude , i wish you the best

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