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xtrm3d
09-29-2002, 09:57 PM
hi,
i hardly work on expending my portfolio ( need a job :deal: )
i did work on this one only one night
( modelling/lightning/tweaking )
and think i should share it..
how did you find it ?
by the way did you see the fish ?
http://www.xtrm3d.com/temp/saketsushi.jpg

MK2
09-29-2002, 10:27 PM
Bonjour!

I could tweak the glass a bit.
The overall blurryness... i dont like it very much. Take the bottle also in Focus. As like the sticks.
Die Zitrone ist geil! Sieht fett aus ! Sehr real...

There are some strange color spots an that blue table... where do they come from? And whats that white stuff in the glass?

Overall ist a good pic. But not a burner.
Too your question.... tweak it a bit more and you have a great Pic in your portfolio.

mk

Spankenstein
09-30-2002, 04:59 AM
Meh, I wouldn't tweak it THAT much. Right now it has that ever elusive style. I just wish my japanese was good enough to read the text.

highs:
chopsticks
lemon

lows:
fish(hard to see at this angle)


what are those pills exactly? heh.

xtrm3d
09-30-2002, 09:39 AM
thanx for your comment guys..
hummm
the fish should not be a eye catcher !!
i want that the people see him first after really studiyng the pics..

you are right for the focus of the bottle..( will do later a new rendering


and the pills ??

hoo yeah.. huuuummmg...
they are to kill the fish in your stomach after shallowing it without
chewing ...it´s the only way to get it full efficiency ( in the bedroom )

:drool:


christophe

Neo85
09-30-2002, 10:13 AM
Yeah i like it very much... atmosphere is very very good :beer:

RobinOberg
09-30-2002, 10:45 AM
Nice work, although very blurry.
I tried saké once (bought a whole bottle of it)
it tastes like unfiltered moonshine(mäsk) :D
so now the next step would be to try sushi(sashimi)
but im guessing it tastes like the raw lachs(lax) we eat here in sweden around christmas...

xtrm3d
10-01-2002, 05:24 PM
http://www.xtrm3d.com/temp/saketsushi2.jpg

:wip: :wip: :eek: :wip: :wip:

ok, i re did a rendering with less blur and more focus on the bottle..
and tweacked the glasse shader.. caus the first looked like plastic
and the fish.. is more focused too


christophe

and a small wireframe view...

xtrm3d
10-01-2002, 05:26 PM
:scream: :scream:

the wireframe

Exception
10-01-2002, 06:16 PM
What's the fish called?

Great work :)

xtrm3d
10-01-2002, 06:54 PM
his name ist nemo ;-)

Koma
10-02-2002, 12:47 AM
better my friend ,i love it ,et moi j aime bien le sake et les sushi .

kevinmacdonald
10-02-2002, 06:45 PM
why are there pills in it? kinda look outa place

xtrm3d
10-02-2002, 07:46 PM
and the pills ??

hoo yeah.. huuuummmg...
they are to kill the fish in your stomach after shallowing it without
chewing ...it´s the only way to get it full efficiency ( in the bedroom )
:wavey:

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