My hobbit's hole

[sekocan]

it's nice, but everything is so shiny. Alittle more matte textures would be better I think. For example for teh wooden objects.
the lights are so weak. (yes they are candles but the room is too dark to be a good render I think) but it's nice :)

[mopelie]

Looks good and welcome to the forumes. Not to much detail but enough to be shown. Would look even better adding more smaller details and props. Maybe add a rug of some sort and/or paintings/pictures. Maybe doing the fireplace is a different material rather then the same as the wall, maybe making it stone of some kind. Of course these are just things I think that can be added but not necessary.

Also, I dont think candles will put out that much light with their current size. Candles, I think, put out more of a yellow color light. You have more a white tone.

With some minor tweaks this can be a really nice render. Keep us updated!

[e-maje]

Thank you for your encouragements and your councils

Only textures of the tiling, the log, the candles and the flames are started. It is envisaged full with objects on the rack of the chimney and a sword on that of the top. The ring should come in foreground and the inscription should bring light suppléméntaire.

The other colors are there only for the athmosphère. Certain volumes, like the beams, are only volumes of installations. They will be much more detailed, of course:)

I seek an environment felted to contrast with the hardness of the ring.:cool:

[bob143]

Nice Start, like previously stated-render too dark. Keep us updated, i think this could turn out great.

[e-maje]

Here is my work of the day, textures of the table and the hearth.



http://perso.wanadoo.fr/ged.e-maje/mayalounge/wip/trou_23.jpg

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