A REAL HEAD 2 (sorry !!)

[Jacobo]

That's pretty neat work! But you should reconsider rebuilding the edges of the mouth. They seem to loose volume towards the edges... i.e.. the edges of the mouth needs more volume... The upper lip would tend to overlap the lower one on the corners of the mouth in most physiognomies...Other than that, it's a splendid job!!

hodjacigin :D

Aj

[takkun]

This looks like it is based on a real person, I'm sick of all these idealized female 3d models people are making lately. Didn't we learn anything from the renaissance? But anyways, great job so far, are you planning on animating it?

[Skullptor]

Yeah.. the lips need some work.. make the upper lip more 'pronounced.' As has previously been suggested, the areas of concentration need to be around the corners of the lips... I think the nose could use some teaking, as well. Toss some eyes in there, too... even if they're just spheres. As for everything else, nice job! Particularly the ears.. I know how hard they are to model. I also like how the neck is looking... See if you can't get rid of a few of those dents in the dome of his head, though. :-) Unless they're supposed to be there.. hehe. Overall, it looks good. Just tweak the hell out of it, now...

[NightFox]

JEFF BRIDGES!

Yeah.. there ya go. Without the hair. That's who the head looks like. Ahh. From such films as "The Contender" and the absolutely awesome cult film, "TRON". You should try texturing him like Jeff

But there are some parts that lack from the head from making it a realistic looking head. But they've already been touched upon.

Very cool

[leigh]

Hey Nightfox - you're right it does look like Jeff Bridges!
But in my opinion, it looks even more like his brother, Beau Bridges - don't you think??!!
Nice work though, Ozgunzumrut :)

[ozgunzumrut]

thank you all ( my english is little weak !!! :( )
and yes youre right
here is the new mouth

http://alshaheen.net/artists/ozgunzumrut/cg4.JPG

and here's the model ( a friend )

http://alshaheen.net/artists/ozgunzumrut/tocgface.JPG

and that is a facial exp. just made for learn

http://alshaheen.net/artists/ozgunzumrut/tocg.gif

[Jacobo]

Ozgun....

When you're working on replications of real life, you should pay special care for proportions, they don't usually except artistic interpretation. The mouth now looks very good but its size is noticably smaller than that of the live model (horizantally that is...) Stretch the mouth just a tad and I think this model will be a truly great one....

Good work

Aj

[Joel Hooks]

Originally posted by Jacobo
Stretch the mouth just a tad and I think this model will be a truly great one....

Aj

Draw a line down from the eye and you will notice it's about 1/2" short on both sides.

[Koma]

sweet model ...i wanna see him when the texture will be apply

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