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Zerlez
04-05-2005, 04:35 PM
Daniel Alexander Suarez has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=7238)

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: still sketching
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7238/7238_1113865470_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7238/7238_1113865470_large.jpg)

Hi, thank you so much for your replies, this is an update for a better composition. I thought this way would show more intensity.

:) thank you.

Daniel.

Zerlez
04-05-2005, 04:41 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7238/7238_1112719261_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7238/7238_1112719261_large.jpg)

Hi, I am new here, so this is my first participation ever.

This image concept is about Inner Faul, is you being a servant of yourself, when you can`t go against being the where you are, to get free of your stress and similar feelings.

Thank you so much.

Regards. :)

twedzel
04-05-2005, 04:45 PM
I really like the concept of this one, What I'd do is play around with the staging to see if you can come up with more striking compositions. This composition is very descriptive but it could be made more interesting.

marcheen
04-05-2005, 04:56 PM
that is nice sketching here and a good idea but i agree with twedzel about the composition. try to play with difefrent angles and see if you can come up with a difefrent one. good luck;)

Zerlez
04-18-2005, 11:04 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7238/7238_1113865470_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7238/7238_1113865470_large.jpg)

Hi, thank you so much for your replies, this is an update for a better composition. I thought this way would show more intensity.

:) thank you.

Daniel.

Shaidar
04-19-2005, 03:15 AM
Really nice colors and style. I kind of like how the characters seem to be 'dripping' into one another.

I must say, I actually prefer the composition of your first B&W sketch.

This one seems to be a little lop-sided or something. The first concept sketch seems to highlight and portray the blending between the characters really well.

Hmmm, just my personal opinion though. Maybe you could bring back some of the interesting parts of the initial concept sketch. I really like the dominant top character in it.

fensterer
04-19-2005, 03:27 AM
Cool idea! I also agree about a more interesting angle but I still like this one and look forwqrd to seeing the finished piece! Good luck to you!

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