Master and Servant 3D Entry: noriyoshi sasaki

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1113233925_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1113233925_large.jpg)

my concept sketch

[ace4016]

Good luck on the challenge. Your concept looks great, funny expression on the ogre too. Waiting to see more.

[sl1200]

hi ace4016! thank you for your message!!
if i become usable to post attachments,and i will upload many images soon.

good luck!:thumbsup:

[ace4016]

Attachments? Just submit the images through the submit entry page if they are relevent to your entry. They turned off the ability to attach anything in these pages, even for a high poster like me. If you don't want to submit these images, maybe you can use imageshack.com or photobucket.com (I use photobucket myself), to host your images so we can see.

[sl1200]

thx ace!! i misunderstand it...

if i upload images, i have to use free webspace or upload through the submit entry page?
i will try it, thanks!!:)

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1113278305_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1113278305_large.jpg)

modeling : lw8.2

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1113283796_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1113283796_large.jpg)

lightwave3D8.2 & FPrime

[ace4016]

Nice start on the tires but, they look like bicycle tire, not motorcylce tire. Were you going for the bicycle look? BTW, you'll have the best vehicle in this forum:thumbsup: .

About the images, if they are for the challenge, then it is best to submit it. If the image isn't submitted, the judges don't see it.

[DaddyMack]

Hi sl1200, great start to the competition mate! I really like the contrast between hard and organic...You may want to pay some more attention to the organic forms to give them a similar level of detail to the others...Keep it coming,

[aliasali]

Great start,and funny one! its more like "Master and Slave",but thats great!

hmm agree with what Daddymack said,that hi detailed wheel dosnt fit that smooth body!

Keep up the nice workd,and good luck mate!:thumbsup:

[sl1200]

ace4016>
i do not look like a bicycle tire..(i watched motorcycle in my garage and in internet catalogue.)
but i will remake tire more fat and hard type for exaggerating.
I heard your opinion and i thought that it will become cool. thanks!

DaddyMack>
Madlight_1988>
I will make details of body. for becoming a good balanced work..
thanks!

All of you>
my aim is to make funny character that it is easy to get close to .
it is like PIXAR's characters rather than photo realistic.
I'm waiting for your opinions and advices.
but perhaps my replying will delay and be wrong english,sorry...
Thank you.

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1113322931_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1113322931_large.jpg)

LW8.2&FPrime

[Neeno]

nori this is great stuff man.. the muffler render is really good. :thumbsup: i'd be proud if i were you.. i love the concept. !!

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1113932709_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1113932709_large.jpg)

ear modeling

[sl1200]

Neeno>
thank you for your comments.do the best ,each other!
i am making girl's face and textures now.i'll upload these images as soon as possible.

[ace4016]

Hope to see the rider soon. hehe, I hadn't seen motorcylces with spokes before, they all had "rims", other then some custom ones. I stand corrected. Muffler looks real good btw.

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1114946911_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1114946911_large.jpg)

the upper half of the body.

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1114964263_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1114964263_large.jpg)

from now on,i will make texture of face skin and hair in detail.

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1115183972_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1115183972_large.jpg)

club is triangle polygons
but i will go as it is,
because look like rough.

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1115242056_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1115242056_large.jpg)

modeling and texturing test of zipper.
i will use objects on the edge.
other parts will be made by textures.

[hhssuu]

You got a very interesting idea, and i like the detail in the zipper, and the leather is very nice too. Keep up the good work. Are you using MODO, don't see many MODO users in the challenge, there's so many zBrushers, good to see something different.

[ace4016]

Looks good Nori. Maybe you can lower the bump on the face. I like the eyes. Keep going, the end is near.

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1115891633_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1115891633_large.jpg)

hair test rendering.

[TRXSI]

good idea i love manga style good luck...

[Lemog]

I just discover your thread today... and I find that very interesting... I like your style... best wishes to finish in time... :thumbsup:

[manikantkujur]

cool modelling and texturing



http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=225407&page=4



http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=225407&page=4


keep it up

[Goro]

Hey just checked your thread! It's coming up nicely and your concept
is hilarious! You use lightwave right?

nokorijikan wa sukunaikeredo gambatte kudasai!
kokowa nihonjin ga sukunaidesukarane :)
faitooo- :scream:

[ace4016]

Nice going, she's looking great. Nice hair, and the bump on the face looks much better. Keep it up, hope you make it on time:thumbsup: .

[LouisBrowne]

Yeah, you've got my attention with your last post. Interesting concept too. You've improved her a helluva lot in you last post.
Nice going man

[ilusiondigital]

Looks beautiful

[sl1200]

hi guys!. please overlook my poor english.

hhsuu
I use lightwave not MODO.
I believe there are some zBrusher out there making monsters who are overdoing the modeling details;
Reality is not the most important thing for me.
I want my work to reflect a primary purpose, and most importantly, style.
but i am learning ZB now. hehe
thank you!

ace4016
thank you for your comment!! there is no time but end is not near.. LOL

TRXSI
thanks! that type of positive reinforcement keeps me going - keep it coming guys! , thanks!!

Lemog
thx!! i will do the best to finish in time.

manikantkujur
thank you! i will post your thread later!

goro
nihonjin no katagaite ureshiidesu!!
owakainoni subarashii skill desune. atode kakikomishimasu.
hudanha character modeling ha hotondo yatteinainode temadottemasu.
i am not good at English ,please help me..hehe
arigatougozaimasu!

Louis J. Browne
thank you! i repeat a revision and i will keep doing the best.

ilusiondigital
thx!!! your comment motivated me to do it!

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116155933_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116155933_large.jpg)

test texturing of tears and sweat.
there is no time..

[3dRaven]

Ooooh he looks stressed :D The sweat came out great.

[Matt-Bortolino]

Great work- deranged & fun. I wouldn't expect anything else from a Japanese contestant ;)

If you have time, you should try making the sweat droplets as geometry (ellipsoid particles scattered over the oni's surface, & a few tear-shaped ones positioned by hand), because the bump-mapping looks a bit rough. Maybe give the oni some claws to grip the bike (recycle the girl's hand & 'inflate' the geometry?).

Also, perhaps you could recycle the girl's eyes for the oni & paint new textures?

Keep it up- I want to see this one finished!

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116168253_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116168253_large.jpg)


3dRaven
thank you for your comment!.

`mb
i want to make a innovative and impressive image.hehe
i think it is better making the sweat droplets as geometry,too.
and i will make details as far as time forgives me.

Everyone.
this pics is still rough.
which pose do you like ?

[Goro]

wow very fast updates ;)

I like the left pose much better. The motivation of the characters are more clear.

raishuu no doyoubi rokunenburi tokyo ni kaerimasu. Shinseki ga matsudo to
tokyo ni sundeirunode...
kanji no yomi kaki ga dondon waruku natteirunode komatteimasu :cry:

dewa mata

keep up the good work!

[NEWT#]

Go with left :thumbsup: .

[ace4016]

I also like the left. Keep it up:thumbsup: .

[3dRaven]

Will you repose the creatures head like the concept? I really liked the pose there.

Oh yeah and are they going to be static or are they supposed to be on the move?? (concept had speed lines)

[xric7]

wow..:bounce:
great work!!
realy cool characters.:thumbsup:
both are excellent.but i prefer the left pose. cause i love to see her body and chain.:)

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116273539_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116273539_large.jpg)

i will use both bump mapping and geometry.

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116448776_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116448776_large.jpg)

front light,key light,back light,
2omnilight,
with GI,

my PC was crashed...no time..LOL

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116449700_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116449700_large.jpg)

background :
Forest.Sky with skytracer,fog
front :
fire effects with hyperboxel

and color correct with photoshop

[hhssuu]

Wow this is a dramatic change from the previous image. It's really working now. Great work, i love the servant's face :applause:. Good luck in the final hours.

[sl1200]

hhssuu
thank you for your comment!!:thumbsup: i will try to do my best until the very end.

but

do i have to post final image till 18 May 2005 (GMT) ? or
can i believe "time left" indicator ?

LOL

[Matt-Bortolino]

Excellent! The new sweat/saliva/mucus looks much better, & the final composition is great.

If you still have some time left, perhaps reduce some of the fog in front of the girl's boot & back wheel. Also maybe try reposing the girl's arm & chain so it follows the line of the Oni's right arm & forms more of an 'action line'. Not essential though, & it looks fine right now.

[Goro]

wow nice desu sasakisan!!

If it's still possible I would exaggerate the pose of the girl a bit more. She seems
to be very static at the moment....but only few hours left so better ignore my comment ;)
Saigomade gambatte kudasai!
:thumbsup:

[sl1200]

`mb
thanks your advice!
i will add perticles and other spped line(like jet stream)
and adjust direction of chain.

goro-kun
thank you for your infomation!
first time, oni ha hashitteinai image wo tsukurouto omotteitanodesuga
yoteiwo henko shimasu.
i'll try to exaggerating the pose!

saigomade ganbarimasu! hehe

[ace4016]

This looks great. Your almost there, just a few moer tweaks. And according to Mibus, trust the counter (leaves you with a few hours, I think about 5-6?). Keep going.

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116496637_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116496637_large.jpg)

this is type A.

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116496823_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116496823_large.jpg)

this is type B.

please select A or B..

[3dRaven]

I'd go for A better contrast and colors. GO Go go!!!

[sl1200]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116501057_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7212/7212_1116501057_large.jpg)

maybe final image..
tired..

thank you !

[Goro]

yeey you made it! And it turned out really great! I prefered A also the contrast is better!
wow just in time you have only 46 minutes left hehe...don't forget the tiff upload ;)

Congratulations
omedetougozaimasu!!
:applause: :applause: :applause:

Goro

[3dRaven]

Whoa talk about cutting it short. Right before the deadline. I really like how this came out. A big feat, pulling this off in such a short time frame :D

Good luck

[conundrum]

great work finishing such a good enrty in a limited timespan. an interesting concept and the servant is particularly well done (love the drool). good luck:thumbsup:

[sl1200]

3draven

thank you for your choice!!:) ,and i can decide..huu:thumbsup:
good luck!

goro-kun

thanks!!
hontouni osewani narimashita! nantoka buji Tiff upload
mo kanryou shimashita.tsumega amakattadesu.
final image ha nattoku ittenaikedo tonikaku kanryou dekitanode
yoshito shimasu.
hontouni arigatou!:buttrock:
PC ha nihongo kankyo desuka? msn messenger tokade hanasetara
ureshiidesu. atode private message okurimasu.

[sl1200]

conundrum

thank you for your comment!
did you upload final image?

i'm not good at English and i was not possible tp post many comment..
posting comments ..it is the most difficult for me...

and i will study English very hard.
thank you!:thumbsup:

[DaddyMack]

Hi sl1200, you're image turned out really well! Congratulations, you've a really original and creative piece that shows not only some fine skills but a way out imagination as well:thumbsup::thumbsup:

[arkinet]

weird bro...hehehe, but its unique & you did a great job!! congratulations!:thumbsup:

[ace4016]

Congrats Nori. You did a great job. If I was that oni, I know I'd be doing the same thing he is with the tears, sweat, saliva and boogers. Good luck and best wishes.

[overcontrast]

i like the red color use of ur image... i think its very sweet... one crit, the swet of the bike creature seems to be static and flowing downword, it should be rushing backward, oposing the bike's velocity. well anywas good lcuk... :thumbsup:

[sl1200]

DaddyMack
thanks!! i wil study english and talking.
then i will more post to other place in CGtalk.:buttrock:

arkinet
thank you for your comment. i wll post your thread. good luck!:applause:

ace4016
thx!! Let's challenge next time too each other! best wishes!:thumbsup:

overcontrast
an excuse. in the hell ...Gravity is 10 times as strong　as this world. hehe.:scream:

[blakbird]

Interesting work.

[sl1200]

kuzgunoglu

Thank you for your comment!:) i'will show some new images on CGtalk in the future.
Good Luck:thumbsup:

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