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Panda89
04-04-2005, 07:18 PM
UHi everyone, this is my sourcerer.
I am currently practicing drawing characters without using references!

It took very long till i got the pose!

Comments are welcome.

Steps:

http://mitglied.lycos.de/panda89/zauberer1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/panda89/zauberer2.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/panda89/zauberer3.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/panda89/zauberer4.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/panda89/zauberer5.jpg

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http://mitglied.lycos.de/panda89/zauberer6.jpg
(-edited both legs and his left arm - i know the shadow of the glove is wrong, i just have corrected it
-still need to add shadows on his face)

http://mitglied.lycos.de/panda89/zauberer7.jpg <-- background idea

starting background:
http://mitglied.lycos.de/panda89/zauberer8.jpg (http://mitglied.lycos.de/panda89/zauberer8.jpg)
shyamshriram
04-05-2005, 03:46 AM
Hi Patrick :) nice to see u here mate !
Nice try...keep it up :thumbsup:
BMunchausen
04-05-2005, 06:56 PM
Him? I for sure thought this was a woman. It's a combination of the features and the width of the hips and how small the feet are, and the way the chest is rendered (in spite of the bulge in the groin area) :)

It could also be the pose - with the right arm held to his side with the wrist bent, and the legs together that way.
NOOB!
04-05-2005, 07:53 PM
its looking great to me!
Swoop
04-05-2005, 08:02 PM
Great start there.. i really like it... good composition so far, and the character looks good for starters. Also like the stone in her hand for some reason... appeals to me :D
Looking forward to following your progress in this thread :D
Panda89
04-05-2005, 08:31 PM
it's not a girl >_<

i tried the 4 point perspective, but this is the first time i use it, so that's why the middle part is so big!
but thx anyway! :D
jebas
04-06-2005, 01:30 PM
I know that this may be a little late because you are already working on coloring, but you might want to rework your arms. It looks like the left arm is far to short. If it were to fall to the side, the tips of the fingers would be above the waist. The better position would be just behind the stone. Remember the arm should appear longer and larger as it approaches the viewer.
The right arm looks better, but I am not sure about what it is doing. Is it suppose to wrap around the cane, or is it hanging loose? At the moment, it looks like the elbow is occuping the same space as the cane.
I like the work. The color and composition is good. I'll be interested in seeing the final image.
Panda89
04-06-2005, 03:36 PM
thank you very much, yeah indeed, the hand is just wrong, i have changed it.
atm i make his wip smaller so he doesnt look like a woman :/
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UPDATE:
http://mitglied.lycos.de/panda89/zauberer9.jpg
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