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cyberarts
04-03-2005, 01:32 PM
Aline DesRuisseaux has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=7159)

Latest Update: Final Image: Evil vs Good
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1114991805_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1114991805_large.jpg)

There!

I decided to put and end at my work. I am satisfy with the result. If I continu to work on details I'm affraid to mess all my work.

Thank you to all of you how gived good advices.

Enjoy! =0)

cyberarts
04-03-2005, 01:43 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1112535797_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1112535797_large.jpg)

here a quick sketch of my idea for the actual theme \\\"Master and servant\\\". It\\\'s my vision of the Evil winning over the good. The look of this drawing is on progress, so it can change along my process.

Hope you\\\'ll enjoy!

Aline

Jack Youngblood
04-03-2005, 03:59 PM
Yeh! Nice to see evil win for a change. I like the tones. They look a bit sharp at the moment (too many high whites) but still fine. Good that we dont see the 'angels' face.

cyberarts
04-05-2005, 12:29 AM
It's nice to receive suggestions or critics. I know that my drawing is a bit too bright, but I'm actualy adding color so the drawing is toning down. I will add the progress during the week.

Thank you again for your thread! :)

Cyberarts

Rudeone
04-05-2005, 12:38 AM
Hi, looks pretty good, the wings of the angel look great. i'm not really sure about the stone texture of the throne and the wings of the devil and I think you defined the devils abs a little to much, but since you're still in the conceptual phase it shouldn't matter that much right now.

Anyway, keep it up and good luck:thumbsup:

cyberarts
04-09-2005, 03:02 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1113058963_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1113058963_large.jpg)

Here is my first coloring phase. But it can change. I'm not satisfied yet with the rock texture, but I'm still working on it.

By the way, thank you for your comments, they are very constructive.

Enjoy!

stevethomas
04-09-2005, 03:30 PM
I know you said you wanted to work on the texture a bit more. It looks good now, but it's very strong, if you know what I'm saying. It sort of dominates the piece. I realize this is a WIP so I'm interested to see where it goes from here. Maybe soften the texture a little? What I mean is, try to dull the black in the shadows. See how that works, I could be wrong.

cyberarts
04-09-2005, 03:39 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1113061183_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1113061183_large.jpg)

ok, as a new comer, it's seem that I maked a mystake. This drawing is my concept sketch. I have to place it in the "Line Art milestone" because I already summited my line art in the "Concept Sketch milestone". Are you following me? ;0)

Anyway, I hope that my mystake will not disqualify my entry.

cyberarts
04-09-2005, 04:06 PM
Thank you Steve!

As I like to say, every comment or suggestions are constructive. For your suggestion i am sure that it will help. I will try it for sure! I will try it for sure!

I know you said you wanted to work on the texture a bit more. It looks good now, but it's very strong, if you know what I'm saying. It sort of dominates the piece. I realize this is a WIP so I'm interested to see where it goes from here. Maybe soften the texture a little? What I mean is, try to dull the black in the shadows. See how that works, I could be wrong.

cyberarts
04-17-2005, 12:52 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1113699171_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1113699171_large.jpg)

Here is my final color theme for this drawing. I do not have much more to say here. But I\'m satisfy with the result so far. I look foreward to enhence the final result. But for now I\'m pretty happy...=)

cyberarts
04-19-2005, 11:04 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1113951853_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1113951853_large.jpg)

Hi!

Here i'm trying to add a little bit more detail. It not final yet but it's coming along...

Thank you again for your advise they are very helpfull...

Enjoy!

cyberarts
04-23-2005, 04:39 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1114274346_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1114274346_large.jpg)

Hi!

I'm trying to add more details in my drawing. I added the chains and a cruxified angel in the backgroud as suggested by someone. But I'm not so sure about it. I got to be carefull not to scrap my work by adding to much, i got to find the end before i turn this drawing into a pizza...

Thank again for your comments, they are constructive. =0)

CoreyArtE
04-23-2005, 04:42 PM
Another fellow angel /demon painter! I love the textures! I love the colors! I love the piece! Stop forcing me to work harder! ARGG!!!

Neozoom
04-23-2005, 04:43 PM
From the first there is a real difference!!!

I love the atmosphere and composition , but be careful on skin tones and texturing...

cyberarts
04-23-2005, 05:16 PM
I saw your work and I can tell you that it look very nice so far. I like the atmosphere of it and the softness of your color strock. I know for sure that your final work will be great too. It's already. So I can't wait to see your final result. =0)

Keep up your good work!!!

cyberarts
04-23-2005, 05:33 PM
Thank you for your advice. you are right on the nose about the texture and the color skin. They are my biggest concern for now. I hope that I will not mess my work if I decide to tone down the texture on the back ground. As for the color skin, I look foreward to smooth the body of the angel. But again I hesitate...

I take note of your advice, and i hope that I understand what you are telling me...If not well I write you back in french 'cause i,m french...;0)

By the way, I look at your work. And It's look very nice. I'll look foreward to see it in color.

Thank you again!

cyberarts
04-26-2005, 02:22 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1114482162_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1114482162_large.jpg)

Hi,

I did some twiking on the angel body too define it. I even dressed him a bit.Maybe it's too much, but I can remove it. I added some shadows on the wings of the angel. I considering my work as almost done. My next submission will be final I think. I got to put a stop soon on my drawing.

Thank you all for your comments, I appreciate a lot...=0)

Enjoy!!!

cyberarts
04-26-2005, 02:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1114482575_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1114482575_large.jpg)

Man, do I did wrong. I'm sorry!
Here is my REAL LAST VERSION of my work!=0S

Sorry for mixing you all up...

Enjoy anyway!!!

xric7
04-30-2005, 02:13 PM
very imprssive.:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
i love it.
will look forward to urs.
good luck.

SavageCreature
05-01-2005, 04:29 AM
Nice piece! I particularly like the background. You can almost feel the heat while you're looking at it. The feathers on the wings are also very nicely done. Very nice. Good luck with the judging :thumbsup:

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TheFirstAngel
05-01-2005, 05:12 AM
I already noticed your work earlier, but lack of time.. as always. I have just a small suggestion. all over, your piece is really cool. love the colors and the composition works fine.but there is still much time left. so its enough time for a little suggestion on the textures. the bump on the rocks seems to be procedural, and seem not to fit with the actual lightsetup, wich draws pieces into wrong directions, makes it look like a highpass and distracts the feel of dephg(except you want it that way and want it to look a bit like a colored relief...). Your rock's baseshapes show, you can well handle light. think fractal. surface bups are like tiny rocks, casting and recieving basically the same shadows like the "motherobject".
just suggest to go for a paintover on the cracklings and paint them manually, in the lightsetup of the rocks, this would help your work a lot.
of course, this is just my own personal point of view and simply a matter of taste. Kepp up the great work and i'm looking forward to your next update, keep it up:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

cuppacam
05-01-2005, 05:22 AM
Very cool. Rich and full of feeling!

cyberarts
05-01-2005, 03:20 PM
I was about to put my final version, but after my reading of your suggestions i decided to work my piece a bit more. Considering the time left, I maybe able to apply those suggestions. I'll try my best to stay rigorous on my work.

Thank you again for your comments. They are very constructive. =0)

cyberarts
05-01-2005, 11:56 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1114991805_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7159/7159_1114991805_large.jpg)

There!

I decided to put and end at my work. I am satisfy with the result. If I continu to work on details I'm affraid to mess all my work.

Thank you to all of you how gived good advices.

Enjoy! =0)

NinjaA55N
05-08-2005, 07:50 AM
Nice image! I see u already finished it... nothink to crit. U really did a nice job on texturing the envieronment and skin, u know how to paint anathomy and there r lots of details that make that piece very interesting to watch it for a long time. I wish u good luck in the voting process! :)

Djampa
05-08-2005, 07:56 AM
Very nice! :thumbsup:

Dont really see anything else to be done, it is a good job.
Congratulations!

Good luck now!

xric7
05-20-2005, 05:19 PM
turned out wonderful image.:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
great color and comp.love characters and scene.
congratulaion on ur finish.:applause: :bounce: :buttrock: best luck in challenge.
cheers.

MDN67
05-20-2005, 06:59 PM
Nice pic, very deatilled, good work and good luck for the end

TheFirstAngel
05-21-2005, 03:01 PM
congrats on your final entry Aline! you did a great work, and it's wonderfull you made it to the finals! best of luck!

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