PA Challenge- character- Kenneth_fejer

[fellah]

I love the face, you're very talented!

[RoRo]

superb, I like the expression which it has on the face, that gives well, continuous like that :D

[Totitch]

Really original face!

i like it! On of the more interesting I've seen here!

Cool...Very impatient to see the rest of this character!
He seems to be BAD!
Who is he? What 's his aim,what 's his role?

[pabbloz]

yeeees! It's very interesting! come on come on! :D

[Tennis]

thanks, i´m glad you like him.

here's a little update, don't mind the ear, i messed it up :)

http://www.kennethfejer.dk/test/pa_cha_02.jpg


Totitch:
heh i dont know, he's just a regular badass :)

[AnimBot]

Wow great start this guy has a very good look to him. I would love to see the rest of the body roughed out. Keep us all updated.

[Piz]

Hi Kennet,


... another fantastic Comic Interpretation of the Contest Topic ...

We will made a statistic for how many people have a non-realistic interpretation of 3D Art.... ;)

I think maybe interesting....

Hi :p

Piz

[Tennis]

another update.

http://www.kennethfejer.dk/test/pa_cha_03.jpg

[KOryH]

This is cool!
The model has a real sculptural and solid feel to it.
Great work I look froward to seeing some further work.
Just a question, do you do any sketches first, or do you just do straight ahead modeling?

Keep up the great work

[Tennis]

thanks, yeah i did a quick sketch of his face and upper body first, but i dont have a scanner so i can't show it.
I dont sketch everything, only the parts im not certain of how are going to look.

[Tennis]

still very WIP
http://www.kennethfejer.dk/test/pa_cha_04.jpg

[AnimBot]

Your's is one of my favorites on this challenge. This guy has a really nice balance in detail so far not overcomplicated but really nice clean shapes in what's there. Keep going can't wait to see this guy finished.

[fellah]

ah, he's coming along really nice! this is yet another character with "life" if you know what I mean. really great!

[yon dabuda]

nice design, has a lot of character :)

[Koma]

hey cool design ,he make me think about a romain in asterix and obelix

[pearson]

Great face! And the rest is looking good too! Can't wait to see more.

[Tennis]

thanks guys.
heres a update, i've finished the basic shapes, but they still need alot of adjustments.

I'd like to get some crit and comments about him.
how does the proportions look ?
http://www.kennethfejer.dk/test/pa_cha_05.jpg

[lildragon]

Really nice Ken, I'm loving the hands on this dude, he also looks to be a pilot for a squadron of some sort, true? looking forward to seeing some accessories added to him, about the proportions they look fine, the neck might be a lil to long, but that's probably your intentions ;)

[pabbloz]

Amazing!! I love the arms and proportions!! great job!
He only needs a goggles!! come on!! We want more updates so cool until now!! He's getting better and better!
Very cool colors... only I don't like very much the protection of his legs... I think they wouldn't be the same colors as the pants and maybe they should be more detailled... just my opinion.

[Tennis]

thx for the comments :) here's a little update.
im starting to add some more details to him now.
http://www.kennethfejer.dk/test/pa_cha_06.jpg

[AnimBot]

Man great stuff Kenneth this guy is still one of my favorites. My only comment is on his feet I think the rest of his proportions are perfect but the boots look like they may be a tad too tall. Otherwise I've got no complaints great stuff.

[stipen]

great !!
I like it very much...especially his face!
For the body would prefere it to be taller IMO...
One of my fav!!!

Can we have a bigger render please??

[Tennis]

okay heres a bigger render.
i've added goggles and made a scar at his right eye.

im going to make a gun for him , but i still fell hi is missing something,...... but i cant put my finger on it, any suggestion ?
http://www.kennethfejer.dk/test/pa_cha_07.jpg

[Totitch]

Yeah!!!
He is really great!
I saw when you started that it will become a great character!

Just a little critis:
I think that legs are not enouth long and thin, compare to the rest of the body...
Just try to scale it a little!...(If you agree with my opinon! :D)

Very nice character...He could be the chief of mine, juging by is face!

[pabbloz]

Excelent excelent! I love the goggles and the head! excelent! with a lot of personality! and the hands are awesome too!.
so you're thinking about a weapon... mmm.
He would be a police, with a police bludgeon (like a _|___) and a plastic shield.
Or something more futuristic like a big big rocket.

Anyway... keep the style! It's amazing!

[AnimBot]

Well he looks very much like a law enforcement or military soldier or something. Perhaps along with his weapon you could equip him with a backpack that holds ammunition and other things for survival. Oh and it might also look cool if he had gloves.

[stipen]

Longer legs would Be perfect!!!It seems like he's got no ass and the tibias looks too long compared to the rest of the leg...the legs start almost after the belt...!this is a long crit...It's because I like this character!!
For the gun...ask pabbloz, he's weapon expert (FOR REEL !!)..He will find all the refs you need!

[Tennis]

after a computer crash here are a new update :)
longer legs, some accessories and a wip of his gun/rifle.

yeh , he's kind of a cop or military, maybe a troop leader or something.

pabbloz: i like your idea with the _|___ and a plastic shield, i think i'll try that later :)

btw, i've also made a backpack kind of thing, well it dosen't lokk like a backpack, but......anyway ill show u it later.
for now here is the new render.
http://www.kennethfejer.dk/test/pa_cha_08.jpg

[pabbloz]

yes, Nanofish is right,... I'm almost a expert man in weapons. I've been working as freelance :D in the spanish mafia :D and I know all tips about this theme.

pum pum!

[Totitch]

Kenneth:

Better now that you scale the legs a little!
I will scale it more...but it's cool like that.
The gun is cool too!

Good stuff!

Hey pabbloz!
It's not nano"fish"(For nanoneen i suppose?:D )!!!It's stipen!It seems that you don't sleep enough! Go to bed MafiaMan! :D :D :D

[Tennis]

longer legs ? you guys are crazy!!! :) heh, ok i'll try that, check back for a update in an hour or 2 :)

[Totitch]

Ohohoh!!!!

I will sleep in 1 or 2 hours!!!
It"s more than 3.00AM in Paris now!
I will see it tomorrow...
Good " Day-Starter"! :D :D :D

[Tennis]

longer legs(he's about half a head higher), bigger......ehm..crotch and a weapon update(im not sure about the colors.. how do they look ? )
http://www.kennethfejer.dk/test/pa_cha_09.jpg

[pabbloz]

Very good weapon Kenneth, but I don't like the colors... they don't share any commun color with the character's cloths. I think his armour and the weapon must be from the same equipament, you know?

always I see the model I'm looking for a "plastic" shield!! pleeeease! add it!! it would be great! I sure you! :D

I will wait for the next update... :p

totitch: welcome to the vampire's world!. and you are rigth!! He was Stipen!!! :D:D:D Sorry Sleepen, err.. Stipen. :) I'm a vampire too.
where is nanofish? has he got enought water? :D

see you!

[Totitch]

Legs are better...But not enough long!!! :D :D :D
It looks like you hesitate to scale(I got the same problem with mine...) or maybe you don't agree with this idea...
I try it for you:

Here... (http://mapage.noos.fr/totitch/Kenneth.jpg)
Do you like it???

It 's very good anyway!
Good work Kenneth...One of my favorit...It's why i critic it! (too much maybe! :D )

[pearson]

I think that his leg to arm length is fine now, but I think that his knees should be a bit lower; his shins look too long and his thighs not long enough. But the overall leg length looks fine, IMHO.

As for the gun colors...hmmm. I think that pabbloz is right; take out the green and white and use blue-grays, like his uniform. Or go straight black.

I also agree with AnimBot that gloves or a single glove might help. Perhaps the non-shooting hand could have a gauntlet for hitting and/or blocking blows.

I really like the style!

[Tennis]

higher and with a _|___ in his belt, i've also started on the textures......i got to hurry up if im going to make it before the deadline :(

http://www.kennethfejer.dk/test/pa_cha_10.jpg


pabbloz:
if i got the time i'll try the plastic shield :)

Totitch:
thx, for picture-edit-thing..., i made him as high as on the picture u made.

pearson / AnimBot:
if i get to do the shield , i'll try the grove thing also, it's a great idea, ...argh! so little time, i have to hurry :)

[Hmura]

Hey Kenneth, excellent model,
maybe you could add some of those wrist guard thingys, with some gadgets on it :)
I love the gun design, very nice :D

Hmura

[pFodere]

good weapon, and update

you can try some ilustrate rendering ?
your character it' s very "comic" and the colors needs something, hard shadows ? i' m not sure, depends of your will

[Tennis]

here's a quick render of his face up close.

http://www.kennethfejer.dk/test/pa_cha_11.jpg

[eirenicon]

Awesome character! Like said before, he bears a lot of resemblance to the Romans (http://www.asterix-obelix.nl/images/caracters/legionair1.gif) in Asterix & Obelix. Any chance of an Illustrate! render? He's a great cartoon guy.

[KOryH]

Sweet!
I love it! I would like to see nostrils, and more thickness to the ears. I think that thoes two little things would take it to the next level.

Keep kickin' a$$

[Totitch]

Yeah Kenneth!
What a great character! I really like his ugly face!
A real bad scared guy!

And now he has got very good and long legs!!! ;) :D :D :D
I'm happy you agree with the picture!

Very nice and clean stuff!
Do you project to animate him??? I really hope so! :p

[AnimBot]

Cool man can't wait to see it fully complete it's getting closer to Deadline ARRGG!!!!

[pabbloz]

I love the texture-head!

Great model!


more more more !!

[Tennis]

ok, here's the final image, hope you like it :)
http://www.kennethfejer.dk/test/post-apocalyptic.jpg

i had hoped to make a background of some sort, but i've been too lazy :) and now there's no time.

Totitch:
i migth animate him later on, but i've got pretty tired of him, so i think im moving on to another project.

patrick Fodéré:
sorry i dont have a ilustrate render, so i cant try that.

timothyD:
heh, yeh you might be right :)

[Leydecker]

Hi Kenneth,

just love the design. also the delicate detail in his
face. It´s like

*Wallace (and Gromit) go bad after the cheese*

Cool.

Tim

*where´s the cookies*

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