Master and Servant 3D Entry: Carlos Eduardo Montoya C.

[melkao]

My idea is a abstract representation of a puppet with a obscure/behind system control. The "puppet" is maipulated by a master hand and not have real independence...

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112486605_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112486605_large.jpg)

hello again....
in this topic i will make like i said a puppet controloed, like the world control us.
i hope you like

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112656337_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112656337_large.jpg)

the escenary will be like teatre, with the background black, the floor and one headlight

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112661291_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112661291_large.jpg)

this gonna be the face of my puppet, somethig perturbated and sad, but i still have to work in some details

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112762738_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112762738_large.jpg)

this is the first idea for my puppet. but i will work more in it.

[vampeta]

:bounce:Welcome:bounce: to:bounce: this:bounce: Party :bounce:

It looks like you are a "Tim Burton" fan ?! :bowdown:

Keep on Modeling!!
Alex

[alexfalchi]

welcome!! I like the idea:)

[NEWT#]

It would be nice if your puppet had some interaction with his world ... perhaps trying to opose master`s strings ... just a thought:thumbsup:.

[amir jahanlou]

Wow, This is an excelent idea, wish you the best.

[DaddyMack]

Hi melkao, cool character so far man:thumbsup: I agree with NEWT#, you should start thinking about what he'll be doing...
Good luck!

[arcovoltaire]

Great idea. Very good his/her concept.

[melkao]

:thumbsup:thanks for all of you for your coments.

-NEW# and DaddyMack good idea for the interacting, i will think about it.

-vampeta, yes i like the movies of tim burton and i based this puppet in that movie of halloween "the strange world of jack", but however my model is diferent and the idea too. thanks for note it:scream:

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112807560_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112807560_large.jpg)

ok here is an update, i added the shoes, and a prisioner chain, so he cna't move by himself, he is traped, and depend totally to the master had

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112811951_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112811951_large.jpg)

now i added the bones, now i can to incorporate the escenary to start to make the effects and details

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112817793_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112817793_large.jpg)

here i put him a hat of arlequim, it is just a detail, there will be more

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112838665_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1112838665_large.jpg)

ok, girls and boys, here is the master, the one who will coltrol the pupet, as you se he is a compulsive maniac, and he enjoy to have the control and torture the pupet.
this is his obsession, the control, and it makes him an slave too.
the puppet is slave from the human, and the human is slave from the need to have the control

[hands0nfire]

really enjoying your work so far...and I really like your concept as well leep up the work

handsonfire

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=223443 <- this is my thread

[alexfalchi]

Ahahah nice face...sooo funny:):thumbsup:


Alex.

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113248905_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113248905_large.jpg)

now i'm preparing my escenary for the final image. i will add the head, hands, the cords.
i'm still planning what the puppet will do here

[alexfalchi]

Haappete!! this is funny boy:) ahahah nice mate...keep it funnyyy!!:thumbsup:


Alex.

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113252741_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113252741_large.jpg)

this is the hand with a black glove, it's not too much deailed because is not the principal model in the escene, also is black and the background too

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113270153_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113270153_large.jpg)

I'm trying to decide wich of this 2 master, will be in the final escene. I don't know which to use....the funny big eyes, or the mysterious girl. Both have their concept, i aleardy put of the funny one, and the girl as all you know, the girls likes to have the control of all, and manipulate to us

I acept any opinion

[alexfalchi]

Well for me is better the first one...need some work but he have a mad expression...yes I think

the first one:)


Alex.

[DaddyMack]

Hi melkao, for me there is no question that the first character (Eyesy Mcbulgey) has way more appeal and originality...
Keep it coming man, it's gone a long way since your start!:thumbsup:

[melkao]

hey thanks to both, and your'e right the first one is more apropiate fo this escene, and i will work more in it:thumbsup:

[cgnime]

I really like the idea and I love the puppet.
good luck :)

[gui_mends]

The first one looks funny a lot!
when you post the master
controling the servant, your scene
will be very nice!
You can make the servant with
open airs and put down his head.
I think your servant can looks
like a marionette!
If you make it, you will got
a very nice work..
I will watch you..
cya!
*sorry about english errors ='(

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113414094_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113414094_large.jpg)

Now i added the master to the escene, in the posicion that he will be, i still working in the posicion of the hand, the cords, the accion that the puppet will do and the final effects, i still have to put too many details.
Hope you like

[alexfalchi]

ahahah very funny melkao very funny:):bounce:

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113439442_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113439442_large.jpg)

this is just alook from behind the escene,

hey thanks for the coments

[gui_mends]

The final image will be great!
cya

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113444384_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113444384_large.jpg)

this is the sitck, that will be holding the strings

[alexfalchi]

Nice melkao nice!! funnyyyyyy mate!!


Alex

[Matroskin]

Hi melkao,
I like that play with volumetric light! Becomes very atmospherical. And even sad. Good lightning concept!
Will keep an eye on this thread!

[Kanga]

Cool textures and organic shape!

[melkao]

Kanga - Deryk - alexfalchi, thanks for the suport, i really apreciate that:thumbsup:

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113587922_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113587922_large.jpg)

now i been added a new texture to my master, now he or it, or that thing..loks better, more maniac and mad.
And i been added a bump in the eyes to give them mor expression.
hope you like it

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113590271_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113590271_large.jpg)

here is the update escenary with the new texture in the master

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113591366_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1113591366_large.jpg)

oops the last one appears damage.
Here is the update

[DaddyMack]

This sis starting to take a wierd and funny shape melkao I like it a lot:thumbsup: keep on tweeking

[JRBRAZ]

Hi melkao,

I like the Jack inspired character and the mad face of the master. REally funny :bounce:

I´m just think you could improve something in master .. like the shape of the mouth and put the end teeth inside the mouth. You could let less white the tooth too...

[alexfalchi]

ahaha melkao you make me loft!! nice update and funny boy mate!!


Alex.

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114036685_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114036685_large.jpg)

Here i put a courtain in the back, thats just the first detail in the escene, and what the puppet will do.....well, i'm working on it

[alexfalchi]

ahahah nice show really mate...:thumbsup: good work friend.


Alex.

[RandomTask]

Nice concept and atmosphere. :)

I like the master model, It looks like he's going to strain something.
The eyes dont quite look connected to the face though, maybe give him some lids?

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114042307_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114042307_large.jpg)

another detail....can you see it?

[alexfalchi]

yes I can see it my friend:) nice done!!


Alex.

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114044909_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114044909_large.jpg)

here i go again with another detail

[JRBRAZ]

It´s geting better. Nice work.:bounce:

My only sugestion is decrease a little the bump in the courtain and increse the bump of the wall

[pigwater]

fun stuff .. love the puppet character ...

i agreee with the bump suggestion .. maybe his eye lids could get a tweak

good stuff :thumbsup:

[alexfalchi]

more details more funny my friend:)


Alex.

[melkao]

Hey thanks for the advice, youre right it need a bump

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114199496_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114199496_large.jpg)

Here i added an a microphone, because the púppet wil say bad, but very bad jokes, int the master and servant show.... that doesn't got sence.
thats his cruse, and the master enjoys to see the suffering of his servant, because the public is lookinge him wiht bad eyes.

[arLutiK]

Melkao nice lighting you got there, i would ass up a little thing in your volumetric to make it look even nicer, dust floating around.


Great Work :thumbsup:

[Zethriel]

2 words to explain my view of your style: simple and effective
Nice work :thumbsup:

[melkao]

2 words to explain my view of your style: simple and effective
Nice work :thumbsup:

Zethriel: jajaja thanks man

arlutik:thats a nice idea

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114213432_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114213432_large.jpg)

new effect: smoke

[alexfalchi]

nice smoke...nice done frined:)


Alex.

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114530188_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114530188_large.jpg)

Now here at last the strings, that will control the puppet.
I'm still thinking in the bad joke....

[alexfalchi]

Hey Carlos..looking nice atmosphere here..your charachers are very funny...maybe you can try varius ligth color, just my opinion...

very well done keep going friend:thumbsup:

Alex.

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114622313_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114622313_large.jpg)

here is the composition of the escenary

[bealobo]

hey your concept is strong and by adding details you´re making the composition more deep. so add more! a little handkerchief on the jacket, a poster on the wall... everything!
:thumbsup:

[Tremoside]

Man...It's excellent! Your idea with this puppet is definitely a good one. Volumetric lights and strings are also cool. Keep it tweakin' it's better and better after your each update!

[alexfalchi]

Good Sketch friend...wait for more!!:thumbsup:


Alex.

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114791200_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114791200_large.jpg)

Now i added an a detail very particuilar, a picture of one last challenge (machineflesh). I'm not so far to finish my master and servant, i'm jus adding some details to the escene following the advice form bealobo.

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114794947_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114794947_large.jpg)

Here is another detail. In this time is just a paper, with the bad joke typed in it.
The final story will be very strange, i'm working on it.

[alexfalchi]

Good Carlos..keep it up my friend..more details alot nice job!:thumbsup:

[Matroskin]

Hi there melkao!
Ok, comes along with good strong atmosphere! Good efx with fog and light! Sorry if I'll double some stuff said (now I hadn't time to read all posts attentively) but will you detail master's head more? I mean his eye (oh yes, increadibly imnportant part - here should be high-end :) and are where eyes transition into head itself. Well, and now eye have too much "blood" - I think it is better to make it more uniformly scattered on eye and less dence.
Anyway, good luck with your scene - in general great work, mate!http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon10.gif

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114837379_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1114837379_large.jpg)

now a detail for the master, i start to modify and detail more the master

[alex.h.]

wery strong atmosphere and wery diffrent, like it, keep going strong and see you :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[alexfalchi]

Go Carlos Go...nice mate...more details moree:thumbsup:

good job my friend!!

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115057735_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115057735_large.jpg)

Here i changed the background, and i put a wall to replace the courtain, and the text has an a lens effect so now it looks like a neon light

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115061604_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115061604_large.jpg)

here are more neon ligths, and a correction of my last update. Because i don't know the texture of the wall was appiled to the floor, but here is the correction with the new lights

[alexfalchi]

ehe I think mucth better now..nice ligths:thumbsup:


Alex.

[Tremoside]

Hi Carlos,

Just keep workin on these small stuffs! Your image is comin along nicely! Keep it up, you're in time and you have a cool image :beer: ! Have a nice day! :wavey:

[praguer28]

Good idea... the textures could be more dirty... Anyway good luck!

My thread:
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=231948

http://img175.echo.cx/img175/7494/3dbrazil5uk.jpg

[(o)ne]

looks good :thumbsup:

[ilusiondigital]

What a nice image, you are very influated by Tim Burton. Great an good luck

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115145943_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115145943_large.jpg)

now following the advice of praguer28 i added dirt to the wall but it doen't notes too much because the atmosphere is dark, and some dirt to the air too

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115177534_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115177534_large.jpg)

i added some ugly imperfections to the face of the puppet...hope you like

[arLutiK]

Carlos good idea the imperfection really helps it, always important to put imperfection since nothing is perfect in this world

[alexfalchi]

Ahahah Carlos sta mui divertido...eheheh nice job mate really funny!! keep it like super funny friend:thumbsup:

[fer3d]

It is looking very good!

Just an observation: I couldn't figure out at first what the sphere by the puppet was. I saw there was a chain only when I saw the closeup of the character alone. Why don't you try to place the ball and the chain in such a way that they are more easily visible?

fer

[vampeta]

COOL! I like your Character :thumbsup:

Keep on rocking! :buttrock:

Alex

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115222713_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115222713_large.jpg)

I almost done this trhead.
At this time i put the new omprfect textured puppet in the escene, and the sphere with the chain imoved to the other side of the body.
Thanks man for the advice!

[alexfalchi]

GO carlos go...nice update mate!!:thumbsup:

[DaddyMack]

Hi melkao, this is almost there man! Well done, I'd just tweek away for the next few days man...

[msteinert]

Much interesting concept, it looks very cool.

Keep the good work!

Mauricio Steinert

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115346175_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115346175_large.jpg)

here is the reflection on the floor

[JRBRAZ]

Hi Melkao,

I like very much of this lasts updates. Good work. :thumbsup:

I just don´t know about the reflexive ground ... personally I think is too much ... I prefer a rough ground ... maybe is more appropriate to the scene, but this is totally personal taste ...

The new size of the woods (I don´t know the righ name of these parts ... hehehe... Is wooden laths? that what´s appear in google... :p) in the stage ground is really better ... :)

If you have more time, what you think to change the plane ground of the stage for separeted "woods" ?

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115599802_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115599802_large.jpg)

here are diferent render and images worked in photoshop....I'ts just a test of what render i will use. 6 diferents test with 6 diferent filters:

1.The original
2.With brightness/contrast and more brightness.
3.Brightness/contrast and more contrast
4.with hue and saturation
5.film grain
6.glowing edges

[alexfalchi]

Nice Carlos...I like a lot the 2 one!! very well done my friend!!:thumbsup:


Alex.

[NEWT#]

Its more apealing if you mirror your image, so a viewer first notices this happy puppet, then naturaly moves to the right and there is a threat - his master looking back. Otherwise, viewer is confused, should he look at the puppet or at the master first, and the effect is somehow lost.

Anyways, keep it up :thumbsup: .

Oh yeah, I like the film grain version best, looks like dusty old theatre.

[melkao]

thanks to both guys...but i still need more opinions after decide what render i will put to my final image.

Falchi: Thanks man, you are the only that always support me by your coments, in every post:thumbsup:

NEWT#: thanks for your opinion....bue i don't understand what did you mean in your coment:shrug:

anyway lets finish this:buttrock:

[alexfalchi]

Ok maybe i'm stupid, but I not understand...your first name in Carlos or Eduardo??:surprised :blush:
Sorry friend!! keep going!!:thumbsup:

Alex.

[melkao]

Ok maybe i'm stupid, but I not understand...your first name in Carlos or Eduardo??:surprised :blush:
Sorry friend!! keep going!!:thumbsup:

Alex.
jajajajajaja.....oh my friend...my name is Carlos Eduardo Montoya Cortes in that order.
Don't worry man you are not the first confused with that....:scream:

[alexfalchi]

jajaja lo sapia io....jajajajaj:applause: q perro q soi!!

buena suerte hermano!!:thumbsup:

[JRBRAZ]

Hi Carlos,

I like the version 2 and the 5 .. but the size of the images is too small to I decide .. hehehe ... So if you could, post a bigger image of the 2 and 5, because I think I not the only one with doubt here .. hehehe ... alexfalchi, prefer the 2 and NEWT# prefer the 5 ... :thumbsup:

[melkao]

youre right J.BRAZ...i will put all 6 images separated 2 by post...so it will look more near and detailed:thumbsup:

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115835020_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115835020_large.jpg)

here are the frist 2 renders now you can see more detail and near both...later i will put the number 3 and 4. Here are:

1: the original
2: Brigthness/contrast

Vote now!

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115836170_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115836170_large.jpg)

here are the frist 2 renders now you can see more detail and near both...later i will put the number 3 and 4. Here are:

1: the original
2: Brigthness/contrast

Vote now!

[vampeta]

Hi Carlos Eduardo Montoya Cortes ;)

You making a good progress on your Picture, I love your style
(has a bit from TimBurtons-Nightmare bevore X-mas)

Keep it on & hurry up
You doing a great job :thumbsup:

See ya in the Voting
Alex

[alexfalchi]

hey mate..good job friend!! best luck to you:thumbsup:

[JRBRAZ]

Hi Carlos,

The number 2 looks really good. Much better than original. Post a higher resolution of the number 5 too for we decide between the number 2 and number 5. :thumbsup:

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115909825_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115909825_large.jpg)

here are the number 3 and 4-
3: Brigthness/contrast
4:hue nad saturation

soon the 5&6

vote now!

[alexfalchi]

Hello mate!! nice work..I like the first one..good job my friend:thumbsup:

[melkao]

thanks Alex...but what first one(1,2,3,4)?:shrug:

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115992475_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1115992475_large.jpg)

Here are the last 2...the number 5 and 6
5:film grain
6:glowing edges

vote now!

please vote because this contest will be finish in 5 days...so hurry up

[JRBRAZ]

Hi Carlos,

For me the number 5 is the best :bounce:

[melkao]

Hi to everybody....and thanks for all that coments and support..but it seems that i got to made my own choice, because everybody choose an a diferent render, so i'm confused:shrug:

[JRBRAZ]

Hi to everybody....and thanks for all that coments and support..but it seems that i got to made my own choice, because everybody choose an a diferent render, so i'm confused:shrug:


heheheeh .... I really think the number 2 and 5 are the best ... If you choose one of that will be a good choice ... heheh :thumbsup:

[alexfalchi]

thanks Alex...but what first one(1,2,3,4)?:shrug:

Ops sorry Carlos...I like the number 3!!:thumbsup:

Alex.

[melkao]

well it seem that i will make a combination of all that diferents renders to make to all of you happy:thumbsup:


Now i got to work a lot:sad::banghead::cry:

[arLutiK]

Carlos, don't forget that it is yourself you need to please the most. :)

[Matroskin]

Wow melkao, I see you're doing deep post ellaboration! Curious to see final image!http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon4.gif

[bealobo]

yep, me too. I want to see how the final image comes.
:thumbsup:

[melkao]

bealobo,Deryk,arlutik:
thanks guys, for the suport, and the final image is near to get ready:buttrock:

[Versiden]

groovy scene man :thumbsup: almost something out of nightmare b4 christmas style.. which is very inspiring!

my only crit is the headline title for the stage area, it kinda makes your piece too literal and maybe it'll only apply for this challenge, whereas another title.. you can use it for anywhere like your portfolio.. hope I make sense.. lol, i need sleep

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1116264633_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1116264633_large.jpg)

just an update
And another view....
What do you think about this view?

[melkao]

here are in my last update, an efect to make it looks like a old movie, and other perspective:shrug:

[alexfalchi]

just an update
And another view....
What do you think about this view?


well I really like this...maybe you have used a lot niose....aniway my friend good job!!:thumbsup:

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1116450228_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1116450228_large.jpg)

Here are the panel of the maps to show all the basic terxures i used

[JRBRAZ]

Hi friend, the time is almost over .. where is the final version??? :scream:

You need to upload the final version before the end ... :eek:

run, run, run :bounce:

[melkao]

Don't worry about that..i still have 14 hours.....by the way my final image is done, is just wait a moment to uploaded:thumbsup:

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1116453849_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1116453849_large.jpg)

here are some effects like:
- lens effect, to the neon lights
- Motion blur to the tomato
- Volume light to the principal light
- fog to the atmosphere

[yeray]

vengaaa vengaa esa imagen finalll :D

[melkao]

get ready the final image in almos 2 hours:banghead:

[mamcx]

I see your progress with interest and is great that you archieve the intention... Is good the concept, very classic, and the feel is just like a standar comedy show....

[melkao]

One moment more and the final will come:twisted:

[melkao]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1116477478_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7136/7136_1116477478_large.jpg)

This is the final image. I tweak it a little in photoshop and use filters for that.

Ok, the history of this, invented in less than 1 minute :)

The actual master was a nice guy..before. He was a former 3D artist and trying to prove themselve, him join the CG Networks community and enter EVERY challenge... but fail... and fail... and fail... but at least put all his effort! (mom tell him)

Then in your weak mind, start to happend bad things (schizophrenia maybe?), and imagine that some freak control cause him their failures...

So far, so well and thanks to us because we pay the all our taxes, this guy was send to a mad house, where in a attemp to get the attention inside a dark room, enjoy their live render physicologic damage to their puppet (a bad idea mom! That is not the kind of gift rigth for a crazy man!) and in your disturbed dreams represent the CG networks communtity in a standar comedy show (but, hey! at least promote the website, take a look at the poster!), so, taking control of the puppet is taking control of the price!

Pow! But the doctor say, he is slave to his own mind, so all going on circles dude...

However, a loser like this, also in your freak dreams all goes bad. So, that is the reason of the tomato going to their face: Nobody like bad jokes!

This challenge was great for me. For first time ever, I have real responses in my challenge thread! (is very sad that in my previous challenges I only get less than 200 views and have 3 pages of comments made for...me). I'm very happy to see that I have almost 2000 views!

Thanks to everybody that encourage me with your comments and good luck to the second, third and fourth places ;)

[JRBRAZ]

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

Finally the mistery is over... hehehe ... Congratulations my friend. :applause:


Good luck :thumbsup:

[melkao]

At least i did it....J.BRAZ, FALCHI, and everyone i finish this:wise:

[johnny3d]

oe carlos la imagen final esta bien pero hay algo que no :sad:me gusta que es la especie de manzana que tiene una sombre en la luz, y esa especie de computador en realidad no se que es pero en si, :applause:te digo que es una idea muy convicente para los jurados de este concurso, y a demas es muy novedosa he original :thumbsup:.... animo mijo que vamos es para adelante bien

[johnny3d]

Carlos a medida que avanzan los concursos en cgtalk, el nivel de creacion y experiencia cada vez aumenta mas por ello es importante seguir adelante con los concursos, lastima que no pude seguir concursando pero con seguridad sera en otra oportunidad mijo :thumbsup: la buena para usted bien.....

[melkao]

thanks johnny 3d but i talk about the tomato and the poster in teh history of the image:thumbsup:

[alexfalchi]

My friend, my friend...nice job my friend..you have make really good challange, you have very good passion and for this I whish best luck to you..really nice final pic my friend..keep always strong and nice.
Have best luck my friend!!:thumbsup:

Alex.

[melkao]

My friend, my friend...nice job my friend..you have make really good challange, you have very good passion and for this I whish best luck to you..really nice final pic my friend..keep always strong and nice.
Have best luck my friend!!:thumbsup:

Alex.

thanks Falchi....you are the one that always support to me...thaks, and good luck to you too, and i hope to see you again in the next challenge:scream:

[fer3d]

I like what you did to the lights in the final stage. I think it improved a lot on the previous posts, giving it a little theater atmosphere. Also the glow on the letters "puppet" is a good idea imo.

The tomato helps a lot in telling the tragic story, I believe.

I just wish none of us CG talkers get psicho like the guy you describe ;)

fer

[melkao]

I like what you did to the lights in the final stage. I think it improved a lot on the previous posts, giving it a little theater atmosphere. Also the glow on the letters "puppet" is a good idea imo.

The tomato helps a lot in telling the tragic story, I believe.

I just wish none of us CG talkers get psicho like the guy you describe ;)

fer

jaja thanks man for the support....and your right. but if we always work but never win.....well, i'll becom some crazy:twisted:

[bealobo]

felicidades por acabar y por todo!

buena suerte! nos vemos por aqui!

[melkao]

Hola Beatriz L. gracias y nos vemos en el siguiente concurso:thumbsup:

[melkao]

oh my God....my tiff fina image is damage.....NNNOOOOOOO!:cry:
why?, why?...and i can't fix it:banghead:-.....anyway:shrug:

[cgnime]

Me encanta el puppet.
Buena suerte y gracias por tu apoyo.
(:sad: acabe el mio pero .... bueno no me gusto por eso no lo post in my thread. But I did FTP it :shrug:) ...

caro

[melkao]

Gracias Caro.....lastima....me hubiera gustado ver tu imagen final....pero buena suerte:thumbsup:

[alexfalchi]

oh my God....my tiff fina image is damage.....NNNOOOOOOO!:cry:
why?, why?...and i can't fix it:banghead:-.....anyway:shrug:

whot the problem my friend??

[melkao]

HI Falchi....no, is my mistake, i was wrong:rolleyes:, is not damage, i'm very ahppy for that:applause:
thanks man for the interest in me:thumbsup:

[alexfalchi]

Always u're welcome my friend!!:thumbsup:

[melkao]

This challenge is near to get finish. And i wish good luck to all:bounce:

[melkao]

Hey guys where are the winners, i can't see them, and i know that some people are now in onorific mentions.....so wheres the link?, someone knows?

[bealobo]

yeah!
if you go to www.cgtalk.com (http://www.cgtalk.com) (main page) you will see an image that announces M&S winners, is around the top left of the site. Click there, and it will link you to the winners.

:thumbsup:

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