Master and Servant 3D Entry: özgün zümrüt

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112687983_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112687983_large.jpg)


hello all :)

i've always been willing to participate in the challenges but never had enough time. Hope I can finish this...

here's the idea :


a biker uses two sportsmanlike rats as an engine transforming the wheels of the bicycle into hamsters' wheels.



here's the sketch : (waiting forward for any critics)

[dobermunk]

That's a funny take on the subject! Congrats on that.
I think you're loosing some of the impact, though - why is the rider exhausted if his monster hamsters are doing the work? Might get more tension in the composition by having him look back to see where the competition is, kind of impatient for his hamsters to finish their break...

[jddog]

haha... amazing idea and concept, I really like it :thumbsup:
jdd

[Jelmer]

nice and original concept but i think dobermunk is right, anyway start the moddeling soon if you want to finish:thumbsup:

[MORRISS]

thanks for your comments :)


dobermunk: although I don't want to imply the relation of teh master and servant as an exploitation, i decided that the master should at least keep a straight face (maybe an inpatient glance...)
I agree that the expression of the master will strenghten the composition.
thanks a lot for your comment :)

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112702022_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112702022_large.jpg)

layout #1

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112726817_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112726817_large.jpg)

here's the rat sketches, what do you think ??

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112727077_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112727077_large.jpg)

rat sketch #02

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112727247_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112727247_large.jpg)

rat sketch #03

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112727527_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112727527_large.jpg)

rat sketch #04

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112727747_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112727747_large.jpg)

and another detailed one.
comments & crits welcome :)

[SaintT]

Very good skatches!:thumbsup: I can't wait to see them in 3d!
But I think the Nike logo is copyrighted. Be careful with it.
Good luck!:buttrock:

[mitralone]

Hmmm. Very funny subject. Will watch this.

Selam,

Komik olacağa benziyor. Umarım güzel bir deneyim olur.

Kolay gelsin.

Tufan

[MORRISS]

thanks for watching :)

saintT yeah youre right , must design an original logo. will try :)

mitralone : eyvallah abi. inşallah sonunu getirebilirim. kolay gelsin sanada :)

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112811441_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112811441_large.jpg)

here\'s the complete rats
i think the second one is better for the big picture.

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112811537_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112811537_large.jpg)

second one ... (think better) :)

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112902215_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112902215_large.jpg)

here\'s the hand sketches , think second one better again :)

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112902323_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112902323_large.jpg)

second one (that I prefer)

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112902435_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112902435_large.jpg)

biker's arm sketches 01

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112902510_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112902510_large.jpg)

biker's arm sketches 02

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112902629_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112902629_large.jpg)

biker\'s arm sketches 03

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112902753_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112902753_large.jpg)

biker's arm sketches 04

[DaddyMack]

Hi MORRISS, very cool concept, and some great skills coming through in your sketches
Keep the quality flowing;)

[StephD]

great idea!
looking forward for it ;)

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112976109_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112976109_large.jpg)

thanks for your comments :)
currently I'm in an ad job (character animation) and have no free time but im working on it :)

here's the biker's head sketches. i prefer the realistic one(last one).
(a reference photo of me used for these)

by the way I started to modeling of the bike. (reference : giant xtc) i will post it later.

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112976207_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112976207_large.jpg)

biker's head 02

[MORRISS]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112976310_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7099/7099_1112976310_large.jpg)

the realistic one

[isgunbay]

very nice idea. i will watch your jobs. good sketches. :bounce:

[siren]

Good luck morris..:buttrock:

Güzel gidiyo olm bitir şu işi... :banghead:

[Infernando]

Quite original idea, gonna follow how this one's turn out :thumbsup:
And your sketches are really wild!

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