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A12
03-31-2005, 04:46 PM
Brent Alleyne has entered the Master and Servant 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=7045)

Latest Update: Final Image: Morning Ride/ Final: Final
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1116454491_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1116454491_large.jpg)

Story:
Once again,"Morning Ride" is an image of Princess Ziana, air to the thrown of Terra, making her morning survey of her father’s kingdom. She rides the back of her well trained human servant, a rare breed of creature that once inhabited the planet but was driven to near extinction during the Terrran conquests. Now only a few remain, raised and trained for Terran royalty to safely and honorably live there lives in noble servitude.

Image:
Created by me with the help of Lightwave 3D and the CgNetwork community.

A12
03-31-2005, 04:56 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112288190_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112288190_large.jpg)

Yeah, I'm back. I screwed up my brent3d account somehow. Now I have to re-submit everything under Brent_3D.
This is my concept sketch for my "Morning Ride" 3d illustration. Sorry, lost my Wacom pen so I had to rough it. "Morning Ride" is an image shot of Prince Zego, air to the thrown of Terra, making his morning survey of his father’s kingdom. He rides the back of his human servant, a rare breed of creature that once inhabited the planet before it's near extinction during the Terrran conquests.

A12
03-31-2005, 05:00 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112288427_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112288427_large.jpg)

Beginning modeling stages of the human servant.

A12
03-31-2005, 05:06 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112288784_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112288784_large.jpg)

Here's the over all form of the human servant. He'll have boots, rugged pants and some sort of body harness for the rider to use.

A12
03-31-2005, 05:08 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112288926_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112288926_large.jpg)

Back.

A12
03-31-2005, 05:09 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112288991_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112288991_large.jpg)

Front.

A12
03-31-2005, 05:11 PM
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Beginning stages of Pincess/Rider model.

dmonk
03-31-2005, 05:15 PM
I think you've done a good job in modeling so far.

One thing I notice though is the the smaller character is way more stylized the the big guy. Unless you are going to add a lot more definition to the little guy, I would tone down how pronounced the muscle system is in the big guy.

Cheers!:thumbsup:

Keep it up.

A12
03-31-2005, 05:53 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112291601_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112291601_large.jpg)

Princess overall form close to completion. No garments or details yet.

KangarooMan
03-31-2005, 06:16 PM
Hey great job on the modeling process. :thumbsup: Cool ideas all the way around.

Matt

ihamid
03-31-2005, 09:42 PM
hi brent....nice modeling here!..nice style...man good luck :)

javaejderi
03-31-2005, 09:58 PM
I like those lightwave stuff, because of using my favorite program maybe:)...The arms with hands are quite pro-done...But the face of the servant must be significantly different, I mean it is so ordinary, man!!!...Master is cool enough for an initial model...Watching closely progress of your project!

A12
03-31-2005, 10:09 PM
Thanks J++ Dragon. Thats just the servants general body type. Now that the Master is pretty much fleshed out I'll begin to bring out some character in the Servant and work back and forth. Must represent. Thanks.

pixelkeg
03-31-2005, 10:14 PM
Looking good so far, I like your modeling style.
What kind of terrain is in the princess' kingdom?

A12
03-31-2005, 10:28 PM
Terrain will be grassy with rolling hills. There will be a thick early morning mist. A pleasant and natural surrounding to frame and contrast the wild brute like nature of the servant and the controling and commanding presence of the royal alien princess. At least thats the idea.

soapy
04-01-2005, 12:04 AM
hey nice work, it coming along really fast. I especially like the big guy. I will be looking forward to how it plays out. Cheers, good luck.

Kid-Mesh
04-01-2005, 01:58 AM
From one waver to another....wow!

Looks like your know your way around the human anatomy too. Your characters are very cool, I will for sure keep checking out your progress.

Subscribing :)

A12
04-01-2005, 04:13 AM
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Beginning stages of the Princess' wardrobe elements.

ace4016
04-01-2005, 04:33 AM
Nice models. I like the toons. Good job so far. Good luck on the rest of the entry.

pigwater
04-01-2005, 04:48 AM
ya got a really cool princess .. love the style .. that big dude, very nice as well

looking forward to seeing the the lanscape play out and how this all works together

nice work:thumbsup:

ibexion
04-01-2005, 06:09 AM
dig your characters brent...pitty no animation could do awesome things with these too.

blackdragoncg
04-01-2005, 07:33 AM
I agree with these guys nice work :thumbsup:

Mr.Waka
04-01-2005, 10:23 AM
Woaw, very nice design for your 2 characters ! I like them !... :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Great work... I gonna look forward your work ! :bounce: :buttrock:

Miezis
04-01-2005, 10:30 AM
I love the cartoonlike style! maybe thats why I am making somthing that way as well! good luck!

A12
04-01-2005, 08:25 PM
dig your characters brent...pitty no animation could do awesome things with these too.


I agree! I just can't imagine 3d without animation. Just a static image? That's torture. I'm going to use bones to pose the characters anyway so animation is probably inevitable, even if it's just for fun. Which leads me to the idea that animators percieve 3d creation differently than illustrators. This is neither bad or good. I just know the perspective on the process and visual results can be quite different. The animator focuses heavily on the mechanics and physical functionality of the work while illustrators focus mainly on detail and composition, but yet there both viewed as being the same. What do you guys think? Are you animator, illustrator or both? Do you see a differance?

Atwooki
04-01-2005, 08:28 PM
Style is really going places, Brent :)

Digging the princess' ears :D and very iconic as an image..... reminds me a little of an Aztecian 'fetish' (in the real sense of the word!)

Niiiice!

Chris

jake rupert
04-02-2005, 04:47 AM
Hi Brent,

Great style of your modells!
I hope one day I will get this far myself.
Your creature would be the ideal butler for my manga-girlie-idea.
I am eager to start learning animation now.
That`s one of the main reasons, I decided to take part in this challange, because I want to try to rigg and pose my models as well. So far I mainly have been stuck with the modelling part.
But I really want to make movies!!

;>) Jake

DaddyMack
04-02-2005, 05:43 AM
Hi again Brent, she's evolving into a very unique individual, keep the great updates coming:thumbsup:

Gunilla
04-04-2005, 05:27 PM
Agree with everyone else around - very cool work so far :thumbsup:

bealobo
04-04-2005, 11:15 PM
wow!
you´re fast! I´m completely amazed, you´re going to use bones to pose them! :surprised Are you using weight maps or just bones? if I used bones and weight maps for posing in my thread, I won´t get to the deadline in time, for sure. So, you deserve this :bowdown:

The models look great! just about the human I see something strange regarding the muscle that goes from the shoulder to the neck (how´s it called?). I can´t tell exactly what is it.

what colors are you using?
Keep up the good work!

A12
04-05-2005, 04:37 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112672266_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112672266_large.jpg)

Didn't want to go to long without posting something. Here's the Princess model after facial modification and the addition of a few details. Working on her full wardrobe now. I'll be putting that up soon.

ihamid
04-05-2005, 09:57 AM
cool Brent !..the princess is coming along fine :)!

Climax
04-05-2005, 10:10 AM
• Great work in here Brent! I like the style! :thumbsup:

soapy
04-05-2005, 04:15 PM
Nice work Brent, the princess is looking really good. It looks like you need a few more points at the tips of the ears?

WimH
04-05-2005, 05:04 PM
Hey there ...nice style...

good luck

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?p=2122299#post2122299

A12
04-05-2005, 06:20 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112721656_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112721656_large.jpg)

Early image of Master "Princess" as I begin to add her garments. Model is not at it's final resolution so some edges may be rough.

Kid-Mesh
04-05-2005, 08:13 PM
Look really good there Brent! Cant wait to see them rigged :thumbsup:

dmonk
04-05-2005, 08:34 PM
Nice update. This is getting better with every post! The earrings and the head piece really make her work.

DaddyMack
04-05-2005, 10:53 PM
Hi again Brent, she's lost all her innocence and suddenly looks real serious like...Great choice in direction. Keep the evolution coming mate:thumbsup:

Matroskin
04-06-2005, 07:26 AM
Hi Brent_3D!
Wow, I find your Princess really original one!
As you probably already know, cartoon style becomes my weakness (ok , little passion!) :)
It comes out rather complexhttp://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon13.gif
Hairs are especially impressive! Wanna see it posed!! Should cool!

A12
04-06-2005, 04:14 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112800442_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1112800442_large.jpg)

Wardrobe update. Couple more pieces then its over to the human Servant I go.Thanks for your comments.

eddieellis
04-06-2005, 08:09 PM
great characters mate, i like it... nothing to crit as of yet

authentic
04-11-2005, 04:45 PM
like the design of your princess. Waiting for more.

A12
04-11-2005, 10:29 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1113254980_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1113254980_large.jpg)

Tightning up the Princess model a bit. On to the Servant now. After that then textures and surfaces for all and whatever else is needed.

A12
04-11-2005, 10:35 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1113255306_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1113255306_large.jpg)

Working on the Servant now. Time to bring the poor brute to life.

A12
04-12-2005, 02:49 AM
Oops! Mest up my post.

A12
04-12-2005, 02:58 AM
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Servant pretty much fleshed out now. Going onto the rest of his stuff.

A12
04-12-2005, 03:56 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1113317761_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1113317761_large.jpg)

Beginning work on head harness. This will set the tone for the rest of the straps.

suk-grigorij
04-13-2005, 06:51 PM
Better and Better.

My thread http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=224891&page=1&pp=20

A12
04-15-2005, 01:25 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1113524752_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1113524752_large.jpg)

"So where's my skirt you pittyful human" spat the Princess, or something like that. Princess is rigged now. The skirt will be setup and deformed for the final composition. Once everyone has details and bones I'll begin on their surface. Slow but steady.

A12
04-15-2005, 03:21 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1113531686_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1113531686_large.jpg)

Lost in her thoughts. Just another shot I thought was interesting.

angel
04-15-2005, 03:26 AM
I absolutely love that character design. Good work!

ace4016
04-15-2005, 05:33 AM
Nice going with the rest of the princess, and GREAT poses. Nice rigginng too. Do you have anything planned for these two after the challenge?

ibambao
04-15-2005, 07:08 AM
I like your Princess character design, looks original and new.

come check out my mines
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=223560&page=3&pp=15

Versiden
04-15-2005, 09:48 AM
i agree with Snows.. awesome design and it works very well in 3d. Servant and princess looking very good!

Virtuoso
04-15-2005, 09:53 AM
Hi Brent.......really nice,fun and interesting.....i think I'll be in to follow up on more as you go,looking real good.....i like the look and feel of things....keep up the nice work here....:thumbsup:

icedeyes
04-15-2005, 12:03 PM
Great character design Brent... It seems like some of your older characters in style.. like you are building a new race.. great work...

DimitrisLiatsos
04-15-2005, 12:42 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1113524752_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1113524752_large.jpg)

"So where's my skirt you pittyful human" .....


Hahahahah...awesome ...just awesome....:thumbsup:

wuxi_dakar
04-15-2005, 01:35 PM
stlylish charactar,i like it,especialy the way you modle figernail

alexichabane
04-15-2005, 01:43 PM
Beautiful modeling on your princess character, it's very interesting and has a great style to it. I love the shapes and lines in the model (it really has alot of personality) and the details are looking good as well. Good stuff all around. Alexi

Gunilla
04-15-2005, 02:00 PM
"So where's my skirt you pittyful human" spat the Princess, or something like that

lol! Now, that's what I call attitude! Wonderful character and great pose :thumbsup:

A12
04-15-2005, 03:06 PM
Hey, thanks for the great feed back. To answer a few questions, yes I am starting a new race (well a virtual one) and I hopefully will use the characters and ideas developed here for an animated short that I plan to do during the summer and fall. I don't think the Princess would have it any other way.

A12
04-18-2005, 02:08 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1113829717_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1113829717_large.jpg)

Just messing around looking at relationships between the characters and different moments they may have had together. No time this weekend to really work but had a chance to try out some things. The final comp will be based off the original thumbnail but it's fun to explore other directions. Servant still boneless and devoid of morphs and other important things, their on the way though.

monsitj
04-18-2005, 02:14 PM
I really like your style! charactor is very unique, and soft lighting is good too! i hope you bring it to final render! keep going !:thumbsup:

3dRaven
04-18-2005, 02:28 PM
Great style,the masters expression looks real sweet

The knees look a bit weird though.

eddieellis
04-18-2005, 02:42 PM
looking cool dude, looking forward to seeing the texturing

goktugg
04-18-2005, 04:00 PM
going nice`mate!:thumbsup: with good modelling!
good luck!

bealobo
04-18-2005, 04:24 PM
I love this new composition. rocks!

A12
05-05-2005, 04:33 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1115307184_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1115307184_large.jpg)

Well I'm back from my current project and now on vacation, ready to wrap things up. Just some surface work for the Servant to get things rolling.

DaVee
05-06-2005, 10:45 AM
Like your modeling. Servant looks very nice, and princess too she have charm very much.

David.

Virtuoso
05-07-2005, 01:18 AM
It's all coming along quite nicely brent......the modeling,the pose,the concept is getting it's justice.....nice start on texturing....I wish you the best as you get towards that finish.....I'll be looking in for more.....:arteest:

A12
05-16-2005, 05:03 PM
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Forgot to send this one out. Final Sevant. Deadline. Deadline. Deadline. See ya.

A12
05-18-2005, 01:57 PM
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Putting things together now.

A12
05-18-2005, 01:59 PM
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Still working.

A12
05-18-2005, 02:03 PM
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My DSL was down from the other day so here's more stuff.

A12
05-18-2005, 02:07 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1116421645_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1116421645_large.jpg)

Brightning things up.

A12
05-18-2005, 02:10 PM
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Grass needs a little work.

A12
05-18-2005, 02:13 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1116422033_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1116422033_large.jpg)

All together now. High Res models, Grass and myst with AA. The end is near.

DaddyMack
05-18-2005, 02:41 PM
Looking great Brent, she is quite the commanding little princess...Well done:thumbsup:

hhssuu
05-18-2005, 03:19 PM
Nice simple and to the point, good style too. Good job.:thumbsup: keep going, see you at the finish.

authentic
05-18-2005, 03:20 PM
Like this one. Simple but efficient. Nice colors.

pixelkeg
05-18-2005, 03:27 PM
You can do it, go go go go. Looking good!

=pK=

A12
05-18-2005, 04:29 PM
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Still going.

dmonk
05-18-2005, 05:12 PM
:applause: Very Nice!


Great pose!

arkinet
05-18-2005, 05:16 PM
love the pose, & the expressions too... hurry up dude!!:bounce:

Wandddo
05-18-2005, 05:59 PM
Hi Brent, Looks very clean and very beautiful too... really a scene well done... great models and expressions... congrats man and good luck to you:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
cheers

Matroskin
05-18-2005, 06:07 PM
Brent_3D,
hey, that master is just outstanding! Especialy hat :) And cool design (well, servant I like less, as he looks a bit standart for me, but they fit one another well!).
Hope you'll succeed with it in time!

3dRaven
05-18-2005, 06:20 PM
Brent fantastic work on the characters. I watched this thing at the start and it's really evolved. Great stuff. Can't wait for this to go gold :thumbsup:

Matt-Bortolino
05-18-2005, 06:28 PM
This is lovely- great sculpting, design & soft lighting. 2 things I would try before the final if time permits: get a little more detail in the clouds, so they look a bit more 3d (maybe a quick paintover on a photo & gaussian blur? that's what I did), & also you could try adding something to the servant's skin, since it's a large fairly featureless mass & could do with either a slight dirtmap effect multiplied in, or a tattoo maybe? Anyway, looking good.

A12
05-18-2005, 07:00 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1116439223_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1116439223_large.jpg)

Done, done, done. Thanks to everyone for their comments. By the way it was my wifes idea for the wip. Go figure.

3dRaven
05-18-2005, 07:39 PM
By the way it was my wifes idea for the wip. Go figure.

Haha. ...guess we know who wears the pants then eh?

Great final Brent. Lovely characters and very unique design. Gotta love that smirk on her face :thumbsup:

Good luck.

SurfGod69a
05-18-2005, 08:34 PM
The texture is a bit heavy on the skin. Try to make it look less like noise and more like pores. Maybe even try subdivision scattering.

A12
05-18-2005, 11:14 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1116454491_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/7045/7045_1116454491_large.jpg)

Story:
Once again,"Morning Ride" is an image of Princess Ziana, air to the thrown of Terra, making her morning survey of her father’s kingdom. She rides the back of her well trained human servant, a rare breed of creature that once inhabited the planet but was driven to near extinction during the Terrran conquests. Now only a few remain, raised and trained for Terran royalty to safely and honorably live there lives in noble servitude.

Image:
Created by me with the help of Lightwave 3D and the CgNetwork community.

Goro
05-19-2005, 12:14 AM
Congrats on finishing your entry!
nice characters! looks awesome!

Good luck :applause: :applause: :applause:

melkao
05-19-2005, 12:32 AM
hey man thats a great work...good job:thumbsup:

Virtuoso
05-19-2005, 02:57 AM
Nice brent...Congrats on finishing,and finishing well....I wish you the best,and lots of luck.....you came through real nice,a fine entry.......Take care and good luck......:thumbsup:

ace4016
05-19-2005, 04:33 AM
Great characters Brent. Congrats on the finish. The princess has so much attitude, would love to see her in motion, especially after showing us those poses before. Good luck and best wishes.

JRBRAZ
05-19-2005, 05:59 AM
Hi Brent. Great work. The characters are amazing.

I love her expression :scream:. Really funny :bounce:


Congratulations and good luck :thumbsup:

theuni
05-22-2005, 10:39 AM
Hi Brent,

awesome creatures you created there... :thumbsup: great postures, nice mood... fantastic image :applause:

A12
05-23-2005, 01:49 PM
Hey, I just wanted to thank everyone for their support. The MS challenge has been a great experience for me and I am honored to be able to participate with such great artist. I'm looking forward to the next events and you guys can check my website for upcoming tutorials.

Brent

aliasali
05-23-2005, 03:55 PM
Damn,it seems like i have missed this thread,anyway,ur entry is great and ery cool...i especially liked the pose of that ogre(esp,the right hand)...Good luck....

Ali...

A12
05-23-2005, 06:41 PM
Thanks again for your comments.

Maxter
05-25-2005, 07:47 PM
Nice final image:thumbsup:... i like the expressions

Good luck Brent!!:thumbsup:

kOmoo
05-26-2005, 11:03 AM
This is really good, the characters is really good modelled, but the grass is a little to sharp, look how pointy it looks.

bealobo
05-27-2005, 03:30 PM
I haven´t been here for a big while...
congratulations! and good luck!
the image looks great!

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