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Gordillo
03-31-2005, 12:32 PM
Alberto Gordillo has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=7039)

Latest Update: Final Image: She
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7039/7039_1115760631_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7039/7039_1115760631_large.jpg)

This is the final one..:)

Gordillo
03-31-2005, 01:53 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7039/7039_1112280782_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7039/7039_1112280782_large.jpg)

Hi fellows :)
Well , here is a quick sketch that I did in order to find the right balance on color and composition.
Thanks in advance for your feedback.

NOOB!
03-31-2005, 01:55 PM
ah more nudity for no reason.

i like it,looking great keep it up!

AlyFell
03-31-2005, 02:07 PM
Looking very nice! Great lighting! :)

p4b10
03-31-2005, 03:04 PM
Nice to see a spanish guy posting around... good luck with your entry...my only comment is that you could go for a more dynamic composition, not so static. I've seen such in your drawings. Keep it up!

Btw, do you have a website or so to see of your works?...if don't you have to get one!

Un saludo.

SideAche
03-31-2005, 03:13 PM
Alberto,

I like the longer vertical composition on the right. Good start!

Gordillo
04-13-2005, 09:07 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7039/7039_1113426466_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7039/7039_1113426466_large.jpg)

Well,here is my baby..
Your feedback is welcome..(as usual) :)

arkinet
04-13-2005, 09:13 PM
wow... the medusa...great texture, lighting m sure your stl workng on th bg's right? i thnk the guys neck in front a li'l out of proportion, i dnt know, mayb its my eyes... great job btw

BaronImpossible
04-13-2005, 09:26 PM
Love the colour scheme and the composition. The guys actually look like they're made of rock. Now when I draw figures they also look like they're made of rock, but I never intend them to so maybe it doesn't count.

You need a bit more definition in the background. I know the near wall's not meant to be square on, but because you've left it sketchy it half looks like the perspective's askew (good word that, "askew", I so rarely have the opportunity to use it).

And, haven't you missed out some milestones? Like, nearly all of them? :D

Anyway, love it, great job.

eparts
04-13-2005, 09:28 PM
great image.. powerful and mystical..
good luck with it

adia
04-16-2005, 05:47 PM
I really love her image
idealistic of the master of all kinds
powerful and beautifully mysterious

great work!!

walrus
04-16-2005, 10:04 PM
I like the "hair" and the lighting a lot. The textures are nice too. Her left arm - the screen-right one - seems a bit awkward: The way it's posed, it looks like it should be resting on something, the way her other arm is, but it isn't. Also, it would have been nice to see some of your work in progress in-between a rough sketch and a totally-finished piece.
Anyhow, hope you'll keep refining this. Good luck!

-mike

pushav
04-16-2005, 10:09 PM
Nice image but I think that you went from start to finish way to fast.

kornel
04-17-2005, 08:40 AM
Fantastic... it is getting better and better!

only thing: the background is too dominant and coming to close to the main characters... little blur on it - it helps i think...

(sorry fo my english...)

best regards: KornÚl

GhostInTheMachine
04-17-2005, 09:42 AM
some nice paintings. only minor crits since its very early on... they kinda look like portraits! 'thats it ms. medusa, nearly done...'
...maybe you could add some movement with the snakes/hair and some birds/bats/running water etc... just an idea!

:thumbsup: good work!

Gordillo
05-10-2005, 06:42 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7039/7039_1115750517_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7039/7039_1115750517_large.jpg)

So sorry guys,I completely forget to upload the line art....

...here it is then :)

Gordillo
05-10-2005, 07:21 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7039/7039_1115752861_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7039/7039_1115752861_large.jpg)

I also forgot this one.....
Sorry again fellas :)

oneka
05-10-2005, 07:36 PM
FELICIDADES ALBERTO!!!. ESTA PROMETE.:thumbsup:

Gordillo
05-10-2005, 08:17 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7039/7039_1115756267_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7039/7039_1115756267_large.jpg)

I already post it as final image,
ovbiously isn't it :)

fensterer
05-10-2005, 08:37 PM
Wow, I love the colors you've chosen for this. I like the detail on her dress as well. Very nice work! Good luck!

Gordillo
05-10-2005, 09:30 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7039/7039_1115760631_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7039/7039_1115760631_large.jpg)

This is the final one..:)

arLutiK
05-11-2005, 05:59 AM
Alberto, very nice work on your final image, the stone effect is really nice and those snake are very nice, but what I like the most is that satisfaction look she has, great work dude. :thumbsup:

Vectorius
05-11-2005, 07:28 AM
Very nice work man!:buttrock: The woman looks very good and the background look very dramatic!!:thumbsup: ..So...ah..ah ...i ..i ...can't tell...te...tell ya..you....a...aa....aaaaaaa....anymor'.....i'm...changing.... am changing me into stone....lol

Good luck !!

agios
05-11-2005, 08:20 AM
Hello Alberto, good luck, nice colours as always and i like the stoned bodies too much...

Fish-KAart
05-12-2005, 05:36 PM
good luck :thumbsup:

MDN67
05-19-2005, 06:13 PM
very nice pic with a great strange atmosphere, good work and good luck for the end

xric7
05-19-2005, 06:16 PM
wow..
awesome!!
love ur color and lighting.
congrats and good luck to u.:applause:

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