PA Challenge - Character - Piz

[DrAdamDinosaur]

Really like the characters gun you've got there, its got that half real half stylized thing happening

[Piz]

Thankyou for your observations on my work.... ;)

I hope that I'll really finish my project....

Ciao :)

[pabbloz]

hey !!! really cool!!! I want see him with texture!!

[Piz]

Thanks pabbloz..... :D

Before all I must add some gadget to my PNC.... after that with Body Paint I will add textures, dirt and other contaminated material..... ;)

Hi :D

[pascal_blanche]

remember me VAUGHN BODE (http://www.hollywoodcomics.com/bodecobalt.html)'s style :D great job!

[Piz]

Hi Guys,

I post a little update to my project... ;)


http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_001.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_003.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_007.jpg

Excuse me if I turned off my GI-system but my Cpu its a bit... tired...



Hi

Piz

:D

[Piz]

Originally posted by pascal blanché
remember me VAUGHN BODE (http://www.hollywoodcomics.com/bodecobalt.html)'s style :D great job!


I saw now VAUGHN BODE.... its Fantastic!

I didn't know him but now I think that pretty follow his work ...


Thanks a lot Pascal.... :D

Hi

Piz ;)

[Piz]

Now my update its in GI....
LW decided tonight of working well...

http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_001.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_003.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_007.jpg

Hi

Piz :D

[deluxepaint]

this is very good, lamp idea is also perfect..

[Piz]

Tanks a lot Deluxepaint....:D

I'm glad for your comments about my PA entry....

I saw your fantastic work on InsideCG spot....

The onour is big! I willl try to finish my character....

Thankyou

Bye
Piz

:D

[OZ]

Hey piz! good old Beast. How are you?
hmmmm......i can't connect to your wip!!! Damn italian hosting!
well i try to look at your work later...maybe libero let me access to your site!
ps: i'm oscar....OZ..OZCAR..oscar........hey!do you know that i've this nikname?:D

[OZ]

WOW!......as I had thought you have made a good job!The lamps on the shoes are brilliant......hay piz! you are a master! MORE MORE MORE!!!

[Piz]

Hi Oz,

I remember you!!!

:D

Are you the boy from Bedroom Studio?
Yeah! Cool! Dance! Tricchi tracchi bombammano!!!!!
Ueillà Coglionazzo.... come và!!! Bestiassa....

Mi fa piacere sentirti da queste parti....

E buffo ci si sente attraverso San Francisco invece che per telefono quasi in urbana..... ah ah ah ah!!!

Allora.... mi sembra che qui i grafici (quelli tosti) spacchino veramente i c..i!!!! Mamma mia.....

Che ne pensi?
E ... sopratutto stai colpendo anche tu? :D

Ciao a presto
Piz
;)

Wazzamericannow!!!!!!

[OZ]

Oh Boy! oki doki...let's talk about me ..............BWAAAHAAAA
My Everyday work take all my time.....So i can't have GOOD TIME on challenges......but i may try to do something at last.
pS: Hey Piz...TEXTURE TEXTURE TEXTURE.....i need to see your smart character textured! Is it done in lightwave?

(aida make me cry!!!!)

[Piz]

Ciao Oz,


Of course, I've done my PA entry with LW ....
:D

I think it's always.... quite fast, intuitive and powerful...
For animation... ehm fiurilì fiurlà.....
You know ... for animation I prefer Max.....

For Aida... for me it's the same thing.... :(

but... fight.. friend.... :D

Take care

Piz
:D

[Piz]

Hello guys...
An upgrade of my entry...
Tell me what do you think about the colors and atmosphere...;)

http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_000.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_001.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_002.jpg

http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_003.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_004.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_005.jpg

http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_007.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_008.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_009.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_010.jpg

Hi
Piz
:D

[DocBoom]

that´s pretty cool, piz!
how about making the fog slightly yellow or green, to give it a toxic appearance?

[pabbloz]

yes,... something more toxic would be great I think.
Are you still work in the environment? I think it needs some more details, but the concept is good. Go on!
The colors are good!

pose pose pose pose!! :D

[Piz]

Hi Guys.... :D

I've update my entry...

Pabbloz and DocBoom... thanks a lot...
You was right... your advices had improve my work....
:cool:

the URLs:

http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_02_000.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_02_001.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_02_002.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_02_003.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_02_004.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_02_005.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_02_008.jpg
http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_02_010.jpg

Enjoy and comment!!!

Bye
Piz


;)

[pabbloz]

Hi Piz!!

Much much better! you have improved it!
Now the ambience is very good. I like very much the green fog.
My prefer render is the firstone. I think you shoud exagerate more the depth of field! it will make greater!.
To do this, maybe you must add more detaills in the scene.
I really like the weapon and the character!

I suggest you put a "screen-ligth" in the goggles (self-illuminated and glow, for example).

Waiting for the update! :D

[DocBoom]

Yes looking much better! Perhaps you could put some copys of your character in the background, but far away, so you can only see their silhouettes and the lights on their shoes. Like they are searching the ruins for some evil mutants...

[oozeballz]

a nice pose of the model holding the gun would really bring it to live.. also the environ ment needs more detail .. try breaking up the ground with some junk or rocks .. or broken building walls .. orsomethign.. any thing that will stop it from being a flat plane..

really like the model ..!!!

[Cesare DeRossi]

Huelà!

as always... nice job Piz!!!|
you rock.

i'd really love to see him in action... :-)


Keep up the cool work!!

Cesare

[Piz]

Thanks a lot Friend.... :D

You are too gentle....

Bye
Piz

:D

P.S.
Where is your PA entry? ;)
Go man..... Go Go!!!!
;)

[Piz]

Hi Guys....

Thanks a lot for the advices.....;)

If it's real that the deadline is march 8 I think I'd really add some new details....

:D

Bye
Piz

:D

[pearson]

Piz - Yes, the deadline is the 8th. Official Guidlines (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=1601)

I like the green fog, looks deadly. You might try coloring your lights in the scene to a light green (instead of white), to make it look like the fog is glowing all around him, and not just far away.

You've still got a week; go crazy!

[Piz]

Thanks Pearson......
:D

You are right...

Soon I'll made a new version with the advices of the friends that comment my entry....

Always thanks a lot
:D

Hi
Piz

[Danko]

Good work on the foggy enviroment ;) You should now do some rigging on it and make him stand more menacing maybe.

[Piz]

Thankyou Danko..;)

I hope I'll have time for fun in this weekend.... ;)

Hi

Piz

:D

[Piz]

Hi Friends :D

I've done some updates to my PA Entry.....
Thanks for all advices.... and... enjoy! :D

http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_new_000.jpg

http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_new_001.jpg

http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_new_002.jpg

http://www.pizworld.com/pnc_new_004.jpg

Comment, please..... :D


Hi
Piz
:D

[Totitch]

WhaaaaouuWww! :eek:

Piz...Your render is really really great!
What do you use???
Can you give us some tips???

Your scene is nice...But your guy hasn't got any pose...
Please give him one! ;)

[Piz]

... Thanks Toticth.... ;)

I'm moved.... :D

So, you are right I must give a posture to my PNC.....


Bye

Piz
:D

P.S.
I usually use Lightwave.... :D

[pearson]

Wow! These renders look a lot better! Now it feels like the fog is all around him.

I agree, give him a cool pose! (if you have the time) :D

[pabbloz]

The environment is much better Piz!! great update!!

but give him a pose !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)

I love the light behind the columns in the first render.
Good depth of field, very "sutil" (does exist this word in inglish? :D)

[Piz]

You are right... but ... I hope I'll have the time for pose my PNC.... :D

Puff... pant.... sbuff.... grrrr....!!!!!!!! ;)

Thanks a lot for all your advices/critique......

I'm glad for your feedback.... ;)


Bye

Piz
:D

[OZ]

WOOHOOO......Great work.......you are always one of my hero piz!

A TOOOOROOOOOOO!!!! o dovrei dire toroide!!!!che figata di atmosfera,gli sfondi sono fantastici!!!!!
Ci vediamo appena torno!!! CORTO,CORTO,CORTO,CORTO,CORTO!!!!!

[Hmura]

Great stuff Piz, i love the whole setting,
Well it looks like your guy is looking in the wrong direction as my guy is lurking in the fog behind him ready to kick ass, ahhh a karate kick to the mask... :D haahah

Hmura

[Piz]

.... puff .... posing.... uhh... texturing.... coff coff.... :eek:

Hmura: I hope to have sufficent time for finish my entry.... I've an idea but not a lot of time... grrrrrrrrrrr

Oz: You are always the master.... I remember an ID4 scene made with 3DStudio Dos.... I'm still astonished..... :eek:

Pearson: Thanks a lot! You're right... I must pose my PNC..... :)

Pabbloz: Thanks ... I'm happy for your positive comment... Also you and the other fridens helped me to made a better work.... :D


Bye
Piz
:D

[Piz]

Hi Guys.... :D

I've made a quick pose for my PNC....
I don't know if it will be the definitive....

The time is .... almost finished.... :(



http://www.pizworld.com/PNC_semidef_000.jpg

Comment and critique.... :D


Bye
Piz

:D

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