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VivianeFigueira
03-30-2005, 12:27 AM
Viviane Novaes Figueira has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6943)

Latest Update: Final Image: You're mine!
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1116031174_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1116031174_large.jpg)

Thank you so much for comments and good luck for everybody.
I really happy to participated in my first CG Challenge.

VivianeFigueira
03-30-2005, 01:12 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1112148731_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1112148731_large.jpg)

The Master is a jealous men that be transform in a monster when he think that somebody or someone do anything against he. He's a unfriendly men.
The women is the victim, the servant and, unfortunetly his wife.
I need to transform this men in a monster yet. For while he's a angry men instead.

Sorry if my english is not so good.
I'm really happy to participate in my first CG Callenge!

VivianeFigueira
03-31-2005, 11:46 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1112316390_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1112316390_large.jpg)

I put muscles...

maozao
04-01-2005, 12:16 AM
good luck :)

boa sorte ae :) bem vinda

tenho uma crítica a fazer, o pescoço da mulher ficou muito comprido, nao sei se era a intenção

VivianeFigueira
04-02-2005, 02:12 AM
Thank you and good luck for you too!!!

A intenção do pescoço é exatamente essa. Como se fosse de elástico..... e que está sendo puxado.

maozao
04-02-2005, 04:10 AM
hi :)
oi

os ursinhos todos sao parte da historia, o lord Da Da, do reino de Gu Gu, passa o dia todo no seu quarto cercado pelos seus brinquedos e seus ursinhos q sao a corte dele
a mae dele sempre faz todas as suas vontades, como toda mae faz pro seu bebe, e ai tem a guarda de playmobiles
mas o Lord Da Da vive se cansando de seus ursinhos e quer mais e mais e mais e sua mae vive dando pra ele
:) tai o pq dos ursinhos
espero ter explicado

VivianeFigueira
04-05-2005, 12:32 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1112661153_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1112661153_large.jpg)

eyes...of both characters

VivianeFigueira
04-05-2005, 12:42 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1112661762_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1112661762_large.jpg)

A study of background...

Is-boset
04-05-2005, 01:42 AM
I want to advice you in some things:

1- you could see part of the left arm behind the hair maybe the elbow. and you see how the thom grab his nek

2- i think she must to have a hard expression she is getting asphyxiate, she must to have some anger or reflect the pression of the hand in her nek (try to close her eyes a little and show some teeth).

I can see you have a good use of colour, but first you need to clean your line, after the colour work was more easy.

Hey post in english we want to know your opinions!

this graphic explain what i want to tell you:

http://raineiro.spymac.net/advices.jpg

VivianeFigueira
04-06-2005, 12:49 AM
Thank you for the advice.

I agree about the expressions, I'll improve this.

About the position of the left arm, I made a study that don't appear in this position. But, then I put muscles....I'll see this, too.

VivianeFigueira
04-07-2005, 10:54 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1112914450_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1112914450_large.jpg)

Some corrections...

guga3008
04-07-2005, 11:53 PM
Hello! Legal mais uma brazuca aki!
Boa sorte!
Great to see another brazilian here! Good luck!

Is-boset
04-08-2005, 04:31 PM
The draws express much better the feel, but now i feel sorry for that woman, i think that's good, and you could tweak a bit the woman's ear.

VivianeFigueira
04-09-2005, 12:45 AM
Thank you Guga3008! :)

I'm verry happy with this new experience!

VivianeFigueira
04-09-2005, 12:53 AM
Is-boset

Thanks for the advice.
:thumbsup:

nailuj
04-09-2005, 12:56 AM
I feel her neck is a little too long. Try looking that picture from a far, it looks elongated and also crooked. other then that it is looking good! :o)

VivianeFigueira
04-09-2005, 01:16 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1113009411_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1113009411_large.jpg)

I change the idea about the story.
I think he is somebody that live in her dreams.
She has afraid of him because he is a possessive person. But in the same time she like him and he can have good fellings too.
It's strangers fellings that mix passion, fear, possessive, adoration, lust, and some others...

nailuj
04-09-2005, 01:18 AM
http://www.cloudstars.com/cgtalk/01.jpg
My comments :
HUSBAND
1) Tense his muscle since he is roughing her up
2) His nipple position should be lower and to the side. Especially on well built chest.
3) His biceps muscle definition is more wider as indicated.
4) Elbow position should be lower

WIFE
1)Shrug her shoulder higher. She is tensed too.
2) Move her hands up. Add drama and tension to the composition
3) Her trapezium mucles were missing(muscle tat connect the nect to the shoulder. for shrugging function)
4) Ear psosition shouldn't be too far.

Just my observation

Good luck :o).
4)

VivianeFigueira
04-09-2005, 01:49 AM
Nailuj,

The position of the men come to a study of movement and there is in the right place. The only thing that I made later is the muscles. But in my Coloring Wip I will review the position of some observations in the muscles that you put here.
The neck of the women is proposital higher, like she no real or has a elastic neck. I prefer no put the hands because I want that she be a submissive women, that accept this situation. I want she don't fight. I like to think that she is a caricature.

Thank you for comments.... It was important to me! :thumbsup:

I'll change the muscles of the torso.

VivianeFigueira
04-09-2005, 01:54 AM
Nailuj

Think in the women like a caricature....

Azagthoth
04-09-2005, 08:38 PM
Viviane,

é uma interpretação bastante forte que tu fazes e é com certeza o que há de mais real
no mundo sobre o tema "master and servant", se visto pela lado negativo. Infelizmente é uma
das nossas realidades.
não tem como não se tocar ao ver tua interpretação, na simplicidade ela torna-se marcante.

boa sorte!
abs,
MMiller

Is-boset
04-10-2005, 06:19 PM
Hey i like your color style isn't a "photorealistic" way to render colors but i like your work, and i agree with nailuj about the nipples, and about the woman i think she have more expression on line-art i recomend spend more time in the expression of the woman. and sometimes in reality some perspectives or studies don't give the adecuated touch or feel to the composition and you sometimes must tweak somethings for a better result, sometimes the reality isn't enough (i just my opinion):)

Kirt
04-10-2005, 06:58 PM
Viviane, there are numerous online translators available. English is prefered posting language on the board, but we can't enforce everyone to post in English if they have difficulties with the language.

AltaVista's Babel Fish translator (http://babelfish.altavista.com/tr) works pretty well. Viviane,

it is a sufficiently strong interpretation that you make and you are with certainty what it has of more real in the world on the subject "to master and servant", if seen by the negative side. Unhappyly she is one of our realities does not have as not to touch when seeing your interpretation, in simplicity it becomes marcante.

good luck!
abs,
MMiller

VivianeFigueira
04-13-2005, 12:24 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1113351846_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1113351846_large.jpg)

I put more details, like shadows.

VivianeFigueira
04-13-2005, 12:33 AM
Thank you for the opinion about my work.

I'm trying to write in English. It's the first forum in my life and it's in english! I hope improve in time....

VivianeFigueira
04-13-2005, 01:35 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1113356134_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1113356134_large.jpg)

Detail - woman face.

element5
04-14-2005, 12:47 PM
Hiya Viviane, What you have done so far looks great. Love the stylized look and the textures to the eyes and skin of her face I like very much.
A few thoughts The man has a good grasp on her neck but his other hand dosn't seem to have the same strength ( maybe he could be grabbing around her arm ) Also I would expect to see the top of her neck which would make his hand look less chunky..

Looking forward to more updates :)

VivianeFigueira
04-16-2005, 12:59 AM
Thanks for comments.
Unfortunetly I stop for a few days because my tablet broke. Since I get another I will review your comment.
I need to grasp a little the arm of girl with the man's hand and many others details. I hope get in time......
:)

VivianeFigueira
04-28-2005, 03:40 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1114702841_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1114702841_large.jpg)

I'm trying to improve this colors, shadows,...

VivianeFigueira
05-05-2005, 01:52 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1115257934_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1115257934_large.jpg)

I've been working at the woman's face.
I put purple's eye to demonstrate some violence against she. I'm not sure about how can I do eyelash and eyebrow.
If someone has any idea, please.

punklover
05-05-2005, 02:16 AM
hi ,you have a unique style ,looks very promising ,i'll keep my eyes on it :)

VivianeFigueira
05-11-2005, 01:09 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1115773744_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1115773744_large.jpg)

I made changes in the woman's expression.
And others changes too.

VivianeFigueira
05-13-2005, 01:06 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1115946358_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1115946358_large.jpg)

I've been working in details of image like depth of field, colors and now I think it's done or almost.

VivianeFigueira
05-14-2005, 12:39 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1116031174_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6943/6943_1116031174_large.jpg)

Thank you so much for comments and good luck for everybody.
I really happy to participated in my first CG Challenge.

Is-boset
05-14-2005, 02:23 AM
Well Viviane,you finally done your illustrations, i wish you have a good look in this challenge.:)

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