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dogbite
03-29-2005, 02:03 PM
shoham blau has entered the Master and Servant 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6907)

Latest Update: Final Image: final image
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1115893401_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1115893401_large.jpg)

only a quarter of its original size, but still happy.or morbid.

ok so heres the story.
chased and imprisoned, young igor was.
for years he was locked up for the way he looks.
the years havent been kind to him.
until one day when a kind and gentle doctar came and released him from his chains.
igor swore to follow the doctar through hell and earth.

the two soon started their work.
their work ,to spit at god's eye and bring the dead back to life !!!

dogbite
03-29-2005, 02:06 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112105176_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112105176_large.jpg)

i started this model with a cartoonish concept,but due to some perfectionisim on my part he became too realistic

dogbite
03-29-2005, 07:43 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112125410_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112125410_large.jpg)

Igor

dogbite
03-30-2005, 09:20 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112217611_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112217611_large.jpg)

just a quick check to see how he looks like.
will put some concept art soon

dogbite
03-31-2005, 02:13 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112278422_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112278422_large.jpg)

trying to get the depth feeling.

adel3d
03-31-2005, 02:23 PM
Welcome to the challenge. And good luck!:)

nebezial
03-31-2005, 02:26 PM
IIIGOOOR fetch me another bran, this one is same as yours:D i like it man, good work

dogbite
03-31-2005, 10:43 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112309013_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112309013_large.jpg)

still need some more tweaking up in the texture department.
but im very happy with the progress.

dmonk
04-01-2005, 12:52 AM
I'm reminded of the guy from young frankenstein.

dogbite
04-01-2005, 12:56 AM
im guessing because of the eyes.
it wont be too noticeable from where im shooting

dogbite
04-01-2005, 04:01 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112371267_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112371267_large.jpg)

igor has skin uv.:).

dmonk
04-01-2005, 04:19 PM
im guessing because of the eyes.
it wont be too noticeable from where im shooting

I wasn't saying it as a negative. I'm really impressed by this character. It's very solid. It is on the same level as the human characters in the Shrek movies. The shader on the garments also looks great, but could use a bit of variation in color to show more worn parts.

Nice work Bud!:thumbsup:

dogbite
04-01-2005, 10:21 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112394073_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112394073_large.jpg)

been uving some more

dmonk
04-01-2005, 10:27 PM
I'm amazed more people haven't noticed this entry.


Looking really good. Those different layers of colors make a huge difference.:buttrock:

dogbite
04-01-2005, 10:41 PM
im amazed too. just my luck ,cant seem to draw ppl to see my threads.
oh,well.

dmonk
04-01-2005, 11:27 PM
im amazed too. just my luck ,cant seem to draw ppl to see my threads.
oh,well.

I will say, don't let it discourage you. I like an entry that actually shows some progress.

At one point there were a few entries with pages of response and nothing done yet. I think it's just that some people see a name and decide to follow that person as opposed to a lot of other good entries. There are over 1,000 entries so don't feel too bad.

You got one fan!:buttrock:
Keep crankin' away!

Micro26
04-02-2005, 12:06 AM
very nice character u got here.:thumbsup: Very well detailed and the shading looks great
Love to see more updates:scream:

pigwater
04-02-2005, 12:13 AM
marty feldman .. yah i see the resemblance
http://www.humorlinks.com/humornet/cards/feldman.jpg

just found this thread .. nice work ... enjoyin it :thumbsup:

as far as getting people to see it more ... ya got give out free stuff ( baseball tickets, canned hams , software )

KryHoo
04-02-2005, 12:23 AM
Igor is great. Well prepared textures and fantastic interpretation of the character's profile. I'd like to see more.

dogbite
04-02-2005, 12:39 AM
cool,got me some followers.:)
really cute image there,he's really loveable.

thanks for the replys,ill start working on dr. frankenstein tommorow,i started today but i couldnt get a good feel for it so i ended up making him,deleting him,making him and deleting him again.
i hope itll work better tommorow.see you then.

and dont let that stop you from posting !!

arLutiK
04-02-2005, 08:19 AM
Very nice work :bounce:

dogbite
04-02-2005, 01:39 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112449142_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112449142_large.jpg)

i got better results today.

dogbite
04-03-2005, 10:52 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112565171_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112565171_large.jpg)

it is a common mistake to think that frankenstein is the monster,while frankenstein is the dr.
and the monster is called frankenstein's monster.

dmonk
04-03-2005, 10:55 PM
That's look ing pretty good!

alex.h.
04-03-2005, 10:56 PM
have mised this one, sorry. great work and loking forevard for more :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

dogbite
04-04-2005, 06:51 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112637115_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112637115_large.jpg)

trying some hair.
im still not so sure about the textures.
all frank's textures are temporary offcourse.
no shoes ,no textures no service.

dogbite
04-05-2005, 11:33 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112740412_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112740412_large.jpg)

tiny progress-uv map on head,shoes,

dogbite
04-06-2005, 05:04 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112803470_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112803470_large.jpg)

still testing skin

jake rupert
04-06-2005, 06:25 PM
Awesome! I instantly became a fan of your work.
Your idea, compostion, characterdesign and the texturing are just the style, I like best.

Looking forward to see the final result.

;>) Jake

soapy
04-06-2005, 07:19 PM
Hey nice work so far. I really like the masters outfit. Cheers and good luck.

dogbite
04-06-2005, 09:07 PM
you guys are making me blush

dogbite
04-08-2005, 01:55 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112964940_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112964940_large.jpg)

Ad-
cant seem to get those pesky blood steins out.
well, not anymore.
with the new X laundry detergent,no blood or brain steins can stop you.

dogbite
04-08-2005, 08:30 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112988610_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1112988610_large.jpg)

my computor is so slow now...

i talked a bit with pisong and this is what happened to frankenstein.

PeterPuppet
04-08-2005, 08:42 PM
Dude, this is just cool. :thumbsup:

Really looking forward to see more, so keep it up!



peace, pete

ibambao
04-08-2005, 08:47 PM
i like your models and textures, hope to see more

handlebar
04-09-2005, 12:41 PM
Great characters you have there, i especially like the servant. http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon7.gifhttp://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon13.gif

DaddyMack
04-09-2005, 12:48 PM
Hi dogbite, great comic booky stylin you got going here. Keep it coming:thumbsup:

Matroskin
04-09-2005, 02:58 PM
Hi there dogbite,
just wonderfull models. Now I pay lots of attention to others' texturing cause can't wait to start mine!!!
Cross with blood - as for me original turn, man!http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon12.gif

dogbite
04-09-2005, 04:56 PM
thanks everyone,im currently working on the monster.
its progressing nicely.

painkiller
04-09-2005, 07:18 PM
nice progress !

keep up ! ( and don't forget to update us in TAPUZ ... )

dogbite
04-09-2005, 09:07 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1113077219_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1113077219_large.jpg)

modeling the monster,i only need the upper torso so i dont want to model the legs.

omer-n
04-09-2005, 10:47 PM
ok so i can see you are working fast. the characters look good they do have a little cartoonish
style but thats ok if you arent going for 100% realistic. i know you arent in that stage yet but
i would take much time for lighting and color because these scene screems atmosphere! :-)

i was also wondering about your technique- are you going to fully rig the characters and then pose them like in the sketch?


omer.

dogbite
04-09-2005, 11:33 PM
argiatou gozaimas,
i havent really worked on the enviroment (the lab,or the equipment),i'll probobly take next saturday and work on it with more intensity.

i am modeling these models like every regular model,giving them weight maps and rigging them like any other animation model.

im doing this to get the right feel as i put them in pose.i can easily model them in pose, but its much more right to rig them and then if i need to tweak a bit than i do.

dogbite
04-11-2005, 05:03 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1113235401_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1113235401_large.jpg)

action,been working.
i dread the moment i need to uv.

dogbite
04-15-2005, 12:42 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1113565364_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1113565364_large.jpg)

trying to get the maximum enviroment with max models.

imagine lightning in the back,a glass ceiling on top,alot of blood tubes going into the monster,body parts on the walls

dogbite
04-18-2005, 02:47 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1113832043_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1113832043_large.jpg)

igor can finally walk

dogbite
04-19-2005, 07:23 PM
large pictures now
from the top -fprime render with GI,normal render,new pose

http://www.dogbite.co.il/new/236_frankenstein.jpg
http://www.dogbite.co.il/new/9pass_frankenstein.jpg
http://www.dogbite.co.il/new/152_frankenstein2.jpg

dogbite
04-21-2005, 09:26 PM
worked a bit ,tweaked a lot

http://img72.echo.cx/img72/1347/5passfrankenstein0yb.jpg

dogbite
04-21-2005, 09:29 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1114115382_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1114115382_large.jpg)

just putting this thumb so ppl can see.
larger image atop

Miyagi
04-24-2005, 09:41 AM
Hi Shohan!

Nice layout...the characters are really nice:thumbsup: ...I just think you need a more dark mood scennario...keep it coming.

good luck!



MyMasterAndServant (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=224272&page=1&pp=15&highlight=Rogerio+Masao)

Micro26
04-24-2005, 12:19 PM
hey man, your progress is very good.:buttrock:
The viewing angle is great and the poses are awesome.
Go on go on:love:

dogbite
04-24-2005, 06:08 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1114362497_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1114362497_large.jpg)

worked a little on the doc,lighting and stuff.

dogbite
04-27-2005, 06:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1114622749_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1114622749_large.jpg)

a little low res render

ilusiondigital
04-27-2005, 06:28 PM
:applause: I like it, and love the perspective

Maxko
04-27-2005, 06:46 PM
Yes, nice perspective :) nice atmosphere :)

mmoir
04-27-2005, 07:25 PM
Shoham,

This is a nice looking render, cool point of view. The scene looks a little sparse but I am sure you will address this. Great job so far.

dogbite
05-02-2005, 12:12 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1115032325_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1115032325_large.jpg)

took a while to render this

3dRaven
05-02-2005, 02:35 PM
The expression on the mad scientist face looks classic :thumbsup: I'd tone down the volumetrics a bit they seem to have rather hard edges at the moment. Maybe try a closed roof with an openning to which a lighting bolt coul'd be striking one of the cables??...just a thought

Keep up the good work :)

dogbite
05-04-2005, 06:03 PM
http://www.dogbite.co.il/new/normal3.jpg

still working out the kinks.
i had a version where i used better glass for the skylight,but i cant use art that isnt mine.

dogbite
05-11-2005, 08:40 PM
i am now rendering the final image.
in the morning it should end.

so i should finish it soon, at last.


on a side note, i just got a wacom graphire 3 :)
and a nikon digital camera :)
and a sony psp :)

its been quite a productive birthday :)

dogbite
05-12-2005, 11:23 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1115893401_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6907/6907_1115893401_large.jpg)

only a quarter of its original size, but still happy.or morbid.

ok so heres the story.
chased and imprisoned, young igor was.
for years he was locked up for the way he looks.
the years havent been kind to him.
until one day when a kind and gentle doctar came and released him from his chains.
igor swore to follow the doctar through hell and earth.

the two soon started their work.
their work ,to spit at god's eye and bring the dead back to life !!!

handlebar
05-12-2005, 01:15 PM
congrats on a fine image, i especially like the lighting, and the characters are fantastic http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon7.gifhttp://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon13.gif

dogbite
05-18-2005, 05:48 AM
char's story

Dr. Frankenstein

at a very young age he excelled in his studies and showed much promise.
at age 11 was diagnosed with a terminal disease which causes bursts of aging every 15 years.
with his death date already told to him, young frankenstein swore that he would solve the greatest mystory in his way, life and death.

through painful study he found that electricity could induce movement in dead cells, but
something was missing.
something the human body needed besides energy to fully function.
the answer didnt take long to understand, blood.
blood that could transfer the necessary ingrediants through the body and in a enlighted way blood to connect the soul to the body.

frankenstein who was just a scientist couldnt just go and get blood, it would be frowend upon.
so he went to a small prison located just south of his mansion to look for help.
in this prison he found a large prisoner who was sentenced to death for murdering a prostetute.
this inmates name was Vlad.
during his talks with Vlad in the prison mess hall a prison riot uropted.
Vlad tried to kill the good doctar, but a small and hunchy man like person stabbed Vlad and saved the professor.
after this incident the doctar took the small person as his aid, because , well, ... he just killed his first selection.

this small person was infact i'gor, the town fool who was sent to prison for stabbing people in the back with a rusty fork.
igor was so pleased he was released from that hell hole of a prison that he gave his life to the doctar and pledged to follow him.
only after a week of being in his lab did he finally understand the full extent of this work.

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