Illustrator: Bluebird

[dmcgrath]

Only thing I can comment on is the background color, should be a couple shades darker. And then the light cast on the back wall sill stand out a little more. Maybe also make the light circle on the wall somewhat bigger as well. I think it will read better.

As always, you have applied a very unique and refreshing way to look at Illustrator, Jer. Your stuff is fantastic.

[jeroentje]

Back after 3 (!) system crashes :annoyed:

Yes, you're right dmcgrath. Thanks :)
So here's an update.

[Najd]

Would you wanna make me believe that this birdy lives in this birdhouse ? watch that hole !! :shame:

No, it's fun, I like your style :applause:

[dmcgrath]

I definitely like the second one better for drama. The light shining on the back wall was hard to read in the first picture. It looked at first to be a part of the bird, like some bright yellow feathers.
That second one works better.
Jeroentje, your work is fantastic, beer came out of my nose when I saw your website stuff, espically the gun in the box, and the Christ toy. I wish I had illustrator, to try out things like that.

:beer:

[typeA]

yap, thats a blue bird....

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