Kitchen Model. Need Feedback

[LOTRfn88]

Hey,

Great work, how long have you been modeling? I'm just a beginner also, but i'll give you feedback anyway. I think it looks too bright. and there isn't any knobs on the oven. Over all great work for your first 3d. The texturing looks great and i love the countertops, they look very realistic.

- LOTRfn88

[TheAnarchitect]

so smooth and successful for a first model. i have to congrat you :)
ok here are some architectural feedbacks,

first of all do not let anyone sit in front of the cooker :) you better slide the cooker towards kitchen counter with sink and put the stools around the short edge of the table opposite that..and the heater discs on the oven, your oven looks like the ones without those, just a black glass with red circles on would be enough i guess, you have to do it yourself i guess if you don't have a texture for that. ah btw it's a must to have a "aspirator" above the cooker, you know pyramidal or conic air filter thing.

and in real life the height of the counter for kitchen is around 85cms while height of a table is around 75 cms, there is a difference between using a surface on foot and while sitting, well at least i see tyour counter and table both seems to have same height am i wrong ?

well you could put a refrigerator somewhere that would be fine

all of the textures on your cupboards are identically same , just use the UVW settings of the texture in the material editor (you have to learn "sub material" option btw for multi materials)

and the most wrong part is the shadows i think, while you have a window on the left and artificial lightning on the ceiling, you have shadows towards completely opposite direction :) that's have to be changed. and use a raytraced or area shadow..l

floorings could have some nice reflections.

the cupboards bottom should be raised 2-3 cms off the floor incase of flooding..

well these are some i found out after a quick scan.

i recommend you checking out the magazines of kitchen. :)
keep up the good work really good start for a beginner

[mertalkan]

very nice works

[GoRivera]

Thank you guys for the feedback. I'm working on other projects that I will post soon. I need feedback on the lighting portion. I'm not too good. I guess I should've taken a photographer's course first.

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