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jerrymascho
03-28-2005, 01:39 AM
Jerry Mascho has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6777)

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: MSsketch3
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6777/6777_1112259603_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6777/6777_1112259603_large.jpg)

Trying to develop some more story/atmosphere. I think I like the situation going on in this one a little better. Might do some more detailed designs to see how the mech suit is actually constructed around the human host.

jerrymascho
03-30-2005, 04:12 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6777/6777_1112155976_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6777/6777_1112155976_large.jpg)

Just an idea sketch to see where I would like to go with the theme.

jerrymascho
03-30-2005, 04:15 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6777/6777_1112156136_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6777/6777_1112156136_large.jpg)

Value study for the first idea sketch, just seeing what does/doesn't work well.

Gamoron
03-30-2005, 04:23 AM
Hey Jerry. There's a few aspects about the first sketch that I think you should re-incorporate to your current sketch. The apparatus that is hooked up to his crotch really kind of does give a creapy sensation when looking at it. It tells the viewer better then the second concept that this guy is hooked up for a long time. I like how you can see the tubing more throughout the image too. Gives a nice sense of emptiness around him. Nice work.

:beer:

burnout
03-30-2005, 04:38 AM
nice start jerry, id say keep playiing with different compositions/ ideas, like.. what's this image about, who is that guy?, what's he doing in that contraption? how does he get out of it? CAN he get out of it? what's the purpose of the tubes? what type of world is he in? you can go on for years, but just some ideas to think about it guess.. goodluck. gin.

sloth79
03-30-2005, 05:10 AM
nice shading on the update piece. the foreground looks alittle empty now dunno if thats what you plan to have. would love to see how the progress of the storyline goes on the master and slavery part. ~cheers~

jerrymascho
03-31-2005, 08:56 AM
Gamoron: Thanks for comments. I was afraid of the crotch piece, well...for obvious reasons hehe. Still playing around with ideas.

burnout: Thanks for the help man. Hopefully I have more info in the read of the next one. cs.

sloth79: Yeah, still not sure where I plan to go with it. The story is slowly getting there in my head though. Thanks.

jerrymascho
03-31-2005, 09:00 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6777/6777_1112259603_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6777/6777_1112259603_large.jpg)

Trying to develop some more story/atmosphere. I think I like the situation going on in this one a little better. Might do some more detailed designs to see how the mech suit is actually constructed around the human host.

Havik
03-31-2005, 09:13 AM
nice jerry,
the landscape orientation is more forgiving with the composition you have.
its looking alot better.

Although i think the silhouette of the guy on the right in the foreground is kinda distracting and taking away some of the focus from the mech. Maybe in add some tubes like fuel lines in that area attaching into the mech to fill that space. You could maybe add a platform of some sort cause it would be a long jump into the suit.

CoreyArtE
03-31-2005, 09:35 AM
Woah thats a pretty unique and sweet concept! Reminds me of "Gundam Wing" alittle bit. I'll keep my eye on you! I like your style, its refreshing!

T-lapia
03-31-2005, 09:55 AM
reminds me of evangelion.. no offence. its clear that you have the skills:D good luck! id love tho see ur finished work:D

CoreyArtE
03-31-2005, 09:58 AM
reminds me of evangelion..

That too lol...

gizmoaseth
03-31-2005, 09:59 AM
your idea, is very unique, i like it ,
and i wish you good luck
nice sketches, also !
very good!

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