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pariahrob
03-27-2005, 10:23 PM
rob redman has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6769)

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: fallen or thrown?
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112225440_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112225440_large.jpg)

Jus rearranged the format for the piece and spent a short time reworking the skin tones. I have a much better idea where i am heading with the setting now.
all comments are welcome. tell me what you think.
cheers,
rob

NOOB!
03-27-2005, 10:24 PM
hello mr redman,good luck!!

pariahrob
03-28-2005, 07:02 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112036519_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112036519_large.jpg)

This is my first time here. Please feel free to be as critical as you can. Or how will i ever develope?
The idea behind this piece is to throw a new slant on something i saw happen a while back. A girl had fallen from her pony and was rubbing her ankle then i noticed the horse appeared to be laughing. So-fallen or thrown.
This is my first concept and i am open to all your ideas. If anybody would like to start a thread for me i would be grateful.
Thanks guys
rob

pariahrob
03-28-2005, 07:04 PM
Hi,
ok, i didnt know a thread would be started for me. Excellent! Well hopefully somebody will start the ball rolling soon.
Personally i have a few comments.
1. The hand rubbing the ankle is giving me grief. Any hints?
2. I have too many ideas for the setting. Tell me what you think, please, and i'll be working on my piece tonight and tomorow.
Thanks all,
rob

pariahrob
03-28-2005, 07:07 PM
hi Noob,
Thanks very much. An official welcome! Got any pearls of wisdom for me?

pariahrob
03-29-2005, 08:19 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112127593_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112127593_large.jpg)

Hi again all. Just added some colour to play with flesh tones. A bit bright i think so goin to play with overall cast and see what happens.
Any ideas?

pariahrob
03-29-2005, 08:21 PM
Please ignore the right hand. It's still causing me problems but i will get there.

alex.h.
03-30-2005, 03:47 PM
nice start rob and keep going strong and,yes, i work for games workshop. se you later and :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

pariahrob
03-30-2005, 03:56 PM
Thanks Alex, I thought it might have been you. I used to work in the studio myself. Small world. Good luck!

jsn
03-30-2005, 04:00 PM
G' day Rob :cool:
Looking good! :thumbsup:

Pixeldragoon
03-30-2005, 04:21 PM
I like it so far, it's coming along great!

pariahrob
03-30-2005, 04:29 PM
Thanks for the kind words. I will be uploading another tonight with more background work. Keep me informed of your opinions.
Cheers
rob

pariahrob
03-30-2005, 11:30 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112225440_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112225440_large.jpg)

Jus rearranged the format for the piece and spent a short time reworking the skin tones. I have a much better idea where i am heading with the setting now.
all comments are welcome. tell me what you think.
cheers,
rob

victim335
03-31-2005, 12:16 AM
Whoa chicksnsnakes, You aim for the top :D , little more facial detail will help that girl alot, great work by the way, some nude gals will never spoil the deal :)

THE Wizard
03-31-2005, 01:04 PM
Hmm, I think you should put some more details in background, it looks kind well, empty

:wise: my master & slave 2D (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=225858):twisted:

pariahrob
03-31-2005, 06:59 PM
yeah, the background is very empty. it may well stay fairly empty though. This was a very very quick addition to focus my mind once i had changed the format of the picture. There will be more. nut how much more?
Any comments or thoughts anyone?

Alden
03-31-2005, 07:46 PM
I really like the concept. Raptors would make for some cool pets! :twisted:

I think the shadows are a little too deep for the rib cage. They make her look a little malnurished.

Anyways keep up the good work.

~Aldo

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