Master and Servant 2D Entry: rob redman

[NOOB!]

hello mr redman,good luck!!

[pariahrob]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112036519_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112036519_large.jpg)

This is my first time here. Please feel free to be as critical as you can. Or how will i ever develope?
The idea behind this piece is to throw a new slant on something i saw happen a while back. A girl had fallen from her pony and was rubbing her ankle then i noticed the horse appeared to be laughing. So-fallen or thrown.
This is my first concept and i am open to all your ideas. If anybody would like to start a thread for me i would be grateful.
Thanks guys
rob

[pariahrob]

Hi,
ok, i didnt know a thread would be started for me. Excellent! Well hopefully somebody will start the ball rolling soon.
Personally i have a few comments.
1. The hand rubbing the ankle is giving me grief. Any hints?
2. I have too many ideas for the setting. Tell me what you think, please, and i'll be working on my piece tonight and tomorow.
Thanks all,
rob

[pariahrob]

hi Noob,
Thanks very much. An official welcome! Got any pearls of wisdom for me?

[pariahrob]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112127593_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112127593_large.jpg)

Hi again all. Just added some colour to play with flesh tones. A bit bright i think so goin to play with overall cast and see what happens.
Any ideas?

[pariahrob]

Please ignore the right hand. It's still causing me problems but i will get there.

[alex.h.]

nice start rob and keep going strong and,yes, i work for games workshop. se you later and :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[pariahrob]

Thanks Alex, I thought it might have been you. I used to work in the studio myself. Small world. Good luck!

[jsn]

G' day Rob :cool:
Looking good! :thumbsup:

[Pixeldragoon]

I like it so far, it's coming along great!

[pariahrob]

Thanks for the kind words. I will be uploading another tonight with more background work. Keep me informed of your opinions.
Cheers
rob

[pariahrob]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112225440_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6769/6769_1112225440_large.jpg)

Jus rearranged the format for the piece and spent a short time reworking the skin tones. I have a much better idea where i am heading with the setting now.
all comments are welcome. tell me what you think.
cheers,
rob

[victim335]

Whoa chicksnsnakes, You aim for the top :D , little more facial detail will help that girl alot, great work by the way, some nude gals will never spoil the deal :)

[THE Wizard]

Hmm, I think you should put some more details in background, it looks kind well, empty

:wise: my master & slave 2D (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=225858):twisted:

[pariahrob]

yeah, the background is very empty. it may well stay fairly empty though. This was a very very quick addition to focus my mind once i had changed the format of the picture. There will be more. nut how much more?
Any comments or thoughts anyone?

[Alden]

I really like the concept. Raptors would make for some cool pets! :twisted:

I think the shadows are a little too deep for the rib cage. They make her look a little malnurished.

Anyways keep up the good work.

~Aldo

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