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yonathangz
03-27-2005, 08:34 PM
hi all, this is my first post here. that's a car i'm working on right now, needs more modelling and work on shading... I'd be happy to here your comments http://80.179.108.9/~lizon/fileupload/store/porsche10.jpg

vegass
03-27-2005, 09:03 PM
Hi there, nice start
I got a few crits, Porsche carrera is a sports car, so you need some bigger and better rims for it...just make those tires a bit thiner.
The rubber on the windows is too big
Some edges need beveling
The door lines should be sharper
I did a porsche, you can visit my WIP thread here if you want
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?p=1951030#post1951030
Here's a pic, I circled some areas
http://img124.exs.cx/img124/7809/porsche10copy9nh.th.jpg (http://img124.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img124&image=porsche10copy9nh.jpg)

yonathangz
03-28-2005, 09:48 AM
thanks for the tips, some of your comments are already fix but not yet rendered.

I need some help with the backlight texture, anyone has some tips?

yonathangz
03-31-2005, 04:24 PM
small update...
c&c are very welcome....
http://img201.exs.cx/img201/9070/329sp.jpg

yonathangz
04-02-2005, 07:44 PM
these are few color and hdri tests.... c&c are still welcome

http://img149.exs.cx/img149/663/386im.jpg

http://img149.exs.cx/img149/4313/401bm.jpg

http://img201.exs.cx/img201/7786/374yv.jpg

http://img201.exs.cx/img201/176/353al.jpg

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