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Silveraxe
03-27-2005, 07:01 PM
Yasemin Baran has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6764)

Latest Update: Coloring WIP: Coloring phase starts: The Dancer
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6764/6764_1112366344_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6764/6764_1112366344_large.jpg)

I started coloring ;)

I'm not gonna color the whole thing with the base colors. I'm just going straightforward into coloring.

This is not much, but I felt like sumbitting the first bits of the coloring. So here it is! ;)

NOOB!
03-27-2005, 07:11 PM
best of luck!

Silveraxe
03-27-2005, 07:12 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6764/6764_1111954341_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6764/6764_1111954341_large.jpg)

Ok. I've tried like 10 concept drawings when I heard about the contest.
Actually, this *is* the 10th composition I came up with...
I believe that this one is the strongest amongst them...

This is about humans being the servant of "law" and how we bow before it.
The man's eyes are tied, symbolizing the saying "the law is blindfolded". And he is chained and a heavy weight is put at the end of the chain. The weight stands on one side of the "scales", which is another symbol used for "law".

Well, that's it for the time being... Please feel free to ask or leave comments/critics!

Cheers!

Silveraxe
03-27-2005, 07:15 PM
:D Thankss!! *fingers crossed*

Rhenia
03-27-2005, 07:30 PM
Hi nice to see a different concept being used....I'm just wondering what would be on the other side of the scale??......hhhmmmm just letting my brain loose but maybe u can embelish a lil more with it.....(we make the law soooo we are really servants to our own) could fill in the other side of the scale.........i dunno im just brainstorming ...you could ignore me completely Good Luck!

eclipson
03-27-2005, 07:43 PM
interesting concept, very different from so many i've seen before, all the best for ya man, :)

GoodLux!:thumbsup:

Silveraxe
03-28-2005, 12:44 PM
God knows what's on the otherside... maybe a judge with his robes could be there, sitting... :P
hehehe!
Well thanks for the nice comment and thanks for the "good luck"!!! ;D

kerembeyit
03-28-2005, 01:58 PM
Nice concept Yasemin. Good luck!

Silveraxe
03-28-2005, 04:00 PM
thankss :D

ChristianHammer
03-28-2005, 04:07 PM
I like the idea but maybe it needs a little more. What lies upon the other side of the scale? I can see potential for you to go a great many directions with this. Typically justice is portayed holding the scales, while being blindfolded, so this is an interesting play on that. I look forward to watching this develop!

W-I-L
03-28-2005, 04:34 PM
hmmm. yeah nees more..that extra human elemnt. i think alot of this contest is about the relationship between the master and servant . . . kleep pushing it mate!

Eilstina
03-28-2005, 04:38 PM
Good concept, and good sketch for the beginning. i believe that having more elements indicating the "master" will enhance this composition.. :) good luck and kolay gelsin :P

Silveraxe
03-28-2005, 08:18 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6764/6764_1112044686_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6764/6764_1112044686_large.jpg)

Ok. Some people commented that I add more... So I did this sketch.
She *is* the Law, holding the scales with the book of Law on one side and a human blindfolded and chained on the other side.

This is a very basic (actually crappy) sketch. I'll re-draw this on paper, cuz I'm not that great with sketching digitally :P

Sketch done in Photoshop 8.

blakbird
03-28-2005, 08:28 PM
Its very original if we consider the all contestants here. Being original is one of the keys here in the challenge I think.

Thumbs up.

Birşey diyeceğim, şu gözü bağlı olan tartıcı abla değil miydi?
Buna bağlı aklıma başka bir şey de geldi. Acaba diyorum hazır sen bunu değiştirmişken, bazı şeyleri stilize etsen... ne bileyim, neyse ben biraz düşüneyim, parlak bir fikir gelirse aklıma söylerim, tamam mı.

Silveraxe
03-28-2005, 08:31 PM
ewt normalde kadinin gozleri baglidir da, burda sanki insanlarin gozunu baglamis gibi :P
stilize etmek derken neyi kast ettin, tam anlayamadim?


glad you like it! :) this is a very bad drawing though, it should look better when i draw it on paper.. there's nothing like the traditional media!! ;D

ekarademir
03-29-2005, 04:37 PM
lood luck. bol şanslar

ChristianHammer
03-29-2005, 05:16 PM
Don't worry about the quality of a sketch, they are just to get ideas down and out of your head anyway. Keep working it through, I think this will be a great image.

Silveraxe
03-29-2005, 10:13 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6764/6764_1112137983_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6764/6764_1112137983_large.jpg)

I've decided to change my composition all over!!

About the first concept, I've experienced before that if you play around with the same material and try to enhance it, it'll only become like a gum, chewed so many times...

So I came up with this new sketch; which I believe is more colorful, in means of things going on in both the background and the foreground. This one has a better sense of bg, and since there are more stuff around, it should be fun coloring this ;)

Yeah I'm going for a tough one, but even if it doesnt get any qualification in the contest, I still have a sketch that is more fun to work on!

ChristianHammer
03-29-2005, 10:14 PM
Your new concept is really close to the snake dancers... I think the justice concept is more original and a bit more interesting...

Silveraxe
03-29-2005, 10:20 PM
Your new concept is really close to the snake dancers... I think the justice concept is more original and a bit more interesting...

i feel that the justice concept is pretty empty in means of composition. also there isnt much to work on. its just three color composition: the human, the justice woman and the background.
i felt that there wasnt much challenge there...

yeah she looks like a snake dancer i know, but hey, i'm from a culture that is used to bellydancers :thumbsup: anyways, thanks for the honest comment, i really appreciate it! :bounce:

ChristianHammer
03-29-2005, 10:27 PM
After 2nd evaluation the image could be really great if the background was draped in rich fabric, textures and extremely opulent... I could see it going one of two ways, showing the dancing as an art and therefore positive, clean almost oversatured... The other direction the exact opposite, like a thin layer of filth covers everything... Could be alot of fun, I am looking forward to your next update.

Silveraxe
03-30-2005, 08:48 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6764/6764_1112219333_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6764/6764_1112219333_large.jpg)

I changed some bits. She doesnt have shoes anymore and the facial expression of the men have changed.

this is on "line art" milestone, cuz I've outlined some stuff and this is just the first bit of the line art anyways... more to come!

Also, this wont have any lines visible in the final piece, so I'm not really gonna bother with outlining very thing there. Just gonna do the line art of the changes...

Silveraxe
04-01-2005, 01:39 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6764/6764_1112366344_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6764/6764_1112366344_large.jpg)

I started coloring ;)

I'm not gonna color the whole thing with the base colors. I'm just going straightforward into coloring.

This is not much, but I felt like sumbitting the first bits of the coloring. So here it is! ;)

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