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OrO
03-27-2005, 03:23 PM
Oros Claudiu has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6750)

Latest Update: Final Image: Farewell...
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1116013863_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1116013863_large.jpg)

I wanted to repost the final image becaus i hade to post the concept and i didn't want it to look like that was my final image.....
-Lots of luck to all! -

MDN67
03-27-2005, 03:25 PM
Welcome and good luck:thumbsup:

OrO
03-27-2005, 03:30 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1111941052_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1111941052_large.jpg)

Well what can i say..Long advanced algebra class,got inspired (have to make radical changes on her,him..everything)..i home nobody will mind..i don't have the financial capabilities to buy a graphic board or software so i'm gonna do this one in pencil (on paper) and then scan it..sorry people..good luck to all

OrO
03-27-2005, 04:07 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1111943247_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1111943247_large.jpg)

just took another picture with my digital cam..worked on the girl a little bit (sorry for the red color..the light in my room)..i'll start searching for someone who can help me with the scaning of the work..good luck to all..criticism is most welcome

OrO
03-27-2005, 06:54 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1111953269_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1111953269_large.jpg)

again..sorrry for the odd colors (using digital camera) gonna find someone with a scaner for the final color and final image sessions..any ideas on the backgroun???

Rhenia
03-27-2005, 07:00 PM
Hi there! Not sure what to tell u about background....give us a short storyline and with that im sure you will figure out a good setting.....Im getting that she has some type of bondage over him....maybe you want to take a different angle appraoch to give it more depth....its just too centered and focus....bring some perspective to ur drawing :)

Can't wait to see what you come up with

OrO
03-27-2005, 07:17 PM
--thx :bounce: i'll see what i can do..it's kind of hard to change many things because i'm on paper...:sad:
--well i see it as a secret love,so i think i tend twards a night scene with a full moon in the back or something...for a love between a servant and a master must stay a secret.You can't see it because of the bad quality but they have tears in their eyes...maybe of joy..or maybe this is the last time they see eachother....
--i really don't have the money to buy a drawing tablet right now so i'll have to settle for my favorite..the pencil
--come again

OrO
03-27-2005, 07:22 PM
i feel really strange..everybody is using the computer..i am the one with the pencil... :sad:

NOOB!
03-27-2005, 07:25 PM
i feel really strange..everybody is using the computer..i am the one with the pencil... :sad:

this is a CG forum my friend,ofcourse there will allot of computer generated art,its what this forum is about.

but still don't feel discouraged,keep it up! i like what u got so far.

GaeasHerald
03-27-2005, 07:29 PM
Pencil scketches are alright, I do them too. Not everybody can afford a paint tablet or are that good at drawing with a mouse (why can't I, whhhhy? :sad: ).
Small crit: either her nose looks too far down, or her eye is too far up. Not really sure. Good luck!

OrO
03-27-2005, 07:41 PM
thx people :) the crit with the nose is really on the spot...how did i miss that? oh it's 12 o'clock at night..gotta go crash..i've got foto-electric phisycs in 7 hours
a lottttt of thx for the suport again

NOOB!
03-27-2005, 07:43 PM
i've got foto-electric phisycs in 7 hours



:eek: u got what know?!?

eclipson
03-27-2005, 07:47 PM
yo dude, looks like ur gonna get a hard time to do the coloring man, best of luck for ya man, whatever media ur gonna use,:)

GoodLux!!:thumbsup:

Rhenia
03-27-2005, 07:58 PM
i've got foto-electric phisycs in 7 hours.............What kinda class is that.............Well I wish you nothing but luck....don't let anyone discourage you.......the pencil is the artist first and most loyal friend.......It can never let you down.....GOOD LUCK

OrO
03-28-2005, 04:18 AM
well..it's a part of our physics class that studies light from an electro-magnetic point of view (from a wave point of view)..thx to all for the suppppppoooort...you are great! we get to work with lasers and stuff and study light

GaeasHerald
03-28-2005, 01:23 PM
Getting into a challenge like this, and having to deal with university classes is hell! Trust me, I know. By the way, you can do the scketches on pencil, but I don't think you can color it with traditional media... :curious: Better ask in the faq forum. :)

OrO
03-28-2005, 01:25 PM
yeppp..it's har! thx....i will :)

OrO
03-28-2005, 04:56 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112032602_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112032602_large.jpg)

-ok..last pencil fill..tommorow i'm gonna pass to pastel coloring..try to give it more life..i can't wait to get the colors
-also i think i didn't present my idea right: the secret bonds and relationships that can form between servant and master.I'll start work on a background..i want it to be at night..because this sort of relationship can only be protected by the darkness and silence of night.You can also interpret the tears that they will have it their eyes as a last meeting..perhaps
their last time together..or maybe tears of joy for finally getting to be with eachother..also although he has the chain to his neck you can see him standing straight..now they are in some way equal..

stevesherrin
03-28-2005, 06:16 PM
I like the concept so far, although I would pose one question to you that I think many in this comp are missing- what's the emotional bond. He is in chains, but is he ruled through fear? Or maybe, in this case, he feels true love or lust for the master. Which way are you thinking about going?

OrO
03-28-2005, 06:28 PM
it's about a love that is taboo...the chain is there to show that he is still a servant..love may make him noble but when the morning comes he will be just another servant...you could see it as the love between the daughter of a master and a servant...she is also the master but there is a bond between them that changes that; but just under the cover of the night...i'll put tears in their eyes,too look like they are crying...something like..let's say her father is banishing him (the servant) and this is their last night together....he has been her servant and lover,dedicated his life to her and now he has to leave...they only have until the sun goes up...
--thx for the suport it's kind of hard,doing this in pencil and hopefully tommorrow pastel..thx a lotttttttttt

hands0nfire
03-28-2005, 08:03 PM
I like your image, I feel that it could be alittle more stronger if you had a real chain to go by. not saying that it's aways the right thing to do.. the overall concept is pretty cool I look forward to seeing this in pastel..best of luck


handsonfire
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=223443 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=223443)

stevesherrin
03-29-2005, 12:52 AM
Very nice backstory. I see what you're trying to say with the piece now. Very moving. Keep it up

OrO
03-29-2005, 02:56 AM
thanks a lottt:bounce: what should i do /add to it/ modify..anything on the background problem????

Aethyrprime
03-29-2005, 03:37 AM
I like the tatoo on his neck. Will be interesting to see this develop. GL.

OrO
03-29-2005, 01:35 PM
thxxxxxxxxxx :)

OrO
03-29-2005, 04:22 PM
gonna change to bigggger paper so i can do a background as well
tommorrow when i'll get the paper for the pastels

OrO
03-29-2005, 05:31 PM
ok people...it's about time for some background suggestions..i'm gonna start doing the backgrounds tommorrow

OrO
03-29-2005, 05:34 PM
gonna change the name to "Farewell..."

OrO
03-30-2005, 07:39 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112215139_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112215139_large.jpg)

First color layer..really happy that i got the paper and pastels..next layer tommorrow....can't wait..

OrO
03-31-2005, 06:44 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112298262_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112298262_large.jpg)

Sorry people but i have a very big problem and can't do the pastel work anymore..i don't wanna give up so i will give you my final color sketch from the initial image..i had finished it but thought it wasn't good enough..i like it very much..it's done only in pencil..for the final image i'll scan it at high resolutions of course..someone will help me with a scaner on monday...
i wanna thank everybody for the constructive suport and help and for leting me take part in this contest...
i can't wait to get a drawing tablet..start doing cg works

OrO
03-31-2005, 07:20 PM
and sorry if my drawing isn't very good...i never had any art classes or anything....this is how i draw...

NOOB!
03-31-2005, 07:21 PM
ur finished..already?

ah man,so sorry u lost ur nack for the pastels,but i'm looking foward to seeing ur work when u get a tablet,and maybe painter or photoshop.

thanks for passing by my thread btw.

for a traditional works that pretty good.

OrO
03-31-2005, 07:22 PM
i hope you'll like my image

OrO
03-31-2005, 07:24 PM
did you see it...it's on the bottom part of the second page..yesss.page 2

NOOB!
03-31-2005, 07:26 PM
yeh i saw it,i think its great.

its just too bad u didn't have any cg stuff,then it cud have been better.

i bet u can't wait to get ur tablet.

OrO
03-31-2005, 07:29 PM
yepppp...but it's gonna take a while...it kind of costs 500 euro here....and that's a lot of money in our curency...

OrO
03-31-2005, 07:30 PM
gonna go to sleep now..big test in electrotechinc-basics tommorrow :scream:
good luck to all!

GaeasHerald
03-31-2005, 11:17 PM
Don't give up!!! Is it becuase of the software, or for the "painting-with-a-mouse" issue?

If it's the first case, the solution is quite easy, adobe and corel have trial versions that will last you 30 days (I think) so that's enough time to get it done, and I'm sure that there are lots of people in this site willing to give you a hand at getting started with either porgram (Photoshop or Painter). Plus, the guys at CG ussually don't mind if the entries were made with a trial version (at least at the last challenge they didn't).

As for painting with a mouse, I personally tell you: IT IS POSSIBLE.
Hope it helps. :)

OrO
04-01-2005, 04:23 AM
the problem that made me give up pastels and coloring is consuming all my time...that's why i i can't do the coloring anymore...and it is because i really don't want to be thrown out of the cotentest that i send the pencil colored image....i like it a lot...but for the next time i want to start using painter..but i really don't know how...can you give me some links tot tutorials or stuff...again,thanks for the suport...you guys are great! :bounce:

OrO
04-03-2005, 07:05 PM
really looking forward to the 1st of may so i can send my final image....scanned it,wery excited about the outcome...someone will bring me a graphic tablet next month and i will be participating with a full cg drawing.....:)

OrO
04-03-2005, 07:14 PM
..next time...

GaeasHerald
04-03-2005, 08:04 PM
Graphic tablet, yuppiii!!! I'm so happy for you! I actually kinda envy you, but officially...
Just joking. :)

OrO
04-03-2005, 08:10 PM
thx a loooot..it'won't be anything excelet..but it will be...and i'm so happy....i can't wait to start to paint in cg...do you know any tutorials for painter or something????

OrO
04-04-2005, 06:37 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112596624_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112596624_large.jpg)

this is a scan of the final image..a low resolution one..but a scan..also scanned the image in the right size for the final image entry..it's not much...just can't wait ot have a tablet and graphic pack for the next challange..i think i got the emotions right..

BlackDidThis
04-04-2005, 07:25 AM
Please allow me to point out a few things that you may like to watch out for.

I understand that you are going for a specific style in your work. And I do not really intend on disrupting that. But there are some bits that sort of weeeken your work.

Like the neck of the 'servant' is a dear bit too long. It helps show the constraining chain. But also takes from it. When you come to think of it; Iron is a very heavy metal. and the peace you have there is not really a light looking one. It would have to be on him very tightly in order to be able to stay up to that level on his neck. Unless it is pulled to an elevated angle.

As for in the faces you may want to try and rotate the mans ear as well. It seems as if the whole head has rotated, leaving the ear to drag behind.
And I believe the tears would look so much better shall they flow along the curvature of the face. Sort of contouring the cheek bones and so on.

You have managed to depict a nice naive atmosphere. Which I believe was your initial goal. Keep it coming!:thumbsup:

And congratulations on your tablet to come! (I still don't have one :cry: )

Black

OrO
04-04-2005, 04:06 PM
thank you so much...i kind of wanted a little judging or just someone visiting this page......and thx for pointing out those things...un fortunatelly i can't corect them on paper because it would tear holes in it....to much wear and tear...so i'm gonna leave it like this..i think....the tablet won't be much...but it will be something more...sorry if my posts made you sad...

AirbORn
04-04-2005, 04:39 PM
I like the idea, but I also feel that the relationship between master and servent is not fully communicated. To me they both feel like they are equal in power, even though I can see the chain around his neck. You need to make the female appear more powerful. Looks great so far though.

OrO
04-04-2005, 05:21 PM
thank you very much ;)...i'm so happy that someone is finally visiting my thread

GaeasHerald
04-05-2005, 02:00 AM
Small crit Oro: I don't really understand what that at the bottom is... Is it his arm, her arm, clothes?

About the tutorials, have you checked the "Application 2d" forums here at cgtalk? Probably the guys there have a better idea where to get the information you look for, and you can also see what other members asked, so as to learn from their experience.

BlackDidThis
04-05-2005, 04:27 AM
...un fortunatelly i can't corect them on paper because it would tear holes in it....to much wear and tear...so i'm gonna leave it like this..i think....the tablet won't be much...but it will be something more...sorry if my posts made you sad... As crule as this may sound, you are going to have to gain the habbit of restarting on your work on another paper.
Infact at times when I was doing book covers for fantasy novels I would take a demi-transparent Transferpaper and draw over an earlier sketch/drawing at least ten times per each illustration.
It is a very useful pracitce at some point, as it gives you better control on what you do. The general method to apply what you have traced over onto a clean sheet of paper would be to trace over it in reverse and scribble it on.

You have to try to understand that when you take an empty peace of paper for such a task. It is very rare that the first paper you take and start drawing on shall be same paper that your final image shall be painted on.
This is not a rule. And not the only way to do it. But like in your situation, papers wear out... and we end up still having things we would like to change sometimes. So the best thing would be to transfer that to

I hope this helps.

As for the tablet; I never had the chance to experience it unfortunately... but I guess it is just about how you get around using what you have. I grew comfortable with a mouse. And controling it. (Like my entry is completely done by a mouse)
But as I hear it... there is an emmence advantage that it presents. I am sure you will have alot of impressive results to show us.

Black

eclipson
04-05-2005, 05:10 AM
dude, u got the right expression, but i think they are overtears... too much water comin out of the eyes,...unless ur exagerrating, everythin else seems fine to me...keep tryin, dun give up!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :)

OrO
04-05-2005, 01:59 PM
thx to you all:) i'm still working on it ..
don't worry

OrO
04-05-2005, 02:03 PM
it's some sort of long sleeve or something...it's from her clothing.....think i can work on it some more

OrO
04-05-2005, 02:06 PM
and black.....congradulations for the mouse work...it looks so natural
:thumbsup:

OrO
04-05-2005, 03:50 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112716213_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112716213_large.jpg)

More work..on it..started with the girls hair(zoom in and see )

OrO
04-05-2005, 06:24 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112725466_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112725466_large.jpg)

more work in cg :) now my work can be called half-computer generated..it's so hard with the mouse...going strong...thx all

OrO
04-06-2005, 08:35 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112819716_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112819716_large.jpg)

more work..trying to make it look better..good luck to all

OrO
04-07-2005, 08:59 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112907556_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1112907556_large.jpg)

worked on the cain and the thing arround his neck..hope to do a loooot more the folowing days...big exam on tuesday...see what i can doo

nebezial
04-08-2005, 09:02 AM
well i got the time to answer the armour question, first of all i work in photoshop, but as i remember, painter has the dodge tool in the photo effects if i am correct, when making metal keep this in mind!

1 metal reflects the surroundings

2 keep in mind what type of metal u r painting, alloys will somethimes contain more colours

3 basic colour is very important, it must be neutral, default for steel is dark,desaturared blue, over whith u overlay lighter tones, more is better.

4 metal usualy has damages, damages are ur friends, they add to the realism

5 dodge highlights command is used at the very end to accentuate the specular hifhlights

6metal tends to create very dark shades

well hope this helps u. if u have more questions come to my thread, oh and place a link int ur signature, i hate looking all over the place:D

OrO
04-09-2005, 06:37 AM
thx a loooott! :)

OrO
04-09-2005, 04:26 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113063983_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113063983_large.jpg)

What can i say i like this image..it isn't good but i like it :) and it's damm hard to work with an old mouse...big exam in advanced algebra on tuesday...must study...

NOOB!
04-09-2005, 06:28 PM
u starting to colour it digitally now?

looking gud.

OrO
04-09-2005, 06:38 PM
yep...but i'm still keeping it black and white...you can alreday see the digital part..her hair.the thing arround his neck..the chain..the his clothes..the faces....thx a loot...couldn't have made it without you people:)

OrO
04-09-2005, 08:11 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113077469_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113077469_large.jpg)

what do you people think of the dark backgroun...it centers the view at them..and i said that the meeting is at night....so???keep it dar????make it lighter???what do i dao??

OrO
04-10-2005, 11:06 AM
i think i like it more how it came out...it also looks like a heart that is breaking.....really hard to paint with the mouse:scream:

W-I-L
04-10-2005, 11:15 AM
man... you are useing a mouse?? You are painting with a bar of soap dude.

Love the composition... similar to what i am doing with two people in profile and looking at each other, making a connetion.. nice... cant wait to seemore colour.. and the heart breaking is good!

OrO
04-10-2005, 11:31 AM
thanks a loot....i don't get a loot of visits..i don't know why.....maybe because of the shark...i think i'll change it:)

NOOB!
04-10-2005, 11:37 AM
ur not getting many visits cos its not in colour.

but it still looks great.

lets just hope for the next challenge u will have a tablet and painter.

OrO
04-10-2005, 11:41 AM
thanks:) i feel better now....i hope too....it's really fun to take part in these challanges....

Morgy
04-10-2005, 09:31 PM
Che fach, Oro. How's the advanced algebra? For your drawing now. If you make the background grey you will have a good rhythm- grey sky, dark hairs, light faces. The main contrast stays in the faces. You have some good opportunities for coloring the picture without tablet. You can make some experiments with Image\Adjust\Gradient Map, but you need a very precise and completed black&white image. You can combine this with some layer modes. It's up to you, you are the artist. And find a way to improve your skills in the program you use for coloring.:thumbsup:

OrO
04-10-2005, 09:35 PM
thx a loot...i will find a way...i've been using it for 5 days :)

OrO
04-10-2005, 09:40 PM
the algebra....tuesday..exam....fear :scream:

OrO
04-10-2005, 09:50 PM
what program are you talking about( image/adjust.gradient)???

OrO
04-11-2005, 06:50 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113245453_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113245453_large.jpg)

wanted some imput about the thing around his neck..first time i've painted such thing

arkinet
04-13-2005, 06:05 PM
whoaa... is that a tatoo or something, i like the textures...

OrO
04-13-2005, 06:17 PM
yes...the red one is a tatoo...thanks!...it came out nice i think..i'll post un update soon..i've painted a small crown on her head..painting the textures now...:)

OrO
04-13-2005, 09:14 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113426865_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113426865_large.jpg)

started work on some sort of small crown for the girl..didn't want anything big and heavylooking....this came out of my mind...has big butterfly in the front...this is the first level of color...want to make it really shiny...passed one exam..next one on sunday...wish me luck

OrO
04-14-2005, 09:01 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113512492_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113512492_large.jpg)

a little work on the crown...first colors..

OrO
04-14-2005, 09:02 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113512570_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113512570_large.jpg)

and a close zoom on the butterfly :) shiny..

OrO
04-15-2005, 07:59 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113595183_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113595183_large.jpg)

finished the crown..i think...what do you think? i like it..but i think tommorrow i\\\'ll change it again (in need of posts)

OrO
04-18-2005, 07:49 PM
new update...reallyyy soon..working on it..

OrO
04-19-2005, 06:03 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113933833_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1113933833_large.jpg)

-well people..this (i think ) is the last image...i'm gonna leave it like this....i think..it expresses preety well what i wanted to say...The name farewell kind of stuck to me.Thanks for all the input,the crits and the cg painting tutorials...they've helped me a loot..i'm just a noob at this :)
-the final story: a secret relationship between a master and a servant at it's ending point..a dual relationship of love and obedience..and the pain of departure..
(and yes..i wanted the tears to be of apocaliptical proportions...and to look weird)...good luck guys..i'll stick to posting stuff and focus on the hard exams that will come..

k33d
04-20-2005, 12:45 AM
Imi place ideea ta!!! Si realizarea tinde spre ceva calitativ!! really nice! felicitari ! :D:bounce:

OrO
04-20-2005, 05:40 AM
multumesc mult! esti primul roman care vine pe pagina mea...:bounce:...wwwwweeeeee....stiu treb sa ma i lucrez la tehnica....but thx

BlackDidThis
04-20-2005, 12:28 PM
Okey wait I got the thank you bit... and the coolness about a Romanian coming? :rolleyes:
Darn has it been a while, can't remember squat!


So you have finished your entry?! Woow.. everyone is finishing lately. I am so worried that I personally won't make it to posting that one last milestone. I guess you guys just work harder.:applause:

There are many elements I would have personally done diffrent, but I can understand that this is actually what you had wanted it to look like. It definately reeals your own story... told with your words.
I think the most important element in the image was the looks to each other. And what is shared through it. I think that everybody can definately agree that it has been captured well. they have a strong energy flowing.

GOOD LUCK:thumbsup:

OrO
04-20-2005, 03:13 PM
thx a looot black....how do you know romanian?hmmmmmmm....just when i said that i'm finished i started working on her sleeve and wanted to make the pattern look better...so it isn't finished yet...again thank you for the nice words :D i'm only a noob..actually this is the first "start to end" painting i ever did and hope not the last....good luck to you too!:thumbsup:

BlackDidThis
04-20-2005, 04:01 PM
I am sure it won't be the last... It's like an adictive mistress to the world you are living in. You just have to break away and get back to it. Will be waiting for your next comments.



I have this sort of "condition" that required I do alot of sports when I was a child up.. so I have a great variaty tried out.
One of them was diving. Not from the tower.. I was in the spring board... And our trainer was this VERY sweet Romanian woman called Anka (I hope thats how you spell it). And I tend to learn simple statements for somereason.

Actually my greatgrandparents from my grandmothers side were forced to leave Romania almost a century ago, so I share some of your blood :)

OrO
04-22-2005, 02:08 PM
yepp.....can't wait to post final im age

OrO
04-25-2005, 07:32 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1114457533_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1114457533_large.jpg)

final image zoom on him

OrO
04-25-2005, 07:33 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1114457629_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1114457629_large.jpg)

final image zoom on her

OrO
04-25-2005, 07:35 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1114457749_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1114457749_large.jpg)

and this is how it looks...sorry on the title above..forgot to change it to... - her :D

VladPascanu
04-25-2005, 08:58 PM
salut
sper sa nu intelegi gresit reply ul meu
ai probleme de anatomie
ochii ,fruntea ,sprancenele ,nasul,gatul prea lung al personajului masculin etc
compozitional poate incercai sa plasezi capetele personajelor la 2 pe 3 din inaltimea
imaginii
da i un crop la imaginea finala , nu stiu :shrug:
nesiguranta in stil
gaseste cartile lui A.Loomis -le gasesti pe net
posteaza pe visualart.ro si cgarts.ro vei primi feedback=indrumari
in primu rand uita te la ce fac (au facut ) aia mai mari ca noi
oricum have fun
bafta:thumbsup:

OrO
04-25-2005, 09:06 PM
multumesc mult! o sa merg pe site-uri..sunt incepator asa ca am multe de invatat...o sa citesc si cartile....hei multumesc mult ca ai trecut pe aici...nu au venit multi romani....multumesc pt critici....multe le-am vazut si eu dar am examene si nu prea mai am timp sa lucrez (anul 1).. si cu mouse-ul e cam greu..bafta si tie

OrO
05-02-2005, 06:17 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1115014631_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1115014631_large.jpg)

yeppp...this was the concept sketch..must have posted it by accident as lineart..sorry

OrO
05-02-2005, 06:30 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1115015448_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1115015448_large.jpg)

This is my final image...i really enjoyed painting it and working with all you people :)

OrO
05-02-2005, 06:35 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1115015725_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1115015725_large.jpg)

yeppp...this was the concept sketch..must have posted it by accident as lineart..sorry

OrO
05-02-2005, 06:37 AM
sorry for the double image....i don't know what happend :scream:

BlackDidThis
05-02-2005, 09:17 PM
don't let it happen again :wip:


:)


So wil be seeing you in the next competitions?

Once again... BEST of luck.. it was great to have the excuse to meet you :thumbs up:


Black

Oh and good luck with your exams as I get it! :)

OrO
05-03-2005, 08:29 AM
thx a loot for the nice words ...i will take part in the next competitions.....and good luck to tyou too :bounce:

OrO
05-13-2005, 07:51 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1116013863_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6750/6750_1116013863_large.jpg)

I wanted to repost the final image becaus i hade to post the concept and i didn't want it to look like that was my final image.....
-Lots of luck to all! -

OrO
05-17-2005, 04:35 PM
Seek Not My Heart


Oh gentle winds 'neath moonlit skies,
Do not you hear my heartfelt cries?

Below the branches, here about,
Do not you sense my fear and doubt?
Side glistening rivers, sparkling streams,
Do not you hear my woeful screams?

Upon the meadows, touched with dew,
Do not you see my hearts a'skew?
Beneath the thousand twinkling stars,
Do not you feel my jagged scars?

Seek not my mournful heart kind breeze,
For you'll not find it 'mongst these trees.

It's scattered 'cross the moonlit skies,
Accompanied by heartfelt sighs.
It's drifting o're the gentle rain,
A symbol of my silent pain.

It's buried 'neath the meadow fair,
Conjoined with all the sorrow there.
It's lost among the stars this night,
Too far to ease my quiet fright.

No gentle winds, seek not my heart,
For simply ... it has torn apart.

OrO
05-17-2005, 05:19 PM
Night after Night
I sit in front of my window night after night
Wondering what you are doing.
Wondering if your tears fall
as much as mine tonight.

OrO
05-17-2005, 05:20 PM
So I sit in front of my window night after night
Remembering how it was to hold you.
Hearing the words I cherish the most.
Ones of which I cannot hear enough.

OrO
05-17-2005, 05:40 PM
I used those words to guide my path...i searched inside myself to find the emotion,the pain,the grief....the impressive looking tears can only start to express what one would feel...when loosing someone they've loved that much....
A secret love can not stay a secret for long...she is his master and the master of his heart...But her parents find out....and send him away...never to return again.....the last momens of a unique relationship....
The chain is his link to a world that he abandons every night...for he is daemon and angel...
This is the moment where it all ends...
The moment when the most painful word is spoken:

.....Farewell......


Thx to all of you for your supppport and crits! Good luck!

M477
05-18-2005, 06:34 PM
Hey, sorry it's taken me sooo long to get back to see your thread!

This is so different to all the other images on the site - I love the expression and feeling you have evoked in your style and I'm glad to see you have come so far to finish.

Hope to see you in the next competition, and good luck for this one! :bounce:

OrO
05-18-2005, 08:43 PM
a loot of thanks for the kind words! and all the good luck in the world:bounce:

k33d
05-19-2005, 10:15 AM
Bine lucrat prietene ! i like it ! bafta multa !!! nu uita ca participarea conteaza, nu neaparat castigul :D (asa gandesc eu)! CHEERS !

CoreyArtE
05-19-2005, 02:43 PM
I really like this one man, very different and unique in the competition. Raw pencil and some photoshop'n. Thats all you really need in life man! Congrats on finishing and doing such a good job. I wish you the best of luck :thumbsup: You got some talent man

OrO
05-19-2005, 02:44 PM
da....sa stii ca ai dreptate....nu sunt multi romani pe aici...multumesc mult...bafta!

OrO
05-19-2005, 02:55 PM
CoreyArtE (member.php?u=53024):thx a loot....i really apreciate it! and a lotttt of luck to you too!:)

NOOB!
05-19-2005, 02:57 PM
hey oro,good luck!

glad to see u stuck by all this time without using hardly any cg.

seeya in the next challenge!

OrO
05-19-2005, 03:00 PM
oh....i've used some cg belive me.....but thx a loot man! and congradulations to you too...your image is cooooolll...good luck!:thumbsup:

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