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SlomoStds
03-27-2005, 03:19 PM
Andrew Slomowicz has entered the Master and Servant 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6749)

Latest Update: Modeling: I better pick up the pace.....
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6749/6749_1112916288_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6749/6749_1112916288_large.jpg)

Been busy lately....finally got back around to working the hands. I've also worked some more on the body. Crits welcome. Thanx in advance.

coCoKNIght
03-27-2005, 03:57 PM
Just passing by to wish you good luck and subscribe to this thread :)

SlomoStds
03-28-2005, 10:59 PM
Hi, been wanting to post some sketches but it wont allow me to post attachments. Any help is greatly appreciated. And as always thanx in advance.

SlomoStds
03-29-2005, 12:55 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6749/6749_1112057700_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6749/6749_1112057700_large.jpg)

Loud Laugh...Sorry I am not the best at drawing. Here's concept sketch number one. Its the whole demon inside kind of thing.

SlomoStds
03-29-2005, 12:56 AM
Obviously I figure the attachment stuff out...lol

SlomoStds
03-30-2005, 09:04 PM
Hey,
Started my human modeling. Messing with the head thought I'd upload a pic. Needs definite refinement but as I said just a "start."

SlomoStds
03-31-2005, 01:27 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6749/6749_1112232467_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6749/6749_1112232467_large.jpg)

Scrapped other start. Tried to reuse character from one of my other projects. Decided best to start over. Tell me what ya think.

Beaner
03-31-2005, 03:23 PM
I like this new start much more. It is showing much more knowledge of anatomy. How are you rendering these? Are you using a particular renderer, like Brazil? Is this straight out of 3DMax?

Beaner
03-31-2005, 03:26 PM
More comment, I like the direction the eyes are going, but the nose structure needs work methinks. A great source for anatomy is Burne Hogarth's Dynamic Anatomy. I have found it very useful. It breaks down the human anatomy, to the smallest detail, with simpler geometric-type shapes. You might find it useful.
Good luck!

deadplant155
03-31-2005, 05:03 PM
really nice start on the face, i especially like all the detail in the eye area. i agree that the nose could use a little more attention, but at this early stage it's probably needless to say some things need tweaking. good work!

-loren

SlomoStds
03-31-2005, 09:54 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6749/6749_1112306054_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6749/6749_1112306054_large.jpg)

Been hard at work... I hate head modeling. Anyways, thanx for the replies. I appreciate any and all crits. I spent most of my time the last day getting this far. I also fixed the nose; I think its in a better direcion. Beaner I use Lightwave and this is directly rendered out with faked radiosity. Thanx for the tip on the book, Ill have to check it out.

SlomoStds
04-02-2005, 08:38 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6749/6749_1112474295_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6749/6749_1112474295_large.jpg)

Continued to model human body. Im having trouble though... Something doesnt look right. Any crits welcome. Thanx in advance.

DaddyMack
04-02-2005, 09:06 PM
Hi doophuus, his head evolved well, Ithink you wanna just get a good shot of some relevant anatomy for his bod and get it into your 3d app as a reference for proportion and placement.
Other than that I'd advise that your torso looks a bit too long or stretched.
Good luck with this all!

blakbird
04-02-2005, 09:10 PM
Lessen the distance between shoulders and armpits
Widen the breast
Lift legs upwards (the distance between belly pit and genital area must be approximately half of your picture's)

SlomoStds
04-04-2005, 11:33 PM
Kuz and Daddy.. Thanx for your crit I am working on those suggestions as well as others. I will have a new update shortly. It is a lot nicer to have someone on the outside looking in. I find sometimes I become so absorbed, tunnelvision so to speak, that I cant see the "easy" problems. Thanx again.

SlomoStds
04-08-2005, 12:24 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6749/6749_1112916288_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6749/6749_1112916288_large.jpg)

Been busy lately....finally got back around to working the hands. I've also worked some more on the body. Crits welcome. Thanx in advance.

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