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Niorger
03-27-2005, 01:43 PM
Svetoslav Michev has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6740)

Latest Update: Final Image: The Exile
http://www.ultrahostingbg.com/~cfolio/niorger/masterandservant_lowrez.jpg

So at last this is the final image.
At the end I got a little slack but I managed to overcome it :)

So here is my story :

Strange people have always driven back society ..often claimed mad they have been treated as dangerous for the others.My master was a similar case. Everybody in the village avoided him and talked behind his back .However for me he was different - I think he knew the whole world , he knew how to live on his own in the wild , how to find food and shelter... he often talked with me late at night about things I thought never existed. He told me about life , he often said : Always seek the truth ! .. did't know what that means at the time.. but now I know ..One day the tension in the village grew people decided they could not live with him among them anymore. So they drove him away..since I had no one to live with except him , I set out too ... I was really confused about what is going to happen to us ..did I do the right thing ..I was scared . He however looked so self-confident , it even looked as if he had expected this to happen. With his gaze turned towards the mountains ahead he carried his rod as it was a magical staff..I trusted him then and I am grateful for that..because if I didn't go with him at that time.. I would never be the man I am now...

Thanks to all for the support and help it was really a great competition ..looking forward to the next one :)

regards and good luck to all :)

Niorger
03-27-2005, 02:53 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1111935191_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1111935191_large.jpg)

hello everybody :)
this is my first scetch on the topic ..
I liked the theme very much so 10x for the opportunity to draw something like that .
I will tell u more about the story later on :) the concept shows an elderly man with a strange look in his eyes , accompanied by his apprentice .

NOOB!
03-27-2005, 02:56 PM
looks excellent!!

gud luck!

danblomberg
03-28-2005, 09:23 AM
hehe.. nice title, now we have to know =) ..it'll be interesting to see the "servants" role growing in this piece... good start, now dont let too much time pass till next update :)

Niorger
03-29-2005, 12:39 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1112099962_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1112099962_large.jpg)

some small update

Niorger
03-29-2005, 12:44 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1112100244_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1112100244_large.jpg)

so I started putting some colour and details here ..really would appreciate some critique :)

R-K
03-29-2005, 12:55 PM
hey, I'd recommend you to stay away from white or colors near to white when you paint with saturation. Also, you might want to make it a bit more clear that who's the boss here, the big fellow looks like a kind guide at the moment. Maybe it was the purpose, but he doesn't give the master feeling to the image. Nice mood though.

Niorger
03-30-2005, 04:50 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1112201449_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1112201449_large.jpg)

hello there
some update and there's more comin soon :)

Slav
03-30-2005, 07:10 PM
one of the fav works so far. very 16 ceteryesque.

great job, and best of luck to you.

Niorger
03-30-2005, 08:09 PM
hey thanks very much mate :)
I'm really happy it looks 16 centeresque this was the exact idea :)
loved your works btw :)

lots of luck to u and everybody else :)

SoulSurvivor
03-30-2005, 08:12 PM
Good luck man!
4akam da vidq finalniq image ;)

Niorger
04-07-2005, 11:14 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1112912082_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1112912082_large.jpg)

hi there :)
some delayed update from me
let me know what you think of it

Niorger
04-13-2005, 05:42 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1113410547_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1113410547_large.jpg)

i added some details here and there ,
working on differnet parts of the picture...hope I don't loose the overall feeling :)
I'd like to hear your crits ")

Arc80
04-13-2005, 06:39 PM
what's up dude,

Nice sketches. Your painting is looking great. It definately has that old feeling to it. Keep it coming and goodluck.

cheers,
Archie

Niorger
04-18-2005, 06:42 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1113846129_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1113846129_large.jpg)

hi again :)
here is a close-up on the master .
I tried to give him a more severe look.

hope u like it , I look forward to your comments :)

Niorger
04-21-2005, 04:29 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1114097346_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1114097346_large.jpg)

hey there :)
I tried to work on the piece as a whole ..sterted painting the sky but still I have a lot of work there.
I decided to change the atmosphere of the picture , know I want to give it a more dramatic and gloomy feeling .
let m e know what you think about it :)

walrus
04-21-2005, 05:08 PM
I want to give it a more dramatic and gloomy feeling .
let m e know what you think about it :)

You've already succeeded. The atmosphere in this painting is great! And I especially like the man's face, staring at the viewer with such a firm gaze. By comparison, they boy's eyes just aren't there yet, 'though i know you have a lot more work to do on it. Right now the boy is just staring off nowhere in particular, where you could be doing something with a lot more emotional impact like the Master has: The boy could have learned some of the Master's strength and be similarly staring down the viewer. Or the boy's presence could pale in comparison to the Master's and he could be awkwardly looking down at his feet. You're choice, of course, but pick something and be bold in it! :-)

Also, the man's hands holding the staff feels a little awkward to me, wrapped around the way it is. I thought your ealier hand position worked better. The cloths wrapped around it also make it harder to read.

Anyhow, great mood and characters, and a really clearly defined Master and Servant relationship, which is ideal for this sort of challenge. Best of luck as you move foward with it!

-mike

Niorger
04-21-2005, 06:50 PM
thank you very much, Mike :)
your comment is realy a great help , I promise I'll think about another solution for the boy's eyes. about the hand, yes it was a problem for me to decide about the position and I'm still not sure if this is the best way . however I hope I will have the nerves to deal with it properly (but it's a lot of work, man :sad: )probably I'll try to make the pose clearer .
I'm really happy u like it the way it goes , 10x very much for the help and good luck bro :)

Niorger
04-24-2005, 05:36 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1114360591_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1114360591_large.jpg)

i added some detail here and there, changed the face of the master a little bit . what do you think about it ? :)

marcheen
04-24-2005, 05:48 PM
this is great. nice style. i like it very much. keep it up!

Niorger
04-27-2005, 06:39 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1114623557_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1114623557_large.jpg)

hi there
I put some detail on the robe..some dirt-textures.. I'll have to hurry up :P

snowkiwi
04-27-2005, 08:09 PM
I really like these characters.

rePLAY
04-27-2005, 08:54 PM
Hey it is going very good!

Niorger
04-27-2005, 10:00 PM
Thank you all :D I'm very glad u like it.. I'll have to pull myself together and work harder..time is running out :eek:

Mersi mnogo, Stani :D

Niorger
05-02-2005, 05:00 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1115049636_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1115049636_large.jpg)

some update here ..
hope u like it :)

Niorger
05-02-2005, 11:10 PM
I actually hid the layer with the staff
so that u could see the robe better:D

levent
05-03-2005, 12:44 AM
wery nice technics
and old character wery cool

Niorger
05-05-2005, 06:48 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1115315279_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1115315279_large.jpg)

here is some update
hope u like how it goes :)

NOOB!
05-05-2005, 06:49 PM
whoa! great mood and image!

Niorger
05-05-2005, 07:14 PM
thanks mate ! :D
I saw your thread , great things happening there ,man . Very interesting ,
keep up the good work :thumbsup:

NOOB!
05-05-2005, 07:18 PM
thanks mate ! :D
I saw your thread , great things happening there ,man . Very interesting ,
keep up the good work :thumbsup:

:buttrock: damn straight! hehe

O.Martin
05-07-2005, 12:23 PM
Looking good! Like the expression on the old man's face :)

Niorger
05-07-2005, 04:44 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1115480652_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1115480652_large.jpg)

10x to all for the support and comments :)
here is a detail- the boy's face

Hof
05-09-2005, 11:31 AM
Exellent painting! Incredibale impression! :thumbsup: I have no words... Just GREAT!!!

thewicky
05-10-2005, 03:18 PM
This is going to be very good, well done! :thumbsup:

Niorger
05-11-2005, 06:19 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1115831944_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1115831944_large.jpg)

hi there :)
I worked more on the boy here ... hope u like the update :)

Niorger
05-14-2005, 06:52 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1116093155_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1116093155_large.jpg)

hi again :) here is a close-up one the little-boy-area :D I still have a lot of work there but you can see some details I have worked on .

regards :)

Niorger
05-18-2005, 12:08 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1116371289_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1116371289_large.jpg)

the final is near and I have some more things to do - the staff' some more clouds and a final touch on the whole work . I betta hurry :)

Niorger
05-19-2005, 01:40 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1116463235_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6740/6740_1116463235_large.jpg)

So at last this is the final image.
At the end I got a little slack but I managed to overcome it :)

So here is my story :

Strange people have always driven back society ..often claimed mad they have been treated as dangerous for the others.My master was a similar case. Everybody in the village avoided him and talked behind his back .However for me he was different - I think he knew the whole world , he knew how to live on his own in the wild , how to find food and shelter... he often talked with me late at night about things I thought never existed. He told me about life , he often said : Always seek the truth ! .. did't know what that means at the time.. but now I know ..One day the tension in the village grew people decided they could not live with him among them anymore. So they drove him away..since I had no one to live with except him , I set out too ... I was really confused about what is going to happen to us ..did I do the right thing ..I was scared . He however looked so self-confident , it even looked as if he had expected this to happen. With his gaze turned towards the mountains ahead he carried his rod as it was a magical staff..I trusted him then and I am grateful for that..because if I didn't go with him at that time.. I would never be the man I am now...

Thanks to all for the support and help it was really a great competition ..looking forward to the next one :)

regards and good luck to all :)

Kiko_68
05-19-2005, 09:12 AM
Good work man! Good luck to you!

Niorger
05-19-2005, 02:22 PM
the image here is a bit oversharpened so I post another one ... and some close-ups too

http://www.ultrahostingbg.com/~cfolio/niorger/masterandservant_lowrez.jpg



http://www.ultrahostingbg.com/~cfolio/niorger/close-up_master.jpg





http://www.ultrahostingbg.com/~cfolio/niorger/close-up_kid.jpg

Kiko_68
05-19-2005, 02:33 PM
Well done man! Good luck to you!

CoreyArtE
05-19-2005, 03:06 PM
Ha ha! Great work man! I especially love the clouds in the background, very dramatic! I wish you the best of luck!

beak
05-19-2005, 03:19 PM
Yeah man, you got style. Good luck!
:)

Niorger
05-19-2005, 05:02 PM
thanks very much mates :)
CoreyArtE thank u too I saw your thread man it really rocks... :buttrock: the composition is very dinamic !
good luck to u all :)

Niorger
05-22-2005, 04:35 PM
actually I think I should rework some areas and post an update..

I didn't have the time to completely finish it :banghead:

mav
05-23-2005, 01:14 PM
Cool , I like it. The old Man looks somehow powerful and confident and he contrasts with the insecure boy :) Greate Job man .... :thumbsup:

Niorger
05-24-2005, 11:49 AM
thanks bro :)
actually this was the exact idea , happy to hear it is achieved .
10x again

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