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Dominus
03-27-2005, 11:58 AM
Negoita Alexandru has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6737)

Latest Update: Final Image: Master and servant - final image
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1116317142_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1116317142_large.jpg)

ok guys, here is the final image, thanx everyone who gave me crits and encouraged me... good luck to everyone!

MDN67
03-27-2005, 12:03 PM
welcome and good luck:thumbsup:

Dominus
03-27-2005, 12:31 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1111930300_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1111930300_large.jpg)

hello ppl, this is the first time i enter a CGtalk challange, i hope i can make it to the end :)
here is a first sketch... smeagol/gollum with the one ring. i know it`s not very original, but here is my fisrt thought. i`ll concentrate on the feeling.

Dominus
03-29-2005, 10:06 AM
damn, now i`ve read the FAQ, it sais that at least one character must be 100% human... too bad smeagol is a hobbit :(
must think of something else.. :D

Ilikesoup
03-29-2005, 01:34 PM
Also, you can't use existing characters--they must be original. Nice sketch, though. Good luck in the challenge!

Dominus
03-31-2005, 09:31 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1112265082_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1112265082_large.jpg)

ok dudes, i was planning to do the count Dracula and his servand Igor, but then again, those two characters already exist... so, from sketch to sketch i arrived at this stage: a steampunk-like warlock and his servant.
here is an ink sketch... more coming soon, feedback will be apreciated!

Tranchefeux
03-31-2005, 10:36 AM
Hi,
Concept and interesting sketch, I await duty, good luck more.

taz23
03-31-2005, 11:08 AM
Olaa, super skitza! Astept sa vad si restul! Good luck!

Koekebakker
03-31-2005, 11:16 AM
Very nice sketches. Impressive style.
Good luck. :)

peterpop88
03-31-2005, 11:27 AM
man, nice sketch... even with just the sketch I can already see the colours, and feel the icy cold. Look forward to seeing the next steps... good luck (not that you'll need it)

VladPascanu
03-31-2005, 11:38 AM
multa bafta si inspiratie :thumbsup:

teknotek83
03-31-2005, 11:39 AM
Really nice drawing. Can't wait to see where you take this one. Good luck!

NOOB!
03-31-2005, 11:59 AM
yeh ur drawing is great!

Slav
03-31-2005, 01:35 PM
hey there... welcome to the challange. good luck and i must say great sketches so far. but MORE MORE MORE!!! :D

slav.

Velinov
04-01-2005, 02:59 PM
Hi man. You have done amayzing work on the line art. I like your characters and concept too.
If you make colors to earn this line art the final resold could be one of the tops in the
challange!!! I mean it!



http://farfolina.pochta.ru/death.jpg (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=221933)

Dominus
04-01-2005, 07:31 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1112387480_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1112387480_large.jpg)

here is an earlier stage of the sketch..

@Tranchefeux - thanx, i like u`r art too ;)
@taz23 - merci mestere, esti printre cei mai tari, respect! ;)
@koekebakker - thanx!
@peterpop88 - icy cold is THE word! :)
@bombeu - merci man, si tie la fel la 3D!
@teknotek - i`m gonna take it far
@noob! - thanx!
@slav - more is on the way! :)
@velinov - wow, thanx man, but there is just an ink-sketch, the line art is on the way.

Slav
04-01-2005, 08:01 PM
just a bit of a crit quick, the boys face looks wonky kind of warped.

Cerebr4l
04-01-2005, 08:02 PM
Wow, looking great so far! :thumbsup:

Dominus
04-01-2005, 08:16 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1112390212_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1112390212_large.jpg)

ok, here is a little sketch update with the background story:
The big guy over there is Leonard (or just Leo), an alchemist of sorts.. the little fellow, Garrett, is a thief, a biginner of course, because he was cought by Leo while he was pickpocketing him.. Leonard had to do an importand travel far away, and as punishment for the little taffer he takes Garrett to carry his things while traveling the Coldplanes...

oh well, the line art is next, i think :)

Mythmaker
04-01-2005, 09:06 PM
Nice bit of of sketching there - look forward to seeing it evolve. The story is good too :)

Dominus
04-01-2005, 11:12 PM
thanx mythmaker!

i`m looking forward for critics and sugestions! i want to take the next step - lineart, and i need everything to look good. :deal:

dioxide
04-01-2005, 11:17 PM
How do you do that line art? It seems really difficult to trace all that using a mouse.

As far as the picture goes, i really like the characters, its nicley done as well. Can't wait for the color.

Dominus
04-02-2005, 08:17 AM
hello dioxide, that is a line art sketch, to be more specific, the true line art is on its way!:twisted:

am7
04-02-2005, 01:31 PM
AWESOME! I've already subscribed to this thread! Can't wait to see some color WIP's :)

Charlee
04-02-2005, 04:03 PM
Hello Dominus, good work till now:)

I like it a lot, as we talked already through messenger, I just try to explain you some problems I can see in concept, a little bit the hands, the head of the servant, the bodys in general, but........I thought, mabe I can help ya much easier with a rough sketch. Understanding the structure of the concept was not so easy, but I hope the boy looks now more childish, about 14teen years old.
Cya:)
here the link to the sketch:
http://www.ericdesideriu.com/Pics/dominusmasterservant.gif

Neozoom
04-02-2005, 04:28 PM
Sorry charlee... But in my opignion is version of the drawing (the original one) is better...

nice sketch man , I love the style of the master^^

great

Dominus
04-03-2005, 09:10 AM
@ am7 - thanx, can`t wait to see myself what the color will do :D
@ Charlee - thanx a lot for the tips and the drawing! undestood!:thumbsup:
@ Neozoom - charlee did nothing but some rough sketch there, just to show me some things! i'm glad you like the master too ;)

Dominus
04-03-2005, 08:21 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1112559706_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1112559706_large.jpg)

i just finished the lineart (while listening some albums on Nine Inch Nails), and here it is!
the color wips are next... there will be the tough part :)

i want to thank everyone who posted here, i'm expecting further feedback!

( PS - Nine Inch Nails ruzl! :D )

Dominus
04-04-2005, 09:21 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1112606479_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1112606479_large.jpg)

hello again, i think i`ll do another lineart.. with better characters.. i i'll have time.
here is a little color wip i did last nigh. 20 min of play :)

Arc80
04-04-2005, 09:36 AM
very nice sketch dude. i'm really loving the style and the sketchiness of it. The details are nice and it is not distracting to the eyes. I'll keep checking your thread. Goodluck.

Cheers,
Archie
My master & servant entry (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=224331)

goktugg
04-04-2005, 09:41 AM
so DYNAMIC
...very well sketchs,i think.beautiful characters:thumbsup:
wow!:thumbsup: good luck! i'm looking forward your next step:)

jowens
04-04-2005, 10:26 AM
I really like the character design of the master, very cool :)

kornel
04-04-2005, 03:18 PM
Great style, and good character... congrats!

-keep on posting!

cheers: KornÚl

AirbORn
04-04-2005, 05:03 PM
Great composition! Lots of movment in this as well as environment and mood! The colour looks great so far. I look forward to seeing more!

Dominus
04-05-2005, 10:05 AM
Arc80, goktug, jowens, kornel, AirbORn - thank you all for posting and for the kind words :)

i have a little problem with my monitor, i think i'll post something in the color section in a week or so...
:shrug:

OrO
04-09-2005, 06:03 PM
mama..dar toti desenati super! eu sunt mai incepator...dar dornic sa invatz.....superb..good luck!

Dominus
04-20-2005, 09:09 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1113988158_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1113988158_large.jpg)

k, sorry for the big break that i took, i had some problems with my PC... and tablet. so i decided to start the color work with my mouse instead of the tablet

Dominus
04-20-2005, 09:37 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1113989828_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1113989828_large.jpg)

and here is a little update... still done with the mouse. i expect some feedback... what color shoud be the sky?

artjunkie
04-20-2005, 10:24 AM
Great character designs and lovely line work! Brilliant sketches...

I can't believe you're doing this with a MOUSE?!! :eek: Dude, you're doing an awesome job, regardless. Great start on the colours too.

Keep going... I'm looking forward to seeing more!

Cheers!

the-mighty-m
04-20-2005, 10:35 AM
I like your linework, your use of colour works well with it!

nebezial
04-20-2005, 11:34 AM
great style, purple on the lower portion of the sky, and clouds above..u uu and a planet ... and...going nuts , sorry, it just makes me wanna paint a planet behind them ,i mean look at that sky, it is so roomy ant the guy does look like like a hardcore space adventurer:D

authentic
04-20-2005, 01:22 PM
Very strong picture. I like it. The only things to crits, but it's wip, is that colors of master and servant are, for the moment, too near. I think that the master could have his shadow on the servant so that we differences the 2 with more accuracy. Moreover it grows the idea of domination.

Want to see the next. :thumbsup:

Muttonhead
04-20-2005, 01:27 PM
I am impressed that this is mouse-work! Nice stuff. I would actually keep the sky color the same as it is now, unless whatever color you choose you go subtle with it.

The characetr standing behind the main character seems a bit off balance. You might want to try to throw his/her left leg out a bit for support. Keep it going!

-Sean

Arc80
04-20-2005, 06:49 PM
Dude, looking really nice. I dig the colour choice. This somewhat reminds me of Claire Wendling style when she does her comic books. It has a similar feeling to it. VERY NICE piece and can't wait to see more updates.

cheers

WimH
04-20-2005, 07:18 PM
Reall y nice man really nice. IfI make some comments... The older man is really greta but the face of the younger guy's face is not that karakterfull., if you now what I mean. But really nice

keep goiing.

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=224025 (http://http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=224025)

Dominus
04-21-2005, 11:02 AM
10x u everyone for coments & crits! well, my tablet is back! :twisted:
and yes, i think i`ll change the child's face and cloths color... still not sure about the background.. anyway the planet ideea is good! :thumbsup:
i'm really busy these days but i hope i'll post some updates soon.

Freiyer
04-21-2005, 11:12 AM
Really great style, it seems very promising, definitly submiting on this one ^^

Dominus
05-16-2005, 12:10 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1116245446_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1116245446_large.jpg)

this is the final coloring image, i`m in such a hyrry, damn! tommorow i`ll post the final image, and upload the crap, hopefully :P

what do u think of the artwork at this stage?

authentic
05-16-2005, 12:49 PM
Well I like it. Great style. ood expression. I think the little boy is a little lost in all this brown color but it goes with the fact to be the servant so it's ok. So my only crit would be for the sky who seems to have a paint style very different that the character.
Great job :thumbsup:

Dominus
05-16-2005, 12:59 PM
thanx for the crits authentic! u`re so right, the face of the kid is too dark... and about the sky, belive me, i`ve tried so many variants.. this is the only one i`m somewhat happy with, and sadly there is no time left for another... :shrug:
i`ll try to update tomrrow, thanx again!

dloots
05-16-2005, 02:01 PM
This image is one of my favourites. The only thing I can mentions is that the sky and land can maybe use a bit more contrast, but other than that an awesoe image.

Good luck

Dominus
05-17-2005, 08:05 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1116317142_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6737/6737_1116317142_large.jpg)

ok guys, here is the final image, thanx everyone who gave me crits and encouraged me... good luck to everyone!

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