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franckkobolt
03-27-2005, 08:33 AM
franck chipouka has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6729)

Latest Update: Final Image: Master hunter
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116370832_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116370832_large.jpg)

Here is the final image, I will not torture these poor dogs anymore, I'm thinking about making "the revenge of the dogs".Strange mood and anger against the master, that's what I wanted to generate. I wanted this image to a little disturbing too.I hope i didn't made an abusive use of blood.

Thanks to all for your comments, these were usefull. Good luck to all !

Franck Kobolt

franckkobolt
05-10-2005, 11:12 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115766745_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115766745_large.jpg)

My idea is to represent a hunter with his dogs.I think he must be fat with a proud expression and the dogs exactly the opposite. here is a study for the master "hunter".

franckkobolt
05-10-2005, 11:18 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115767098_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115767098_large.jpg)

Here is a study (trying to get his attitude when eating) and some faces researches, ( I will try more of them )

franckkobolt
05-10-2005, 11:28 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115767690_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115767690_large.jpg)

Here are the servants sketches, the dogs in the down image are injured, sick and hungry to death, i know this is sensitive subject but i must try this option to make the image strong.I will post later other sketches with many options to get the right attitude.

franckkobolt
05-10-2005, 11:32 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115767933_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115767933_large.jpg)

"Master hunter" posing, ( this is not a purpose for the final conposition, i am just trying everything i have in mind to cretae the final character )

Arc80
05-11-2005, 03:23 AM
Cool concept. I like the human character a lot and very good sketches. Now hurry up and paint, becasue there are 7 days left, hehehe.

cheers bro and goodluck

franckkobolt
05-11-2005, 11:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115853939_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115853939_large.jpg)

here is the line art sketchbase

franckkobolt
05-11-2005, 11:31 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115854285_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115854285_large.jpg)

here is a version with more details, im still not satisfied with th dogs on the left, it seems that i have a perspective problem and also the poses do not fit the composition i will post another one tomorrow with all the characters represented.

franckkobolt
05-12-2005, 12:49 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115902140_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115902140_large.jpg)

the lineart is almost finished, I think the dogs on the left are better. I will not add to much details in the trees at this stage. I am actually adding the lights and shadows before colouring, I will try to post an advanced b&w version this afternoon and a first colouring ambience also.

Jezzarts
05-12-2005, 12:52 PM
Wow, great line art.. better get mooovin!

franckkobolt
05-12-2005, 02:46 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115909198_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115909198_large.jpg)

the final lineart with shadows and ambient light.

franckkobolt
05-12-2005, 10:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115936737_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115936737_large.jpg)

first colouring step, not too much details at this stage, just trying to set the light and overall hue. I want to get an "old painting feeling".

franckkobolt
05-12-2005, 10:29 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115936994_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115936994_large.jpg)

the hunter face closeup so you can see how it goes.

paperclip
05-12-2005, 10:53 PM
I'm surprised you haven't had more replies, this is very funky!! Great colors and technique, fabuleux!

:thumbsup:
theresa

franckkobolt
05-13-2005, 02:51 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115995913_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1115995913_large.jpg)

i am working on the forest, the leaves will be a big part to accomplish, i think the first colouring process will be finished tomorrow evening.then i will add the details.

THECLYKE
05-13-2005, 03:06 PM
WATCH OUT FOR ANIMAL RIGHTS ACTIVISTS....LOL.....THE MOOD IS SINISTER....AWSOME JOB MY FRIEND.....KEEP IT UP






HERES A LINK TO MY M&S CREATION
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?postid=2276549#post2276549 (showthread.php?postid=2276549#post2276549)

franckkobolt
05-14-2005, 04:56 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116089758_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116089758_large.jpg)

still wip colouring, the trees and leaves are not yet finished (this will be the longest part to accomplish) I think this step will be over tonight.Then i will work details and improve the animal's fur, the forest and general lightning.

franckkobolt
05-15-2005, 12:22 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116116562_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116116562_large.jpg)

first colouring step is almost finished, still the ground to render. Tomorrow i think i can go on to the next step and finish the animals, then the final colouring.I need some sleep.

arLutiK
05-15-2005, 08:37 AM
HAHAHAHAH! I love it, add up a moustache and you have my girlfriend's dad, great work.

kerembeyit
05-15-2005, 09:03 AM
Very nice! Maybe it's just my monitor but the boar is hard to see, maybe a little bit of highlight would solve the issue. Good luck.

franckkobolt
05-15-2005, 01:59 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116165573_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116165573_large.jpg)

At last, this step is over, all the elements are coloured and the textures seem to work pretty well.Now everything needs to be improved and especially the animals, the cans, the hunter face, the leaves on the right and a lot of litlle things that seem insignifiant but essentials.

franckkobolt
05-15-2005, 02:09 PM
Thank you all for your comments, i entered the challenge very late so i do not have enough time to post crtiques on forums. You are aboslutely right about the boar, in fact the animals are not finished , I need to improve lightning and fur to get a better presence and expression on the dog "faces". Thanks again.

franck.

franckkobolt
05-16-2005, 12:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116203339_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116203339_large.jpg)

I have corrected the boar teeth, add some blood and finished the dogs.The ground needs more dirt and details (maybe grass) and the background leaves on the right and left still need some work.

daadaa
05-16-2005, 12:34 AM
hi, i really like your cartoony approach to this and u got the fat man just right :thumbsup: tho one thing that bugs me is that the dogs seem to have aload of wounds... while there is a lack of on the bore... but that nothing much... will be w8ing to see more ! :D

jeromoo
05-16-2005, 02:57 AM
What a bad man he is. I wanna turn the shotgun back on himself!! hehe.. that means you have effectively convey the meanness of the hunter/master.

Since there are several spent bullets on the ground, what about putting some bullet wounds on the boar? Makes more sense about how it died.

Great work, franck kobolt!

Kraull
05-16-2005, 03:28 AM
Great character you've created here!! I don't see what you say is not finished yet, but if your like me, the more time you pass on a work, and the more details seem to bug us... Good for the final sprint! :)

TheFirstAngel
05-16-2005, 03:33 AM
lol, even thought i hate 99,9% of all hunters from the bottom of my heart, your piece is fun and cool and i like your style. Keep it up, your piece rocks!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

franckkobolt
05-16-2005, 02:24 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116253476_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116253476_large.jpg)

Here we are, the final image should look like this but i am sure that when i'll be back tonight i will see many things to improve.

franckkobolt
05-16-2005, 10:13 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116281604_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116281604_large.jpg)

there are a few changes and improvments, I think im close to the final, if tomorrow morning waking up, I do not see anything to correct I will post the tiff image.

yznah
05-16-2005, 10:23 PM
haha this is insane i like this one^^
the mood of this pic is really disturbing

and the painting of the leaves is crazy too :p

franckkobolt
05-17-2005, 11:00 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116370832_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6729/6729_1116370832_large.jpg)

Here is the final image, I will not torture these poor dogs anymore, I'm thinking about making "the revenge of the dogs".Strange mood and anger against the master, that's what I wanted to generate. I wanted this image to be a little disturbing too. I hope i didn't made an abusive use of blood.

Thanks to all for your comments, these were usefull. Good luck to all !

Franck Kobolt

TeemuR
05-17-2005, 11:32 PM
Hehe! Looks wicked! :D but I just don't get it, why the dogs are in such a bad condition?
Btw. Very nice rendering and good luck! :)

ms@zx
05-31-2005, 03:18 AM
very good and congrates to u mate.incredible overall rendering,i kinda like the light from the background,lights up everything just fine!good luck:thumbsup:

K. Scott Gant
05-31-2005, 08:06 AM
I really enjoyed this piece. You really captured the arrogance of the Master as he stands there, having really done nothing other than let his dogs suffer to bring down the boar. I also like that smug grin on his fat face. (yes, I think you should make a follow-up where the dogs get their revenge...hehe).

Great work!

xric7
06-06-2005, 04:08 AM
...incredible overall rendering,i kinda like the light from the background,lights up everything just fine!good luck
yeah..i agree with ms@zx :deal: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: .
great work u did here.love ur comp and the facial expression of ur caracters a lot.
congratulation.good luck in judging.cheers.:bounce: :buttrock:

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