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eupee
03-27-2005, 09:08 AM
Simon Chataway has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6728)

Latest Update: Coloring WIP: backgroundupdate
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112886778_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112886778_large.jpg)

neatening up background and other bits. still trying to keep it bold and simple... il add light detail soon, and keeep working on the picture as a whole, i detail things when i get to them.

eupee
03-27-2005, 09:15 AM
Man, theres already some crazy WIP for this challenge, its so inspiring... Im spewing, my machinflesh entry would have suited this challenge quite well: http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=131355&page=5

Im going to try a bolder approach to this challenge... good Luck everyone!

eupee
03-27-2005, 09:21 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1111915289_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1111915289_large.jpg)

because of the shorter length of this challenge and also other things that keep me busy, im not going to try many different concepts... i might stick with this... Basically its a school quadrangle setting with a good looking young teacher talking to a few young students. Theres a boy behind her whos BAD consience takes over with his sling shot and aiming directly at the teachers bum. The Bad consience is the master conroling his servant, the boy.

W-I-L
03-27-2005, 11:01 AM
thats great. like the comedy . . .Ithink that teacher deserves it though for weraing what she is wearing...this could be really good. keep bushing it..lets see some compositions.

eupee
03-28-2005, 08:33 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1111998815_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1111998815_large.jpg)

Im opting for the one on the left. What does anyone think... But i kinda want it outside... I DONT KNOW!!!

eupee
03-28-2005, 12:34 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112013244_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112013244_large.jpg)

trying to add some colour, still trying to decide if i should have the scene outside...

eupee
03-29-2005, 02:29 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112106546_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112106546_large.jpg)

a few sketches of what the boy will look like.. not sure which one yet, all pretty similar. Any thoughts??

eupee
03-30-2005, 02:32 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112193176_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112193176_large.jpg)

Character design for the boy...

digiscape
03-30-2005, 02:43 PM
wow great artwork so far. that kids cool and i can see shes going to be hot too :) is the kid going to have a catpult in his pocket? maybe with one hand fighting the other hand, from getting it out of his pocket?
i like the scene outside but with the teacher with the blue skirt :)

eupee
03-30-2005, 04:30 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112200229_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112200229_large.jpg)

heres the teacher in all its roughness... im trying to figure out the base colours for her clothes and that... tell me what you think!

Squibbit
03-30-2005, 04:33 PM
nice stuff ! man, that boy looks he's suffered some!

eupee
03-31-2005, 01:15 AM
yeah, his consience is ripping out of his body so i guess hes suffering a great amount of trauma :p thanks Squibbit! I love your concepts, youve got a crazy imagination.

Cheers digiscape, his bad consience is going to be armed with the catapult, i originally was going to have him fighting for it with the boy himself but didnt.

eupee
04-01-2005, 08:57 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112345873_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112345873_large.jpg)

I gues you could call this line are WIP, im kind of putting everything in its place, then gradually refining it and detailing it...

eupee
04-01-2005, 10:06 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112349985_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112349985_large.jpg)

cranking it out. Blocked in an outdoor background, I want to change the style of the teacher to suit the other characters. Theres going to be a good conciense as well, and im gonna try and make it more obvious that they ARE his little conciense characters controlling him(the boy)... if that makes sense.. any ideas?

NOOB!
04-01-2005, 11:10 AM
looks gud to me!

element5
04-01-2005, 12:12 PM
cranking it out. Blocked in an outdoor background, I want to change the style of the teacher to suit the other characters. Theres going to be a good conciense as well, and im gonna try and make it more obvious that they ARE his little conciense characters controlling him(the boy)... if that makes sense.. any ideas?

Hiya Mr eupee :)

Great idea with the conciense charactors. Maybe there evil conciense could have a redish glow and the good conciense could have a blueish glow. They could also be slightly transparent. The evil one pose looks great and maybe the good one could be jumping up on his back trying to stop the bad one....just some thoughts. Wish I had teachers that looked like that when I was at school...hehe

GO ADELAIDE!! lol

eupee
04-01-2005, 12:41 PM
hah, yeah same... i only finished school a few years ago... yeah i was thinking about the tranparency for the consience, but that glow sounds good, i was going to make blur lines coming out of the boy, but we will see.. thanks element, you got good ideas.

nebezial
04-01-2005, 01:02 PM
great work, only in the last sketch i thought that it was another boy on his head, earlier ones defined the concept more clearly:thumbsup:

THE Wizard
04-01-2005, 02:48 PM
Hmm i like this idea- funny and great at the same time. Thou you should put smaller horns onto the devil-bys forhead...


MY MASTER & SERVANT 2d (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=225858)

eupee
04-03-2005, 05:01 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112544101_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112544101_large.jpg)

ive added some horns, tail and a good consience. subtle changes here and there, slowly cleaning up the whole piece as i go along... i might start working on the background then creating some more prominant highlights and shadows. I was toying with the idea of the devil having a shiethed pitch fork and the good consience having wings, but il see about that. Im not sure if its obvious enough that the characters are his consience and i think the attempt to make the good consience midway coming out the boys body has failed.

NOOB!
04-03-2005, 05:26 PM
i wud like to grab it rather than...

anyway,great piece,looking foward to more!

eupee
04-04-2005, 05:51 PM
ha, cheers. thanks guys for opinions, im working on the background now.

eupee
04-07-2005, 04:12 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112886778_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6728/6728_1112886778_large.jpg)

neatening up background and other bits. still trying to keep it bold and simple... il add light detail soon, and keeep working on the picture as a whole, i detail things when i get to them.

frak3
04-07-2005, 05:53 PM
I love the whole idea about being master and servant to your self. WONDERFUL!
But, I dont mean to be crude, but the brick wall makes an interesting tangent with the guys "area". Even the color of the bricks imply that. And whole situation with the pretty lady.

It's an easy fix, and I love the concept.

AlyFell
04-07-2005, 11:40 PM
Heh heh! This is fun! The devil and angel inside of you thing is an excellent idea for this challenge theme. One idea... what is she doing? She looks like she's almost waiting for the attack. Perhaps a magazine or a textbook on the table in front of her... And I agree with frak3 :) Perhaps change the colour of the bricks between the boy and the teacher! Lol!

eupee
04-10-2005, 11:15 AM
Haha, yeah i see that now.. i think i might change that now. thanks heaps frak3.

Cheers Poshspice, im definately taking pointers from you about drawing chicks man, your the king at it! Im going to put something there for the teacher to look at, but not sure what yeat, origially she was bending over to talk to other kids, but the composition was all messed.

Thanks guys, il update soon.

NOOB!
04-10-2005, 11:19 AM
haha oh man,great piece,looking foward to the details.



oh and thanks for joining my forum too.:thumbsup:

xric7
04-29-2005, 04:40 PM
wow..i love this cool idea.:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
the color looking great.and i will back to see how the bricks change.lol
good luck.

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