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manjang
03-27-2005, 02:19 AM
Paiboon Jirapradupwong has entered the Master and Servant 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6717)

Latest Update: Modeling: bot head
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1116192740_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1116192740_large.jpg)

Hi very one,this is my very late update,maybe I can't send work ontime now,but I'll keep this work going,next time I'll do more faster and faster,Thank every one and every comments,Goodluck all of you :-)

manjang
03-31-2005, 07:32 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1112297550_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1112297550_large.jpg)

Hello everyone. This is my first rough sketch. Concept: " I got some idea from matrix show about the end of technology that human try to do for make everything for them,to be the perfect slave,but human can't control it,too hitech,too intelligent and they want more power like a human brain,human emotion to make them more perfect machine "
Now I try to thinking more concept but I afraid I can't send work on time.
Wait for everybody comments. Thanks and goodluck. Sorry for my every bad English

manjang
04-04-2005, 06:12 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1112634758_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1112634758_large.jpg)

more sketch about spider robot, ...I must do model nowwwwww!!!!!

overcontrast
04-04-2005, 09:27 PM
hey nice concepts man.. looks good, but i think it dosent potrays the Master and Servant relationship that much, but its just me, dont take my words for granted... anyway c ya soon and best of luck :thumbsup:

manjang
04-05-2005, 08:43 PM
Thank for my fist comment,Yes I'm a little worry about relationship,but I try to think new compose for show a little clear concept,to make human charactor look more suffer more expression.

Deadlyforce
04-06-2005, 09:14 AM
Great concept, as for the relationship you should give the spider an expression and an attitude...

Good luck !
:thumbsup:

NEWT#
04-06-2005, 10:08 AM
Nice concept, should make powerfull image. May I suggest someting else for the "cockpit" instead of that glass cylinder? It doesnt quite fit. No ofence.

splotch
04-06-2005, 11:00 AM
Magnificent manjang,

i like your sketch nice idea and well done
wish you the best

keep it up

manjang
04-06-2005, 11:19 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1112782788_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1112782788_large.jpg)

I try to make new sketch to make work more powerful and more clear. This is my new sketch.....oh the time is running short
can I finish ontime......

porla113
04-06-2005, 12:36 PM
do it! you can do it. your concept is so cool:thumbsup: .waiting for 3d

MDN67
04-06-2005, 01:18 PM
i like the concept sketch if you choice this, i wait the first modeling:thumbsup:

rynomyte
04-06-2005, 02:20 PM
Great concept! I think the new direction is the way to go...can't wait to see the model. Keep it up!


My Master and Servant entry:

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=224703&goto=newpost

skunk184
04-06-2005, 03:14 PM
sawasdee kub, Like the new concept much more ...

chok dee kub

Craig

monsitj
04-06-2005, 03:14 PM
Hey ! how are you? I think now imagimax don't have a lot of work?? so you and por come to challenge?? heheheheh watch your back!! heheh
your latest post is looking good , but the composition look flat , maybe you can look at more perspective angle , i mean now it's too front , maybe you can modify it in 3d , good luck

grooshka
04-06-2005, 06:28 PM
hello!
I like your concept and the pose of enslaved girl. :applause:
just begin modeling. I'm looking forward to see it. more updates!

manjang
04-09-2005, 09:16 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1113077768_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1113077768_large.jpg)

Just start doing women model,I'll try hard to finish all model on next week, Oh still have spider robot model with machanic detail!!! Thank so much for every comment

arLutiK
04-10-2005, 01:35 AM
Very nice modeling you got there, can't wait to see that mechanical spider. Great work :thumbsup:

Deadlyforce
04-10-2005, 09:45 AM
Looking good so far !
Keep it up ! :thumbsup:

manjang
04-11-2005, 09:40 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1113252016_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1113252016_large.jpg)

Just a little update for women face, a lot of thing to do.....

monsitj
04-12-2005, 02:27 AM
Hi ! mann! nice sss , do u use lightwave or maya ? great modeling!

manjang
04-12-2005, 02:45 AM
hee hee Thanks for your attention Monsit:D แว๊ก พิมพ์ไทยแล้วกัง โมเดลใช้โมโดทำีพี่ เร็นในมายาเหมียนเิดิม lwเข้าหม้อไปหมดแล้น ฮือๆจะไม่ทันแล้วเหลืออีกเพียบเลย:sad:

manjang
04-12-2005, 10:32 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1113341533_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1113341533_large.jpg)

update women body model

manjang
04-14-2005, 11:59 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1113476380_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1113476380_large.jpg)

a little body model update

manjang
04-15-2005, 11:41 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1113604870_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1113604870_large.jpg)

finish body model,still have arm,hand,spider robot and BG.....

Maxko
04-15-2005, 11:48 PM
VERY NICE manjang. Nice modeling, I like it. Aaaaand.. this is shader or texture? Are you max user?

javaejderi
04-16-2005, 01:29 AM
Hi,
pro-done models really!!! But I think the ear is leaning to back a lot...And her stomach seems too thick for a female body to me...But if it's your choice, this is what you know more than me!!! Keep it up, pro!!!:thumbsup:

monsitj
04-16-2005, 02:50 AM
great model! man! nice sss!! it seem you are professional in woman's body na ! got reference from movie?? heheheh , happy songkarn and go back to work!

skunk184
04-16-2005, 03:36 AM
Sawasdee Krub, Happy Sonkran ..... Really nice model and the shader is nice too, but maybe it looks a little to waxy(same as candle) for skin?!

Looking foward to the spider model!....

Chok dee na krub

Farang Craig :)

Kanga
04-16-2005, 03:36 AM
Thats one really beautifull torso.
Like the bug concept :thumbsup: .

gra7
04-16-2005, 04:37 AM
man amazing model.. i love this.. and the textures..

can u pic up my msn to we talk a bit ? its xmaio@hotmail.com.. thnxx man.. c ya !
and best luck !

GlassSpider
04-16-2005, 07:29 AM
:thumbsup: Nice model Paiboon.I'm going to watch this thread and wait for your wip updates.


"Master and Servant Challenge Entry"
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=229871

tilite
04-16-2005, 08:59 AM
absolutly awesome model... fantastic textures too... it may be a lil late but im subscribing now

great work

manjang
04-16-2005, 12:18 PM
why u know about that movie monsit,do u want some? HEE HEE HEE :D So thanks for every comments I'll keep working!!

jddog
04-16-2005, 01:31 PM
:eek: amazing torso and head modelling, clean mesh and with a wonderful result (If i can add...sexy too ;) ) wow... congrats ! :applause:
jdd

Neeno
04-16-2005, 03:47 PM
:D hey there manjang.. this is great dude.. i particuarly love your concept i cant wait to see that spider modeled and without a doubt by seeing your body model its gonna look great.. your model is quiet clean and i cant see any problems with it.. great progress dude and good luck with your work furthermore.. :thumbsup:

aliasali
04-16-2005, 04:14 PM
Wow! very nice! sucha great skill u have in both modelling texturing and even shading! loved that body! its gonna be a great entry!
keep it up,mate!:thumbsup: am lookin forward to seein more of u!

manjang
04-16-2005, 09:27 PM
Thanks for every great comments :D

manjang
04-23-2005, 12:46 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1114213617_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1114213617_large.jpg)

almost finish about slave girl model,I try to test pose like final slave girl pose
mayb must adjust some muscle for look more natural,so far about final work....

goktugg
04-23-2005, 12:59 AM
your project is going excellent! very nice modelling...so much pretty modelling!
good luck`mate.i'm lookıng forward to see your next update.:)

tilite
04-23-2005, 09:26 AM
wow nice model... tiny thing... the belly button. looks to perfect and to circular. the muscles look a lil parcular.. an individual muscles they are excellently proportioned but combined they are a little off.. i think its just the lats(upper back) and delts (shoulders) that are a lil large. once u shrink them i can see y this wouldnt be a close to perfect model. im not going to comment on the breasts... eveyone always wants different things lol

great work:thumbsup:

grooshka
04-23-2005, 09:32 AM
nice model. only shoulders should be positioned closer to the head (especially her left shoulder) and u can revise muscles on the sides of the body below arms - they could be smaller. cheers! :thumbsup:

manjang
04-23-2005, 10:33 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1114248794_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1114248794_large.jpg)

a little fix for face model

monsitj
04-23-2005, 01:42 PM
yes man! nice update! do u have reference movie update?? maybe I have to check it out heheheh!!!

manjang
04-23-2005, 07:45 PM
yes monsit my ref movie always update, u sure u have enough hardisk space HEE HEE HEE:D
can i talk u sometime plaease me ur mobile number or email,yes we will talk about ref movie
i heart that u will come back to imagimax?

manikantkujur
04-23-2005, 08:16 PM
it's really going good .........I will be happy to see next update

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=225407

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=225407

sumawut
04-25-2005, 09:12 AM
:applause: sawasdee krub.
:bounce: very great model.:thumbsup: it cool. :thumbsup: good luck.:bounce:

manjang
04-27-2005, 10:47 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1114638460_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1114638460_large.jpg)

now I make low template for spider bot model for make hires version ,and test layout and slavegirl pose, not much time to do,but i try to do my best,so Thanks and welcome for every comments

Neeno
04-28-2005, 01:54 AM
hey there Paiboon.. dude i think honestly your doing a great job.. no one has replies to your last post so i will! :thumbsup: the models are coming along nicely.. i suggest though just one thing if you dont mind.. since the spider is very low poly you would want to add alot of detail in the textures.. so i was thinking since your spider characters have much the same features as a sentinel from matrix i think it would be a great idea to use a few images of sentinels from matrix to do your textures .... http://www.mwctoys.com/images/review_sentinel_1.jpg heres a link to a good jpg of one .. but then again its only my opinion.. see how you go.. i be back! ;)

manjang
04-28-2005, 04:38 AM
Thanks a lot neeno for ur sentinel pic:D like u think for spider bot I'll try to make detial like machine in matrix,complex detail and look scary....my work is very slow,I can do this challenge only at night till morning and must go to work....whatever I'll do my best!!:scream:

Neeno
04-28-2005, 04:43 AM
every word you said is good but the last line you said thats what im after!! Quote: "Whatever it is i'll do my best" <----- thats the main thing that you do your best... the sentinel is only for reference but the detail in the textures will do alot!! good on you!

and dont worry i know time is hard when you balancing things on the side..

parinya pattarajumnong
04-30-2005, 03:35 PM
i like ur concept,thanks for visited to me.
now,i'm study in BANGKOK UNIVERSITY.And i would like to know where r u now?
study or working? Do u play msn? Can u tell me about ur e-mail? i want to aks about cg and work. THANK YOU.
this my e-mail :P_baki_s@hotmail.com

manjang
04-30-2005, 11:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1114899909_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1114899909_large.jpg)

Hi,now I try to do Spiderbot model,but it very hard if no the clear sketch of detail robot,then i back to sketch again to make it more easy,Time still have only 18 days,I afraid I can't fin ontime,but i'll try super very hard;-] Thanks for every comments it can drive me to Fin work

monsitj
05-01-2005, 04:04 AM
้ำ้ำ้ำำ้heee! nice update man! good idea to sketch first before modeling, it will reduce your modeling time tremendously!, and yes , do your best , at least you will get your new portfolio, ! see ya soon

keko
05-03-2005, 07:03 AM
sawasdee krub. Really nice model !. I like ur concept and texture is very awesome. Looking forward to see next update krub. Best of luck!

wuxi_dakar
05-06-2005, 02:42 AM
manjang,

yeah,if you gonna do a very detailed one, you better hurry.
you can do it:)

nekopom
05-07-2005, 10:45 AM
So good

Keep it on

Wait for your finished work

manjang
05-15-2005, 10:32 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1116192740_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6717/6717_1116192740_large.jpg)

Hi very one,this is my very late update,maybe I can't send work ontime now,but I'll keep this work going,next time I'll do more faster and faster,Thank every one and every comments,Goodluck all of you :-)

CHAMPWY
05-16-2005, 06:15 PM
Nice concept and nice model. Hope to see a texture version soon. Best luck to you. :thumbsup:

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