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Miyagi
03-26-2005, 06:16 PM
Rogério Masao Calmon Miyagi has entered the Master and Servant 3D.

Challenge Page (http://cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6696)

Latest Update: Final Image: Final!
http://cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1116812407_medium.jpg (http://cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1116812407_large.jpg)

My concept idea comes from what I think is the most commun relationship example between master and servant, either implitly or explicitly it could be seen everywhere,it can drives ones mind compressed to our oldest parent.The most primitive motive,it can make men frequently behaves unconventionally and some times even submissively.Through some patetic creatures characters representing us,lust men and a beatiful woman with all their well managed power,I'm trying to depict this eternal but nothing boring dependence from men to women that I title "Servants Of the Master Curves".

Miyagi
03-26-2005, 07:13 PM
I'm Brazilian 25, Accidentally chinese food cook that makes 3d in spare nights http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon7.gif.

My concept idea comes from what I think is the most common relationship example between master and servants, either implicitly or explicitly could be seen everywhere , it can drives ones mind compressed to our oldest parent. The most primitive motive, It can make men frequently behaves unconventionaly and some time even submissively and through some patetic creatures characters representing us, lust men, and a beautiful,sex and realistic (well, I will try it :) ) deity with all their well managed power, I'll try to depict this eternal but nothing boring dependence from men to women that I titled "Servants Of the Master Curves".
I'll be gratefull if you help me with my (WIP) english too.http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon7.gif) You know, I'm learning it through Maya docs http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon7.gif

Although i've been already working hard in this contest model, I did miss the rule part that say something like -you must post your working in progress-. Unfortunately, though sketches was the thing I most spent time work on, I actually don't have a scanner so I couldin't post my sketches for a while. Fortunately I've been saving my work in several files and in different stage. In fact I'm not really faraway in my project, So I'll start by post my master character wareframe.

The best meal is the one made with love http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon7.gif

Miyagi
03-26-2005, 08:29 PM
Just to speed up this page

][ndy
03-27-2005, 11:30 PM
Hello,

it looks like a very promising start! However it is hard to judge from an unsmoothed version of the mesh. But I guess you have the talend to master your challenge!

Miyagi
03-27-2005, 11:56 PM
Hey, How are you?

Thanks, for the post. I need to be honest, I didn't post a smooth version yet, because it still looks really strange in this state, but I'm working hard on it and I hope put it sooner.

tdawg217
03-28-2005, 01:04 AM
well, your modelling looks clean, but the concept of your images is still a little unclear, what is the relationship going to be be? who is it whos the master? servant? please clarify a little


i hope you can also get you concept sketches online soon.

good luck :thumbsup:

][ndy
03-28-2005, 10:17 AM
I'am fine, thanks!

Just post a smoothed version, I think the folks around will help you and tell you why it looks so strange...

btw, I could use some chinese recipes :D

Miyagi
03-29-2005, 05:48 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1112122119_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1112122119_large.jpg)

Well I didn\\\'t see nothing about digital sketch. I hope this is Ok for the contest.

Miyagi
03-29-2005, 06:03 PM
:thumbsup: "][ndy" I want my scketch to be the target for a while. But I promise you don't be so vain again, And I will be putting all the progress :thumbsup: , see you!!!
About the recipes, anything:) !!!

Miyagi
03-30-2005, 12:14 PM
tdawg217 , I think it's hardest to model my cahracter in it's final pose , so I'll model it firstly in the standard bind pose > make a simple joint structure > bind it and make a quick skin weight > pose it > bake the pose > and make the final tweaks. that's why you don't find the relationship.http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon7.gif

Miyagi
04-02-2005, 06:51 PM
just to speed up this page.:shrug:

Micro26
04-02-2005, 07:00 PM
great character :thumbsup:
only thing i would correct would be the arms joint
keep it up:)

Miyagi
04-02-2005, 07:04 PM
[QUOTE=Miyagi]http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1112471479_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1112471479_large.jpg)

I'll stop modeling my Master characters source by now, I'll be doing a simple joint structure to bind and position it on theirs final position by now.
The reason I take care about my characters backside...it's because I like it!!! :eek: Well this isn't lie at all, but the really reason it's because I decided to put two more master characters on the foreground altar-like. I'll be putting a new sketch about this and another changes sooner.

smaddl
04-02-2005, 07:39 PM
well done model :thumbsup: the back of her thigh looks flat but i guess it's the light.

DaddyMack
04-02-2005, 08:03 PM
A humble bow and greetings Mr Miyagi, some fine modelling skills you have there good sir.
I've the feeling that this is going to evolve into a really amazing piece, I'll definitely be hanging around to watch your progress. Good Luck!

gpepper
04-02-2005, 08:08 PM
She IS really nice !

Miyagi
04-02-2005, 09:49 PM
Smaddl, I think you right, maybe it could be because the shader too, anyhow I can impruve that when I get their's final position in place.

gra7
04-09-2005, 08:16 PM
hey miyagi.. great concept and modeling.. thnks for suport my topic.. hehe
best luck for u.. pega meu msn ae .. xmaio@hotmail.com
c ya !

Smaw
04-09-2005, 09:55 PM
I like your character. I especially like her proportions. If there's one area I could point out, her arm joints need a bit more definition. Good luck to ya :)

Squibbit
04-09-2005, 10:36 PM
i think the lung area looks oversized (not boobs, the lungz)

dcmoutinho
04-09-2005, 11:59 PM
amazing modeling man...

Wandddo
04-10-2005, 02:10 AM
Hi Miagy! Finally I found your thread hehehe!:) Great start friend! I'm liking the proportions in this model, and she is very beautiful too... You are a great modeler man!:thumbsup: I'll be accompanying your work! Good lucky mate! Manda v aí cara!:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
Abração

Miyagi
04-15-2005, 06:06 AM
DaddyMack: thanks, I'm glad you like it:thumbsup:

gpepper: thanks!

Mr Micro26: thanks mate!

gra7: thanks, best luck to you too ...c ya:thumbsup:

Smaw: thanks for crit:thumbsup: ,You know it seems endless man...everytime I get my eyes on it I get something to improve, so I'll tweak things when I get it on its final position.

Squibbit: thanks, I think you right, I'll correct that:thumbsup: .

dcmoutinho: thanks, I'm glad you like it.

Wandddo: thanks mate, I'm already accompanyng your work,you dark man:twisted: .

guys keep coming, and any crit are welcome:thumbsup:

Miyagi
04-15-2005, 06:32 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1113546760_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1113546760_large.jpg)

My master character on diferent modes.
I'm making some shader and texture tests by now...any crit are welcome.

DaddyMack
04-15-2005, 07:42 AM
Wow Mr Miyagi, she's purdy...Especially her lips and eye shapes:thumbsup: The lie of her nose may benefit from just a slight dip before the tip...Great work:thumbsup: Keep it coming

Virtuoso
04-15-2005, 08:57 AM
Hi calmon........well your doing a real nice job here....she looks real pretty.....Nice features...and well done execution wise.....I'll be watching for more,and will see you then.keep up the real nice work here......Best to you.....have fun.....:arteest:

Versiden
04-15-2005, 09:45 AM
excellent texturing mate... the skin looks nice and soft.

DimitrisLiatsos
04-15-2005, 09:51 AM
Very nice work mate and clean too...:thumbsup:

rattlesnake
04-15-2005, 09:52 AM
hey lovely modeling...i really like the body...good job on her:thumbsup::drool:

Maxko
04-15-2005, 09:55 AM
Hello Miyagi. I like the wire, nice and clean. But texture version.. hmm.. i think you need specullar map.. try..

Adriano-Zanetti
04-15-2005, 10:44 AM
Nice modeling man ! ...pretty face she got there.

good luck !

pierrebixquert
04-15-2005, 06:47 PM
very good modeled,:bounce: wonderful!

I like much:thumbsup:


my master And servant (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=229293&goto=newpost)

overcontrast
04-15-2005, 08:21 PM
this is looking soo beautiful.. i live her face.. but if i were u i wud go easy on the facial spots... but mayb thats just me... anyways gr8 model great textureing.. keep up the good works

Miyagi
04-17-2005, 01:50 AM
DaddyMack: welcome back...I see what you means:wip: , thanks for crit.


Virtuoso: HI Madic, thanks...I'm glad you like it...I'm doing my best:thumbsup: .


Versiden: Thanks Sen, I'm first fighting some SSS tests, this kind of shader contributes a lot for the soft aspect.


DimitrisLiatsos: Thanks Dimitris! I was very much concerned about loops,UVs and performance while modeling, just to make life easy.


rattlesnake: thanks Jorge! I'm doing my best.


Maxko: Hi Maxko, thanks for crit...I do have a spec map already, maybe is about the weight.I'll try to improve that.


Adriano_Zanetti: thanks Adriano!...shrewd Mr Jean Claude:bowdown: .


pierre_bixquert: thanks Pierre :thumbsup: I'm glad you like it.

Overcontrast: Hi Kaolin, thanks mate! I realy worked hard on it:wip: ...I'm glad you like it.

goktugg
04-17-2005, 02:18 AM
nice modelling! also beautiful woman body*anatomy!:thumbsup: going better!
good luck mate!go on!:)

smaddl
04-17-2005, 02:19 AM
she is very lovely. i think eyebrows and lashes need some work. how did you make them? ( looking for a solution to my models). anyway great work :thumbsup: keep it up.

Wandddo
04-17-2005, 04:53 AM
Hi Miyagi: I liked the textures:thumbsup: but the light incidence seems to be very strong in the face... keep it up my friend :bounce: I'm accompanying your great work... Hey friend I'm not dark man hehehe don't feel for that ugly creature, I am of peace hahahahaha :D
abração cara

atra
04-17-2005, 03:41 PM
Hey, Great textures :D

I've seen only the start of the modeling, but it looks great now.
I specially like her mouth. It looks so real.
The eyebrows are a little like painted... add some more specular and make it just a little darker.

The skin is very good (think about darker nuance on the top of the nose, or it will look like glowing) :)

Very interesting concept!
Waiting for more :)

safe05
04-20-2005, 05:25 PM
Been awhile...really nice progress. Good job on the model and texturing so far. (I like the freckles :) ) Keep it up!

Miyagi
04-24-2005, 06:36 AM
Sorry the lateness of my feedbacks I'm having some dificulties to get a connection.

Hey Gurellier...thanks! good luck to you too and ever going.

smaddl nothing fancy...I'm using Maya and it is a eyebrow paint effect that I converted to polygon then I did some tweaks. But I think I'll be paint it in the head color map,cause it lowered render performance a lot and it will be at relative distance.

Wandddo you right...it seems to flat her face a bit thanks:thumbsup: . I'm sure you are not a dark man:rolleyes: ... by the way Where did that angelical creatures come from? :twisted:


Atra thanks for crit...you right...for some reason my eyebrow spec was at low value I did correct that:thumbsup: . About the nose I think it was about my too strong key light.

safe05 thanks I'm glad you like it.

alex.h.
04-24-2005, 08:23 AM
great face, i think its perfect :applause: see you later and :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Lemog
04-24-2005, 09:03 AM
Beautiful modeling for a beautiful model... congratulation Rogério, I would like to lose me in the green of her eyes :love:

Best wishes for the challenge mate :thumbsup:

Micro26
04-24-2005, 11:06 AM
love the model and your texturing is awesome, maybe some tweaking with the shader but its going great so far :thumbsup:
Keep it up

banzato
04-25-2005, 01:45 AM
Hello. Another friend from Brasil. Good luck man, you have a lot of work to do. Im looking this, so keep going and show us your good models. :thumbsup:

Miyagi
04-25-2005, 03:38 AM
Alex.H thanks mate...You and your great skill are wellcome:thumbsup:

Lemog thanks man I'm glad you like it...Best wishes to you too:thumbsup:


Mr.Micro26 Thanks Tsad:thumbsup:


Banzato Don't tell me that...I think I'm going by ant legs and will never get there.

TheFirstAngel
04-25-2005, 04:15 AM
Boa Noite, Rogério! Fantastic modeling and great texturing, manero:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
Keep on rocking!
(Am too tired to give you a precise lookover but i'll be back tomorrow after a little sleep :))
see you tomorrow!

xric7
04-25-2005, 02:19 PM
wow..:bounce:
very realist..
good luck

mecman
04-25-2005, 02:40 PM
Hey Myiagi!! Great modeling and textures here mate!!! I love it!!
You´re doing an awesome work!! Keep it up my friend!!!

Miyagi
04-27-2005, 06:31 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1114583494_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1114583494_large.jpg)

Although it spent some time to paint her previus head texture, I decided to make this japanese-style makeup on it to give my picture more appeal. About the dress and accessories, I've been going the most precedural as I can for a while, for fear of don't finish my work at time.
Any crit are welcome.

Wandddo
04-27-2005, 06:37 AM
Wow Mr. Miyagi! :bounce: Really nice work my friend! She is very beautiful :love: I'm watching your updates:thumbsup: Muito bom isso aí cara! Continua firme
Abraço

Miyagi
04-27-2005, 06:51 AM
the1st_angel Hi Sacha! thanks for coming...I'm waiting for your constructive comments...see ya!

xric7 Hi Thitipon! I'm glad you like it:thumbsup: .

mecman E ai Marcelo bele!...I'm giving my best:wip: .

wandddo E ai cara bele!... cgTalk challenger life isn't easy ah... 3:46am and still working:beer: ...see ya!

Lemog
04-27-2005, 07:49 AM
I'm ok for the japanese style for her face... but to remain in this style, the eyebrows should be redrawn, very right, as for the geisha, I think... but it's your creation... you do want you want ;)
In any case, your work is marvellous :arteest:

manikantkujur
04-27-2005, 08:36 AM
great texturing .......KEEP IT UP


http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=225407&page=4

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=225407&page=4

smaddl
04-27-2005, 08:48 AM
she is great!! delicate, attractive and a bit sad :thumbsup: could you post closup with hair?

atra
04-28-2005, 09:15 AM
WOW I really missed something.

very good idea with the mouth. It looks more like a master now :)

She is really attractive!

Yes, post a hair close-up :)
I am also interested.

And a little advice. If the toes will be seen, change hteir shape a little more. They are a nuance too simple when I look the rest of the body.

:thumbsup:

Miyagi
04-30-2005, 05:21 AM
Lemog thanks for coming and crit:thumbsup: ...It isn't my intend to accurate characterize it, I'm just experimenting...I'll go by this for a while, cause I have a lot to do yet...the others character, environment and so on...I better do it before it's to late...when the water get quiet I'll do some geisha researches.

manikantkujur thanks mate!

smaddl Hi Smadar! thanks:thumbsup: ...I didn't work on expression things yet... about the hair, it's been dificult to render a satifatory hair closeup, even with it in low values and hair alone...fortunately it will be seen from relative distance...maybe later.

atra thanks for coming Maja! Yeah i give her a extra punch and now it are more related to my final picture...I'll go to environment stuff for a while.

alex.h.
04-30-2005, 05:24 AM
wow,great work mate,love it. see you and :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Miyagi
05-01-2005, 08:26 PM
Hi Alex! thanks...I'm glad you like it :thumbsup:

Lemog
05-02-2005, 05:11 AM
Update man... update :scream: what's following now ?

praguer28
05-02-2005, 06:09 PM
Thank god that in our beautiful land of Brazil there are good modellers... Go for it man!

My thread:
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?p=2232477#post2232477

Miyagi
05-05-2005, 09:14 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1115284431_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1115284431_large.jpg)

From this I will stick through a bridge to another tip of this mountain, where my master and some servant charcters will be.
There are some shader and texture improviment I want to do here, maybe set up more objects too.I have a lot to do yet, so I'll do it when I see I have time for it.

praguer28
05-05-2005, 12:01 PM
Good design and textures... maybe a better work with the lights... Anyway keep going man!

My thread:
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=231948

http://img175.echo.cx/img175/7494/3dbrazil5uk.jpg

DaddyMack
05-05-2005, 12:42 PM
Wow, what a fine and delicate scene Mr Miyagi, should suit the woman you modelled perfectly:thumbsup: Good luck!

3dRaven
05-05-2005, 12:45 PM
Great texture work Miyagi :thumbsup: I'd experiment with the rocks specular maybe increase it a bit you can get some nice highlights on the sharp areas. The wood material could use some color variation...try some sort of noise procedural with dark / light brown colors.

Really like how you made the grass too. :)

The scene will look a lot different with some background. Maybe post a version with a similar color to the end version? It will help with the c&c.

Miyagi
05-07-2005, 05:54 AM
praguer28

E ai Augusto bele!:thumbsup: thanks for coming and crit...I didn't go to lighting yet, every object in this image are illuminated by a simple 3 point light setup just for modeling purpose.


DaddyMack

Hi Mr Mack!:thumbsup: thanks mate!

3dRaven

Hi Werner! thanks for coming and crit:thumbsup: ...you right It didn't have a spec map yet...I'll be doing some rendering and composition tests about it later.

BlackDidThis
05-07-2005, 06:38 AM
It seems I have really missed on something here.

You have impressive skills and your works are sure displaying it well...


Nothing to crit really at this stage. I have to agree with Atra at this point.. but you already said that you would fix that.

Keep it up!


Black

newellteapot
05-07-2005, 11:13 AM
Hi Rogerio,

she is awesome! great model!:eek:
I like your concept, too. Let's keep in touch, as our concepts do have points in common. Looking forward to see it finished
I'll post something new today ;)
Good luck!
it's great to meet so many new people and exchange ideas:)
Monica
PS: any chinese recipe you might suggest for lunch? I might suggest some british and italian ones
um bejio!

My Master and Servant
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=233738

Diogo
05-07-2005, 11:55 AM
Hey Rogério!

Thank's for the comments

It's a interesting concept , i like ;)
I very like the master but you may work more with the eyebrows.
I prefer the building in the sketch position.

Great Job :thumbsup:
"Grande abraço"

Miyagi
05-07-2005, 07:09 PM
BlackDidThis Hi black! thanks mate! i'm doing my best:wip: .

Monica Hi Monica thanks for coming, I'm glad you like it...I'm surely there to see your new post:thumbsup: .
I like to much italian recipes...but I think we better talk about cooking stuff after the challenge. times is running:) .
um beijo? Do you speak portuguese?

Diogo E ai cara bele! thanks for coming and crit! You right, its eyebrow needs more work...I'll deal with it and other detail later after I get all my models done.
um abraço e boa sorte irmão:thumbsup:

ALISK
05-08-2005, 12:15 AM
Wow, you say my models are awesome, your model rocks! I would love to get my texture looking half as great as yours. She really looks great. What did you creat it with, I did mine in photoshop. Got to get back to work if I want to finish in time.
later alisk

coolrio
05-08-2005, 03:40 AM
hai miyagi ,you really have a great model there:thumbsup: my only crit is to make her looks even closer in composition

Virtuoso
05-08-2005, 04:59 AM
Nice little home..............."The love temple......".....Nice addition to you're piece Rogerio.....Keep hammering away......:arteest:

Miyagi
05-08-2005, 05:11 PM
Alisk Thanks for coming:thumbsup: ...I did it with photoshop too, I'm utilizing a SSS shader that plays a lot to its looks....is it an easy and fast way to get a satisfactory skin appearence , If you don't know this shader yet. here you will find a good tutorial about this http://www.highend3d.com/maya/tutorials/misss/ there you will find a link to purchase the shader too.

terminus Nice to see you here! thanks for the crit...I already have one idea for my layout where it is very closer to the camera...I'll try it to see what is going better later:thumbsup: .

Virtuoso thanks mate! I'm just stop hammering to prepare more coffee:).

Wandddo
05-08-2005, 06:47 PM
Hi friend Myagi!:) Great work on the textures and modelling... maybe a little more contrast in this piece would bring more realism... but you are in the right road... can't wait to see more ;) ... Keep working my friend and good lucky on the rest:thumbsup:
gde abraço

Alan Daniels
05-10-2005, 04:52 PM
Just wonderful work so far Miyagi. Awesome work on the model. :thumbsup: I only wish I had seen this earlier!

smaddl
05-10-2005, 05:21 PM
great design. i'm looking for more updates. keep it up :thumbsup:

Miyagi
05-12-2005, 09:11 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1115889091_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1115889091_large.jpg)

just a layout and color study, any crit are more than welcome.

BlackDidThis
05-14-2005, 05:13 AM
Nothing to crit.. I really like this angle and colour scheme

Especially having her in such close up.


Good luck


Black

Virtuoso
05-14-2005, 08:23 PM
Hi Rogerio....... Looks to have the right balance.......good point of view,and showcases all in the right perspective......Good going......now go strong,the time stops for none of us......All the best,see you as you move forward......:arteest:

Wandddo
05-15-2005, 03:55 AM
Hi friend:) Ta bem legal a composição!! keep coming mate... I'm accompanying:bounce: :bounce:

gde abraço :thumbsup:

Miyagi
05-15-2005, 07:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1116185138_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1116185138_large.jpg)

My background mountain wireframe...there is more than actually
will be seeing at final image, I do it so I could study another camera angles.

Miyagi
05-15-2005, 07:43 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1116186210_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1116186210_large.jpg)

I'm going very straght forward by now...no brainstorm no test render just doing things to finish in time...
I'm doing foreground composition right now even after almost 18 hour of work uf!...hope post it today.

Diogo
05-15-2005, 08:07 PM
Good Background!


keep doing! :thumbsup:
"Grande abraço"

Miyagi
05-15-2005, 09:13 PM
Hi black! thankls mate:thumbsup: I was concerned to place her such way cause it requires more texture details so larger resolution are needed and I've been having so much dificulties to render my scenes already, even breaking it up with render passes, anyway it is my master character and I don't find a better way to do it.

Hi Madic thanks mate! I'm really working hard on this project...I'm glad your liking it:thumbsup:

E ai wandddo! valeu a força, I really don't know if I can do it in time...anyway I'm doing my best to:wip: .

E ai Diogo bele! thanks mate!:thumbsup:

JRBRAZ
05-15-2005, 10:45 PM
Great background :thumbsup:

I´m just miss some more specular and maybe a little waves in water .. is too flat ...

To gostando bastante Rogério. Bem interessante o estudo da composição. :bounce:

Miyagi
05-19-2005, 12:58 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1116464314_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1116464314_large.jpg)

I'm going with just 3 directional light setup for the sake of simplicity and rendering performance.

Miyagi
05-19-2005, 01:25 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1116465954_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1116465954_large.jpg)

After about a zillion of crash render I decided to lower my final image resolution so I finally get fighting my final composition.
Any crit are more than welcome.

Virtuoso
05-19-2005, 01:34 AM
Almost there calmon...... common do it strong now,i wish you the bnest.....I think things have come out nice......good luck with the finish.....:thumbsup:

Wandddo
05-19-2005, 01:36 AM
E aí Miyagi, Cara ficou bem legal a composição!:) Só acho q vc poderia dar uma ajeitadinha na água da cachoeira, talvez colocar uns espirrados próximos da saída d'gua... acho q isso da pra fazer no Photoshop mesmo... Parabéns e coloca logo a imagem final aí rapaz:)
gde abraço :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Miyagi
05-19-2005, 12:00 PM
I was just trying to post my final images through 1:30 before of GMT challenge hour this post is just to prove it.
http://us.f3.yahoofs.com/users/427455cez2907fdc5/mail/__sr_/5769.jpg?phKw6jCBpxoBnb1m

smaddl
05-21-2005, 08:34 PM
i'm so sorry Miyagi :sad: . i try but the link seems to be broken. your last update looks very nice. delicate design and colors. the characters are great but i don't understand what the little character is doing. it seems like he is holding the girl's foot, but i don't know what is that round shape. maby because the image is small, maby it just me..( i sometime don't get things right). anyway it's a very fine work. i'd like to see your last version. why won't you upload it here?

Miyagi
05-21-2005, 09:21 PM
Hi smaddl I'm working on a very lazy system, I was fighting again so much crash render, so I did need to work till the last few hours before the challenge closure...But for some reason they closed it before the announsed time...when I did try post my final images It was about 2:00h before the challenge announced close time.:shrug:

Anyway it was a pleasure to meet people like you at the challenge, hope see u at the next one:) .
Good luck friend:thumbsup:

alex.h.
05-21-2005, 09:30 PM
great work Miyagi, love your style. see you later mate and
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

DaVee
05-21-2005, 10:25 PM
I like this image it is very poetic and a bit sexy. I would have add more contrast it was my image, but that's just my opinion. It is like that too.
Good luck.

David.

Miyagi
05-23-2005, 01:38 AM
http://cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1116812325_medium.jpg (http://cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1116812325_large.jpg)

Waterfall

Miyagi
05-23-2005, 01:40 AM
http://cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1116812407_medium.jpg (http://cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6696/6696_1116812407_large.jpg)

My concept idea comes from what I think is the most commun relationship example between master and servant, either implitly or explicitly it could be seen everywhere,it can drives ones mind compressed to our oldest parent.The most primitive motive,it can make men frequently behaves unconventionally and some times even submissively.Through some patetic creatures characters representing us,lust men and a beatiful woman with all their well managed power,I'm trying to depict this eternal but nothing boring dependence from men to women that I title "Servants Of the Master Curves".

ilusiondigital
05-23-2005, 08:18 AM
Your image is so cute, and original servant, ofcourse pretty girl too.

BlackDidThis
05-23-2005, 05:32 PM
I am SO sorry for not being around in your finalising your entry!

The composition is wonderful and the elements it is composed of are definately carrying the burden a piece such as this one offers.
It is full of details on every corner with a little story of it's own...

I understand your concept much better now.. and am very glad you managed to put it all together in time for the entry.
I wish you the best of luck in the next step of this competition!

Good Luck!


Black

pierrebixquert
05-24-2005, 08:26 PM
hi Miyagi :thumbsup:


very good composition, and modeled this very well,:thumbsup: :thumbsup: is a
deception that you have not finished your work on time, but you do not
worry that we will have more aid to show your talent.:buttrock:

Miyagi
05-25-2005, 04:26 AM
alex.h thanks mate:thumbsup:

DaVee Hi Daved thanks for coming and crit:thumbsup: .I thought I could gave it more contrast, but I think the composition lines are handling well the attencion...not to mention the natural woman curves powers:eek: ...And it was my intention to give my scene elements
more dispute power.

ilusiondigital thanks Victor, I did my best:argh:

BlackDidThis thanks mate:) Maybe I was too subtle but everything I put in this image was there for a reason...the fishes patterns, mountains shape,props, everything are there for support my concept idea...for instance Take I look at my waterfall background alone, I'm sure you'll find there some knowing things, for some strange reason I just can mention on this thread:rolleyes: , but still very related to my concept idea:) ...

pierre_bixquert Hi friend, thanks:thumbsup: , I'm glad you like it....after all the best thing here are met all this kind people and cgTalk about our passion.

jenn-yu
05-30-2005, 11:49 AM
hi Miyagi! i'm so proud with u!! finally you done your work!! is amazing! i like your style so much, especially the "girl", even you cant meet the deadline, but u done a good job! we meet next challenge again:) , and i hope i can finish my work before next challenge start!..... keep it up!

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