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maozao
03-26-2005, 06:15 PM
Gabriel Valtes Pires has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6692)

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: Lord Da Da's concept
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112466292_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112466292_large.jpg)

I was working a little bit more in the babys concept trying to develop his face and expression, but i cant seem to get a baby face
this one is not what i am looking for

can anyone help me get where i am doing wrong?

thx

maozao
03-28-2005, 10:55 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112050559_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112050559_large.jpg)

This is my first concept sketch, something like a baby on a trhone and his mother offering something

My concept is that babies rule their mothers existence
so i am trying to work this out :)
critcs plz

Jack Youngblood
03-29-2005, 12:11 AM
Babies ruling their parents? One of the most original responses so far! Perfectly true.

LaVolpe
03-29-2005, 12:42 AM
haha..very nice concept...you might want to consider playing around with viewpoints and moving the 'camera' around to emphasize that the baby is the one in charge..it might really help to drive home the concept...

maozao
03-29-2005, 12:58 AM
i was just having some scene ideas,
i am currently studying baby anatomy to draw it accurate

but i am not quite sure how to place the idea of the baby ruling its mother
but ill try to work it out :) thx for the critics

maozao
03-29-2005, 01:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112059789_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112059789_large.jpg)

made another angle pic
what u guys think? this are just minute sketchs not something very intrincate

maozao
03-31-2005, 12:36 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112229412_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112229412_large.jpg)

i am sticking to the concept of the baby ruling his mother,
i did it like a fast painting just to feel how it would be, the colors arent right yet, that weird thing on the ground would be like those colored floors babies have, and those twoo soldiers would be like playmobile or lego or something like that, and i added some teddie bear audience

how am i going?

maozao
03-31-2005, 03:00 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112238005_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112238005_large.jpg)

I was studing over the kneeling position of the mother
what you guys think so far?

CoreyArtE
03-31-2005, 03:40 AM
I'm curious to see how this will turn out...Keep going !:thumbsup:

maozao
03-31-2005, 03:44 AM
the right elbow is too low? isnt it?

maozao
03-31-2005, 04:26 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112243175_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112243175_large.jpg)

i was playing with this sketch, i was coloring a litle, just rough way to get a better pitcture

is the right elbow to low?

thx

Slav
03-31-2005, 03:04 PM
hey there. i just thought of dropping by and wishing you the best of luck. cool start.

i would love to see what you are going to do with the bg. :)

cheerio for now.

Smash.rs
04-01-2005, 01:24 AM
Cool Man, i like your concept a lot, not sooo similar to mine beside the toys.

Pega umas referências legais pra desenhar esse bebê hehehe, eu pelo menos tenho uma dificuldade pra acerta anatomia de crianças e bebês, e boa sorte cara, é legal postar as vezes em português ;).
C ya.

minduinho
04-01-2005, 02:39 AM
nice evolution. keep sketching to show better your ideia.

vo ficar na espera de uns ups pra saber realmente o q vc ta querendo fazer.
independente de como for o comportamento do bebê, tente arrumar uma boa expressão para o rosto, q isso vai contar muito.

cya.

BloodTaster
04-01-2005, 03:31 AM
Hey man!

Good luck on the challenge too!! It's very nice, and I wait for more!:)

Boa sorte cara!

maozao
04-01-2005, 06:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112336945_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112336945_large.jpg)

This is a concept sketch for the teddy bears that inhabit Lord Da Da's court :)
hope you enjoy
and constructive criticts are welcome

maozao
04-01-2005, 05:07 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112375223_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112375223_large.jpg)

I was sketching again over the my concept, i hope you could enjoy and get better what i am aiming for

some details are still missing, i am plannig to change the throne for those baby sits and add some paperwall on the walls, a dor and a red carpet composed of those baby puzzle stile carpets; and finaly work harder on perspective and the baby and his mother


what you guys think?

maozao
04-01-2005, 05:16 PM
Here it goes some of the story

" In the far kingdom of Gu Gu, Lord Da Da, sits all day in his room, full of toys and his precious teddy bears.
His mother, loyal to him, like every mother to his own baby, fulfill all Da Da's wishes. He is always in need of more and more toys, specially his bears courtesans.
Surrounded by the Playmobile guard he puts aside his joker and let his mother come, kneeled with another bear to offer her son."

yep, that is something that came in my mind, decided to right down, dont know if looks good, but i hope i clear out things and draw you in to the concept, of babys rulling their parents, wich they trully do, but maybe not how i've made :)
any cricts or coments are welcome

sebek27
04-01-2005, 05:18 PM
double post, slow server sorry

sebek27
04-01-2005, 05:22 PM
nice, your idea is similar to mine except in mine the servan is a pregnant mother and the setting is in a baby's room where the baby is sitting on her/his poddy as if it were a king's/queens throne

Falcorr
04-01-2005, 05:58 PM
Hello!

Those are duplo toy men! Now this is original stuff :thumbsup:

Just question. What is the scale factor in your picture? Those toys grown big or something? Has this gone on for centuries or it just happened? I mean your story?

Just remember that those baby arms are fatty and very short looking. That goes on for that throne room king baby.

Thanx for dropping by in my thread :applause:

maozao
04-01-2005, 06:05 PM
Falcor_

thx for the coment and support :)

yes indeed those toys are kinda larger them real ones, in the kingdom of Gu Gu those playmobile are almost as tall as a human and they are kinda animated
those bears are more like toys really, they do most of what Lord Da Da tells them to do and in the free time they act as real teddy bears staing in their place :)

for the perspective and anatomy i am going to work it harder and the anatomy too, didnt liked the one i am using, and maybe i am gonna change the throne to one of those high baby sits where they eat and stuff

thx keep comenting need some feed back plz on the fur and the hole stuff too

Falcorr
04-01-2005, 06:18 PM
About the fur.

Just pay more attention on the direction of the surface.. cross stiching the shading like that is faster, but it ends up being more flat. Go look at photorefences and plan a technique that is fast and simple to achieve desired effect :thumbsup:

Good luck!

maozao
04-01-2005, 06:57 PM
i was crossing, couse it is faster ( i have in mind like 9 or more bears ) and if got in single directions it would look like long fur, but it isnt long

ill try to work it out some more
thx angain Falcor_

gra7
04-01-2005, 07:58 PM
hey gabriel !!

veryy good !!

eh issu ae vei.. num para naum !! keru ve mais upss.. pega meu msn ae ! xmaio@hotmail.com

t+.. c ya !

CoreyArtE
04-01-2005, 08:01 PM
omg this is hilarious...I love the teddy bear sketch you made alot too...Cant wait to see how this one turns out!

hermine
04-01-2005, 08:11 PM
haha this is sweet , those playmobil, as a painting tip i would see it with very sweet and pastel colors like in some faeries stories.just a thought:D

maozao
04-01-2005, 08:16 PM
could be more pastel and stuff

but i was planning to paint it plastic look, like they are, and add some more humor to this, making their weapons like some plastic axes :)
it would be cool, like it would be still a toy

NOOB!
04-01-2005, 08:32 PM
pretty nice work!! keep goin!

THE Wizard
04-01-2005, 10:56 PM
This might be fun, kepp drawing!

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=225858 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=225858)

VivianeFigueira
04-02-2005, 03:29 AM
Gostei do urso! :thumbsup:

Agora é a primeira vez que vi seu trabalho. Gostei do conceito da mãe com o bebê.
Mas porque tantos ursinhos? Tem alguma conexão com ursos na idéia?
Alguém falou da expressão do rosto do bebê e concordo com isso. Acho que será levado muito em consideração.
Não só do bebê mas também da mãe. Bem, acho que é isso.

Arc80
04-02-2005, 03:42 PM
Good start so far dude. That's a nice stuff teddy bear study. The concept of your piece is very fun. Can't wait to see dude.

cheers,
Archie

maozao
04-02-2005, 06:24 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112466292_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6692/6692_1112466292_large.jpg)

I was working a little bit more in the babys concept trying to develop his face and expression, but i cant seem to get a baby face
this one is not what i am looking for

can anyone help me get where i am doing wrong?

thx

ogar555
04-07-2005, 12:00 AM
hmmm, i don't know personally but... you can find it out for yourself! :scream:
go here: http://www.fineart.sk/index.php?s=80&cat=14
it's from a book written by Andrew Loomis, he's like the god of portraits...n stuff... (imho)
good luck!:thumbsup:

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