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Juha
03-26-2005, 12:30 PM
Juha Heiniö has entered the Master and Servant 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6667)

Latest Update: Modeling: vault door
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1113936076_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1113936076_large.jpg)

heres early start from my vault door.. i turned to make round door, everything ellse is pretty much going to be straight and clean lines... so i think that my scene needs something round too....

BlackDidThis
03-26-2005, 09:07 PM
So you decided to tune in?! Thats just GREAT Juha.

We are going to be expecting some amazing work you know!


Good luck! (Not that you would be needing it)

Juha
03-27-2005, 03:34 AM
heh yeah, need to collect my ideas and start to put them together...
all loose luck is really wellcome, and i i should start training my character modeling skills really fast..and thanks...

Juha
03-31-2005, 04:23 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1112246599_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1112246599_large.jpg)

so finaly i get my sketches scanned...
few sketches from my servant on hes way to the master.

Juha
03-31-2005, 04:25 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1112246733_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1112246733_large.jpg)

servant again, and master on the backround.

Juha
03-31-2005, 04:37 AM
the money is the master, and the vault represents it on the scene,
servant has dedicated his life, since he was a young boy to earn and serve money.
he was happy , but that time has gone,, now he is really unhappy and very tired. cause the vault wants moremoremore... i want to make my servan to look really tired, while carrying more money to the vault, and to give that vault some really mean look...
well back to draw some more..

jarvetu
03-31-2005, 04:51 AM
The concept images look great, hyvä meininki!

Squibbit
03-31-2005, 04:54 AM
yea nice concept!

and welcome to the contest , have fun !

BlackDidThis
03-31-2005, 04:56 AM
When you put the vault to the end of the scene. I personally believe it sort of takes from the feel you are going for.
Sort of like the 'follow the light'.
I understand that you are intending on playing with the composition all together anyways.. but in this case I think it would be a little bit harder to be able to show the guy tired from the back.

While dancing I remember this ballet that was over-talented.. he would turn his back (Rule one.. you never turn your back to the audience.. thus the reason for the stirct ballet pozes) and you would be literally able to sence him crying in the stage without seeing his face.
This was an exceptionally hard thing to, and had managed to really get him to higher places.
I hope you can understand the point I am getting at...
If there is a story that expressions can only tell. You had better do your best you can manage to assure that it is understood exactly as you had wanted it to be.

I think I am getting the colour theme you are aiming for. And I think it would really go with the rest of it all. Do you have a mind to make the walls really warn out and producing hard contrast edges from the sharp light that the vault is generating?

I believe it's going good Juha.. But I guess the 'everything' is gona be more what revealed with your modeling. :)

Curiouse on what you are up to. :thumbsup:

Black

Juha
03-31-2005, 06:05 AM
thanks guys from your gentle words... and i havent decided yet,, which perspective im going to use on my scene, but that view behind the back does not gonna work out very well. Thanks Black..
im gonna do few more drawings and trying to solve that thing.

Tremoside
03-31-2005, 09:41 AM
Hi mate,

Your idea is good, but the way as you explained it on your concept drawing a unique exciting art of conceptioning. The depth of the "room", the man who is pressed by the load..i have no words. Keep goin! :buttrock:

archerx
03-31-2005, 09:24 PM
nice sketches, good luck with this.

can't wait to see more !

Juha
04-01-2005, 05:20 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1112336406_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1112336406_large.jpg)

just rough sketch from the scene. not sure shoul i make an room or maybe a hallway to the vault..

Juha
04-01-2005, 05:23 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1112336616_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1112336616_large.jpg)

fast sketch from the hallway..

UK3D
04-01-2005, 07:23 AM
Looking forward to seeing how this original idea develops. Lovely warm sketches.
Sean :thumbsup:

blackdragoncg
04-01-2005, 07:26 AM
Hi Juha, Very professional looking concept work :thumbsup: I like your concept idea...Good luck with the transition to 3D... Nice to see you here...I look forward to seeing some updates from you soon... L8rzz :)

deadplant155
04-01-2005, 03:22 PM
i really like the way your sketches look, and the colors so far really seem to be working too, great concept needless to say. good luck bringin' it into 3d, though i don't think you need it :)

-loren

Neeno
04-01-2005, 04:48 PM
hey there.. i would have to agree with dragon very well set out and pro concept you have here. great stuff man .. will be watching for your 3d dude.. no doubt you have the idea and talent in just your concepts.. lets see more :thumbsup:

AIR
04-01-2005, 08:11 PM
Did you know that juha on croatian means soup,like the chicken soup,the liquid thing that we eat.I like your idea,very original,I think the one that isdiferent from the rest.

Juha
04-01-2005, 09:05 PM
hi, well i didnt know,, cool im soup.. and thanks for your kind word guys. i try to start modeling things up as soon as possible...

rastko
04-03-2005, 12:52 PM
Great sketch Juha.
Good Luck :thumbsup:

BlackDidThis
04-05-2005, 07:21 AM
So where is the updates? :)

Yeah I know you are busy with the head (Insider information... you guys are not suppose to know about it ;))

Just came by to note an idea that might add to your hallway design:
Since this guy is keeping it as safe as he can manage to keep it. Would it not be possible that he has a handful of secure gates that he has to pass in oreder to get to the final vault?

I know it would really make it harder to put that into your composition. But you are a very exceptional designer, and I believe that the vault itself is the only thing you are left to show off your talents with, at the moment.

Like everyone else, I am impatienty awaiting your updates.


Black

Juha
04-05-2005, 01:04 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1112706253_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1112706253_large.jpg)

little update.. sketch from the vault door.

Juha
04-05-2005, 01:10 PM
thanks.. nice that you have liked my sketches...
sorry my delayed updates.. that head ..head head... huh
well i think it goes fine now... that security door thing really might work...
i want to add some contrast on the scene anyway.. really simple concrete pillars and maybe this really degorative " blacksmith style" gate between servant and the vault.. that might look good... thanks really much Black.....

and back to working with head.....

Kid-Mesh
04-05-2005, 07:19 PM
Very interesting concept you have going on here, I cant wait to see it realized in 3D...should turn out to be a unique piece to say the least. :)

Matroskin
04-06-2005, 06:08 AM
Hey Juha,
Cool colored drawings:D! Good decision to make it in warm colors.
I like the feeling of mystery behind that door - for me seems to be an evil hiding there...
Last update of a door I like more, but I agree also with the very first composition!
Professionally done!

BlackDidThis
04-06-2005, 07:10 AM
Great! So you are going to go for a secure entry!


I'd love to see what comes out. I had guessed you would go for something oddly technicalmixed with ergonomy. This was sort of a suprise.. LEts ee what you come up with!


Black

Juha
04-08-2005, 05:24 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1112937869_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1112937869_large.jpg)

just quick update.. so im working with the head now " my first head ever , need more this and that and lots of tweaking, but progressing...

UK3D
04-08-2005, 07:58 AM
Hi Juha,
I'm doing the same as you. First time I've made a real human head from scratch. I'm trying for a young girl. Yours is coming along nicely, it's trickey eh? :thumbsup:

Juha
04-08-2005, 08:35 AM
well thakyou.. i have done one body before, it wasnt so hard, but this head really gives me some challenge... but it starts to get better..

BlackDidThis
04-08-2005, 08:59 AM
You know what they say;

Make a good head... the body will follow!


Or wait.. do they say that?!:rolleyes:



It's going good Juha.. expecting some more! :)

UK3D
04-10-2005, 10:05 AM
Hey Juha,
Come on matey, lets see some more of that modelling. :thumbsup:

Juha
04-11-2005, 06:03 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1113199428_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1113199428_large.jpg)

just little update.. been busy with some other things...... i think my head needs still lots of tweaking and ears...

angel
04-11-2005, 07:05 AM
Hi there, you know, your head doesn't need as much tweaking as you might think. just smooth the lines such as the eyes, which now seem like they are sunk into the socket.

Keep going!

Juha
04-14-2005, 05:10 AM
thanks guys for your comments... seems that i have to start that head again... i had a little computer crash and i lost my head files and some other stuff as well , well i need practising anyway...

BlackDidThis
04-18-2005, 06:22 PM
Am I going to be the only one of the CG-Talk forums with the privilage to have seen your latest head from a few days back? :rolleyes:

Come on Juha... people are actually waiting for an update you know :wip:



I KNOW you are VERY busy, but time is actually running out here. I wishso much for you to make it through before the time runs out!

Good luck!


Black

Juha
04-18-2005, 08:01 PM
sorry my delayed answer . yeah im really busy with some school stuff right now.. but i managed to model that head a bit today, so im gonna post some updates tomorrow. i allso startted to model the overal scene and the vault itself. so something is going to be here tomorrow.. and really , thank you . you really keep me going....

Juha
04-19-2005, 03:36 AM
nothing important

Neeno
04-19-2005, 03:45 AM
hey juha great progress.. models looking fairly ok.. as you said still need to tweak it a fair bit to get the look your after.. i think you would need to add a lot of definition in the mesh. Just an example would be the nose the way the nose is connected to your fac if you just look in the mirror theres a good groove in there... the lips as well.. but this is still a wip dont be disencouraged.. this is looking great just needs tweaks here and there..good luck juha

Juha
04-19-2005, 06:37 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1113935858_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1113935858_large.jpg)

ok heres new head.. need to fix those few bugs on the surface, and tweak that nose a bit ,,and eyes and lips... i allso tried how light affects on the face.#important part of my scene.. well back to work...

Juha
04-19-2005, 06:41 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1113936076_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6667/6667_1113936076_large.jpg)

heres early start from my vault door.. i turned to make round door, everything ellse is pretty much going to be straight and clean lines... so i think that my scene needs something round too....

BlackDidThis
04-20-2005, 05:06 AM
Not too much to play around with to make him look correcter.

There are only small things, like the upper lip laying a bit more ontop of the lower lip even where they connect. Or the temples not really being so sharp an angle.. they are generally mider than 90 degrees.
Most of it are little tweekings.

I agree with your thought about too many staight lines. Actually I had thought you especially liked the sharp lines all through out.
But I sort of liked this vault, and would really preffer to see where you are going to be getting at.

Keep em coming!


Black

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