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misiek1125
03-26-2005, 01:16 PM
Michał Dziekan has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6665)

Latest Update: Final Image: The Inhuman Cult
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1115913562_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1115913562_large.jpg)

Ok. It's done. I want to thank everyone for posting here, for support and interest. I'm sure that I'll take part in next challenge couse it's great fun and I've learned much here. Cheers and enjoy:D!

edit: I forgot to attache story to my picture, so here it is:

My work show a group of dark cultist who are worshipping an archaic form of godlike creature which was inprisoned a very long time ago by ancestors of these cultists, but creature's power was so strong that instead of stopping creature, magical walls gave it more power and in result become a part of monster. Now after ages past, creature called offsprings of it's enemies and made them its servants, creature feeds on them, feeds on their dreams and mental powers, but for that it gives a great powers for everyone who give his mind into possesion...

misiek1125
03-31-2005, 07:53 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1112255606_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1112255606_large.jpg)

Hi there! it's my first time here, my english is not too good so I'll speak short.

This is my first sketch, of course it'll change...
I want to show somekind of godlike creature in it's lair, that creature is slave and prisoner of human tribe that time ago was able to catch and enslave it. Now humans exploit creature's abilities, but they also have to feed it and that kind of monsters don't eat ordinary things, my can be fed by dreams, so I want to show scene where creature is being fed.

misiek1125
03-31-2005, 07:56 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1112255783_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1112255783_large.jpg)

it's only concep so I think fuhrter I'll change perspective and view...

Arc80
03-31-2005, 08:40 AM
Welcome dude. Don't worry, you're not the only one who's first time posting art works here, hehe. Anyway, good start. I like the idea and composition. The architectures has a gothic looks to it, which is really cool. I suggest you look at gaudi's works.
I'll keep an eye on this.

GoodLuck,
Archie

ogar555
03-31-2005, 09:59 AM
Nice buildings! and that creature looks creepy... Although, how will you proceed to make the humans look like the obvious masters? ;D

misiek1125
03-31-2005, 01:55 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1112277358_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1112277358_large.jpg)

Thanks for comments,
heh I like very much Gaudi's works

This is updated sketch, I've changed roles, this chamber will be a place of cult of that creature, I'll draw many more cultists

nebezial
03-31-2005, 02:03 PM
whoa, atmospherical, spectacular amd poerful, u got it man, it rocks!!!:thumbsup:

NOOB!
03-31-2005, 02:32 PM
no nebz,

i think the words ur looking for are phonomenally,outragiously,extravigant.

...yeh the pic is excellent!

even if it does look like a giant vagina.

:eek:

misiek1125
04-01-2005, 12:59 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1112317162_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1112317162_large.jpg)

Another update...

Thanks for positive opinions.
err...vagina :D

Rudeone
04-01-2005, 01:24 AM
There's nothing wrong with a giant vagina

Cool concept you got there Don Vito:D , those sketches look very cool, however IMO it's more like the creature is the master and all the people are hypnoticed by it and walking right into his mouth and are about to get eaten by it, wich is not bad at all, but I think it's hard to see the real story behind it.

Other than that, good job and keep it up:thumbsup:

walrus
04-01-2005, 01:53 AM
Really neat concept! I like the creature, i love the prespective, I think this is great so far. I don't know whether you need that lone person on the other platform... I find him distracting and even detracting from the theme of the piece. But i look forward to seeing you flesh this out some more. good luck and have fun!

-mike

dondiego
04-01-2005, 02:10 AM
cool picture!
I like the gothic architeture and the idea of a weirdmothersomething cult :P
got nothing to say by now. I will stay watching this one
see ya!

misiek1125
04-01-2005, 08:37 AM
Thanks for c&c's, I really need them... and I'm glad u like my work.

rudeone - I know it is like that, I even want to title it like "unhuman cult" or something like that, in post #6 I wrote that I'm changing roles of characters, It's exactyly as you' wrote: that creature is imprisoned in this cave but it possesed minds of humans cuz it need to eat dreams (cultists are great for that) that someday it will be sufficiently strong to escape.
walrus - that lone person is just one from the group of cultists that will be added on other platform.
Next update after weekend. See ya!

NOOB!
04-01-2005, 08:38 AM
nice man!!

misiek1125
04-03-2005, 11:35 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1112567698_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1112567698_large.jpg)

So I've started working on it.
Hope for some comments.

GhostInTheMachine
04-04-2005, 12:19 AM
the scene looks good but a lower view point so that you can see some cultists up close then weaving off toward the massive va [no] bug creature on one of those paths. maybe the devout fools could be thrown into the creature one by one by other cult ppl.
gl

ps look to luis ryo for similar concepts

kstudios
04-04-2005, 12:33 AM
I really like your work! I like the gothic style, the buildings and the clothing style. The monster is pretty cool, have'nt seen one of those before :) What do you those kind of monsters? But after my point of view i would have used the concept where only one of the men were close up to the monster, then it looked more like the man was the master of the monster/creature. Keep up the great work! Hope to see more from you! :thumbsup:

Arc80
04-04-2005, 04:01 AM
nice update dude. The size relationship is working great. The warm lighting is work well too. Maybe some cool ambient light somewhere would stenghten the mood of the piece.

Cheers,
Archie
My master & servant entry (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=224331)

Wert'
04-04-2005, 09:13 PM
go go poland! great composition and colours, and developing good. Do work on the details. But please, leave some parts in a raw phase.

Trzymaj poziom! :) pozdr

misiek1125
04-05-2005, 11:52 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1112741539_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1112741539_large.jpg)

Hi dudes! I changed concept of background, now it'll be gothic rose windows through which moonlight will penetrate cult chamber, also I did some colorwork on creature, I'm showing you a piece of whole artwork, pozdr

misiek1125
04-05-2005, 11:55 PM
...And of course thank you for crits. I'm waiting for more!

Thanks Wert, I won't dissapoint you!:D pozdr

misiek1125
04-07-2005, 11:36 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1112913376_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1112913376_large.jpg)

Hi there! Here's next step of work, I've changed background, and done some creature coloring, I've also dumped people on the second platform, hope you'll like it.

cheers:)

Mordalles
04-07-2005, 11:54 PM
stunning! really great work.

marcheen
04-07-2005, 11:54 PM
hi there. that is a good piece. very interesting composition and a good idea.
oby tak dalej. pozdrawiam

Zephyri
04-08-2005, 01:02 AM
This is an amazing concept, and your execution this far is very professional. You've struck the lighting balance just about right here, I'd say, the cool coming from that gorgeous back window sparks off th yellow nicely. Both combine to create that indisticnt eerie feeling you experience in big, silent churches, I can almost hear he big god creature thrumming softly as he feeds on his devotees. This should be spectacular once you start putting detail in, I can't wait to see!

Gord-MacDonald
04-11-2005, 08:13 AM
a powerful facinating image! Good work!

Gord

misiek1125
04-11-2005, 11:54 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1113260077_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1113260077_large.jpg)

Hi dudes! Here is next upload. i did a lot of work with color and light, but the end is far far away. I want to add more tentacles twinnig all around the building and I thought about a crowd pressing on guards. Anyway, We'll se later. Now I'm tired and I'm going to bed. Thanks for your support. Goodnight:)

misiek1125
04-12-2005, 08:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1113290964_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1113290964_large.jpg)

Just wanted to show you a zoom. Enjoy;)

Arc80
04-12-2005, 11:43 AM
Nice dude. Very nice update and the lighting, freakin works. It is a good balance of warm and cool, just like Zepyhri said. The design on the windows really captures the gothic theme.
Keep it coming dude.

cheers,
Archie

artjunkie
04-12-2005, 11:50 AM
Wow. This is amazing stuff! Love the theme and I like the grand, epic feeling of the environment (jeez, that creature is HUGE!LOL). Great call on the rose window... lovely details and colours. Keep it up!

Cheers!

ChrisThatGuy
04-12-2005, 03:28 PM
Very nice. I like the windows too. Does it have a mouth? Because it might be more intimidating if the guy on the walkway was walking up to a tooth-filled mouth, trusting that it's not going to eat him. Good work.

kornel
04-13-2005, 09:21 AM
I love this dark project - nice feeling and good camera angle!

keep posting...

cheers: KornÚl

Deadlyforce
04-13-2005, 03:14 PM
Hi !

Fantastic mood in your painting !
I love the theme, the perspective and the lighting...very close to Lovecraft's universe.

I'll follow your progress with attention ! :thumbsup::bounce:

Neozoom
04-13-2005, 03:23 PM
really a nice start dude^^

arkinet
04-13-2005, 06:43 PM
thats one big scary millepede :scream: ... cant wait to see more of ur stuff, great job!

walrus
04-13-2005, 07:21 PM
Nice organic feel to those windows, they really help tie the architecture together with the creature. Nice work, can't wait to see more!

-mike

sethart
04-13-2005, 08:17 PM
Liking this a whole lot.Real nice start.:thumbsup:

misiek1125
04-13-2005, 08:57 PM
Hey!

Thank you very much for notes and for that all positive opinions, when I read them I just want to grab tablet and sit all the night with my work:)

ChrisThatGuy - yes, I''m thinking how to add mouth filled with tooth, maybe next update will show. How about adding some creaturelike guards flying around the chamber?

Thanks again for comments...

cheers!

Korline
04-15-2005, 11:31 PM
can't go wrong with the gothic, cool looking windows,
I just like the whole thing can't find nothing wrong with it
those little folks down there, they give me creepy feeling
like scene from the nightmare, I mean, imagine standing down there
in front of something like that in this kind place, brrrrr :bounce:

pozdrowienia

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=224972

Luke Mrozek
04-22-2005, 08:03 AM
Sie ma!

Bardzo fajny concept jak na razie, ciesze sie, ze jeden z nielicznych krajan wzial udzial w tym konkursie, ja sam nie mam czasu nawet sie ostatnio podrapac...hehehe.

Bede obserwowal jak Ci idzie - POWODZENIA !!!

misiek1125
04-22-2005, 01:14 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1114172084_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1114172084_large.jpg)

Hi! At last I've found some time to work on master and servant. Now I'm working on details, first steps you can see above...

Thanks for replies.

Korline, Luke Mrozek - dzięki za słowa otuchy:D

calisto-lynn
04-22-2005, 02:50 PM
u have great things goin on ur picture, and btw. i love ur avatar!:applause:

misiek1125
04-28-2005, 04:36 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1114702577_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1114702577_large.jpg)

Some details I've worked on, ...enjoy;).

misiek1125
05-04-2005, 01:29 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1115209753_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1115209753_large.jpg)

work work work...

Mardukk
05-04-2005, 07:14 PM
Good work ... I don't have anything else to say...
...or maybe ;)
Maybe you can work on the space, but this isn't necessary...
...and if you have got a while, you can criticize my work ;) ... but my picture is so much worse :/:
Master and Servant (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=235887)

demonicoz
05-04-2005, 07:54 PM
Brilliant piece of work mate. Keep it going mate, cant wait to see the finished thing.

pejot
05-04-2005, 08:24 PM
Czesc,
Very Nice concept!
I think that the creature is not readable anough, I can't say where the creature ends and architecture starts from the first look. The final result is very good, nice "catherdal" feeling, perspective and lighting, but I think your sketches were better.

misiek1125
05-04-2005, 08:32 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1115235163_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1115235163_large.jpg)

Thanks for notes,

pejot - czesc, I wanted to create a feeling that this creature is a part of chamber and people just walk not only among architecture but they exactly in the creature they worship, ..i thought that it would look much like they are servants of monster, and they are'nt afraid of it.

NOOB!
05-04-2005, 08:58 PM
excellent,luv the perspetive,makes u feel like ur in the picture

marcheen
05-04-2005, 09:14 PM
this is looking good. nice job. pozdrawiam

GhostInTheMachine
05-04-2005, 09:21 PM
good progress misiek1125, all the detailing has really paid off. gl

O.Martin
05-07-2005, 11:35 AM
Brilliant lights and style. Absolutly love the background windows. Gives me the creeps :thumbsup:

misiek1125
05-09-2005, 10:20 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1115673642_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1115673642_large.jpg)

Thank's all for posting...

Arc80
05-11-2005, 04:28 AM
Looking good dude. Just a little bit more detailing and it should look AWESOME. will be waiting for the final piece :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

cheers

misiek1125
05-11-2005, 08:31 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1115839889_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1115839889_large.jpg)

Ok guys, I'm almost done this one, just few more corrections and I'll end my challenge entry, ...so please write everything that is wrong with that picture and could be fixed... for now, enjoy!

tarrzan
05-11-2005, 09:33 PM
hey misiek, I love the organic mixing with the architecture. I'd really like to see some hints of other color, something subtle to compliment the orange light?? :cool:

misiek1125
05-12-2005, 02:21 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1115904096_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1115904096_large.jpg)

next entry will be final... cheers!

Jezzarts
05-12-2005, 04:07 PM
OMG awsome environment!

misiek1125
05-12-2005, 04:59 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1115913562_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6665/6665_1115913562_large.jpg)

Ok. It's done. I want to thank everyone for posting here, for support and interest. I'm sure that I'll take part in next challenge couse it's great fun and I've learned much here. Cheers and enjoy:D!

edit: I forgot to attache story to my picture, so here it is:

My work show a group of dark cultist who are worshipping an archaic form of godlike creature which was inprisoned a very long time ago by ancestors of these cultists, but creature's power was so strong that instead of stopping creature, magical walls gave it more power and in result become a part of monster. Now after ages past, creature called offsprings of it's enemies and made them its servants, creature feeds on them, feeds on their dreams and mental powers, but for that it gives a great powers for everyone who give his mind into possesion...

Fish-KAart
05-12-2005, 05:50 PM
Very interesting work! :)

Squibbit
05-12-2005, 05:54 PM
nice work! I like the spiderwebby things

Wojtala
05-14-2005, 08:34 AM
Great atmosphere and composition! Powerfull :)

Good luck!

TheFirstAngel
05-14-2005, 08:53 AM
Very cool work. love the feel for scale you brought in, looks ery epic and impressive! great work, keep it up!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

MDN67
05-19-2005, 07:11 PM
it's a very nice pic with a very impressive impression of height. Good work and good luck for the end

xric7
05-19-2005, 07:14 PM
wonderful and strange.
i love it.
congrats and good luck to u.:applause: :bounce: :thumbsup: :buttrock:

i-popba
05-19-2005, 07:44 PM
Excellent concept...!! cool composition and lighting...!

TheFirstAngel
05-21-2005, 06:37 PM
congrats again on your fantastic final piece and best of luck in the finals!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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