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Neliox
03-25-2005, 11:58 PM
Longin Lionel has entered the Master and Servant 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6634)

Latest Update: Final Image: never the master is the one you think
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1116391926_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1116391926_large.jpg)

This is it...

The final step is now submited.
I\\\'ve added some more post effects attempting to show it like a photographic picture, so, that the reason of the blur effect.
The attention is turn on the cat, because it is not as blurred as the rest, then the light is turn on it to but not only ;)
I let you seek everything I\\\'ve put on the scene to show that the cat is the real master and not the proud girl.

Long job also finished...lots of insomnia night passed on it...
I\\\'m a little proud that I\\\'ve finaly finished it in time.

I probably could do better than it but no time at all to perfect it, and then, I\\\'m tired a lot... Not good to sleep one day by three or four ^^°°°

Good luck to everyone!

Neliox
03-26-2005, 12:08 AM
Hello boys and girls!!

This is my first time on this challenge and i'll do my best on it :)

I'll submit my first WIP entry as soon as I could :thumbsup:

scuse for my english, I've not practiced it for a long time ago :sad:

Good luck for everyone!! :buttrock:

Neliox
03-27-2005, 07:48 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1111913290_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1111913290_large.jpg)

Kitty is a little cat.
Kitty's just came back at home, then, while he was running in the house, a vase felt and crashed down on the floor.
So, Kitty's master is very angry ;)

I'll try to show the sadness on Kitty's eyes and guilt on face.

Neliox
03-28-2005, 01:56 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112021807_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112021807_large.jpg)

Fast drawing of Kitty's head

Neliox
03-29-2005, 12:05 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112058298_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112058298_large.jpg)

Begining of Kitty's head modeling.
A lot of details would be add with the fur and texture.

Neliox
03-29-2005, 10:15 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112094917_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112094917_large.jpg)

New concept.
The first one seems to be so simple, so, I've decided to start a new one also with Kitty ;)
Here, not less than five different expressions.
I will probably put some demon's wings to the master.
Background would probably be a caverne, depend on my inspiration ^^

C&C would be nice.

Neliox
03-29-2005, 11:01 PM
Could I have some comments please...? :sad:
Does my concept so bad that you don't want to talk on it? :sad:

gurubvin
03-29-2005, 11:35 PM
At first I thought you were creating the illusion that there was no master... Kinda a big circle, where no one really wins. Person A likes person 2, but person 2 likes person 3, and person 3 likes person one... and the only happy one is the cat...

But it seems as thought there is a master and everyone else is enslaved to her. Personally... this just being me... I would've liked it to be what that mentioned above. It just seems to say more.

But maybe it's not something you wanna say...

--Arvin

Neliox
03-30-2005, 12:05 AM
Your first feeling was good :applause:
I've made this to show that could allways be another master.
The girl in the center is the master of the 3 others caracters, but one of them doesn't matter of it, one else is jealous of the cat, because the girl's cares are on it and the last is totally submissive to her.
At the and, the real master is the cat which has everything it want in it's live.

Idea of the demon's wings is just to put a metaphor showing the atmosphere, then, puting the girl on a "birdy" place which is the prey of the cat.
No more than a sign for the cat's supremacy :bounce:
But I'm not sure on it, it could be a very distorted idea ^^

Neliox
03-30-2005, 02:05 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112195115_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112195115_large.jpg)

Begening of center girl's modeling.

Neliox
03-30-2005, 03:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112199907_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112199907_large.jpg)

new version of the center girl.
Probably final version for head modeling.

Neliox
03-30-2005, 11:05 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112227553_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112227553_large.jpg)

This time, a new drawing for the indifferent girl lying on the floor with "cloth".

The first drawing was a speed one.

Your comments are wellcome, this could help me on evaluating my job.

grooshka
03-31-2005, 09:34 AM
hi
more, more, more! want to see these nice bodies in 3d :thumbsup: don't forget about breaking the symmetrical look of the face to look it more natural. as we know nobody's perfect :D so should ours models. :)
good luck!

justsantiago
03-31-2005, 11:06 AM
Hi, I like your idea, it's a good way to show emotions in a small enviroment where the master and servant relations are pretty explicit. with the model i think the mouth is a too low, the volume in the nose is great but the lower eye lids have a little too much volume... and maybe the cheekbones are a little too prominent but that's just my taste :)
keep posting!
thanks for the advise on my model.

Neliox
03-31-2005, 10:00 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112310043_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112310043_large.jpg)

New update, body's mod and head modified.
Not a lot of details for the body, they would be made when head and body would be snaped together.

Thanks for your comments.

grooshka : Dont worry about the symetry, this would be made at the end ^^. Thaks for your interest

justsantiago : Thank you for your advices, I've changed the point that you shown to me.

Neliox
04-01-2005, 06:50 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112385035_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112385035_large.jpg)

Body and Head snaped and modified.
Details added to the body.
A nice day of unwraping, too funny ^^°°

Neliox
04-04-2005, 05:02 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112634158_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112634158_large.jpg)

eyelashs and helmet hair added.
I've modify the face and body.
Now, she's finished on modeling.
Next step, the indifferent girl.
I've started her at all since a few days, so, she would probably come very soon ;)

C&c are welcomes of course :)

rynomyte
04-04-2005, 11:49 PM
I really like the concept...Keep up the good work!

Neliox
04-06-2005, 03:32 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112758320_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112758320_large.jpg)

rynomyte : Thank you very much :)


This is the second girl modeling.
I would make helmet hairs and eyelashs very soon.
Probably some changes on the modeling would be made on my next entry.

C&c are welcomes, thanks :)

Neliox
04-08-2005, 12:52 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112921544_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1112921544_large.jpg)

The cat\'s mod is finished.
No more details on it I think.
C&c welcomes as ever :)

Wandddo
04-10-2005, 05:53 AM
Hello man! Nice start of work mate! Hehehe the cat is funny:) Good model the girl too... a little observation, in the palm of the hands, would be better to increase more volume... Keep it up and good lucky to u friend!:thumbsup:
cheers

DaddyMack
04-10-2005, 06:11 AM
Sorry Neliox...I have to say it...Heeere puss puss puss...Again...sorry, I've got some cat issues...
but enuff about me
Great stuff so far, I really like the proportions of your characters:thumbsup: The area where the cat's neck meets it's chin looks problematic tho, it may need some attention

Good luck!

Neliox
04-11-2005, 05:18 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1113196728_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1113196728_large.jpg)

Thanks for comments :)

I've modified cat's neck at all ;)
Then others little things on it.

I've made the first girl's expression and skinning, I will modify the palm too as you told me :)

For the time, this is the chair where she would sit down ;)

It's only concept at all, I've not finished it at all, but probably soon :)

Imps are not "real ones", only wooden ^^ so it's normal that they are identics and symetrics

I've thought it was funny to put Imps carrying the chair, then I've made then with an expression too, showing that they are not happy of carrying the chair with the girl on it :D.

Neliox
04-11-2005, 05:22 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1113196919_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1113196919_large.jpg)

And, this is the imp ;)

C&c as ever are wellcomes :)

Tremoside
04-11-2005, 01:02 PM
Interesting characterisation with the chair holders. Keep it up! Work and rock!

alex.h.
04-12-2005, 06:31 AM
great idea, and the modeling is getting there, like it see you and :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Neliox
04-13-2005, 04:34 PM
Thank you very much for comments :)
Next update would be the modeling for the first man, it's actualy neer to the end, so, if I could move myself entry would come about a few hours... if I could move myself... :rolleyes:

Neliox
05-05-2005, 08:21 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1115281255_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1115281255_large.jpg)

Hello!
Long time I did not submit an entry, but, I'm coming back with texturing and posing ;)

C&C as ever would be nice.

Neliox
05-05-2005, 05:37 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1115314653_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1115314653_large.jpg)

Final step for texturing on her.
Next one is the chair, it\'s close to finished on it to.
Entry as soon as possible.

C&c would be welcomes

Neliox
05-05-2005, 09:41 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1115329258_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1115329258_large.jpg)

And now the chair in it's final version for modeling.
I'm not satisfy for textures on imps, it would probably change later.

Neliox
05-05-2005, 09:47 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1115329672_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1115329672_large.jpg)

All the scène without textures.
Some more thing to model, chains, background...and others...
But at all, it's time to texture it, final step of the challenge come fast now, so, dont have time to loose, juste go faster ;)

Neliox
05-17-2005, 09:58 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1116367090_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1116367090_large.jpg)

Lighting without texturing and 1 body masked at all...
No idea for the background, and no time at all so it would be like that...
Render test would came very soon.

Neliox
05-17-2005, 10:50 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1116370252_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1116370252_large.jpg)

First rendering test in texture, small image, but 10 minute, without effects, on rendering.

C&c are welcome as ever ^^

Neliox
05-18-2005, 03:51 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1116388314_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1116388314_large.jpg)

Start of working on post effects with combining some various renderings
My computer can't render together a big image with deth of field and sky light, so, I've made various rendering then combine them after.

Other modifications on it would come for the final image...

C&c are not the best point on my tread...but I hope it would come soon ;)

Neliox
05-18-2005, 04:52 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1116391926_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6634/6634_1116391926_large.jpg)

This is it...

The final step is now submited.
I\\\'ve added some more post effects attempting to show it like a photographic picture, so, that the reason of the blur effect.
The attention is turn on the cat, because it is not as blurred as the rest, then the light is turn on it to but not only ;)
I let you seek everything I\\\'ve put on the scene to show that the cat is the real master and not the proud girl.

Long job also finished...lots of insomnia night passed on it...
I\\\'m a little proud that I\\\'ve finaly finished it in time.

I probably could do better than it but no time at all to perfect it, and then, I\\\'m tired a lot... Not good to sleep one day by three or four ^^°°°

Good luck to everyone!

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