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KazuyaMochu
09-25-2002, 11:06 PM
Hello,

this is an image I made for portfolio and I'm still not very happy with it, allthough I think I'm done with modelling

tell me what you think, but more important, give me sugestions and tips.

http://www.truedimensions.net/marcovale/tim_baiculo02.jpg

thank you.

Marco Vale

Amalinde
09-26-2002, 12:01 AM
cant think of any real crits, maybe add some more details too the scene, like the rocks and stuff, overall i like it

Rye
09-26-2002, 12:50 AM
I really like the modeling of the faces and the bike looks great too. I would put less of a bump on the ground and a more detailed texture on it and on those rocks. The texture on the floor and the hill in the back is just out of scale. Try texturing everything. The lighting right now looks a little flat. I think you need more contrast and more defined shadows, kinda looks like the bikes floating. Also if hes going that fast there should be some motion blur. Keep it up!

MEGALO
09-26-2002, 12:52 AM
is this 3d s max?
how did you make the sky?
Is it a picture of a sky?

WiltedEnds
09-26-2002, 01:03 AM
i like him!:buttrock: it looks like an image plane to me..i could be out of my box though.

True
09-26-2002, 02:26 AM
Just more detail texture on the rocks maybe.

True.

piajartist
09-26-2002, 05:57 AM
the dog reminds me of the dog from the movie - The Mask

frye
09-26-2002, 06:01 AM
I didn't know they used the term "red-neck" in Europe. Interesting...

KazuyaMochu
09-26-2002, 11:22 PM
I kind of agree with all of you, and yes, the dog was ment to be a sort of analogie with milo in the mask.
the sky is a personal photo.
it was modeled in 3dsmax4.2 using.... well, every thing I could think of actually :rolleyes:

I chaged the light and contrast, and used some fotografic textures. added some motion blur.

hope you like it!

http://www.truedimensions.net/marcovale/tim_baiculo04.jpg

oh and red-neck is just a word we know from america!

red-neck rampage for 1

behave, and thanks for the tips.

Marco Vale

psychoace
09-26-2002, 11:42 PM
the eyes are causing me tons of problems. The head is so big but the eyes are so small? Also there is a big slice almost right next to his eye it looks way to deep to be a wrinkle

KazuyaMochu
09-27-2002, 11:24 PM
Better?

http://www.truedimensions.net/marcovale/tim_baiculo05.jpg


psychoace: the original design does have small eyes. I trying to keep up to it.
about the wrinckle, you're probably right, although its a wrinkle that shows because he is smiling. but I'm just trying to improve it.

Thanks again.

MEGALO
09-28-2002, 07:25 AM
I like better.

lmc
09-28-2002, 04:43 PM
pretty good:applause:

HawkMan
09-28-2002, 07:26 PM
Try to adjust the Shadow bias of the main light, so the shadows get a more correct placement , right now ti looks a bit too far back.

otherwise the last one is quite an improvement

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