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Zombie Ninja
03-24-2005, 05:40 AM
Andres Rivera has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6353)

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: Yes Madame
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6353/6353_1111643748_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6353/6353_1111643748_large.jpg)

These are 3 comps I am thinking of for the final.
Right now I am kind of fond of number 3. for this image I wanted to have a sort of , what if the servant has had enough from the Master?

Zombie Ninja
03-24-2005, 05:55 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6353/6353_1111643748_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6353/6353_1111643748_large.jpg)

These are 3 comps I am thinking of for the final.
Right now I am kind of fond of number 3. for this image I wanted to have a sort of , what if the servant has had enough from the Master?

Canche
03-24-2005, 06:46 AM
the composition that i like is comp 2. I liked it becuase just by seing the siluote of the maid with the knife you know her emotions.
I can't wait to see it done.
good luck!

DyslexicDan
03-24-2005, 06:51 AM
Ya I would say number 2 because you get to see more and if you canmake the old lady's dress really nice looking it would just embellish the scean.

Walrusmann
03-24-2005, 06:54 AM
gotta say im for comp two aswell man the close up in three kinda robs some of the feeling from the over all peice and i gotta say this is a cool idea wish id thought of it any way good luck man

Claireabella
03-24-2005, 09:24 AM
Hi Andres. My first impression is that I like Comp no 2....... just got a more sinister feel to it and you don't have to see much of the maid to realise her intentions. Great idea! Good luck. :) Claireabella

wuensch
03-24-2005, 10:02 AM
Comp 2 also--
comp 3 is fine but has a storyboardish film-still feel to it.
2 has more room for the costumes and set.
Olli

Arctis
03-24-2005, 10:58 AM
the comp I prefer is n.2, very interesting.
But the distance between the 2 chars is best on n.3 ( they are too close on the previous one...)

Good luck !

Zombie Ninja
03-24-2005, 04:15 PM
Hey thanks for the Helpful feedback guys! Well it seems Comp 2 it is, I do agree with the comments about comp 3 being two story boardy (been doing to much story boarding here). But the spacing still needs to be worked, which is maybe why I was feeling 3 when finishing these. Any way Hopefully I will be able to post finalizations of the characters soon.
Thanks for the support and help

Credit

Arctis Just wanted to give credit for your observations on the spacing, before it made it sound like I thought of it.

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