Master and Servant 2D Entry: Andres Rivera

[Zombie Ninja]

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These are 3 comps I am thinking of for the final.
Right now I am kind of fond of number 3. for this image I wanted to have a sort of , what if the servant has had enough from the Master?

[Canche]

the composition that i like is comp 2. I liked it becuase just by seing the siluote of the maid with the knife you know her emotions.
I can't wait to see it done.
good luck!

[DyslexicDan]

Ya I would say number 2 because you get to see more and if you canmake the old lady's dress really nice looking it would just embellish the scean.

[Walrusmann]

gotta say im for comp two aswell man the close up in three kinda robs some of the feeling from the over all peice and i gotta say this is a cool idea wish id thought of it any way good luck man

[Claireabella]

Hi Andres. My first impression is that I like Comp no 2....... just got a more sinister feel to it and you don't have to see much of the maid to realise her intentions. Great idea! Good luck. :) Claireabella

[wuensch]

Comp 2 also--
comp 3 is fine but has a storyboardish film-still feel to it.
2 has more room for the costumes and set.
Olli

[Arctis]

the comp I prefer is n.2, very interesting.
But the distance between the 2 chars is best on n.3 ( they are too close on the previous one...)

Good luck !

[Zombie Ninja]

Hey thanks for the Helpful feedback guys! Well it seems Comp 2 it is, I do agree with the comments about comp 3 being two story boardy (been doing to much story boarding here). But the spacing still needs to be worked, which is maybe why I was feeling 3 when finishing these. Any way Hopefully I will be able to post finalizations of the characters soon.
Thanks for the support and help

Credit

Arctis – Just wanted to give credit for your observations on the spacing, before it made it sound like I thought of it.

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