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n0$feratu_037 03-24-2005, 12:07 AM Hi,
this is almost finished animation we've been doing,you'll need a xvid codec to view this.
www.s3p.co.yu/download/s3pkoGTV.avi (http://www.s3p.co.yu/download/s3pkoGTV.avi)
~4.6Mb
http://www.s3p.co.yu/download/stripkobg.jpg
crits and comments welcomed:)
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droidoz
03-24-2005, 07:57 AM
Very cool, thats really an awesome character.
Is this the entire film or is there going to be more?
roguenroll
03-24-2005, 08:36 AM
great job. reminds me of the start of a jabba palace band
n0$feratu_037
03-24-2005, 10:42 AM
Thanx guys,
this is the entire film...but there's gonna be more;)
oshiroii
03-24-2005, 06:53 PM
It looks cool, but the camara is too much. It is unclear what he's doing at some points. Like when he's jumping and falling into a hole and all of a sudden he's back again. First of all, I don't get the point of him falling into the hole, second, the camera shot of the jump is bad because it isn't clear that he's jumping.
I also think he should hit less accents. Just make him stand on an amp head baning or something, I think you want to make him rough looking, so use rough body language. Look at the ozzfest festivale thingy, those people start shaking there heads around like maniacs, stand on the amp, walk around like apes (metallica bassist) Now it's just hyperactive, with this crazy accent things. You lookse believebility by letting him kick or jump in 3 frames. Mettel dudes are pretty passive, not flashing around.
Ow yeah, keep the camera still. Don't make the camera take care of the rough look, let the animation do that.
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