Master and Servant 3D Entry: Mark Endre Seljan

[Tremoside]

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Here we go again.. Servant and a master.
We are servants of our own bad or good habits. That's the strongest relationship (I think). The question is,
who is the master and who is the servant? Sometimes we overwrite our wish because of an old and wrong habit. Shame or not, it's true. Just play with the idea...Interesting.

[Tremoside]

Just say a big HELLO for everyone here! Some of you were miss my entry of the previous challenge. I was busy a bit.. Some other competitions in architectural design, product design and i tried to sleep...no success. So am here again and wish you all the best!

Engines ON!

[Versiden]

heya, welcome to the challenge..
great idea buddy

I like your sketching style :thumbsup:

[MetasynMan]

I love your drawing style. And as a *cough*smoker* I completely empathize with your concept! Good luck!

[ChristianHammer]

Okay love this idea and the sketch is wonderful looking forward to seeing the first model.

[abz]

Hi!!
I like your idea(and ofcourse your sketching style).
However i feel you must be careful your topic might end up being an anti-smoking campange.
I am sure you'll handle that.
Best of luck!!!
Cheers!!

[JamesMK]

Nice to see you back here, Mark... Cool concept too, looking forward to see what happens next.

[Tremoside]

Ohho...

Hi Versiden, old friend...we're in the same row again!

MetasynMan: Thanks I hope this idea will work! I have some smoking experience.

HammaJamma: I'm on the way...but busy days are coming, me and a team won an architectural competition titled "Hungarian Design Center", so after some contracts i will be quite busy. Who cares...no sleep until the end of this challenge.

abz: I can handle that I'm smoking for thirteen years...but it's a quite wrong habit although i like to smoke. Keep it up I will realize it...

See you soon...

Tremo

[rattlesnake]

great youre here!! im very happy to see you again my friend...ill be watching u!

[Lemog]

Hey man... I'm too happy to see you here for this challenge... good sketch... simple idea but powerfull... see you soon my friend :thumbsup:

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Some details in sketch, just for start modeling of the head of character: Odon

[Virtuoso]

Look who is back in town.........very nice to see you back amongst us Mark.....:thumbsup:

i'll pull up a comfortable chair and watch the show....be looking for those progress updates.......

I like the concept,and the design is sleek.......See you soon,and I wish you all the best.....:arteest:

[3dRaven]

Nice concept...very stylish. Good to see you joined the challenge Mark. I really like what you did in the Machineflesh one...can't wait to see how this piece will turn out.


On your marks......get set........SUBSCRIBE..:buttrock:

[Tremoside]

Virtuoso, 3dRaven thank you fro your kind words. I hope i am able to show up with something much more better than the machineflesh girl was, although time is always a problem. Till that welcome on the thread!

[peterhorvath]

Hi Mark!

Good idea! (I'm also a smoker...)

Good luck for you!

És gratula a HDC-hez!

Peter Golem

[conundrum]

great stuff so far, a nice original concept and there is a lot of chracter in him already, im looking forward to seeing how this progresses.

[TheFirstAngel]

Hi There, cool concept you come up with, also, i like the sketch a lot. WIsh you loadsa fun and best luck! cheers:thumbsup: :wip: :beer:

[soapy]

Nice sketchwork! I will look forward to seeing your work move along. Good luck Tremoside.

[Grimreaper1981]

nice idea (as a non-smoker again :D), can't wait to see that in 3d...

[Sas.hun]

Hi Mark!

I like your concept and design!

Kivancsian varom a folytatast. Hajra!

[Saschi0815]

Hi Mark, great to see u here:thumbsup:

Wow, u've improved your drawing skills, haven't u?
very cool style, my friend!!!

Best wishes, mate.... another thread i will follow:bounce:

cya soon

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I've cleaned up my concept.

1. Sensitive lighting: One from the floor and the other is the match's light. Maybe it could be interesting with SubSurfaceScattering shders.

2. For the better mood I've put the main character (Odon) into a narrow space like in this case a toilet.

3. The cigarette is waiting for the match and he is quite nervous, so i will add some dinamism to him, here you can see that, I bended him a bit more.

4. Now the whole upper body of Odon can be seen. His balance is a not right (just as his feelings are also instabil)
This is why he have to touch the wall with his left hand.

5. The third character is on the poster..she will be modeled in 3d, than rendered to the poster and edited as an oldschool magazine flyer. She going to be a helathy cutie, just to keep a contrast with Odon.

See ya all,
Tremo

[TheFirstAngel]

interesting direction. a nice way to grant yourself the fun of modeling a pin-up girl ;)
the lightning could get very interesting. toilets are a very underestimated room and tell vooks about the ppl who own them.

floor light doesnt sound very logical to me. but working with gi or fake gi will solve a "dark bothom" of the shot.

very cool and unique sketching style, makes me very curious what you come up with in 3d :)

[ChrRambow]

Great Idea ... the concept sketch is turning out great ... yes i know how hard it could be to be a smoker :hmm:

[Grimreaper1981]

@Tremoside
that 2nd sketch is big step forward, keep up that good work...:buttrock:

[rattlesnake]

woa...great sketches....this man have a cool design....great artistic skillz my friend!

[kbalage]

Really cool sketches... I knew this feeling once, too :) Keep posting! :thumbsup:

[Deadlyforce]

Nice to see that you're back !

I like those concepts very much !
Good beginning !

Cya ! :)

[Kenzor]

One of the best ideas i've seen...
I cann't wait to see more

[Lemog]

Ahahaha... the environment agree me a lot... that seem to my room of reading :scream:

[3dRaven]

Great sketch...nice unique style you got there. Maybe add some grafitti on the walls when you start texturing?? It'd give it an extra touch

[Snowflake]

I like this sketch a lot, and I envy your freehand skills :)
Does the cigarette have roots grabbing Ödön's lips? That is a bit strange to me. The choice of environment is good as well!

[smaddl]

i'm looking forward to see it in 3d. it's gonna be great :bounce:

[ChristianHammer]

I cannot wait to see your model. This is looking great!

[jddog]

wow wonderful concept and excellent sketches... :thumbsup: + :applause:

jdd

[rajdeep]

Nice to see you enter the comp, by the way nice concept and I am already seeing it in a eerie lighting.

[DaddyMack]

Hi Tremoside, can tell you love doing what you do...The direction is most original and the emotional aspect is alredy soo evident in the piece.
LYW;)
keep it up

[Xiti]

I used to smoke...umm just one of those habits I was able to break I guess, great Concept, and I definitely can't wait to see some finale with this piece. Looks absolutely promising!

Xiti

[Virtuoso]

Hi mark....a very nice expressive character and the idea behind your entry is a nice one.it'll be interesting to see you move into 3D with it...I like the style and tone you have set up.......I'll see you as you move forward....until than all the best......:arteest:

[Tremoside]

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Here is the start of 3d work. Planes and mapped references as usual.

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Without planes, just simple eyes in a shaded view.

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After some refinements, just basics. As you see it's just a wire.

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Same thing, just it's shaded now.

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So it's just a default sss shadin' with a point- and a backlight. It was important to make a quick test, coz sss shading requires a bit different sculpting style. In my experience i used to work with more dynamic shaping if the final image will be done with sss. Actually sss generates smoother surface look.

[Virtuoso]

We have 3D lift off................And it's a smooth lift off at that.........Expressive and realistic tonnish caricature it is.........just what I love......Very well done mark......And nice to see your wonderful sketch get into the 3D world now.......Keep bringing it strong.......And again it's sure nice to see you once again back in action where you belong.......:arteest:

[Tremoside]

Hah, Eagle eyed Michael, thanx for all. i hope i can keep up. Your inspiring words help a lot! :bowdown:

Xiti: Thanks a lot and welcome on m thread, am looking forward to your advices about 3d models.


DaddyMack: THX and welcome. So, i try to depict these strong emotions. All what i can do in my free minutes i will do.

rajdeep: Helloooo! How you doin my friend? I will visit your thead soon. Let's rock again!

jddog:Thanks, am on it.

HammaJamma: So, here is the starting model. Just tell me how do you like it.

smaddl: Just as i was wrote it above. Thank you for your interest.

Snowflake: Thanks, but my freehand skills are not the best, coz am really out of practice now. You're right about those "roots" of the cigarette. I will remove them in 3d!

3dRaven: Thanks, good idea about graffities on the wall. At the moment it is a bit far from this point, but we will talkin about this topic later, am sure.

Lemog: Hhhaaa, you're right again. Temple of reading. It could be the topic of next CGTalk challenge. lol

ken T: :bowdown: Thanks a lot

Deadly Force: Hey moodmaster, the group is setted up. Good to see you:buttrock:

kbalage:Yes it's really a bad habit. If you have some experience you know this background.
See ya

rattlesnake: Ahoy now it's turned to 3d, just tell me what you think. Your advices are always the best.

Greamreaper1981: Thanks a lot.

KoRn_Art: Thank you man! You and I can discuss this topic during the challenge....

the1st_angel:Pin-up girl is a requirement for fun. and fun is the powa!:buttrock:

Saschi0815: Thanks, but nowaday sam out of practice again. I have to work on computer more than i want to. Nice to see you!

Sas.hun:Szia, hat akkor itt van a folytatas! tell me what you think!


soapy: thx man! Here we go..

conundrum: Thank you. The first model steps are arriwed.

p.golem: Thanx! A dijatadon kint volt a TV, meg a Nepszabadsag! 2006-ban lesz az epulet atadasa. Seeya


HI FOR EVERYONE!

[3dRaven]

Tremo the guy looks great. Came out even better than the scetch....lotsa character in him :thumbsup:

[soapy]

Hey nice work on the model! I am surprised by how closely it follows the sketches. good work.

[Versiden]

wow, awesome work dude... you've covered so much ground since I've last visited.. you're almost finished!!

great model .. keep it up, I'll be watching ;p

[farkasb]

:thumbsup: :buttrock:
Nice modell!
Congrat!

[bardakos]

very appropriate expression on the face !
lovely..

[Kid-Mesh]

How did I miss this thread? "Subscribing now"

Wow, I just love your artistic style :thumbsup: and your polygonal flow is just awesome. Love the sketches love the character. Cant wait to see more from you.

By the way, what are you modeling with?

[Tremoside]

3dRaven: Thanks about your comment and i really hope that textures will help more..

soapy: Thanks, I changed a lot during modelin, although main proportions are the same.

Versiden: Hey my friend, thanks again!

farkasb: koszi! rajta vagyok a dolgon!

bardakos: :bowdown: mmm, thanks!!

[Tremoside]

Kid Mesh: Hah thank you so much! Inspiration is always a good thing. Am working in max. ZBrush could be better for this kind of a character, but I have to stay with the "old" max now.
and..welcome on my thread!

[Neeno]

SO much character dude im impressed i like it... subscribed lets see where you take this.. very nice modeling...

[TheFirstAngel]

Great vivid stylish and superindividual modeling/texturing work. extremly cool. hehe, love it.
keep it up, the shader looks great and the modeling turns out to become exactly the way i seen it in your concept. keep up the great work!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[Ge-ZUS]

you know what it feels like as a smoker, don't you....
good sketches (especially the toilet-scene) and nice head-model with a convicing skin-shader

[Gunilla]

Just love the style! It really stands out - both concept and modeling :thumbsup:

[Tremoside]

Gunilla: Thank you! I visited your thread and I have to say your second concept is really cool!


Ge.ZUS: Thanks, I will try to keep this quality.

the1st_angel: I will follow the way of the sketches. This head model has no special shader at the moment. That is just simple mental ray sss fastskin in max. Thanks for your words.



Neeno: Thanks man! I hope you will find here more interesting things.

Ciao for everyone!
Tremo

[cg219]

Model is looking good so far. I like your concept, its similar to my own. Good Luck on this, I'll keep an eye out on it.

[DaddyMack]

Awesome!! Love the model, makes me wanna kick my modelling phase into gear

[Hooch]

I really really love your style man! :bounce:

I want to see more and more... hehehe

Best of luck mate. :thumbsup:

[mosconariz]

Congrats Tremo! Your cartoony character is gettin' very cool! :D Good to c ya in this challenge!

[Tremoside]

Hiii,

cg219: Thanks for your attention. Yes we have some similarities, it's no problem from my viewpoint..the finals will be different. Good luck mate!



DaddyMack: Hey, time is tickin away. Find thet gear:-) Bests to you!

Hooch: Am on it! Am too busy at the moment with the 4 other projects so keep it up, update is on the way...

mosconariz: Hey man Thanks!! What about you? We have to keep a contact!

[Dutchman]

Wow Mark! That's really AWESOME STUFF yet! :eek: :thumbsup: :applause: That awesome dynamic modelling! And also the concept is amazing! And something I also love very much, is that last WIP you posted, with that awesome SSS!

I'm your fan :applause:

Greetz, Gijs :)

[Grimreaper1981]

Well mark, great modeling so far...just 1 Point: oden's ear seem to be "flat" in the middle (i think u can see it in the shaded pic best, without textures and lighting), looks a bit strange...

and i'll keep watching u...:twisted: :D

[jddog]

Impressive model and quality of caracter. Love it... btw really nice material (I suppose a kind of SSS) :thumbsup:
jdd

[Tremoside]

Dutchman: Hey Gijs, thank you, nice to see you again. Good luck with this contest! This sss is just a default one. With subdermal paintings on ear and thin skin areas it's going to be more interesting.

Grimreaper1981: It's not strange, it's just not finished! I was wrote that. BTW you're right, there is a missing part against the tragus (I don't know the english name of that part so tragus is it's latin name).

jddog: Thanks a lot! This is just a basic sss!

[gra7]

wooww !!

greeeaatt model.. i just dont like much the eyes..

waiting to see more !!
c ya ! :thumbsup:

[Tremoside]

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It's a chest wire.

[Tremoside]

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Simple viewport grab.

[Tremoside]

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So, Odon is still in draft. Tweakin will come later. Have good day/night!

[goktugg]

hi! ~Tremoside
your model looking great!good modelling:thumbsup:
face expression so COOL and NICE?very well,i think
i'm looking forward your next image!
Good luck?:)

[smaddl]

love it:bounce: great stylized character.

[dmonk]

Really Nice! dude.

The style of the Character is really working for me and I think you've done a super job modeling.

[Kid-Mesh]

I second what Dmonk said! Its looking fabulous man.

[Ravendsg]

hey Tremoside! Great Model you have there dude! :D Looks solid, nice and doopy (if thats the word, hehe ) Enjoying your model and look forward to your progress!! :D Hope i don't turn into him though (as a smoker myself... :blush: ) hehe nice job!! :thumbsup:

[Tremoside]

goktug: Hi mate, thanks and am glad you like it. Welcome on the thread!

smaddl:Akoouuuw thx!

dmonk: With dispplacement and more details it's going to better. BTW thanks a lot!

Kid Mesh: Just again! It's really inspiring on me!

Ravendsg: Hi hehe mann!!! Nice to see you! I hope you can avoid this situation...! Eh..

[jddog]

wow excellent stylization :applause:
:wip:
jdd

[Lemog]

Hmmmmmmmm Mark... I like your model, very impressive eyes... no crits... that's too funny... very good :thumbsup:

[Grimreaper1981]

Grimreaper1981: It's not strange, it's just not finished! I was wrote that. BTW you're right, there is a missing part against the tragus (I don't know the english name of that part so tragus is it's latin name).

well english or german translations for the different parts of the human body are really rare...i'm sure you'll fix that :D

[Climax]

• Damn! I like that model, and the sketches show a very talented artist...now I am subscribed to this thread! :thumbsup:

[mireneye]

Aside from it beeing very characteristic. You also have a great sense of the muscles flow. This has great potential, Ill follow this thread to see your progress. So far excellent!

Happy modelling.

[Versiden]

sweet modelling on the body.. what else can I say - excellent work!

[3dRaven]

Nice progress Tremo :thumbsup: Will he have a belly button?? Or is that cut out of the scene?

That face is adorable...those puppy eyes

[Tremoside]

jddog: Thanks man!

Grimreaper1981: Translations...yes that is always a diffculty. This is why i prefer the medical language (latin) for bodyparts. The most important we understand each other! Thanks abain for your comment!

Climax: Ohhh...your words are so sweet...what else can i say?

mireneye: Thanks, anatomy is my hobby, I had a very friendly proffessor in anatomy. And as an industrial designer (student) am also interested in the topic.

Versiden: My friend your words like honey:bowdown:

3dRaven: Puppy eyes...hah yes!! Just the upper body will be shown on the final cutscene.

An other concept update is comin', just a few hours, coz i have some lessons left.

[Tremoside]

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Hi,
She is the Pin-up postergirl on the toilet's wall. I was made it during the lunch-break at school, so it's drafty, but I think you can see what i mean.
I will place a mirror in front of her (in3D) so she will be showed from more viewpoint at the same time.
Have a nice day/night!

[3dRaven]

Nutz couldn't you just piant her....you already got the scetch....

She'd look cool if she was done in the way girls were painted on bombers during WW2 (sorta half cartoon shading)

[farkasb]

Szia!
Köszönöm a hozzászólásod, és majd szólok, ha valami segítség kell. Nagyon jó a modelled, az anyag is tetszik. Csak egy kicsit viszosnak tűnik. Látom te T-pózban modellezel. Egy kérdés: Nem nezéz ezután beállítani a modellt az adott pózba úgy, hogy minden tökéletes legyen? Éretm ez alatt a hajlatokat, gyűrődések, stb.
Sok sikert továbbra is!
Ui: Magyar fórumokon regisztrálva vagy? Milyen néven?
Bocs, hogy nem fordítom le, de nem menne....
:thumbsup:
Sorry for the language
Shortly in english: greet modell!

[jddog]

nhaaa she really not so pretty... ... :love: heee... can you post a pict of the reference too ? :scream:
Mark, it can be drafty, but looks amazing, beautiful and excellent skill :applause: + :thumbsup: ... I wait for the poly session... :love:

congrats :wip:
jdd

[Squibbit]

hey tremo how a ya doin dude ? nice chicky pic u got there :)

[Tremoside]

3dRaven: Yeeh! Nice idea, but am just too busy now to painting her...sooory, but you will see the 3D version...I hope that will be enough...Hheh! Thanks for your quick reaction on my post!

farkasb: You were asking for my registry on hungarian forums. Honestly, am registered, on design21.hu, but I don't like their style on the threads, here at CGTalk I've found an amazing and helpful community, but hungarian forums are a bit different. Szoval magyarul nem igazan szeretem a nagy fikazasokat. Itt ha lehet senki sem fog sertegetni es megbantani a munkad kapcsan. A magyarok meg nem feltetlenul tartanak itt es ez nekem kicsit ellenszenves tud lenni neha.
Your other question was: why are you modeling in "T" pose (alias rigging pose)? My answer is simple, because i used to rig my characters with a simple biped. It gives more flexibility and in this case more expression on the body when i set the pose. The other reason is: easier UVW editing and symmetrical modeling workflow. Minden karaktert igy szoktam csinalni, mert ugyis becsontozom oket. Igy eleg egy oldalt megmodellezni es azt tukrozni aztan. Raadasul a textura koordinatakat is eleg az egyik oldalon megcsinalni. Gyorsabb, ha az osszes idot nezed. Azt sem erdemes elfelejteni, hogy egy becsontozott es skinnelt karaktert aztan olyan pozba allitasz be amilyenbe csak akarod.

Hi,
Tremo

[Tremoside]

jddog: Hahha, am also waiting for the poly session.....:buttrock:

Squibbit: Thanks, to draw cuties is always a fun :love:

[farkasb]

egyszrűbb modellezni, csak nekem a skinneléssel lenne problémám.

[soapy]

Nice work on the modeling Tremoside. Seems like it is all coming together very well. Maybe you could use a toon shader on the pin-up girl?

[gra7]

woww !! i love this sketch

i love the pin up girls.. hehe ;)
good luck !! c ya !

[arturro]

great style! With the cartoony/humouristc ideas there is I think danger in getting characters who remind some famous cartoons. I mean that it's hard to find own style for your idea. I think that you did it quite good!
Waiting fo more.

[Tremoside]

farkasb: It's a few hours or days to learn it but you have to... It will help a lot, and you can find lots of tutorials on the net.

soapy: toon shader? I don't know yet, but it could be really cool!

gra7: me too.....welcome in the pinup fans club:buttrock:

arturro: Man! You're right! I don't want to copy characters. If you find some dangerous similarities please tell me at the moment!! Thanks for your attention! These themes are always important!

[alex.h.]

absolut great sketches, lookin forward for 3d, see you and :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[javaejderi]

Cheers,
Pro-sketches with a smooth pro-model with well done shading...Not from the crowd as us, it is easily seen those are the hands of one from academy...
I did like the thin but detailed mech forearms of your machineflesh project, you are best at inorganic structures I think, but this model is well-done as I said...

[artman50]

nice concept, it remember me a nice sculpture i have.. from cuba

[Antropus]

Hey Tremo!

Nice to see you in this challenge again, my friend :)
Nice sketchs and great start with the model. Keep it coming and I'm sure that will be great!

Thanks for your 'sweet' letter ;) You are great, man.

Kris

[ps]

:applause: Great sketches and great model. I love your style.
I would kill to draw like you :D

[bardakos]

your sketches are just beautiful and the modeling extremely good
i am a fan...

[Virtuoso]

hi tremo......Beautiful pose and choice for camera viewpoint.......Nice lines and elegant shapes and curve.......You may continue now......;) :arteest:

[Wintermute]

Incredible-
concept!
sketches!
model!

only thing I can even remotely crit is the shader you have for the skin, and that's temporary! just looks a little too much like wax/plasic at the moment. Tone and SSS are pretty sweet though!

keep up the great work, I'm looking forward to more!
:beer:

[rattlesnake]

wow mate...u got an amazing design on this character..i really love it man!!! good work i have no crits...ill be watching this..

[Kid-Mesh]

MUST MODEL IT NOW :eek:

God Im glad Im a man lol

[Ravendsg]

wow, nice little cutie you have there, nice butts, great shading and posing. Really clean lines too! :buttrock:

[Lemog]

Nothing to say... a very pretty girl... hmmmmmmmm :thumbsup:

(I want my ticket for the pin-up fan club...)

[pigwater]

elegant stuff Tremoside .. the lines of these characters are fab ... like how the dude model fleshed out just like the sketch :thumbsup: .. will be looing forward to the same with the pin-up

nice, nice stuff:thumbsup:

[mr_carl]

Wunderfull sketches dude, I really really like the last one :love: hehehe.

Verry nice modeling as well.

Now keap up the good work :arteest:

Carl.

[monkeysweat]

I love the idea! I've lit up on the can more than once, and always felt kinda like a junkie doing it too! If your models turn out as good as your drawings this is gonna ROCK.

[CryingHorn]

beautiful sketh of that girl, looks so sexy, you have a true talent on drawing mate, good luck, I'll be waiting for 3d version of her...

[3dRaven]

Can I get the models number :D

[overcontrast]

nice drawings man... very stylish... keep up the good works :thumbsup: c ya around

[Tremoside]

alex.h: Thanks your comment! Girl 3D will be started soon!

J++ Dragon: Your words like honey. You're right about academic education of mine. Hungaraian design school is based on hand craft. I'm that you've seen my Machineflesh project. So it was interesting experience. Lot's of people liked that, but mainly those mech parts were design questions. For example, I've made a consultation about the chest pneumatic set. That is based on real life mechanical solutions not fictions. I've made a research about FESTO and CAMOZZI etc. pneumatical solutions and engineering. The other side..i have to make my diploma work next year and i hope i can develop my artificial limb topic more, coz i want to graduate with an artificial leg. So thank you for your eagle eye and sweet words:bowdown:

artman50: Thanks, am also a fan of sculpting!

Antropus: Kris, thanks for your visit and comment, really inspiring!

ps.pl: You don't have to kill, just skill :buttrock: Thanks man!

bardakos: Ohhhh...sound good! I try to do my best! I hope you will enjoy it in the future too!

Virtuoso: Yes master, thanks for! Am on it!

Wintermute: Yes, youre right it's waxy now, but i don't have too much time to adjust the sss shader before texturing session. Thanks for your enthusiastic post!

rattlesnake: Jorge my friend, girls forever! Just as at Machineflesh!

Kid Mesh: Am happy too, am a servant of women :love: All my respect for the ladies!

Ravendsg:Am glad you like it! I try to make good turn on 3D!

Lemog: Hahhh! Yess! Pin-up fan club party on the next siggraph? Just high poly girls can enter for free... no that's discrimination. Low polys are also cute.

pigwater: You have to wait a bit, coz I have to finish Odon for first, but I try to hurry! Thanks for the comment!


mr_carl: Thanks! Am on it! I hope...

monkeysweat: So am a bit nervous now.. I have to model that girl damn good... Am under pressure...

Crying Horn: Good to hear something like that. :bowdown: Perhaps 3D turn can give the same or better quality of work.

3dRaven: Actually the model's came from my head, but when I finshed the drawing I was surprised coz she exactly looks like my girlfriend! So i will tell to her how beautiful is she, again and again just as always... So I am not able to give her number! Sooory..

Few busy days are comin to me, so I try to find a gift picture at home to you till i can follow the work. Just to say thanks for your attention!

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112201806_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112201806_large.jpg)

It's a refinement of the cigarette character, because the previous version at the "toilet scene" was confused and had no details. It's important, coz he is the other main character of the scene. CIGARETTE IS EATING FIRE.

[Grimreaper1981]

funny sketch man, keep goin'...:D

[madshooter]

Dude, you are rocking, very nice concept and a cool model.

Keep the good work going:thumbsup:

[YasushAzush]

you are an onbiliveble artist men rock on ,nice scetches very nice. from this time i am a falower of your concept cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

[ibexion]

very wicked drawings ... can't wait to see the 3d

[hands0nfire]

just stopping by to say i really enjoy viewing drawing and I really cann't wait to see whats next

handsonfire
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=223443 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=223443) <- this my thread

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112257174_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112257174_large.jpg)

The following of the Odon character's modeling. Just in wire now

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112257239_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112257239_large.jpg)

Turn to shaded one.

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112257353_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112257353_large.jpg)

RenderA. Still not too detailed. I will keep a quite clean mesh just for the easiest texturing progress.

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112257428_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112257428_large.jpg)

Hand and the arm of Odon.

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112257619_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112257619_large.jpg)

So after your kind letters about the girl drawing I've decided to start her last night. It was a very-very long night. Am still a bit overdosed with polygons...

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112257860_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112257860_large.jpg)

Sorry but i had no time to render her yet. I hope you won't be too angry. Have a good day/night! Good luck to everyone!

[Tremoside]

Still have main twekings on the Odon character...fingers, ear's inner parts, eyes..These are what I can show now...

Grimreaper1981: Thanks! Always good to hear.

madshooter: Am on it my friend! Thanks your visit.

visualact.com: Thanks for your comment and am glad you like it!


ooops i have to gooo.. later soon

[Juha]

beautiful concept skecthes, cicaret character looks superb.. waiting to see it modeled...
good luck.

[eddieellis]

hey dude,, she's looking pritty dawn cute.... nice work

[Hooch]

That face looks just great mate! :thumbsup: More! More! More! :bounce:

[Lemog]

When I saw her... I open my mounth... and no sound... I love :thumbsup:


Details of the man are awesome too... :applause: haha... I've forget him... I don't know why... :D

[3dRaven]

She looks real nice Tremo....good you decided on putting a mirror in front of her orwe'd never see such a face....she's a cutie :thumbsup:

[aliasali]

owe! i hadnt checked this one! really a nice concept and nice modelling skill u have!
great! keep it up,mate.

[nebezial]

excellent style man, i love the sss on ur smoker and the girl is great:thumbsup:

[dmonk]

i think you've done an excellent job in recreating the hair from the sketch and Odon is just coming together great!:applause:

[Tremoside]

Juha: Thanks, you have to wait a bit for the cigarette's model, but keep pit up!

eddieellis: :love: thanks!

Hooch: more-more-more? She only has one face....OK I try to follow the work as soon as possible.

Lemog: Odon was a bit angry after we read your post. Don't forget about him....Thanks for your words! :wavey:

3dRaven: The old mirror trick.. Ihope it will work. Cya!

Madlight_1988: Thanks for the support!

nebezial:Thank you! Good to hear!

dmonk: Am glad, you like this stuff! :wavey:

Cya,
Tremo

[Gunilla]

Amazing progress on this Tremo! I really like the style you're going with ... Odon is absolutely fabulous- lots of personality :thumbsup:

[mecman]

Nice sketches!! The models are awesome too! I love the way you did her hair!:thumbsup:
keep it up Tremoside! Nice work!:applause:

[Deadlyforce]

Just dropping by to say hello !
Some crits about your work ? maybe...:)

Hum...no...I think that both models are beautiful and very close to your sketch which is perfect ! The only detail that bothers me is about the mesh itself; I see so many Triangles and that makes me nervous :D

But that's because I use an app that doesn't like them so much...I can already see that everything's fine with yours.

Good luck !

[niki]

oh damn you! :D .. I love your concepts and the modeling is very good ..:love:

[gra7]

cool model ! i just dont like the mouth !

[Eclectic]

yoooouuuu`rrrreeee goooood!

[orion 77]

thats a nice style you have on the model. the expression on her face makes her look really dozy. what are you aiming for in the feel of the model?

[javaejderi]

Hey your femme character is cool!!! Do you think to give her a role in any animation fim?

[Brent_3D]

Oh beauty! Like the concept. The modeling looks great. Look forward to seeing more.

[hands0nfire]

I viewed all your work so far and wow is the world i can thank of I really like how you have modeled your chacters, they are very pleasing to the eye....I cann't wait to see whats next.. so on that note i'll check back later..

handsonfire

[HillbillyKing]

I really dig this concept. I love the character design. Great design. The models appear to be going very well. One of my favorites so far. Look forward to seeing it come together.

[ibexion]

my word .... your models are wicked, you have really inspired me...no sleep 4 me tonite

[Tremoside]

So it's just the promised gift. I was talkin about it. I made this small sculpture during my Mercedes-Benz design course at school. It was made of the same "industrial clay" what we used for the 1:5 scale car modeling. Not finished, coz i have no time, but it was fun to do it. So it was time to share it. It's just fun..my girlfriend's just smiling when am working on these kind of stuffs.

At the moment I have to hurry, so please be patient, i will answer your comments and visit your pages... Till that, Have a nice day:wavey:
BTW: the battery is just for proportional measurement.http://img13.exs.cx/img13/1348/desktopusbabe3vp.jpg

[Lemog]

I love that... fantastic... you're very talentuous you know :thumbsup:

[kbalage]

Hot sculpture :applause: and definitely amazing models... keep posting those wires, perfect stuff to study the modelling techniques.

[SaintT]

I think you have a sixth sense to the 3d modelig.:applause:
The sketches are very good, and the girl is beutiful!
But I think you have to work with the textures too.

Good luck!

[3dRaven]

Looks like the battery's not the only thing charged...Clay looks pretty fun :thumbsup:

[pigwater]

BTW: the battery is just for proportional measurement.


yah, right :scream: .. the pin up one came out :thumbsup: ... it's all looking really sweet

[Grimreaper1981]

THAT'S real different modeling for that challenge...keep up, man...looking forward to the 3d-body:twisted:

[javaejderi]

Hey, we'll be glad if you also input the instruments for modelling in such small and detailed with clay...Nice works, keep it up maan!!!:thumbsup:

[Kid-Mesh]

WOW....Pinup Girl is on point :twisted:

That is some really good modeling..very stylized and clean too!

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112402450_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112402450_large.jpg)

Her wire from back.

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112402595_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112402595_large.jpg)

Her back in shaded vp.

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112402731_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112402731_large.jpg)

Wire from front.

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112403282_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112403282_large.jpg)

So I had some spare time. Results can be seen above on the screen. It's goin to be hard to pose her well, just as i did it on my drawing. This is why i'll try to keep a quite simple mesh for fast rigUp /and texturing. More details will be added after posing. Subdivision, paint deform. At the moment am not enough fresh to answer your questions and comments, but you have to know how inspirating your words are. Have a nice day/night! :wavey:

[Neeno]

damn shes fine..!! eheemmm i mean great model dude.. i wish the matrix was real then you could've programmed her for me ! lol anyways enough with fantast back to reality.. great stuff your pulling off here man.. keep it up dude.. love the models.

[hands0nfire]

each time I keep seeing your work you keep blowing me away with your modeling...I just want to say I really like your update..

handsonfire
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=223443

[pixelkeg]

Coming along great!

=pK=

[pitiwazou]

beautifull sktech, body and face, I like your work !

good luck ;)

[Virtuoso]

Smooth..shapely,pretty................Well done tremo.....Smooth clean lines......Doing a very nice job here.....Keep it up....:thumbsup:

[CryingHorn]

Wow, great model mate, even better then your concept, I especially like her face, so gentle and sweet, great job :applause:

[Versiden]

nicely executed on a new character, I like what you've done with the hair and the fine lines.

my 2c, I think her cheeks look a bit too sunken in by the jaw area

your wires look very good and very effecient, good job

[Lemog]

Just here to say she's beautiful... only that... no crit :thumbsup:

[gra7]

wow !! great girl.. :drool:

showww moree !!
c ya !

[pixeltroll2005]

Awesome model. Love the hair.

[ps]

Beautiful girl :thumbsup:
Agree wih pixeltroll2005, you did great job modeling hair :applause:

[Deadlyforce]

Very nice model Mr Seljan !
Maybe one crit : I think that we see too much of her teeth.
Despite that little something she looks really beautiful and her eyes are great !

:thumbsup:

Cya !

[Hooch]

I'm in love!!! :eek: :love:
She's hot man! excellent modeling :bounce:
like the way you work her hair, any chance to see the WIP on that? :)

[Tremoside]

Here we go again...

Gunilla: So your comment about Odon was sweet to me. He is the main character, although as i see Pin-upGirl is more popular than he. Sometimet it happen. So your words about him are very important to me.

mecman: Thanks Marcelo! I try to keep up.

Deadly Force: Hi Norman, Nice to see you! I have no problems with triangles and i like to youse them quite freely. I think a lot depends on the degrees of it.

niki: Ohhh...Niki. You're too kind. :bowdown:

gra7: Mouth? Maybe, but i made her head without any reference, so it's just my taste.

pedja.k: Yoooooouuuuuu'rrrrreeee kkkkkkkiiinnnndddd with me! Thanks for that!

orion77: Sorry but i don't uderstand the word dozzy. I think I will pose her as you've seen on the reference. In front of a mirror. She will touch her own mirrored image. A bit narcisstical feeling. Just to follow my general idea. We are our own masters and servants at the same time.

J++ Dragon: Hah..sounds good, but it not depends on me. The other side she is still not finished... Maybe in a demo reel i will make an animation with a girl like her, but i will make a remodel if it could happen.

Brent_3D: Am glad you like it! Thanks for you eye!

hands0nfire: I always like your comments! Good to hear things from you. :wavey:

HillbillyKing: I hope the final will be finished as well. I have no too much time nowadays, so i can model just few hours dayly... Thanks about ur opinion!

ibexion: No sleep? Hey you have to! It's always important, with fresh mind you can work twise faster!! See you!

Lemog: Talenteeed? :bowdown: heh..

kbalage: Koszi Balazs! Remelem elegge informativak a munkak, sajna nincs idom kulon kiterni mindenre. Lehet, hogy majd csinalok valami tutorialt.

SaintT: Koszi! Yes texturing is still a milestone..but for first i have to finish my models..

3dRaven: Oh Greg...battery..what are you talkin about? Hah :-)

pigwater: Relax... am i suspicious?

Grimreaper1981: Yes-yes that was really different...

J++ Dragon: Instruments in clay? Am not enough nutty now... Maybe later! Keep it up!

Kid Mesh: Thanks, just as always!

Neeno: If you can davelop your own matrix system...I promise i will give code about her.
Red dress included...

hands0nfire: Your visits and comments are great of support! Thank you!

pixelkeg: THX

pitiwazou: mmm..thx Good luck you too!

Virtuoso: Hey Master, you makes me your charisma's servant with your encouraging words!

Crying Horn: Thanks you visits and am glad you like her cute face. I do it also....

Versiden: You should be right about cheeks, but for my eye it's not problematic now. Perhaps after a few days I will also recognize this problem with fresh eyes. :wavey:

Lemog: Heeeelllllooooo! I see that...you're always watcing this thread..it's a pleasure to me!

gra7: more will comin! keep it up!

pixeltroll2005: Thanks for!

ps.pl: Thanks, lofts are really powerful tools in max.

Deadly Force: Do you like Téa Leoni? Remember her teeth? Coz I like her.. Good to now you're watching! Thank you my friend!

Hooch: Thanks your comment. Am a bit busy now so i try to work and show the next stuffs of modeling.

Few minutes and some updates will comin....

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112487188_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112487188_large.jpg)

Her feet and legs in mesh.

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112487371_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112487371_large.jpg)

Same in shaded.

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112487513_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112487513_large.jpg)

Just basic toes, wires from front

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112487755_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112487755_large.jpg)

Perhaps her feet won't be seen on the final image..but who knows..I modeled them. Same strategy with less polys.

Have a nice day/night!
Tremo

[Hooch]

Once again... Impresive modeling style Tremoside! :thumbsup:

[collings]

Whaw impressive work here! Very nice work Tremoside :)
I like very much your idea and your concept is nicely done :thumbsup:

I'll often check this thread for sure :bounce:

Good luck

[Deadlyforce]

Very nice !

[Kid-Mesh]

Details, Details....wow very nice and methodical like :thumbsup:

[madshooter]

Tremoside: nice update foot is looking cool, I guess the ankle area needs little more refining.
Nice job:thumbsup:

[jddog]

amazing style/stylization on your figures... :applause: I'm impressed. That's really wonderful... congrats !

jdd

[Tremoside]

Hi mates,

Hooch: Thanks again! Ihope texes will be too..

collings: Welcome here, thanks for watching!

Deadly Force:Thanks Norman!

Kid Mesh: Not too detailed, coz the finel image of her will be around 1200x800, maybe. So i keep a simple mesh just as before. Thanks for your comments! :wavey:

madshooter: You should be right about the ankle. In this case i think that won't be visible on the final shot... but i don't know yet. Of course feet are important for GI setups and right posing, but that's all right now.. Thanks my friend!


jddog: You're too kind :bowdown: thanks!

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112600573_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112600573_large.jpg)

I was working on her hands. Wire from bottom.

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112600783_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112600783_large.jpg)

Just a quick check of the palm_from side in shaded.

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112600933_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112600933_large.jpg)

Wire from top. With thos sharp nails..:-)

[Lemog]

A very beautiful work Mark, particulary clean... very very... a real pleasure for us :thumbsup:

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112601218_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112601218_large.jpg)

The last update at this time. I kept to be in "lowpoly" modeling now. Just as i was told. Save rigging, texturing, reposing, rendering time. The final image about her will be around 1200x800 i think, so it's gonne be fine to me.

Have a nice day/night,
Tremo

[Virtuoso]

Well done Mark.....An eleagant hand in design...and very well implimented in your execution.....Piece by piece....piece by piece....we always get closer......Looking very nice,keep up the very nice work here.....:arteest:

[ace4016]

Nice modleing. I Like the concept too. Good luck on the challenge (kind of late, aren't I).

[Ravendsg]

DAMN FINE WOMAN THERE!! *whistle**whistle* (as if i can whistle...) But its really great piece of work man! Nice modelling on all aspects! Sexy sexy sexy!!! :D :bounce:

[Tremoside]

Virtuoso, ace4016, Ravendsg.....THAAAANKKSSS! :bounce:

[Neeno]

hey there man nice clean modeling.. great stuf.. would love to see more!! :thumbsup:

[3dRaven]

It's a shame she'll only be on a poster.....once you finish maybe make a nice wallpaper version of her ?? ;)

[Cygnus-X]

Hey Mark:) I am glad to see you again my friend. As always your style is amazing boddy. Cant'wait to see what's next. :thumbsup:

[Deadlyforce]

Very cute hands ! witing to see the whole piece on the poster ! Cya !:buttrock:

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112652892_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112652892_large.jpg)

The texture map of Odon\\\'s singlet. Done with texporter. I like to use face normals output, coz it\\\'s containg more information than the simple wire output. It helps painting the texture on the right place.

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112653097_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112653097_large.jpg)

UVW of the body.

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112653277_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112653277_large.jpg)

Few colors, nothing special just tones.
From viewport.

[Tremoside]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112653553_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112653553_large.jpg)

Rendered image. Just to show how the modifien sss setting are working. It's just a start. Few colors, fake bumpmaps with noise. Just to show something from the mood.
Have a nice day/night!

[Climax]

• Hey Mark, great u posted this uvw map, Maybe u can help me out, the question is simple...How do u do it?? lol I have my own methods of course, but it seems u have unfolded the lateral uv's to avoid planar projection slips, and that's cool ! If u have the time, i'll appreciate your help :p:beer:

[Tremoside]

Climax:
1. Am working on one side of the mesh for first, after the finished UVW going to be mirrored. Less work.

2. Mainly am usin cylindrical maps on the main surfaces. Head, torso, legs, arms and I like to work with planar maps on hands. Of course these areas have different poly IDs but the same checker material on them.

3. Quick cleanup in the UVW window to separate different parts. Mirror or flip some surfaces if nedded.

4. On special areas like ears, holes i'm working with soft selection. Verts to verts to avoid overlapping, but it's important to make a tidy border of the UVW, coz that can guide you through the whole process.

5. Checker material can help to sense the differencies.

So you wrote, you have your own method and just curious about how to avoid folding and slipping. I can say soft selection, cylindrical mapping, clean borders you need. But i wrote the whole method just for precision.

Cya

[Virtuoso]

Whats all that explanation up there about............."Rocket science".....;)

fun guy you got going here tremo...really well done too....fun thread....and got lots of depth to with your concept.....Fun to follow......And I will.........:cool:

[3dRaven]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112653277_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112653277_large.jpg)
Guess he's worried about the hole in his shirt :D
Lookin pretty good.....maybe add sweat marks on his shirt....(near the neck too)

Ohhh yeah are you planing on adding eyebrows of some sort??

[TheFirstAngel]

This is a fantastic update. you created one of the (if not the)most unique characters all over the place and he comes to life ina really great way! keep on rockin' mate, the rendershot looks really fine! keep on rockin'!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[madshooter]

Hey the textures are rocking, looks really cool.

Keep up the good work:thumbsup:

[Lemog]

Always great stuff here Mark... for the shirt, I would see the edges of these holes with some tears, some fabric scraps. Perfect work man :thumbsup:

[DimitrisLiatsos]

Yes ...he is cool....sweat marks on his shirt is really a good idea i think too....and small burns from cigarettes too.....

[Deadlyforce]

I like it so far ! :)

[overcontrast]

hey very nice modleing man... only one thing, the cloth tearing loos odd is places, it looks more like cut with a sessors then teared. Hope that makes sence. Well keep up the good works mate nad c ya around :thumbsup:

[CryingHorn]

Hey, nice progress, great model, very natural looking, keep up good work! http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon13.gif

[Tremoside]

HI everyone,

At the moment am in a quite serious situation. I'm in an architectural project (viz) and i have to work to school also. Grohe's kitchen faucet design and Zepter competition. I can't play with the deadlines now...i can't go to the univerity coz am too busy with the archi proj. and the team leader is angry with me. No sleep again and am really nervous that I'm not able to work on Odon and the PuGirl now. This is the situation :cry:

Virtuoso: Thank you. Fun and smile forever!

3dRaven: You're right with sweat marks. Eyebrows? I will explain this topic later. You will be informed, but at the moment it would be too long and i have to make some concept refinements to show why not or why yes...

the1st_angel: :bowdown: Your words mean a lot to me. Almost impossible to tell how needed these are at the moment.

madshooter: Thx, you know these are just colorups, not seriously... Lot to do to paint the subdermals, bumps, speculars....and opamaps. Just try to start somewhere.

Lemog: Am absolutely on the same opinion! I just modeled the genareal shape. Everything else will be done in textures...I hope you can help with your advices in the future. Your experience is a treasure.

DimitrisLiatsos: Cigarette burns...well. Thanks Dimi!

Deadly Force: :love:

overcontrast: Thanks your comment. I will try to paint these stuffs...later, next life...just busy now...


Crying Horn: Thank you so much! :wavey:

[safe05]

Great character design and model for Odon! Really enjoying your progress with this, Mark. :)

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Not too much change on textures, only a shading test with mental ray sss, GI, FG. In this size it was around one and a half hour to render. I was curious how can cold (blue) and warm (orange for the match's light)lights work with the shader. Also I've put on a very simple bump on it. As i see some glossy paints will be needed on the sweatin areas like nose, forehead. And of course on lips. Just a small step forward to see how can i count with time on the final scene. At the moment I think it could take eight and a half hours to do. Of course if i will make a decision about displacement maps, it's going to be much more...but no RAMs nowadays, so i have to buy new ones.

Have a nice day/night,
Tremo

[Atwooki]

Excellent work, Mark!

The girl is looking lusciously cute, and the smoker's got soooo much character (and very good modelling, too)...

Looking forward to more great updates :)

Chris

[Virtuoso]

I like your variety in creations here tremo....alot of diversity and all done with a nice touch and well executed in all facets.......Doing some real nice work here,I will be looking for more as you go along......Keep it up....:arteest:

[Deadlyforce]

Nice dramatic lighting ! I think you're heading in the right direction...no crits ! :buttrock::buttrock:

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http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112845377_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1112845377_large.jpg)

PuGirl at model stage. She is on holiday now, till she comes back I have to work on Odon. So wallpaper will comin later. Nothing special, good old light tracer.

[jake rupert]

very sophisticated sketch-style.

Your health-girl looks perfect. What an effort just for doing a small
wall poster.

;>) Jake

[Deadlyforce]

Where is she going for her holidays ? could I have her number ? 'cause I feel that I need holidays too now...:D

Nice update ! Keep it up ! :)

[Crazydesign]

Wow, that realy looks good, seamless....as far as i can see.
Nice job on the hair to. Good luck to you...at least your gonna finish above me in the final ranking...but that's not so tough..haha...


Keep it up,

jimmy

[arturro]

damn you're good... She is just incredibly amazing:)

I have one suggestion about the guy. I think that such undershirts like he has on himself should be close-fitting, and stick to his body. In would look better in my opinion. Only in the areas with the holes it should be more loose.

[ace4016]

Everything looks great. One thing though, on the pinup girl, her knees seem a bit weird, like she doesnt have knee caps, and the back of the knee looks a bit weird. I know yout taking a break form her, but might as well say it now before I forget.

[Juha]

really fantastic model.. keep going ...

[niki]

nice updates ... very stylized models
but I have to say that I don't like the legs of the girl ..maybe cos they are a bit square, like the calf.. I would fix the knees too
the face of the girl is very good ..and I like how you modeled the hair..
keep it up!

[Tremoside]

Hi everyone,

Atwooki: Great honor to hear these thing from you:bowdown:

Virtuoso: Thanks as always, master of inspiration.

Deadly Force: Norman, be careful I will tell to your girlfrand what you've wrote here....:-)
Only one problem...i lost her number...

Crazydesign: Nothing is sure...

arturro: I chosen this clothing coz i want to show as much as i can from his body. Thanks soon some setups will be shown.

ace4016: Thanks! Knees will be repaired when i will make the the final pose for her.

niki: Hmmm.. calf and knees are quite simple, sure. I can save a half hour on modeling, texturing, rigging and reposing. As you see head, hand and feet are more detailed, coz those aren't too time eaters in this case. Elbows, shoulders, knees are better to be kept as low as possible now. So the results will be fixed. Thanks for the comment!

[SaintT]

Helo again Endre!

Very good modeling!:thumbsup: The man's texture is really nice, I want to see the postergirl's texture.:love: If I can offer something, the girl's skin maybe a little darker and her hair maybe is peroxide blonde.:)

Good luck!:thumbsup:

[TheFirstAngel]

very sexy girl. only suggestion is to let her breast fall a bit to her side. except she'll wear a bra.
awesome progress, keep it up mate!

[juhone]

I have to agree with everybody: she looks great! Especially the face and hair is awesome. Only crit is to knee area, which is somewhat undefined. But then again it's just a small thing. The important thing is the big picture, and in your case it's cool!

[rattlesnake]

Hey my friend...your work is looking really nice!! i love how the girl looks ...shes truly sexy and well modeled...wow mate you really rock!:bounce:

[JamesMK]

There's some wicked modeling going on here, Mark.... don't stop now :wip:

[Hooch]

Can't wait to see some textures on that girl! :scream:
update mate ! :bounce:

[aliasali]

ow,so stylish,mate! very nice sketch and modelling! keep up the nice work,

me 2,i cant wait to see it textured~

[Neliox]

I think knees are a little bit stranges, but very nice body and head modeling :)

[DaddyMack]

Hi Tremoside, from strength to strength, you're clearly taking this real seriously...
Keep kikkin it man!

[Tremoside]

SaintT: On Odon, those texes are just colortests. Only 3 solid color layers masked in photoshop, nothing else at the moment. The girl will be a redhead i think or with blue hair. Perhaps I wil try your idea, but am not sure abot hydrogen colour.

the1st_angel: No bra, but she will push her breasts a bit with her upper arms..because of the pose of her.

juhone: Thanks! A few days before i wrote my opinion about knees...not really important right now.

rattlesnake: :thumbsup: Thanks my friend! Rock :buttrock:

JamesMK: Jah James! I don't stop, just the deadlines stops me. But I finished my architectural project last midnight. So am back to rock!

Hooch: Textures on her? I wanna see them too....

Madlight_1988: Thank you!

Neliox: Knees are not the most important right now, but thanks for the comment.

DaddyMack: Thank you mate. I just like to do this challenge. It's really different my real world tasks. It gives me freedom in art.

Ciao,
Tremo

[Squibbit]

hey that's a very nice model u got there!

now i gotta go read if there's a story behind
this or r u just modeling nakid chiks for fun

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Time to posing Odon.. Simple biped, simple rig.

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Half way on the movement.

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In the pose.

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Viewport look with transparency on Odon.

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Some fight with tricky vertices. Create somethin expression on his face and other things...

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http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1113187123_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6242/6242_1113187123_large.jpg)

Camera on air...shaded viewport on.