CGTalk - Master and Servant 3D Entry: Linda Ferroni

linda

03-23-2005, 10:55 AM

Ok i will give it a try and this time i hope i will be able to finish in time... This Challange is going to be a real Challange for me because i am not good in organic modelling but anyway i have to start to practise on that as well and this is the right opportunity for me....Now i just have to start to find an good subject for this and get started good luck to all!!!

jddog

03-23-2005, 10:59 AM

good luck linda !
jdd

biliousfrog

03-23-2005, 11:09 AM

I look forward to your entry, the gallery on your site is very impressive.

Lemog

03-23-2005, 11:22 AM

Yeah... congratulation to enter in the challenge Linda... and best wishes for the final way... :buttrock:

smaddl

03-23-2005, 11:40 AM

i agree about your gallery. great images and beautiful design.
good luck :)

MDN67

03-23-2005, 11:40 AM

The return of the beautiful linda, good luck

coCoKNIght

03-23-2005, 11:44 AM

Hi Linda! I'm looking forward to your images! Good luck!

scootermaya

03-23-2005, 11:55 AM

Hi linda ! I'm glad you made it ! :thumbsup: (don't forget to transfer you work onto the HD if you move !):D
Good luck ! I'll watch this one carefully ! :bounce:

Good luck !

Lordrych

03-23-2005, 11:59 AM

Good Luck to you Linda!

Rych

JamesMK

03-23-2005, 12:33 PM

Ah great, you're in too. To clear some things up right from the start: you will finish this time, and there will not be any lame excuses involving hardware problems or anything remotely like that, m'kay? :D

linda

03-23-2005, 12:47 PM

jddog: Thank´s:)

Lemog: Another Thank´s to you to:)

smaddl: Glad you like my work!

MDN67: I have returned and hopfully to complete my challange this time.

coCoKNIght: Thank you....

scootermaya: Yes wherever I go my HD go as well hahahah........thank´s :).

Lordrych: Once again thank´s.

JamesMK: Yes i will finish this time (i must) and no bad excuses i never give bad excuses only good hehehehe...........anyway i got ya......thank´s:thumbsup:

JamesMK

03-23-2005, 12:51 PM

no bad excuses i never give bad excuses only good hehehehe.....
Yea... right. :rolleyes:

jddog

03-23-2005, 12:56 PM

Yes i will finish this time (i must)
mmm francesco stay away from linda so she will have enough time and force to finish the contest :D haha... (jocking ;) )

DimitrisLiatsos

03-23-2005, 01:17 PM

Have fun Linda ...i am happy to hear from u again......:bounce:

madshooter

03-23-2005, 01:44 PM

Hi linda, Best of luck for this contest:thumbsup:

flaeticia

03-23-2005, 02:41 PM

..: Yeaahhhh linda :.. !
You have make the good choice !:thumbsup:
I wish you to make a success !
You are going to arrive there, to put an exceptionnal final picture :scream: I am persuaded ! :thumbsup:
Really, very good luck ! :thumbsup:

Gunilla

03-23-2005, 03:27 PM

Hej Linda! Good to see you in.

Looking forward to see what you do with this, personnaly I think people is the hardest thing to do so this will be a real challenge for sure. Best of luck to you!

Climax

03-23-2005, 05:51 PM

• Glad too see u in Linda!:thumbsup: Ready to fill your thread with magic? let's get started! :)

Squibbit

03-23-2005, 05:57 PM

hey there , good luck and have fun Linda !

linda

03-23-2005, 06:11 PM

DimitrisLiatsos: yes i will as much as possible:) thank´s

madshooter: Thank´s

flaeticia: You said to me on the chat that you where thinking to take part please do so it is going to be a good experience for you....see you:thumbsup:

Climax: I try to fill my thread with a little bit of magic and spread some happiness to all of you!

Squibbit: Nice to see you and good luck to you to:thumbsup:

lotaH

03-23-2005, 06:16 PM

Hey!!! Good luck!!

Do you have a idea? The concept?

[]'s

overcontrast

03-23-2005, 06:17 PM

hey there, nice to c u here again... wish u all the best

vincent1

03-23-2005, 06:23 PM

Female 3d artist! Rare breed and most welcomed! Like your still life renderings.

Regards,
Vincent.

My entry:
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=222535

mireneye

03-23-2005, 07:24 PM

Allright, Good luck linda, just here to cheer some.

linda

03-23-2005, 08:05 PM

lotaH: yes i have one concept that i am thinking to do and it has to do with religion i am not saying any more you will se..........:)

eYadNesS

03-23-2005, 08:25 PM

I'm looking to see what you have!

Good luck for you :wise:

ace4016

03-23-2005, 10:09 PM

good luck, and hope you finish this time.

Virtuoso

03-23-2005, 10:17 PM

Hi Linda...........get ready........get set...............Goooooooooooooooooo.

very nice to see you entered.....I look forward to a wonderful entry from you.......all the best to you,and keep it on the fastlane,I know you will...........:arteest:

H3rbie

03-23-2005, 10:22 PM

lycka till ska bli spannande o se hur ditt bidrag vaxer fram! :D

JHarford

03-23-2005, 10:26 PM

good luck, im confident you can pull something amazing off. fantastic work in your gallery

olle

03-23-2005, 11:07 PM

Lycka till i tävlingen Linda!

Och skriv lite mer på animate =)

/ Olle Rydberg

lotaH

03-24-2005, 12:32 AM

lotaH: yes i have one concept that i am thinking to do and it has to do with religion i am not saying any more you will se..........:)

Ok!! I wait for the first outline.
I prefer not to give bad ideas...hehehe :)

trenoops

03-24-2005, 03:39 AM

:applause: I can't wait to see how you tie in your environmental rendering skills into this challenge....the stuff in your portfolio is amazing. You said you were doing something religious...I have some cool HDRI images of church Stained glass interiors if you need them.....:D

I'm just happy your idea won't have anything to do with a Dog, or Robot....or will it? :scream:

Good Luck

TheFirstAngel

03-24-2005, 04:23 AM

Hi linda, wish you much fun and good luck :)

Tremoside

03-24-2005, 12:26 PM

Cool gallery you have. Good luck for this chall!

flaeticia

03-24-2005, 01:22 PM

flaeticia: You said to me on the chat that you where thinking to take part please do so it is going to be a good experience for you....see you:thumbsup:

I think of it, you know I think of it ! :thumbsup:

Saschi0815

03-24-2005, 06:26 PM

Cool, Linda, you're in...really lookin' forward to watch your progress...:bounce:

Best wishes, Linda...:thumbsup:

TheFirstAngel

03-25-2005, 05:14 AM

Hey Linda, how's your progress, coming along niceley with it? just was passing by to see if there's already an update :) godspeed and goodluck :)

theuni

03-25-2005, 09:35 AM

Hi Linda,

welcome back in the new contest...

akin

03-25-2005, 09:55 AM

l liked your hair style more , perhaps, perhaps, perhaps:twisted:

linda

03-25-2005, 11:54 AM

Agian thank´s to all for your good luck wishes:), and as soon as possible i will post my concept for the challange.

eddieellis

03-25-2005, 12:17 PM

Good luck Linda !

cg219

03-25-2005, 04:46 PM

We can expect to see some amzaing modelling and texturing from you. Your gallery is stunning. My step mom thought I was shopping for furniture when she saw me looking at it. Good Luck on the challenge, I'll keep an eye out.

Wandddo

03-25-2005, 11:36 PM

Hi Linda! Very nice works in your website! Certainly you will make a beautiful work. I will wait for your concepts. Good luck!:)
Sorry my poor english

DaddyMack

03-25-2005, 11:51 PM

Good luck linda!

TheFirstAngel

03-26-2005, 12:08 AM

of course this will look good. Knowing linda as Mistress of light... hehe. Any progress in concept/sketching? go go go Linda! :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

linda

03-26-2005, 07:10 AM

the1st_angel: I will sooooooooooooooon post my wip. And thank´s for the title "Mistress of light" i am honoured.

Climax

03-26-2005, 07:15 AM

• Ok Linda...I'll sit right here waiting for your sketch....:D

linda

03-26-2005, 07:42 AM

OK i just have to finish this trainstation that i have to make for my work it is a part of a project i have to finish on tuesday, and i have still many details to fix on this.....

http://www.3dstation.se/station4liten.jpg

pixeltroll2005

03-26-2005, 07:50 AM

Impressive website. Love your work - its very inspiring. Look forward to seeing your concept.

linda

03-26-2005, 12:35 PM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1111840507_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1111840507_large.jpg)

Here comes a first sketch i feel little bit pressed so i had to come up with something, from the beggining i said that is was going be religion inspired but as always i change my mind, even this maybe just one of my ideas and i am not sure i will stick to this but anyway...i feel that i want to have the contrast from rich and poor.....one first idea and we will see..........sorry for my bad sketch i know that painting isn´t my good side....

AND THE STORY:

Anabell has been homeless sence she was four years old hear both parents died in the war and Anabell started from a very young girl to learn how to survive not only because she needed food for the day but also she had to protect her self from the night and anything that comes with it and in this way she has become a very strong and
undepended woman. Her dream is to save enough money in any way that her goodness promit her , and start to build a house for all the homeless children that she see every day with the same pain in their eyes that always remind hear of the past, the past that has been full of suffering and sadness. This dream makes
her more strong to continue the life that has been so unfair to her.

In Anabells eyes you can see the servant, and her master is the...... LIFE ......untill her dream becomes true!!!

IS HEAR DREAM GOING TO COME TRUE?...................

eYadNesS

03-26-2005, 12:39 PM

Good idea to show the rich and poor people, it's like about ~1870 or something :D
Good luck Linda :)

It is similler on what was in Italy, it will be great idea. :buttrock:
History Good! :twisted:

jddog

03-26-2005, 01:00 PM

the concept intrigue me a lot... and the theme (rich/poor master/servant) in a old stylish time rocks ! :thumbsup:

jdd

linda

03-26-2005, 04:55 PM

I am still thinking if i will make something different because this is not very original, and in this case the expressions of the two characters is the most important and i hope i can achieve this resault............. anyway with the right enviroment and details i think this can be a good scene.......

TheFirstAngel

03-26-2005, 05:14 PM

The sketch so far looks fine, for a first glance. if you want to have more weight on the expressions, you might try to use a bit a more decent environment, so the focus might get on the characters themselves. also might play a bit with the pov, maybe a bit more frogview (i like that one)/in your case servant height, so it supports the impression of might of the master?

Don't let yourself push into hasting, no need to. just keep on exploring. there's still plenty of time :) keep it up Linda!

blackdragoncg

03-27-2005, 09:26 AM

Hi Linda, I think your Concept has plenty of potencial. I would suggest maybe to have the girl looking up at the man while he smokes a cigar. Maybe holding the cigar up with his left hand with him facing the camera but his eyes are trained onto the girl or something like that maybe?

I would suggest to make you models only with the geometery you need to have ie head/neck and clothing etc... You have quite a bit of work to do so I would suggest you try and carve out most of the work first and not to worry about the detail too much until the end of the model making process.

Good luck linda :thumbsup: go for it...

Lemog

03-27-2005, 09:40 AM

All is possible with your concept... but I think you must increase the contrast between the 2 persons... she's not only at him service... she's is a poor exploited girl, with all these feelings of misery and suffering that implies. A great work for the expressions and environment...
I sure you will make something perfect, with your special feeling and your artist's qualities...

flaeticia

03-27-2005, 09:56 AM

Your concept is really indeed linda ! You have some bread on the board as we say in France !
But you are there going to manage and to make us something very beautiful, and very meaning ! :thumbsup: Good Luck :)

Reinier

03-27-2005, 10:53 AM

Hey, Concept has potential. Lemog and the 1st_angels pretty much summed up what could be improved. :thumbsup:

i like it that you keep it close to real life.

~ rrrrrreinier

Virtuoso

03-27-2005, 11:18 AM

Hi Linda......I believe that the master should be larger......more imposing.More superior also in the stance or pose.....He should have his head tilted back and looking slightly upwards....Proud and full of himself......The poor girl(Servant) should be looking down and away from him.....never daring to look upon this "Masters" eyes....Nervous and scacred of whatever move he makes...The expression on her face should be scared and cowering......Worried,and humbled.

I think a nice interior,something you are top notch in can be created for this praticular scene....adding to the masters superior standing a very high level interior owned by the master can show even more of his higher standing......

..............This can be a very nice and emotional as well as expressive picture.......And I am sure it will be......I'll be looking for your progress,good luck.....:arteest:

splotch

03-29-2005, 07:40 AM

hellow there,
ammm.... the sketch is sooo nice
looking forward to see more sooner

good luck

Versiden

03-29-2005, 11:57 AM

hi Linda, great sketch and idea
I think you'll have alot of fun with this, on to modelling

linda

03-29-2005, 12:27 PM

the1st_angel: yes you are right about the enviroment i will not make it to much eyecatching because in this image the charachters have to be the central point and i will concentrate more on the face expressions in this image.

blackdragoncg: I was thinking for the general to hold a weapon in his hand a sword or a rifle i will see....i did think to make the dress for the general very much detaild but as you said i will leave that to the end...

Lemog: You are absoloutley right i agree totaly this is moste important for this image to have the best effect....

flaeticia: thank´s my friend i am glad you like my concept!

Virtuoso: You have some good edvices for me and i will keep all this in my mind when i make my modelling i thank you for this because i need it, anything that can improove my work is more than welcome........

jmBoekestein

03-29-2005, 12:34 PM

I think it could use more drama, the idea of rich/poor is good I think. Good luck with that.

I'm sure more ideas will just pop up somehow.:thumbsup:

DaddyMack

03-29-2005, 01:03 PM

Hi linda, re religion, the master could be a rich bishop, they need their shoes shined too, the lighting in your sketch would befit a church (some stained glass maybe)...sorry if it's an irrelevant tangent

Climax

03-29-2005, 06:21 PM

I like the sketch linda, Why don't u try a contemporary scene with the same concept? it would be cool, looking forward...you don't have to feel pressed, you have a long 60 minutes deadlineTO POST YOUR NEW UPDATE!!!:twisted:....:Dlol

Tremoside

03-29-2005, 06:26 PM

Nice idea and it's really sensitive about social problems! Bests to you Linda!

gra7

03-29-2005, 06:44 PM

cool sketch linda..

dont stop.. ;)

good luck !

madshooter

03-30-2005, 05:41 PM

very nice concept Linda, Keep the good work going:thumbsup:

Wandddo

03-30-2005, 09:49 PM

Cool sketch Linda, certainly we will see a great piece!;) keep on...

rusaru

03-30-2005, 11:54 PM

wow

heavy and expressive concept sketch, a little piece of art.

jake rupert

04-02-2005, 05:12 AM

Nice picture,
I hope you will finish it!
Uh...and nice avatar as well!

;>) Jake

rastko

04-03-2005, 07:34 PM

Hi Linda, very good concept, keep up good work.

Good Luck!

TheFirstAngel

04-04-2005, 12:07 AM

Linda Linda! go Linda go!
let your mind go, let your dreams flow!
Linda Linda! go and create!
update!:bounce: update!:bounce: update!:bounce: update!:bounce:

hahahaha. we're waiting!

ilasolomon

04-04-2005, 11:33 PM

Hi Linda!
Best wishes.

Climax

04-04-2005, 11:34 PM

• C'mon Linda, time is up for a new update :bounce::bounce: :D

linda

04-05-2005, 11:35 AM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112697332_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112697332_large.jpg)

Hi all here is a wip on the servant, i did not have any reference because i have been without internet for some days so i just modelled how i was thinking this girl could look like, anyway i need to put much dirt on the dress textures to give the feel of the poor girl because now the clothing might be a little bit to nice and modern for the time i was tinking to refer in my scene but anyway i have a start and that is good......

I want to add that this is my first real atempt of organic modelling and i have still hear face to make hahahahha......

Lemog

04-05-2005, 11:39 AM

mmmh... very nice update for the servant... It seems that we will have something of very fresh and of very sensitive. I await impatiently the continuation :thumbsup:

jddog

04-05-2005, 11:39 AM

I'm happy to see that polys are in actions now, nothing to say in this moment, model looks really accurate for me... :thumbsup:
jdd

linda

04-05-2005, 11:42 AM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112697738_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112697738_large.jpg)

Here are some wires the shoe:

linda

04-05-2005, 11:43 AM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112697827_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112697827_large.jpg)

The dress:

linda

04-05-2005, 11:45 AM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112697901_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112697901_large.jpg)

The shirt:

ace4016

04-05-2005, 12:23 PM

Nice updates Linda. It liikek like her chest is kind of flat, like ti takes up a lot of space on her chest but doesn't go outwards proportionally. I am not sure about this, but her torso seems too short, and her legs seem too long. Nice first attempt Linda, looks pretty good. Hope to see mroe updates soon.

dmonk

04-05-2005, 01:58 PM

Very nice start on the modeling.The little lace bits peaking out are a nice touch.:thumbsup:

linda

04-05-2005, 02:35 PM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112708114_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112708114_large.jpg)

Started to modell the servants head....but still a lot of tweaking to do on the head.... hmmmmm i start to like the organic modelling now first time i manage to make a face that looks like a face and with all the parts in right place hahahhaa......

DimitrisLiatsos

04-05-2005, 03:25 PM

Yeah ...this is what i call UPDATES ....Bravoooooo!

Keep it up Lady ...love it ....better gather all elements in one update for us to see ..:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Linda ! Linda! Linda! :bounce:

mikkislehtola

04-05-2005, 03:45 PM

I really like your concept!
You have even proper edgeloops there! :thumbsup: (jealous)
Keep up the good work!

linda

04-05-2005, 07:02 PM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112724130_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112724130_large.jpg)

Here is an more complete modell of the servant now with the head added, But without textures and hair.....offcourse.......

linda

04-05-2005, 07:11 PM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112724697_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112724697_large.jpg)

Here is another viewe of my servant modell.

alex.h.

04-05-2005, 07:14 PM

great work linda, the legs look alittle bit thin, but thats maby how you whant it,
see you and :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

JamesMK

04-05-2005, 07:15 PM

Looking really good :thumbsup:

Two things:

a) Her chin looks rather masculine, maybe tweak it a little rounder and less protruded

b) Her feet appear slightly too long, and slightly too narrow... or maybe the weight distribution (somehow how the shin bone connects to the foot) is slightly off.

soapy

04-05-2005, 07:18 PM

Hey nice work on the servant model. I really like the clothes. The toe coming through the sock tok me aback for a second, I suppose if the clothes are dirty it will match, but it definitely says something. cheers, good luck.

linda

04-05-2005, 07:41 PM

Thx guys!

alex.h: no i don´t want the legs to be thin i will fix them.

JamesMK: i will conciderate your advices thx:thumbsup:

madshooter

04-05-2005, 08:01 PM

Hi linda, servant model is lookin great, My only suggestion is if you could add little more wrinkles on her skirt, just a suggestion:)

Keep the good work going:thumbsup: waiting for another rocking update.

linda

04-06-2005, 11:35 AM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112783705_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112783705_large.jpg)

Hi i have made some improvement on her dress i added some wrinkles in zbrush i also made some changes on her face as you suggested me to do and the lower leggs are a little big thicker.
Now i will continue to add some wrinkles on hear shirt also.
let me know what you think.

DaddyMack

04-06-2005, 11:50 AM

Hi Linda, your modelling is coming along great, it looks like the first 'roll' on both the sleeves and socks could use maybe a subtle extra roll in the transition.
Great work so far! keep it coming:thumbsup:

3dRaven

04-06-2005, 01:50 PM

Nice modeling Linda...the dress looks real nice...only one things bothering me with the chin...the area from the chin to the neck seems a bit flat....shoun't it be more like a curve?? It might be the perspective or lack of ears, but take a look at some refrence photos (or better yet chuck one in as a backdrop and compare)...other than that no crits...the sleeves are coming along real nice as well :thumbsup:

linda

04-06-2005, 05:07 PM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112803628_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112803628_large.jpg)

ok i feel quiet finished with the servant modell i just have to make the hair, texture and after the rigging. But i will leav this for now and start on the master modell. tell me what you think.....not so many changes just some details.

Gunilla

04-06-2005, 05:13 PM

Really nice modeling! The only thing I can think of is that her chin seems to strong for her character - it would fit perfect on a heroine type of character but perhaps that's not what you're after. Just a thought. Other than that, really good work and speedy as usual :thumbsup:

linda

04-06-2005, 05:35 PM

Thx Gunilla!:) yes i want the character to look a little bit "sick" i mean starving and poor i think the cheeks now give this impression and that is what i want, i think when i am done with the textures i will bring this impression out more........

Lemog

04-07-2005, 06:52 AM

Beautiful progression for this servant Linda.
Some small remarks, the top of its face seems a little too long and too flat.
Her pubis appears also too flat, misses its a little forms (I likes the forms :scream: ).
Her calves lack contour on the back part, and the part before is not enough right.
Then, as you see, nothing hard or too much important... You actually do a very work lady Linda... continue like that and present us soon a new masterpiece :thumbsup:

linda

04-07-2005, 09:01 AM

Lemog: yes i think i have to make some changes i thought i was finished with this modell but i now i can see i am not, i think i have become blind with this modell but now i can see that i have to make some changes so i will fix this and thank´s for your attention.

And as well as i am fixing this i try to make hear cheeks a little bit smaller as Gunilla said. :)

Honestly i stay so happy that i could make this modell for me it´s a great step forward because for me the organic modelling was something i thougt was much more difficoult and in only two days i make this, and if i can do this nothing is impossible..........

I have to thank Francesco for learning me understanding the organic modelling, mille baci per te.

ficolo

04-07-2005, 09:50 AM

I have to thank Francesco for learning me understanding the organic modelling, mille baci per te.

Thanks!!! Piccola for me is a pleasure to stay near to you and work togheter in our passions " love and 3darts".... 2000 Baci pe te Baby your Francesco for ever....:love:

Ciao
Francesco

PS: Baby stay ready for tonight because i will bring you in a beautiful place....

Lemog

04-07-2005, 09:56 AM

Honestly i stay so happy that i could make this modell for me it´s a great step forward because for me the organic modelling was something i thougt was much more difficoult and in only two days i make this, and if i can do this nothing is impossible..........

I know that... and at first sight, you will win this new challenge :applause:

I have to thank Francesco for learning me understanding the organic modelling, ...
lucky girl, a personal teacher :thumbsup:

TheFirstAngel

04-07-2005, 03:36 PM

Very good model, linda. all over impression and apprearance you your classical piece is very nice. my only suggestion is her jaw, her chin is a bit "male" cuz its looky very strong forward.
maybe smove her profile a slight bit out there. but thats just a minor tweak, your work comes a long nice and smoveley, keep it up Linda!!!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

linda

04-07-2005, 04:31 PM

http://www.3dstation.se/servant3.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1112887902_large.jpg)

here is an update on servants face what do you think is it better?

melkao

04-07-2005, 05:07 PM

hi ferroni, nice to see you again, and good luck on this challenge:thumbsup:

linda

04-07-2005, 06:40 PM

OK i have not understand if this is a must so if anyone knows tell me if i have to subbmit the story as well as an milestone.

ANYWAY HERE IS THE STORY:

Anabell has been homeless sence she was four years old hear both parents died in the war and Anabell started from a very young girl to learn how to survive not only because she needed food for the day but also she had to protect her self from the night and anything that comes with it and in this way she has become a very strong and
undepended woman. Her dream is to save enough money in any way that her goodness promit her , and start to build a house for all the homeless children that she see every day with the same pain in their eyes that always remind hear of the past, the past that has been full of suffering and sadness. This dream makes
her more strong to continue the life that has been so unfair to her.

In Anabells eyes you can see the servant, and her master is the...... LIFE ......untill her dream becomes true!!!

IS HEAR DREAM GOING TO COME TRUE?...................

flaeticia

04-07-2005, 08:35 PM

Good evening linda !

This image is simply magic ! :thumbsup:
Even if your speciality isnt the organic modelling, I see that you dont untangle you so badly as that ! Its really a very beautiful modelling, the render is also besides. :thumbsup:

Your render reminds me Brazil, but I know not why ! :rolleyes:

The concept is present quite as the quality of the modelling !
With regard to your image, the small right tongue doesnt distinguish itself enough (contrary to the other one).

Otherwise she has a little bit big feet ? :scream:

I wish you the best Linda

Good progress :thumbsup:

Lemog

04-07-2005, 10:09 PM

Nice story Linda... I hope the best for Anabell... that her dream going to come true :thumbsup: and yours too :D

linda

04-08-2005, 12:42 PM

Hi Laeticia! thank´s for your words i dont know i think the feets are ok, and as for the rendering i have used only light trace in 3ds max with one sun light one blue omni light and skylight.

Lemog: thank´s! the story might not be very detailed and original but it is a story anyway.............

Atwooki

04-08-2005, 12:50 PM

Servant's coming on nicely, Linda :)

Can't wait to see your 'magic' lighting touch with the interior; the concept sketch looks like you'll do a great job there...

Looking forward to updates :)

Chris

ninox

04-08-2005, 12:59 PM

Hi linda,
I think you have a good story. The modeling of your girl is good so far, may be just the neck that is too large for a girl but the remainder seems to work. So keep it up, and show us more stuff.
Have fun and good luck to you.:)

alexfalchi

04-08-2005, 01:11 PM

Ciao Linda bel lavoro complimenti:) good work really:thumbsup:

Alex

Lemog

04-08-2005, 02:54 PM

Lemog: thank´s! the story might not be very detailed and original but it is a story anyway.............
yes I know... but that change a little bit than the eternal subjects with monsters, no ? sad but fresh :D

Climax

04-08-2005, 03:45 PM

IS HEAR DREAM GOING TO COME TRUE?...................

• BBBUUAAAA! :cry::cry::cry:, I hope so!!!, snif!... that's a sad story with an uncertain future.....,Can I model a couple of bucks to import them into your scene? :D
• Lovely, and very romantic,.... About your model only 2 suggestions:

1• Her's head is a bit too big, she is 6 heads tall, schrink it, but just a little bit, you'll see that this tiny change will improve the model

2•Make her butt a bit wider and lift a bit the breast

This are Just as I said tiny changes, try them out, u don't have to re-model or texturize again only scale and move some vertices, matter of a couple of minutes :thumbsup:

Great Linda! It was about time! but it has been worth! ;)

linda

04-08-2005, 04:21 PM

Atwooki: thank´s i hope my lightning of the scene is going to come out as i have in my mind...as you said a little bit magic.....

ninox: I am glad you like it i will try to get her neck a little bit smaller.

alexfalchi: mille grazie!!

Lemog: In this point of viewe you are right i agree that there are to many monsters in the challange, and this is more different from moste of the other guys concepts.

Climax: hahahaha don´t cry to much.....save the tears to the end.....
I will follow your suggestions i am sure they will improove my modell thank´s!

linda

04-09-2005, 04:53 PM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1113062026_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1113062026_large.jpg)

Hi i have manage to start on the masters head even if Anabell (servant) is not ready yet i leave her on the side for a while because other wise i will be bored, the head modell of the master is almoste finished i need to work a little bit on the part around eyes, tell me what you think.......

Miyagi

04-09-2005, 06:04 PM

Hi Linda!
Nice Job, specially the garment...that's amazing:thumbsup:.
I like your concept too.
I little advice is about the servant head area, it seems too masculine , I think neck could be thinner, the cheekbone and the eyebrow area are too protuberant given her a master-like aspect.
By the way I'm from Brasil, but I don't what flaeticia is talking about:shrug:. Could you point out
what she means?:shrug:

anyway...Good Luck!!!:thumbsup:

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=224272&highlight=Rogerio+Masao
My Master And Servanthttp://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon13.gif

Kaksht

04-09-2005, 07:27 PM

Wow, nice modeling here Linda, love the servant, and looking forward for more updates of the master.

Hope that the servant will have some expresion on the face.
Good luck!

linda

04-12-2005, 01:50 PM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1113310221_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1113310221_large.jpg)

Hi i have worked on the masters body and clothing but i have still much more work to do on this untill finished.

flaeticia

04-12-2005, 02:04 PM

Ouaouw ! :eek:
It is really very beautiful, very well modelled !:thumbsup:
We feel in a evident way the impressive stature is the personality of the master !
Its made a success linda ! :applause:
Bravo !

ficolo

04-12-2005, 02:05 PM

Ciao Piccola go go go!!! You are the best!!!

Your
Francesco

Versiden

04-12-2005, 04:59 PM

hey Linda, just visiting to give u a thumbs up and very nice work here.

how did u do the tassles on his shouders?(are they called tassles? hehe)

melkao

04-12-2005, 05:08 PM

hi ferroni. how can you say that you are not good modeling organics?
that models are very good

linda

04-12-2005, 05:25 PM

Versiden: Hi and thank´s the tassles are renderble splines i made 6-7 different once and after i made a copy of them and just changed the position.

melkao: I am glad for you words, realy before 2 or 3 weeks ago i thougt that i never was going to learn the organic modelling......

linda

04-12-2005, 05:50 PM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1113324635_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1113324635_large.jpg)

Ok i am doing some texturing on the master OBSERV! the trousers and shoes are not ready yet.....

Neeno

04-12-2005, 05:54 PM

textures look great so far. sticking to character style great. as you mentioned already boots need work and trousers so am looking to see more/ great stuff so far though good luck

SDIMIS

04-12-2005, 07:08 PM

Hi Linda,

beautifull work.Nice costume and texturing it.Only the belt(I do not know if it has to be so loose),I think need a little tied up and some stretch wrinkcles at the uniform at that section.Again I do not know if this is how belt is being wear.
Great work,Keep it up!:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Virtuoso

04-12-2005, 08:23 PM

One too many pieces of pizza ;) ......but he looks real nice,well done Linda.....I think just a little "Nip and tuck" here and there,and he is ready for the parade.....Well done....:cool: :arteest:

gui_mends

04-12-2005, 09:11 PM

Hi Linda..
Really a nice work,
i liked so much your
modeling, and the
texturing is looking
me good too..
looking you!
cya..
*sorry about my english ='(

linda

04-13-2005, 05:45 PM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1113410720_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6187/6187_1113410720_large.jpg)

hi almoste finished with texturing of the master i have the boots left and some smal refining but the end resault of the master is going to look like this....

flaeticia

04-13-2005, 06:23 PM

You advance well linda ! :thumbsup:
I dont know if that will stay as this but I find that the face of the master misses expression : everything is not ended : its normal !
On the other hand I dont know if that come from me, but I dont see the details of medals

Good continuation Linda ! :thumbsup:

suk-grigorij

04-13-2005, 06:24 PM

Hello. Very well modelling and texturing, but what about facial expression. No good (if it's finished), not master-like.

linda

04-13-2005, 10:46 PM

Ok this is the finished modell unrigged and without expressions just the modell, i will offcourse add expressions on his face after, i am just modelling the base modells for my scene.
Flaeticia the detail of the medals dont show very well because of the lightning....:)

smaddl

04-15-2005, 01:03 AM

funny looking master. great work :thumbsup:

DimitrisLiatsos

04-15-2005, 01:13 AM

Very good work with the Master Linda..i am waiting to see him posed . :thumbsup::bounce::bounce:

Maxko

04-15-2005, 01:27 AM

really like it.. NICE model, render and good idea :)

melkao

04-15-2005, 05:42 PM

Hi ferroni, Do You said that 2 weeks ago, you didn't know the organic modeling?:shrug: ......wow girl you learn very fast, i'm surprised.:eek:

Micro26

04-15-2005, 05:52 PM

:bounce: hey this is awesome, great texturing:thumbsup:

suk-grigorij

04-15-2005, 06:12 PM

2 weeks, huh?! Pretty fast.

safe05

04-15-2005, 06:34 PM

Wow! can't believe I missed this one. So many great works here. Really nice modeling and character design. Subscribed! :thumbsup:

jddog

04-16-2005, 01:47 PM

Beautiful work linda :thumbsup: really excellent figures, I like it :applause:
:wip:
jdd

Gianluca

04-16-2005, 03:36 PM

classic style for this good concept, appeals to me. Optimal texturing of the uniform and nice modeling step, go linda go! :applause:

good luck

javaejderi

04-16-2005, 04:32 PM

Hi Linda,
The models are so alive that I feel as they will come out of the monitor and start to talk...You have grown own style, you can model and make texture and lights in a swift way...Your style produces photorealistic images with some touch of optimist dreamy mood...Your characters exist and even dream!!!:thumbsup:

Mordalles

04-16-2005, 11:33 PM

some really good modelling and texturing on the char! really great job!

goktugg

04-17-2005, 12:21 AM

going great!:thumbsup:

linda

04-17-2005, 10:15 PM

Thx all for your replies :) it makes me very happy that you like what i have done! i will start on the enviroment now and all objects that will be placed in the scene and after i will move on with the rigging so i can pose my characters.

korayarts

04-18-2005, 01:54 AM

I like your master texture ....good luck

Lemog

04-18-2005, 08:22 AM

Your master is perfect for me... I love your vision... your particular sensitive... your woman eyes in fact... that give us some particular result, beautiful, fresh and original. I like that...

Just one remark... he seem for the moment a bit too much sympathic... but I'm sure you change that nearly... with the last pose.

Good continuation Linda :thumbsup: