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fellah
09-24-2002, 10:24 PM
ok, I couldn't resist it anymore, I'm in :)

http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport/Fellah_XtremeSport1.jpg

the modeling is yet in a _very_ early state, but if you can crit the lighting please do. it's no GI, just traditional spots(+ 1area)
I'll try to go for a disney/pixar look..

I have in plan of putting a girl in the car, and the staging will be different later on..

take care
// fellah

WarpedMinds
09-24-2002, 10:27 PM
looks extreme ^_^ nice modelling

fellah
09-24-2002, 10:29 PM
it will be much more extreme in the end, this is just the start ;)
thanks :)

Joril
09-24-2002, 10:42 PM
Let the kitten-smashing begin!

Virtuoso
09-24-2002, 10:53 PM
Welcome aboard Fellah.............It's always great seeing your creativity at work. This I know will be top notch already coming from your talented mind...................

I too have been deep down in my lab/dungeon in Malibu for many, many hours building the foundations of my own Twisted Extreme sports entry..............so I'll be joining you and all the others real soon.......the un-veiling is just around the corner, real close now.........:)

Pixar sure does have that extra sweet style and grace don't they.............See you soon.........:beer: :)

Apt Pupil
09-24-2002, 11:01 PM
Oh my,

I have that same feeling too :cry:, the more I watch this contest, the more I want IN!!! . . . but . . . I must resist. . . resist . . . resist. . .


Otherwise, hey!! so far it's looking darn good. However, the lighting sucks . . . oops, I missed spelled that, I mean the lighting looks good heheh.

Can't wait to see more:thumbsup:

:beer:

Apt Pupil
09-24-2002, 11:08 PM
Oh, and Virtuoso, you got me sOoO curious it's not even funny. I saw your sketches in oz's thread, and I liked them alot(the viking I think it was). Would you join ALREADY!! heheheh. Otherwise, it's nice to see you again. I might join this contest too, however, only the 2d section. I need to practice my colors:sad:

Well, I guess I will be seeing you around :wavey:

otacon
09-24-2002, 11:29 PM
Yea the lightings looking good. I cant wait to see what this sport could be...it looks very interesting.:thumbsup:

visualboo
09-24-2002, 11:37 PM
Not yooou again :annoyed:




j/k rock on anders :buttrock:

Satyricon
09-24-2002, 11:50 PM
Welcome mate!! You knocked me down with your very first render!!!!:buttrock: Damn.... this is going to be very interesting!!! Can't wait to see more! The lighting is just great:thumbsup: Your scene does have that Pixar look we all love!!!

Jeffo
09-25-2002, 12:57 AM
Welcome aboard on this challenge!! i wondered how long it was gonna take ya : ) lookin good so far, cant wait to see updates!

mebamonster
09-25-2002, 02:12 AM
Hey Fellah! Good to see ya in this challenge. I can't make out your sport yet...more clues PLEEESE

monotypic
09-25-2002, 03:59 AM
my REAL question here.. is if fella did the drawing in that picture...
;)

visualboo
09-25-2002, 04:42 AM
hahaha..... lol

edit: forgot to mention but you might want to make the car on the track a bit more narrow. If there was two side by side they look like they would hit each other. :)

kokoro
09-25-2002, 05:30 AM
welcome fellah !! i am glad you could not resist - hehe. saw just your work in the spaceduck thread - really amazing - i love it.

very nice start for the x-sport. i am curious what it will be.

also - apt pupil - do not resist ! join in - it will pay with the fun you have !

Jeffo
09-25-2002, 09:51 AM
Boo: maybe that was intention... some sort of Hot Wheels suicide racing.. a game of chicken if you will!

lol just a thought!

fellah
09-25-2002, 10:26 AM
Joril,
was that a guess of the sport? in that case you're faaaaar from right :p

Virtuoso,
ahaha, sure! no, I don't believe you! I don't think you'll join in this time either, chicken, chicken, chicken(some pressure ;) )

Apt Pupil,
ahaha, if you feel that way already you cannot resist it much longer.. remember the challenge ends
in about a _month_ are you really gonna put yourself trough that :eek: I know/hope you'll join in!

otacon,
thanks! actually there is a clue to the sport in my first msg ;)

(starting to use standard smileys as 5 is the maximum :) (ouch, used my last one there)

visualboo,
ahahah, you can't get rid of me =D

jeffo, Satyricon,
thanks for the warm welcome guys!

mebamonster,
I thought I made it to easy for you all and that you all would guess the sport directly =)
but here are some clues. it will be sort of "fantasy"
think "nils holgersson"(a swedish story to make it harder =) ) and then think "length". no more now, don't wan't to make it to easy =)

monotypic,
ahahah! yes, when I was 8-10 or something, I looked through some old folders of picturs I made as I child,
a little bit of nostalgia for me I thought I would share for the fun of it all =)

visualboo,
yep you're totaly right, thanks =)


kokoro,
thanks, glad you like the spaceDuck stuff to, very cool =)

Jeffo,
nono, it wasn't ;-)


ouch feels like if I've just written a book =)

thanks and take care
// fellah

brandon3d
09-25-2002, 11:07 AM
that's super fellah !!!!:buttrock:

MikaelPersson
09-25-2002, 11:46 AM
Glad to see you failed to resist any longer.
Extended elictric car running, the first one to puke looses? Make the longest jump over some great chasm.
How is the setting. Parallell world fairy beings hijacking the childrens toys?

OZ
09-25-2002, 11:47 AM
IM FULL OF HAPPYNESS TO SEE U HERE WITH ANOTHER GRATH ENTRY!!!!GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!:bounce: :love:

dur23
09-25-2002, 05:56 PM
thats some nice pixarish ambience. I too am quite curious about what your gonna do:shrug:

Joril
09-25-2002, 06:32 PM
was that a guess of the sport? in that case you're faaaaar from right
It was more of a "to early to tell" kind of answer :p

Virtuoso
09-25-2002, 07:53 PM
Oh so soooooon Fellah, I can see it coming, my thread is so very close...............just around the corner........

OZ.............Where are you??? get going, I have been waiting for an update.........

Apt pupil............Yes my entry is hours away now.....And please do everyone a favor, and join in...........Wow your talent is such a pleasure to view........

Update I hope Fellah real soon............Just some pressure for you, right back at you.........;) :)

gwelty
09-26-2002, 01:37 AM
lookin forward to it...... your stuff kicks

now if Virtuoso would ever get off the beach.....

Ech0
09-26-2002, 01:45 AM
yea a challenge with
out fellah is like peas without the carrots
peanut with out the butter macronni without the cheese you get the point was wondering when you was gona crack muhahahahahahah

Virtuoso
09-26-2002, 04:42 AM
Originally posted by gwelty


now if Virtuoso would ever get off the beach.....

Yes the Beach...............But luckily I still find time to go deep into my dungeon under the Beach for some good ol' fashioned CG work...........Very soon I'll post, just a few more details............

Fellah, Fellah...............Update is due soon now........Can you feel the pressure.........

;) :p :)

fellah
09-26-2002, 10:40 AM
brandon3d,
thanks, I saw you devoted your first post to me, I'm honoured!

Mikael P.
:eek: you're very close ;)

- OZ-,
thanks, I'm very glad you feel that way oz! now update your entry :wip:

dur23,
hihi, you'll have to wait and see, or rub your head a little more :)

Joril,
oh, I see. sorry =)

Virtuoso,
ahaha! I won't update until you enter this time! so I think I'll have to wait a week or 2 =)
but I know it must be hard to work when you're living near a beach in malibu tough ;-)

gwelty,
yes, I think virtuoso prefers to watch the babes on the beach instead of doing some 3d =/ =)

Ech0,
hehehe ;-) thanks =)

Virtuoso,
ahahahah! I wonder how it looks where you live(in the dungeon under the beach) ) sounds like a very cool place! =)
btw, I wan't to update to but I can't until you enter =/
:wip: (saved the last one for you)


oh, one more clue.. hm.. "speed".. =)

thanks and take care
// fellah

MikaelPersson
09-26-2002, 01:38 PM
Hmm. fun, your guess of my guys sport was so close that I couldnīt even tell you so ;).

Will we see that race track lined up for the wall and some evil boy with the control in his hand?

fellah
09-26-2002, 03:12 PM
Hmm. fun, your guess of my guys sport was so close that I couldnīt even tell you so ;).
ahahha! :) I had my suspicions after your reply to my guess at your thread, but I didn't wan't to drive it any further ;)

Will we see that race track lined up for the wall and some evil boy with the control in his hand?
now you're slipping further away :) but the slotcar will be included in the sport in some way. maybe my next update will reveal something ;)

stipen
09-27-2002, 08:54 AM
I was waiting for the next update to post my first word on this thread
but you don't seem to be very fast on this one :) :)

Come ON!!! let us see MORE!!!!!!!!!:bounce:
UPDATE!
UPDATE!
....
....
....
ok I'll wait.

Question: Are the toy cubes involved in the sport???

Apt Pupil
09-28-2002, 03:50 AM
Screw it . . . I AM IN!! expect to see the start of my entry early next week:) Damn you fellah.

Later :beer:

fellah
09-28-2002, 06:48 AM
stipen:
I was waiting for the next update to post my first word on this thread
but you don't seem to be very fast on this one
what the!!! :)

the next update will be BIG though, but my sister just came to vist with her 4childrens so I will not have much free time except on the nights and then they will be sleeping in the computer room so =/

Question: Are the toy cubes involved in the sport???
nope :)

Apt Pupil:
ahahahahah!!! I knew it, you couldn't resist!!! :wip: I know the feeling :)
2d or 3d?(I guess both) well, hope to see it soon :thumbsup:

thanks and cheers
// fellah

OZ
09-28-2002, 09:17 AM
HI!Yes !!!MOre update!:buttrock:

baby
09-28-2002, 11:40 AM
should have done a looping in the frame...


but that's very very nice

fellah
09-28-2002, 02:10 PM
- OZ-,
yes yes yes in 1-2days :) I cannot work until tomorrow night.. thanks for the push in the back though :wip:

baby,
if you follow the track from the car and "into" the picture you can see shadows from "something" :)
the staging will be different later on so you'll be able to see the loop.. but for now the modeling of the track is only "blocks" I'll make it better later on as it will be a part of the sport.. ;)
thanks though, it means alot coming from you, you've made some really great works :thumbsup:

baby
09-28-2002, 02:48 PM
:p

I didnt wanted to say "should"...I wanted to say "could" !!!!


:thumbsup:

fellah
09-29-2002, 12:36 AM
baby,
I understand :)


I got a chance to use the computer tonight so I thought I would make her ready for her first show..
http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport/Fellah_XtremeSport_Girl1.jpg

more stuff will be added later when I have more time.. and the "front hair" will be fixed to.. but crits, comments, ideas etc.. all are welcome.

maybe it's a bit easier to guess the sport now? :)

take care
// fellah

Aearon
09-29-2002, 12:41 AM
you like modeling cool & cute lil girls eh fellah ? :D

she's so damn good, and she has "fellah style" written all over her :applause:

fellah
09-29-2002, 12:46 AM
you like modeling cool & cute lil girls eh fellah ?
hum hum, yes :)
I love cute little characters, they are the funniest ones to make for me..
and btw, I hope to see you join in and make some good stuff for this challenge to soon! 'apt pupil' is already on his way, feel the pressure :)

take care
// fellah

Apt Pupil
09-29-2002, 04:39 AM
Hehehe, what pressure. I am still huriddly trying to finish revamping my website (just re-organizing a few things).

Otherwise, hey, dammit, she's looking really gooood!! I saw monster inc the other day, and wow, I loved the little gal in there. She was sooooooo cute:love: Yours is just as cute, well done. Can't wait to see her with the skin highlights though:p

Keep up the good work:)



P.S, ya "Fist," your entry really looked good last time. If you ever get the time again, it would certainly be a pleasure to see you in action once more.

Well, until then . . :wavey:

mv
09-29-2002, 07:30 AM
nicenicenicenicenice.

OZ
09-29-2002, 09:11 AM
:beer: Haaaaaaaaaaa.....jawdropping character!!!!I NEVER STOP TO FEEL AMAZED BY UR WORK!:thumbsup:

baby
09-29-2002, 09:16 AM
:bounce:

MikaelPersson
09-29-2002, 12:17 PM
Absolutely wonderful. I am in awe.

fortsätt så!

[PS]. I here whispers that are demanding wallpapers.

visualboo
09-29-2002, 02:38 PM
NICE fellah..... nice and clean. :thumbsup:

So cute too. I can picture her in that right pose wistling and swinging her hips back and forth like "what?..... what did I do?" :D

Take care

DimitrisLiatsos
09-29-2002, 04:08 PM
:bounce: Hey fellah ...she is so cool, i like the way she looks and stands...maybe the cutest character i 've seen lately!!!

P.S : i wll be back to see more!:wavey:

Totitch
09-29-2002, 04:58 PM
Great Stuff Fellastard! :thumbsup:

You already know what i think!
But i wanted to add you are a Bastard! :)

Work! Work! :wip:

pabbloz
09-29-2002, 08:27 PM
Ahaha! The Bastard Viking strikes again! happy to see you participate in a challenge again! and with your own style! Really own style! :thumbsup:

you know already what I think about you... yes... you're a bastard... Ahaha! but I want post here this work is really cool! :D great job!


:thumbsup:

fellah
09-29-2002, 09:07 PM
Apt Pupil,
I'm honored, to be compared by that little girl is very cool especially as it's coming from you to!
hey, pm me when your new site is done and up please :)

Mikael P,
wallpaper might come in the end.. btw, isn't it time for you to update soon? :wip:

visualboo,
hehehe, me to :)

m@, - OZ-, baby,
thanks for helping me keep going!

DimitrisLiatsos,
glad you like it so much, hope to see you back at a later stage!

Totitch, pabbloz,
raaah! you've teamed up against me.. but the revenge will be sweat :cool: thanks guys!

btw, noone knows the sport yet? I thought I gave away to much in the first post.. but but... :)

take care
// fellah

MikaelPersson
09-29-2002, 09:20 PM
ah nice. I was in such awe of that little girl, so one with her alone would suffice. :) One picture came to mind when I saw your little girl, not exactly the same mood rather same age. It might inspire you towards a darker streak. (I think itīs some old amiga wizard who did it). Here goes:

http://home.swipnet.se/hvaetaen/temp/wade-tvbore.jpg

About that update :rolleyes: , yes I almost have something to show now. Maybe tonight..

fellah
09-29-2002, 09:30 PM
thanks for that pic mikael, a little inspiration is always good! :)

a-ha only the girl on the wallpapper, then I will work something out for you in a couple of days :)


btw, I will keep pushing refresh tonight and look for an update from you ;)

MikaelPersson
09-29-2002, 09:32 PM
evil! alright. will post someting. :)

levin
09-29-2002, 11:02 PM
that is a cool pic, Mikael P!! can you tell me where you got it or where i can find similar works?

Virtuoso
09-30-2002, 11:22 AM
OK Fellah..............She is even more cute than your BOB very cute girl and she too was very cute. In fact she is soo sweet that I am getting a tooth ache from looking at her.

;)

I love the pajamas/Extreme sport outfit as well.Beautiful colors and very nice details with the trim..........:love:

Let's see my quess to what the Sport is perhaps............A Giant Creature with blue fur comes out of the closet and they play with her Barbie dolls? Nope, that's not it, I was thinking of another cute girl from some other scene.....;)

OK my next quess is she is attacked by the Sun and a blue bird from the picture in your first post? probably not huh?

How about she gets into the toy race cars and races around the room like the Hot wheels scene in Toy story? Maybe she is really a very small toy or doll, and this can be possible? Well I'll keep thinking, and you keep posting, I am anxious to see what's really up, so far very beautiful and sweet, very nice.....:beer:

OZ
09-30-2002, 11:49 AM
From viking thread flipped brain (as im) to a true AMAzing VIKing............. U ARE MY HERO!!!!What a cute amazing character!.......Yes,i repeat myself......but i feel so....
W R O K O N F E L L A H ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

rizob
10-01-2002, 06:28 AM
very nice that pose and look are perfect, nice colores, render, i think she'll be driving the car too? kepp postin

Plop
10-01-2002, 07:50 AM
hehehe ... you are on my top five of great modeler :bounce:

you have a good feeling !! great work !!

fellah
10-02-2002, 04:24 PM
thanks you all once again! :)

Virtuoso,
thanks mate, one of your guesses is pretty close ;)

- OZ-,
thanks! I'm really really glad you like it so much, it means alot to me!

rizob,
thanks! and yes.. she will :)

derzen,
that's a big honor for me to be on your top 5! thanks alot!

update:
http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport/Fellah_XtremeSport2.jpg
the lighting.. well I'll think I have to remake it..

crits welcome ofcourse and don't be afraid to be harsh :)

take care
// fellah

Jeffo
10-02-2002, 04:27 PM
loooking good fellah! been really busy lately unfortunately so didnt get a chacne to comment earlier, but looking nice! i dont mind the lighting at all, but then again, its not my strong point, so i have no crit on that. The girl looks awesome, great model as always!


cant wait to see more!!

baby
10-02-2002, 05:43 PM
:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

MikaelPersson
10-02-2002, 06:22 PM
Developing fine.
I thought I would give you my thoughts on the lighting. As you mentioned it so nicely ;)
It looks like you wanted to achieve that moon through window light. If thatīs the case I would suggest dropping that intense light at the front. It looks more like light from a lamp than from the moon. If I remember correctly moon light do cast really harsh shadows. (being urban you never see real moonlight due to the f***ing streetlights (sorry about that outburst)).
How about having the moon shine through leaves making distinct foliage shadow, not forgetting the window as youīve already incorporated.
I have no worries of you not making it, just wanted to give you my thoughts.

fellah
10-02-2002, 06:52 PM
Jeffo, baby,
thank you mates, hope to see updates from both of you really soon :wip:

mikael,
thank you for those valuable tips! I have already added them to my "fix list", _much_ appreciated :thumbsup:

take care
// fellah

otacon
10-02-2002, 10:49 PM
Looking good!:thumbsup: Now im not that good with lighting myself, but im gonna try and crit anyway.... is the light coming from a skylight? because if so (and i could be wrong) i dont think it would be that bright, because a lot of the skylights ive seen are rather thick so i doubt it would let that much light go through it, and plus it looks to be night, so unless its from a lamp or something i think the light looks too bright to be moonlight. And i think the carpet needs work...it doesnt look fuzzy and soft enough....and the track would probobly stick up some when it hits the carpet, right now it looks like it cuts right through it and stays stuck on the floor. But anyway...these are just small things, and i think the pic still looks great.:D

fellah
10-03-2002, 10:17 AM
otacon,
thanks alot for the crit! I have fixed the lighting and made it a bit more dark, also tweaked the carpet.. the "track through carpet" is a nasty little cheat I made, I will fix it in the end :) much appreciated :thumbsup:

mikael,
I tried the harsh shadows but I thought they drew to much attention when being harsh, so I actually softened them instead :)
took away the bright light in the front though, and will try the foliage of a tree next.


update,
http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport/Fellah_XtremeSport3.jpg
tweaked the lighting and the modeling some..
I plan on adding small streetlights along the road and take away the painting(I think it drags to much attention from the main subject now) and maybe add some gas(maybe fantasy glitter) to the car..
and ofcourse I have to work on the car and put the girl in there :)

crits and comments are welcome and don't hesitate to be harsh.

take care
// fellah

DiGiTal
10-03-2002, 10:44 AM
ehehe nice fellah :) :thumbsup: the lightning is giving a nice ambience to the scene, i want to see more of this famous sport :)

erilaz
10-03-2002, 11:36 AM
My first impression was "Look at all the pretty colours!":D

On closer inspection, it was very cool. Love what you're doing here!

:thumbsup:

stipen
10-03-2002, 12:21 PM
yeah....what a beautiful lighting and rendering!!!
I just can't wait to see more of the little girl:thumbsup:

MikaelPersson
10-03-2002, 12:35 PM
Much better. Yeah, those hard shadows can be nasty. Have you tried having both? One light that cast the hard ones, then the rest soft. I like that carpet. Maybe you should lessen the DOF some. It is not too much, but it is bordering on minature.
Will be interesting to see some tests with foliage shadows.

:wavey:

visualboo
10-03-2002, 05:26 PM
I think it would be cool if you spelled something out with those blocks. Nothing to obvious tho. Just something you might see if your studying the image.

fellah
10-03-2002, 06:19 PM
DiGiTal, erilaz and stipen, thanks you very much for the encouraging words :thumbsup:

virtuoso,
hihi, I had in plan of writing something with "totitch" and "bastard".. but I forgot ;)

Mikael P,
what do you mean by "bordering"? couldn't find the word in my dictionary :sad:
but I agree, the dof is a bit much.. I will make the shadows a little harsher to I think :wip:

visualboo,
yes I will indeed. but, I will make it really hard for you ppl to read the msg though :p


I would really appreciate ideas of what to add fix etc.. I'm a little stuck at the moment.. have some things thought out though, but ideas from different minds wouldn't hurt..

thank you all
// fellah

freemind77
10-03-2002, 07:17 PM
cute and cool ! she reminds me Boo from Monsters Inc. thats compliment, she is stylized same way for me looks like older sister of her (of course if she had sister) :) cool enviroment too almost like from toystory or such (maybe these boxes reminds it :)

---edit---

maybe add some racing flags and kind of starting semaphore would be neat .

otacon
10-03-2002, 07:20 PM
Looking nice!:thumbsup: Is it one of those tracks that use a controller to accelerate the cars? Because if so you could put one of those in there.:D

OZ
10-03-2002, 08:28 PM
S U P R E M E ! ur sense of colours is simply amazing! GO!more!

MikaelPersson
10-04-2002, 09:05 AM
gränsande?
almost to much, on the border of entering the field of minature photography.
Or do I just fail to se the irony? ;) (not my strong point)

Apt Pupil
10-04-2002, 12:51 PM
I would really appreciate ideas of what to add fix etc.. I'm a little stuck at the moment.. have some things thought out though, but ideas from different minds wouldn't hurt..

Alrighty then,

I find the area to localized, everything seems to be low and centered. How about creating a few larger items that would create a sort of upside down dome in your picture. Hence, if you created some larger items that are on both the right and left side of the picture, they would help enclose everything, and bring attention to the character once you put the lovely girl in. Items to be considered, a large Chest, a bed (corner), maybe a big ball, a table etc.

As for the light source banish the moon light, lamps (or flashlights) could be better. You can put them on the ground so that they act as those . . what are they called, you find them at big concerts or on top of high rise buildings, you know . . . those ones there. Otherwise, I like your idea with the lampposts, they will make the track look like a heap of treasure and something fantasy like. This would certainly look sweet, because she'd be lit from under and we would see the race track as something truly special (and in her mind, it probably is:) ). If this is the case, why bother with the moonlight, you won't be able to see it if the track is lighted up the way I imaging your going to do it?

The carpet is hard to distinguish from the floor because it's border line is too straight for a carpet and hence, you can't easily see where they separate (the wood looks like part of the pattern).

The whole picture could maybe be darkened along the edges to complete blackness (or near it), hence, only a suggestion of the larger objects would be seen (see first suggestion).

I won’t comment on the track because I imaging you are going to take it to the extreme, hence, there will be a lot more tracks everywhere (many, many overlaps, bridges, jumps etc). So no comments here.

Otherwise, right now, I find that things are placed around a bit too neatly, however, I can certainly understand why you would not want to put in more clutter if you are going to add more track. But, to mess things up a bit, you could, once again, put more items along the edges of your picture so that it looks like she cleared ‘only’ that area for the track (you know kids, they are always so messy and only shove things aside to make room to play)

Hehehe, well, there are my two cents, you asked for it:p Anyways, the picture is already fantastic, these are only some minor suggestions if you have the time.

Keep up the great work man, I wanna see more!!


:wavey:

fellah
10-04-2002, 01:39 PM
freemind77,
yea, that's a big compliment! and great ideas, will be added :)

otacon,
yea, I've thought about adding them controllers.. I'm still not 100% sure if I'm gonna put the girl _in_ the car, or make her drive the car with the controlls. if I go with the last suggestion, I will add them for sure.

- OZ-,
thanks alot mate! loved the last update in your thread :thumbsup:

Mikael P,
nono, I was serious. I will drag down the dof a little for sure, thanks!

Apt Pupil,
:eek: I.. I.. I love you :)
you gave me so many ideas with that post, and so much fun reading and inspiration I'm full right now! I had in plan of fixing some older projects today, but thanks to you, I will work hard on this challenge today :wip:
but the girl will probably not be underlit by the streetlight, 'cause she will be sitting in the car.. but maybe I'll change my mind, I'm not 100% sure about that part yet.. and I really wan't to keep the moonlight and volumetrics, but I will see when the streetlights are added, maybe it won't be needed then.. _much_ appreciated post!

thank you all once again
take care
// fellah

mv
10-05-2002, 07:29 AM
what can I say,very nice; you definitely have your own style.

fellah
10-08-2002, 07:31 PM
thank you m@ :)


after 'aptPupils' comment I changed my direction of where I wanted to take this project..
I hadn't planned to do much more on the scene, but now I'm in the progress of modeling the whole room :)
still alot of stuff to add like, books, more toys, drawings, pillows etc to the bed.. and the tracks, car and girl of course.

some of the stuff is things I found in my sisters childrens rooms, and some are designs by me..

I also changed the lighting to radiosity for now.. if I have the time in the end I'll light it manualy..


please try not to care about the lighting for now, I'll tweak it later on when the modeling is done..

http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport/Fellah_XtremeSport4.jpg

and here's how I plan to model the track, other suggestions are much appreciated.
http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport/Fellah_XtremeSport4_TrackPl.jpg

take care
// fellah

MikaelPersson
10-08-2002, 07:55 PM
Someone giving himself loads of more work ;). I have one suggestion that might add more depth to your picture. How about positioning the camera on top of a bookshelf with some toys in the foreground. Or just having the bookshelf on one of the sides of the frame. Another direction, maybe position the roof light closer towards the camera.

Now we just miss the closet door with the hairy arm protruding.

ah, maybe should add, Nice work :).

:wavey:

Virtuoso
10-08-2002, 08:02 PM
I did'nt know Toy story 3 was being shown already..........;)

It all looks fun,with a bit more "clutter",mess and overall beefing up of the objects within the room and the addition of the trck and participant herself it will turn out nice.

The best part to me is the actual layout of the track,I like it's route through the furniture,it is a nice layout.............

As for the lighting...............just kidding.........;) ....It's all looking good Fellah,get it to the finish line.:thumbsup:

fellah
10-08-2002, 08:23 PM
Mikael P,
>>>How about positioning the camera on top of a bookshelf with some toys in the foreground
hihihi, do you know where the camera is located now? :) it's on a bookshelf which will also be the starting point for the track..
I will add trafficLights, startlines etc there in the end(and some which will be in the foreground for more depth)

>>>Another direction, maybe position the roof light closer towards the camera.
yes indeed, very good suggestion :thumbsup:


virtuoso
yes, a lot more toys and a main focus(and the light tweaking of course ;) ) will add a little I think, still alot of work to do :)

glad you like the track layout, gonna start modeling the track tomorrow so if anyone got any ideas
there, tell me before I start please :)

take care
// fellah

OZ
10-08-2002, 08:51 PM
S U P P A C O O L ! that colours rox a lot and more! AMAZING stuff.....pure 100% fellah style!:buttrock:

ilasolomon
10-09-2002, 01:31 AM
hey FELLAH, you are a real VIKING, man! ;)
cheers :beer:

levin
10-09-2002, 06:43 AM
AMAZING!!!!!
:thumbsup: :bounce: :buttrock: :applause: :applause: :applause:


how about some moving obstacles? like a dog maybe...

or show a door where the kid is about to enter and witness her toys alive and kill the enjoyment?

BASSit
10-10-2002, 02:14 PM
Great job so far ! I really wanna see how it will end !
I have made a little draw-over how i would place the tracks... thatīs a great environment btw ! Maybe you got something out of it. Those spirals at the window are tracks like in a parking house (is that a word ?) That way the track elements and the cars canīt catch too much heat from the ... (in german: Heizung) - hope you understand.

Anyway hope to see your scene in action soon :buttrock:

Regards

Dennis

EDIT: Oh, i just saw that you already began modelling the track. My fault ! Never mind.

fellah
10-10-2002, 02:37 PM
oz,
thank you! glad you're following the thread. hope to see an update on your viking soon!

ila_solomon,
thank you ila. I love your work to so it's a big compliment for me :)

levin,
thanks, nice ideas. although I don't think they will fit in the final pic..

bassit,
thanks for taking the time to make a paintover, much appreciated! although bad timing, I just finished the track 10 minutes ago :)
those spirals are cool, I actually have one big in the scene, I might add/fix the current track later on and if I do I have alot of nice ideas from that pic.
oh, and the track will go under the bed/desk, with some lights in the "roof" ;)

take care
// fellah

Jeffo
10-11-2002, 07:20 PM
That is looking very nice fellah!! :) i love your style!! :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

as for the lighting.... haha i like it!! :) great job dude!

visualboo
10-12-2002, 01:26 AM
Hey bud. Don't lose interest. c'ma, I want MORE!!!

freemind77
10-12-2002, 04:41 PM
thats looking even nicer than first , what about add some posters to wall (some kid posters like harry potter,monsters inc. etc..)table looks too clean to me add some pencils , paper with drawing etc..would do the job.also with camera view changed put the moon behing window (window-blind should be rolled up a to let the half of view from window uncovered and maybe tilted to side a bit ) Add some kind of children toys on lustre ..maybe these clinking toys when you brush against them they begin to clink) , ligting moons on wallpaper should be cool too (you know these fluorescent labels childrens put on wallpaper often)also put the light from moon casting to bed (will add neat atmosphere to piece) and track cold be selflit (like these on airports)..uff enough of bosherings and lets kick us ass :) really cool job!

funnydoodle
10-12-2002, 05:56 PM
hey i would really like to see a simulation video for this one..... and yeah.... try to add more obstacles..... it'll be really fun....

fellah
10-13-2002, 12:32 AM
Jeffo,
hehe, thanks ;)

visualboo,
I won't fail you visualboo! :)

freemind77,
I didn't have interest in this scene anymore and planned to just make it simple for myself and skip the "overview" pic.. but thanks to you and your ideas, I worked all night! :)
really good suggestions, the only one I didn't understand was the "also put the light from moon casting to bed". you meant that the lighting that hits the floor by the moon should stop by the end of the bed, or anything else?
thanks alot for the ideas, they gave me alot of inspiration.

funnydoodle, I have big plans about that ;) but I'll probably not be able to do the animation before the deadline..

here's a little update. the sky outside the window is _very_ temp.. will change it later on..

click to see update (http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport/fellah_tesWIP1.jpg)
sorry for the bad quality..

take care
// fellah

ilasolomon
10-13-2002, 07:33 AM
WooooW! hey you did it very well...
but i'v some little crits if you don't mind:
1. the DOF doesn't work for this image (because of wide angle view)...or i'm wrong & there is no DOF!! ;)
2.needs dark soft shadows under the bed & table.

anyway very high quality work! :scream: :beer: :thumbsup:

fellah
10-13-2002, 11:20 AM
ila_solomon,
thanks alot ila, I took away the dof, didn't think about that :)

Virtuoso,
hehe, it was not the 50k limit, it was me who resized it in ps from 700->1050 as I though 700 was to small for an overview like this and I didn't wanna rerender ;)


have started to manualy light the scene again (without radiosity, to slow).

here's the update:
http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport/fellah_tesWIP2.jpg

click for larger pic (http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport/fellah_tesWIP2_Big.jpg)

c&c welcome, and be harsh if you feel like :)
take care
// fellah

mv
10-13-2002, 11:37 AM
:buttrock: the space duck poster rulz! keep it up!

visualboo
10-13-2002, 02:26 PM
I love the sky and moon. Nice one :thumbsup:
Nice poster too ;)

btw, have you modeled a roof on the room? What were the render times with rad? I agree with ila too, the shadows need to be a bit stronger (at least with the gi).

oh one more thing, I think the blocks are a little bit to big. I remember mine being smaller. It's been a couple years though :D

Take care

Aearon
10-13-2002, 03:09 PM
amazing fellah :)

not much to crit, it's just awesome and i can't wait to see more, and eventually the final animation :D

just some thoughts on the lighting, i think radiosity would be very nice with this scene, because it would create some nice dark and soft shadows under the bigger objects (bed)...oh and where does that purple light come from ? ;)

to accelerate the rendering you could disable radiosity for all the track lights if that's possible with your package (and if you haven't thought of that already) ;)

oh and the track lights seem a little repetitive. also, if you're going to show a "first person" view out of the car's cockpit in your anim it will be pretty weird to have those lights flashing by ALL the time. so how about different types of lights, that would also make it seem like she looked everywhere in the house for the parts

you could place a flashlight in front of one of the straight parts of the track for example

visualboo
10-13-2002, 04:11 PM
good point about the lights being repetative. It looks cool but maybe a little staggering.... 3 on the right, 3 on the left, 3 on the right.

I'm kinda curious why the shadows under the bed aren't stronger with the gi. Looks like the ambient is a little high?

[edit] I think my favorite part about the track is that crasy ass drop next to the window. Talk about extreme :D
WHHHheeeeeeee!!

freemind77
10-13-2002, 04:13 PM
yeah something like that, just little bit off lights (too much intensity) maybe redish color ? also moon behid the window , casing fogish light to bed , looks mystical and catching attention , just put light from moon at angle to hit bed, it also suffer from rim light..maybe add one blueish/redish...i know its temp lighting you are going well , keep up!

ilasolomon
10-13-2002, 10:41 PM
oofsk!...hey fellah you are not a real VIKING, you are one SUR'REAL VIKING! ;)

Rye
10-14-2002, 05:47 AM
This looks awesome fellah, I cant tell what the lights are made of since they are so small, but it might be a bit more feasible if they were white christmas lights? I think there should be some cutesy covers and pillows on that bed, and the chair at the desk isnt nearly tall enough, looks more like a stool right now. This deifinitely has that kid room feel to it :D, i love the toy containers under the bed, and the space duck poster is perfect. Keep up the great work!

kokoro
10-14-2002, 05:49 AM
i like your lightning already very much- the little lights on the track. sweet. this will be a wonderful challenge entry in the end. and pixar will hire you ...

also i always wanted to ask about your cute little girl. did you make concept drawings for her ? if yes i like to see them if you do not mind. or did you just imagine her and start modeling ? she is so great.

Totitch
10-14-2002, 08:42 AM
Ahaha! Very nice work Fellartagnan!

I really like the Poster! The Best you did!!! :D :D

No...Amazing Picture! It makes me dream! Very nice! You can do a little "ride" movie with it!

Great!!! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

fellah
10-14-2002, 11:00 AM
m@,
thank you, I thought I was very cleaver when I came up with the idea of using the spaceDuck poster as a poster ;)

visualboo,
thanks, yea I've modeled a roof.. and the rendertimes with radiosity is about 40min 1050x450 with 5AA passes and low radiosity quality. will increase for the final so I'll only use radiosity for this challenge and take a couple of days in the future to light it manually..
I don't know why the GI don't cast harsh shadows there, there's no ambient in the scene.


fist,
yea I wen't back to the GI version, I think I'll use it for the challenge but change it later on for the animation.
I'll see what I can do about the lights around the track to break it up.. I will at least fix it for the animation. great idea with the flashlight :)

freemind77,
yea, I tried to let the moon cast shadows on the bed, but it took away the calm of the scene imo..
agree about he windowRim, I'll see what I can do about that. and volumetris might come. thank you once again, much appreciated

ila_solomon,
ahaha! that's quite an honur, tell that to totitch, he pictures me as a nerd viking :sad:

Rye,
the lights are just very lowpoly objects, just to sava polygons. but I really like the christmasLights idea(if I onlyt knew how they looked :) ) b ut I will try to find pictures of some..
I agree with the chair and the bed accessories, great ideas!

kokoro,
>>>and pixar will hire you ...
ahaha! if only things where so simple..

about the girl,
yes, some rough drawings where used(mainly of the helmet and racing clothes(which ain't done yet)), nothing I wan't to show though(and nothing you wan't to see I assure ;) )


Totitch,
oh, not you again.. change your avatar bastard!
no seriously, it's quite an honour to get positive replies by you my friend.
and yes, I plan on making a "ride movie" that's why I've modeled the whole room(alot of stuff ain't visible in my renders though, but they are there)


I will add/fix the ideas you've given me today. but meanwhile here's a new update:
http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport/fellah_tesWIP3_Big.jpg
I'm pretty happy with the lighting for now, but if you disagree feel free to tell me what should be fixed.


things I plan to fix before deadline:

add accessiories to bed,
change trackLights to christmas lights,
make the toycubes smaller,
a "spiral track" on the left side climbing up on a shelf(already modeled but missed it in this rendering)
make the deskChair taller
maybe add some volumetris and particles to the moonlight..
the lamp in the roof,
something to hold up the track with on the left on it's way up the shelf..

if you wan't to add something go ahead..

take care
// fellah

BASSit
10-14-2002, 11:42 AM
Wow ! The mood in the last two pics is great !!! And all those tiny street lights looking awesome. How many are they ?

The only thing i would love to see changed are some more dark areas... the moonlight shouldnīt lite up the whole room. The objects donīt make any shadows at all. I hope you understand what i want to say. The area under the desk should be much darker. And also the area under the bed. I donīt know your light-set so i canīt say exactly what to change. Maybe itīs enough to darken the textures at these parts to fake the look of darker areas.

Anyway - i hope to see some more soon !? Will you animate this scene ?

Cheers :beer: BASSit

derwolpertinger
10-14-2002, 12:59 PM
looks unbelievably great fellah!! :eek:
i just love it , kinda reminds me of monsters inc., the room where boo lives in. the lighting is really good! which app and renderer did you use? i guess no radiosity?
after all, i already like the pic very much and can't imagine how to improve it besides the things you already mentioned. :thumbsup:

Erik
10-14-2002, 04:11 PM
really a poetic picture fellah, i love this !!!!
it's remind me some kind of night in my bedroom, when i was a child ;)
thanks:beer:

CHRiTTeR
10-14-2002, 06:00 PM
WOW!! :surprised

I have to admit, at first I thought: "Fellah, u are disapointing me, it looks OK, but u can do much better".

Now u have arranged those little tracklights it looks muuuuuuuuuch better !!! :bounce: :eek:



Can't wait to see the movie !

OZ
10-14-2002, 07:02 PM
...................dream feeling here................Looks like christmass..........................tnx fellah....4 ur splendid art.

Dirk_P_Ho
10-14-2002, 07:12 PM
Too cool! :buttrock:

I want my race set again, i think my mom sold it like a decade ago!

freemind77
10-14-2002, 07:26 PM
thats what i had on my mind.keep up:bounce: maybe add some foot-stones to track and wheel barriers to prevent crash damage, mazbe some skidmarks, some sparks from car in action to it but its only detail and not important..maybe higher the cound of polys on bed headrest near to camera..but hey its all marvellous..as for lighting trz to make it more green-blueish like from sky and darken it a little in corners far to from main light source (window).maybe add some flying comet to sky :)

fellah
10-15-2002, 09:35 AM
thank you all!

BASSit,
yes, I will see what I can do about the dark areas, I totaly agree. and yes I will animate it but it might take a while as I must fix the slotcar and the girl, and add more details to the scene for all the closeup shots etc.. but it will come.

derwolpertinger,
in the last render I used radiosity, and the app is lightwave all the way.

Erik,
ahaha, great :)

CHRiTTeR,
glad I could satisfy you in the end ;) it will be improved more though.

-OZ-
you always make me happy, thank you :)

Dirk_P_Ho,
hehe, I tried mine a couple of days agod, had to "warm it up" before it would work properly though ;)

freemind77,
once again alot of nice ideas. the bed is remodeled now and more green to the lighting will be done.
I agree with having a car in action. I will see if I have the time, but I will add it there sometime for sure. same thing with the skidmarks.
thank you once again, your ideas has made the pic alot better imo :thumbsup:

take care
// fellah

AFU
10-15-2002, 02:56 PM
this looks super sweet, are u gonna make and animation cause it seems like its going that way, u know with close ups into the car and stuff....
looks awesome, good night lighting, im glad u made the street light things a bit calmer, looks really good now.
great job:applause: :applause: :applause:

MikaelPersson
10-16-2002, 03:58 PM
That last shoot was interesting. I like that angle more than the one looking down from above. The streelights look much better in this last pic. The only thing that struck me was the dead zone at the bed. Or rather at the foot of the bed. You were talking about accessories, would that include carvings and the like in the wood of the bed?

Bra jobbat! :thumbsup:

leigh
10-16-2002, 07:20 PM
Aaah very cool :thumbsup:

I really like the colours and the whole ambience of the scene.
Great stuff, as usual! Although, I must say this is rather different from your usual style, eh?

Keep it up :D

Plop
10-17-2002, 07:58 AM
all your pictures are great fellah....


but ... I want to see you're final image !! :wip: (with the girl ?)
or a rough of it ... :p

fellah
10-17-2002, 06:11 PM
AFU,
thank you, animation will come, and more.. but I'll save that for later(after the challenge)

Mikael P,
yes agree, the dead area is totally remodeled. with carvings, quilt pillows etc :)

Leigh,
hehe, this is my feminine/childish side showing through :)

derzen,
the girl will be a part of the final composition for this challenge, maybe not in the room though.. but she will be there for sure.

thank you all once again, I will try to update asap.
take care
// fellah

baby
10-17-2002, 06:46 PM
is in one of the small racing car ?!?

:p ;)

fellah
10-17-2002, 09:00 PM
baby,
yes, that's the idea ;)
but I don't think I'll have enough inspiration to finish the car before the deadline..

here's a little teaser:
check the next page
crits/ideas are welcome.
take care
// fellah

MikaelPersson
10-17-2002, 09:05 PM
so cute!
wallpaper! ;)

who are driving the cars? Teddybears, or just other girls?

:wavey:

baby
10-17-2002, 09:15 PM
btw I tried to put the surfer more like you said...it's true it's better...



I love her green suit !!!

fellah
10-17-2002, 09:16 PM
hehe, I remember I promised a wallpaper of the girl a while back. I will see if I have the time to make something before the deadline :)

actually she will be driving the car herself, the flag is just there because I thought it would make a nice contrast right now :)

***edit***
thank you baby! hope you'll show us your progress of the surfer, don't just tease us! :)

repost of the pic so ppl won't have to go to the previous page to view it:
http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport//fellah_LittleGirl1.jpg

take care
// fellah

Apt Pupil
10-17-2002, 09:20 PM
You don't have enough motivation, hmmm . . . let me help . . .


"WOULD YOU HURRY UP AND FINISH IT ALREADY, you bastard!!!"



:p

Otherwise, cute girl you got there. You were right, showing that pic was diffinatly a tease, I wanna see more!!!!!

fellah
10-17-2002, 09:26 PM
>>>"WOULD YOU HURRY UP AND FINISH IT ALREADY, you bastard!!!"

ahahah! :D what goes around comes around(is that the right one? you get my point :) )

I will try to get motivated and finish the car, but I can't promise anything..

take care
// fellah

Virtuoso
10-17-2002, 10:25 PM
She is as sweet as the sweetest Belgian chocalate........Cute,pleasant,and you get a real feel that as cute as the whole scene is that it really is a Extreme Sport........Cute girl in a raging car on a tricked out track,Extreme it is...........Nice Fellah,just sweet......................:thumbsup:

mebamonster
10-17-2002, 10:45 PM
Wow! This is going to be another fabulous entry. As always, an exquisite character with wonderful personality and environment! Man, I can't wait to see all of this put together into a final scene. Keep it going Fellah!

ilasolomon
10-17-2002, 11:34 PM
high resolution please! with chips & cola,...& don't forget to bake it a little more.
GR8 work/food, indeed! :)

matty2x4
10-18-2002, 04:06 AM
I would love to see a cars view of the track, or may be a camera view from just behind and a little above the car. Love the girl nice style. Hope this gets continued after the challange is over...?

kokoro
10-18-2002, 09:36 AM
fellah - you are a master of cuteness ! she really is charming. go on - go on, we want to see the final !!

stipen
10-18-2002, 09:52 AM
Awesome Fellah.....Soooo well done!!
I love his expression.:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
She's perfect...:thumbsup:

PotatoHead
10-18-2002, 10:49 AM
kickass!! now that i found your stuff, im undecided which one to vote for.......you or mikael p.
i love the style of both of them.......damn which one is it gonna be......i think ill take a flower and rip the petals off one by one, muttering, "mikael, fellah, mikael, fellah, mikael, fellah......":eek:

fellah
10-18-2002, 01:57 PM
:eek:
just found out that we've only 1day left.. I thought we had until monday(loosing track of time, to much computer). so I'll be working hard today :wip:


Virtuoso,
to kind, to kind :)

mebamonster,
thanks alot! btw, why don't you join in on a challenge? you've been here a while now, come on :wip:

ila_solomon,
ahaha! :D
I will open a site dedicated to this little short after the challenge, must fix the web and a couple of other things first.. but in a week or two you'll be able to follow the show again =)

matty2x4,
yes, you'll see more of that kinda stuff at the site I'm planning to open very soon dedicated to this little short I've in plan.

kokoro,
to kind of you to =)

stipen,
thank you stipen! hope you've the time to render out a final of your entry soon to.. the deadline is approaching very fast now!

PotatoHead,
you know, if the voting will be as before. you'll be bale to vote for multiple entries. hope that will make the choice a little easier =)

thanks and take care
// fellah

Baal
10-18-2002, 05:36 PM
Great work so far! I just love the little girl, she's as cute as she can be and... wow, I just :love: her !

Can't wait to see more, juste hurry up, I believe the deadline is coming pretty fast ;)

(eeeek, actually 1 day from today! :eek: )!

fellah
10-19-2002, 10:22 AM
Baal,
thank you :)

I will keep working on this picture/animation after the deadline.
but for this challenge, this will probably be the final. I might add volumetrics and some minor changes though..
but as I will keep on working on it, crits and comments are still appreciated.

click image for larger picture
http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport/fellah_tesChallenge2002Small.jpg (http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport/fellah_tesChallenge2002Final.jpg)

thank you all for your ideas and encouragement. not to be pretentious, but it feels like this image is a part of many ppl's minds.
once again thank you all,
take care
// fellah

baby
10-19-2002, 01:05 PM
:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

MikaelPersson
10-19-2002, 02:08 PM
nice, nice, nice!

I like the scene very much. Will be interesting to see what you turn this into after this challenge.

visualboo
10-19-2002, 02:10 PM
Once again fellah, you have made my mouth water from beginning to end. Awesome job. :beer:



p.s. Bastard!

fellah
10-19-2002, 02:45 PM
thank you my friends :)

I made a variation of the previous "final". added volumetrics and darkened it in some areas, which one do you prefer?
here's the new one
click for larger picture
http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport/fellah_tesChallenge2002Small2.jpg (http://www.fellah.net/temp/XtremeSport/fellah_tesChallenge2002Final2.jpg)

I prefer the last one, but it's hard to tell after staring at the pic to long.. I need you help to decide.

thanks
// fellah

ps: visualboo is a bastard :P

Jeffo
10-19-2002, 02:47 PM
Simply fantastic!!!! i prefer the last one! =) excellent work as always

5 stars from me!

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

fellah
10-19-2002, 02:50 PM
thanks jeffo, glad to hear from you, 1-0 for the last one so far it is then :)

visualboo
10-19-2002, 02:59 PM
Deffinitely the last version :thumbsup:

elfufu
10-19-2002, 04:26 PM
this looks great too bad you didnt pop her in the scene. you know she would look really cool in the middle of the track with the flag and some sort of light on her like a spotlight maybe.

regardless its incredible. great work:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

baby
10-19-2002, 04:34 PM
a small space duck toy on the floor could have been very fun :p

Virtuoso
10-19-2002, 05:08 PM
2nd shot Fellah.......................:)


Beautiful is the bottomline...............I get the same nice,pleasant,warm feel with your creation as I do when seeing or being in Disneyland.................Wonderful.....................:beer:

I do wish you could have had the time to get the cutest little girl in the World in your scene for the challenge.......tucked in her race car zoooooooming up and around all those great tracks. ...............But at least we all have that to look forward to with your further work on this project after the challenge.A animation would be wonderful.................Bottomline is that I love your scene.................:applause: :beer:

fellah
10-19-2002, 09:12 PM
visualboo,
agree, the second version got submitted as the final image :)

elfufu,
thanks, the main idea was to have her in a slotcar, but as I didn't finish the car I should have done as you said there and put her in the middle of the scene, didn't think about it though..

baby,
ahaha! great idea, I have a couple ot them "spaceduck toys". but I can't use premade objects. but it's a nice idea, I will use it in the scene for the future animation :)

Virtuoso,
thank you my friend. I agree about the girl, it would have been fun to get her into the scene for this challenge. but it will come as you already now, although not for this challenge.

MikaelPersson
10-19-2002, 09:31 PM
wow! I like the last one most. You did the right thing. It looks like more life now over at the window.

Still looking forward to animation and the pictures to follow.

:wavey:

Ninja Scroll
10-19-2002, 10:35 PM
Awesome....:eek:

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

Rye
10-20-2002, 03:24 AM
Fellah you really made this shine, great job! Nice color choices and composition, and a very cool idea. I hope you get a chance to animate this soon :)

freemind77
10-20-2002, 02:02 PM
last one is close to perfect.definitelly cutest char i've seen here in challenge:thumbsup:

swag
10-20-2002, 02:53 PM
he man this is beautifully and the little girl is so sweet

Plop
10-21-2002, 07:41 AM
wwwuuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ......:love:

Totitch
10-21-2002, 08:50 AM
Standing ovation for the Amazing Mr Fellah (The biggest Bastard the earth as ever seen)

Wouhouwipihhh!!Houlala!!
Wahow!!!!Woooowowooo!
Wonderfull! Tchica tchica ouba ouba!!
Ohhhh!! Clap clap clap clap!!

...hum! Great! :thumbsup:
A really great piece of work Mr Fellah! Your best one! My vote!

ilasolomon
10-21-2002, 09:10 AM
:love: :thumbsup: :applause:
hey Fellah the great viking!, we want a compositiontoo!

(would you tell me why Visualboo calls you lying bastard?!)

fellah
10-21-2002, 10:21 AM
wow! thank you all for the encouragement, I'm _very_ glad you like it so much.
I'll take a short break from 3d right now and then I will start to plan the animtion.

totitch,
lol! crazy bastard :D gave me a good start in the morning :)

ila_solomon,
"composition", isn't that what I've done. or what more do you wan't? :curious: :)
'visualboo' calls me a lying bastard beacause, hm.. look at my signature ;)

take care
// fellah

OZ
10-21-2002, 07:43 PM
May an image give true emotions?......In the case of ur entry is the answer is a big "yeah!"....beyond the true good soft shaped modeling ther is an incredible sense of wonder and magic in ur images......The last version is perfect.....the colours and light give ur scene an incredibe deepness.........so nice...so peacefull...in contrast (great thing) the supercute girl give the situation the extreme touch!......sadly i got no words to explain how good your work is!....I can say only amazing....just amazing.:applause: :wavey:

Iguiniz.X.
10-21-2002, 10:30 PM
AUW!
:This is really insane man, to freaking cool to be true.

You just nailed it down really great atmosphere and.. well I canīt say much of it then that is really great work:buttrock: :thumbsup:

ilasolomon
10-21-2002, 11:46 PM
Hey, composition means the GIRL's SHOT in her ROOM playing with her TOYS! or doing anything else :) i think...
:thumbsup:

userid: 15152
10-22-2002, 03:02 AM
Really COOOOOOOOOOL IMAGE ...

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
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beyaym discussion konim ,age vaght kardee javabe e-mail mara bede ...
albath e-mail 20 roze pish ....................still waiting

fellah
10-22-2002, 04:46 PM
-OZ-,
ouch, that's a _big_ compliment for me. thank you very much my friend!

ila_solomon,
a-ha, that was what you meant :) you'll see that later on, on my site, or in the WIPforum. I'll try to promise you that :)

Iguiniz.X && h_Zargarpour,
thanks alot for the encouragement. it's really fun to see that some ppl like what I've spent alot of time on, thanks :)

take care
// fellah

Joebount
10-22-2002, 05:19 PM
Impressive ! :thumbsup:

AJ
10-24-2002, 02:15 AM
Absolutely beautiful...

You sir get 5 of the finest stars and no mistake!

:D

Carina
10-24-2002, 06:57 PM
wow i love it.

*clapity clap*

pabbloz
10-24-2002, 07:41 PM
see Mr Totter post... and then continous reading...

Yes!! really amazing! Very tale bedroom! and so cuuute girl! :thumbsup:
I love the green color, it's my favourite :love:
Very very nice mr fellah. You keep your own style. Great.

AMAZING! (do you see? the green is my favourite color!)

What about a day with the girl sitting on the floor version? :applause:

Plop
10-24-2002, 07:58 PM
hey joebount , je kiff bien ton avatar !! c'est un perso a toua ?

AFU
10-24-2002, 08:59 PM
SUPER SWEET!!!
very pixar, mainly the lighting, the blues blah blah
nice job

baby
10-24-2002, 09:40 PM
Derzen keeps saying that U did the little girl long before...

true or not ?!? :shrug:

fellah
10-24-2002, 10:51 PM
wow, thank you all, I didn't think this thread would get more replies. I'm very glad you like it!

pabbloz,
wohoo, you're finally back! :) glad to see you! hope you have a good time at the musicSchool you got into!

baby and drezen,
ahahaha, the french challenge police!! :D
oki, seriously.. :)
drezen is partially right. as I told kokoro before, I didn't make any sketches of the girl as I used an old model I did for the BoBChallenge as the concept instead,
warning, ugly 3d:
Fellah's bunnyGirl (http://www.fellah.net/temp/Fellah_LittleBunnyGirl.jpg)
and I actually used the baseMesh of that old models head, and tweaked it alot. mainly the ears(which got hidden under the helmet :sad: ) the eyes and the mouth.
but the rest is remodeled, with the old girl as a base reference.

thank you all once again,
take care
// fellah

baby
10-24-2002, 10:56 PM
arrgg...

I lost my bet...

I was thinking, no it's not possible, Derzen must have made a dream...

A such serious and respectfull of the rules person as Fellah, couldn't have done that...
and then erase it from his website...not to let traces....


;)






like some very not frequentable french artist on this forum would say : BASTARD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D :eek: :bounce:

fellah
10-24-2002, 11:08 PM
hehehe, a little part of my bastard side showed through there. not to much I hope :)

zeb
10-28-2002, 12:10 AM
BRAVO Fellah

U've got my vote if we can vote a day ;)

GREAT GREAT WORK !!!

:applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:

Tabbyl
11-08-2002, 05:14 AM
So sweet. Very much a piece of heaven,pleasant,nice feel. One of the best in the challenges.:thumbsup:

xuwnln
11-23-2002, 06:22 AM
Originally posted by Mikael P.
Glad to see you failed to resist any longer.
Extended elictric car running, the first one to puke looses? Make the longest jump over some great chasm.
How is the setting. Parallell world fairy beings hijacking the childrens toys? good tile

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