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eclipson
03-23-2005, 06:14 AM
Fandy 'TORA' has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6145)

Latest Update: Line Art: Neexa's 5 servants
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6145/6145_1115424098_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6145/6145_1115424098_large.jpg)

Here's the line art, did some more changes, making the poses of each characters stronger...man what a week, sorry for the slow progress guys, hope u guys could point out errors asap so i can correct them before proceeding to paintings...hehe...

wish me lux!

eclipson
03-27-2005, 12:52 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6145/6145_1111884721_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6145/6145_1111884721_large.jpg)

Neexa's 5 servants, the 5 demons are chained to the Baby's(Neexa) chair(still looking for the right word to name the thing that the baby is in.)The Baby is the daughter of a demon hunter,Sykeers.

Sykeers hunt down the 5 Legendary Demons, and chained them to the baby's chair.

As u can see, the chains are electrics, its stretchable, so the demons can move freely during combat, as long as they are chained, all they can do is follow Neexa intention, and demons will auto guard whenever Neexa is in danger.

The Purpose of Sykeers using the demons as Neexa's servant is that a Demon Lord is after Neexa, and the 5 demons has the strongest combination of team work, Sykeers is not strong enough to protect Neexa and fight the Demon Lord all by himself, The one who has been destiny to defeat the Demon Lord is Neexa.

Sykeers is doing his best to protect Neexa, until she's old enough to fight along side of her father.

eclipson
03-27-2005, 05:25 AM
hey guys, i'd like to wish GOODLUX to everyone and all the BEST!!:scream: :thumbsup:

Rhenia
03-27-2005, 05:41 AM
Hi eclipson, Good Luck
I like your concept....I'm just wondering if the 2 beastlike creatures in the bottom are one with the large monster in the very back....It seems as if they make the legs og him....it might just be the way you placed them....maybe you could change the view or camera angle?? I dont know...Maybe you can just call the chairthing the babies in "cradle" I mean that is what it is....why does it need any other name?? Just an idea :)

eclipson
03-27-2005, 05:59 AM
Hi eclipson, Good Luck
I like your concept....I'm just wondering if the 2 beastlike creatures in the bottom are one with the large monster in the very back....It seems as if they make the legs og him....it might just be the way you placed them....maybe you could change the view or camera angle?? I dont know...Maybe you can just call the chairthing the babies in "cradle" I mean that is what it is....why does it need any other name?? Just an idea :)


hey Rhenia, thanx for the comment, actually, the 2 demon at the bottom are not one with the one in the center, i plan to make the 2 dog-like demon on the ground...bigger, the camera angle r not confirm yet, will be changing the view and also the form and design of the 5 demons r still in progress, will finalize the design soon....again...thanx for the comment.....and also, the word cradle, i think that can be suitable, Neexa's demon cradle....sounds pretty cool...

thanx!....and GoodLux to u too, :bounce::thumbsup:

Rhenia
03-27-2005, 06:11 AM
Me like me like....It's gonna come out awesome

eclipson
03-27-2005, 06:20 AM
Me like me like....It's gonna come out awesome

thanx...tried to find ur artwork...pls give me a link to ur thread....:thumbsup:

MDN67
03-27-2005, 06:21 AM
the concept is good, i wait developement of the skretch for crit:thumbsup:

Miker
03-27-2005, 07:32 AM
you have quite the imagination friend :) looking great so far!

eclipson
03-27-2005, 07:36 AM
you have quite the imagination friend :) looking great so far!

Thanx dude!!:bounce:

Rhenia
03-27-2005, 07:44 AM
Uuummm I'm not exactly sure if i linked it correctly....let me know if it worked :)

http://http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=223541

Miker
03-27-2005, 07:49 AM
doesnt work :(

Rhenia
03-27-2005, 07:50 AM
ur right it doesn't........hhhmmm I dont know what im doin...lol ...help

Rhenia
03-27-2005, 07:58 AM
Ok I think think I did it....if not I give up....its like 3 in the morning and my brain is mush...

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=223541 (http://http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=223541)

eclipson
03-27-2005, 08:31 AM
mmm...Rhenia, it's still not working :sad: , but dun worry, i found ur thread :) :bounce: :thumbsup:

ElFuego
03-27-2005, 11:05 AM
Nice one dude!
I like the expressions on those monsters. Even if they are obviously evil they look kind and caring for this baby :) Keep 'em coming!

dogdoy
03-27-2005, 11:55 AM
I like your idea amd colors. The baby is so powerful. I think maybe add more depths to the servant, like two on the bottom maybe come closer to the camera to protect the baby.

Good luck!

Tranchefeux
03-27-2005, 03:36 PM
Hi,
All my encouragement, for this new challenge, I see that you likes
the heroic fantasy also Good luck for the continuation.

AirbORn
03-27-2005, 03:37 PM
Your concept looks interesting :) I would like to see some other approaches just to see if there is anything else that would be better then the first concept. I'll check back soon to see where you take this piece :) Take care.

.:Yautja:.
03-27-2005, 03:44 PM
Nice concept, I really like it. Especially the faces/heads of the "dogs".

Good luck! :)

walrus
03-27-2005, 04:46 PM
What a weird idea... And I mean that only in the most complementary way. I like it!
I know you're planning on redoing the "dogs" in the front, so take no mind when i point out that it strikes me as off that the baby is pinting screen-left but the dogs look like they're coming straight forward, so much so that they almost look mirrored. Shifting the angle so that they too are moving a bit screen-left might help a lot. Have you any idea what you're going to put in the background yet?
good luck with it!

-mike

coCoKNIght
03-27-2005, 05:14 PM
Thats a very cool idea. I like the concept sketch. Wanna see more! :)

eclipson
03-27-2005, 07:20 PM
I like your idea amd colors. The baby is so powerful. I think maybe add more depths to the servant, like two on the bottom maybe come closer to the camera to protect the baby.

Good luck!

Thanx, Yeap, thought about that too, but i'll be changing angles of the camera and also designs of the characters,

Goodlux to u too!:thumbsup:

eclipson
03-27-2005, 07:23 PM
What a weird idea... And I mean that only in the most complementary way. I like it!
I know you're planning on redoing the "dogs" in the front, so take no mind when i point out that it strikes me as off that the baby is pinting screen-left but the dogs look like they're coming straight forward, so much so that they almost look mirrored. Shifting the angle so that they too are moving a bit screen-left might help a lot. Have you any idea what you're going to put in the background yet?
good luck with it!

-mike

I agree with ya Walrus, that the demons and the baby looks kinda to the left, but i'll be sketching for more different poses and camera angles, so please do come back and give me more feedback, Thanx, and goodlux on ur artwork too!!:bounce: :thumbsup:

daspetey
03-27-2005, 08:02 PM
i really like this start. the colors are great, and i love how youve handled the glow-ish electricity/laser stuff. i want a crib like that when i have a baby =)
-pete

NOOB!
03-27-2005, 08:14 PM
yep agreed excellent start!

eclipson
03-27-2005, 08:35 PM
yep agreed excellent start!

Thanx Noob!:bounce: , love ur coloring tech for ur master and servantness man:thumbsup:

eclipson
03-27-2005, 08:38 PM
i really like this start. the colors are great, and i love how youve handled the glow-ish electricity/laser stuff. i want a crib like that when i have a baby =)
-pete

Thanx man!:thumbsup:

TheFirstAngel
03-27-2005, 09:22 PM
kewl style and nice concept. hope those batteries won't go out :)
just came to subscribe and wish you fun and good luck!
keep it up!

eclipson
03-27-2005, 10:06 PM
kewl style and nice concept. hope those batteries won't go out :)
just came to subscribe and wish you fun and good luck!
keep it up!

hey, it's a magic cradel, it doesnt need any batteries, haha... :) but
Thanx!..u too,hav fun!:thumbsup:

Ilikesoup
03-28-2005, 02:45 AM
Ok I think think I did it....if not I give up....its like 3 in the morning and my brain is mush...

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=223541

enter it without the http:// It gets duplicated in the navigation bar when we click the link. Try it like this:

www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=223541 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=223541)

cuppacam
03-28-2005, 04:47 AM
Cool concept! Good luck with this!

artjunkie
03-28-2005, 12:11 PM
great back story to your concept... do you have a book written on these guys or what? ha ha. It's awesome! Looking forward to seeing your variations on character design and composition. A great start! Good luck, and I'll keep an eye out for your updates!

cheers!

Silveraxe
03-28-2005, 02:23 PM
This is great! I love the story behind as well ;)

Also its pretty ironic that a "baby" is the master of 5 strong demons!! how cool is that XD

well, ehem.... looks great! Good luck!!

Shaykai
03-28-2005, 02:35 PM
Looking good so far, I really love the 4 legged creatures at the bottom of the image. Their faces creep me out! I think its an interesting idea to have a child controlling this awesome creatures, very cool idea. I'll be watching this thread :)

Shaykai

Miyagu
03-28-2005, 04:21 PM
funny idea! i like the lightning... keep on posting! :thumbsup:

TheFirstAngel
04-02-2005, 12:09 AM
lol... bout those magic batteries, how often did i hear "not enough mana to cast that spell...
just kidding. came to see your progress, go go go!:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

eclipson
04-02-2005, 08:57 AM
lol... bout those magic batteries, how often did i hear "not enough mana to cast that spell...
just kidding. came to see your progress, go go go!:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

thanx for checking my progress, will be updating within 24 hours

:thumbsup: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :thumbsup:

eclipson
04-04-2005, 08:31 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6145/6145_1112599858_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6145/6145_1112599858_large.jpg)

i've just rearrange my composition, give the characters stronger teamwork pose, u can see the shilouate is in triangle shape, i'll post up the characters designtomorow, the reason i didn use the elctricity is because i wanna show the emotional potrayal, if u compare with my previous work, there's no emotional potrayal at all, so i've decided to change it.

This time, the image looks more like the demons are standing closer to neexa, showing that they doesn't want her to get hurt and if u look carefully, the demon in the center has 4 hands, the other two hands is holding neexa, keeping her close to the it.

i believe now the image has an emotional potrayal as in the demons are going to protect Neexa, the demon in the center is holding her and will never let anything touch her. And does Neexa's still in control?...Nop! not anymore, this time i've decided to change the story, Sykeers cast a spell on the 5 demons and made them sworn to become Neexa's guardians, their freedom is up to Neexa. There will be tattoes on the demons head, sing as they are under Neexa's control.

The final image is gonna be the 5 demons surrounded by the demon lord's soldiers.

"But guys, i still need feedback, tell me what u think abt the potrayal, does it looks like emotional to u guys??".....help me out.

Thanx

am7
04-04-2005, 09:51 AM
W O W! :eek: I really really like where this is going, love that typical action pose! Keep it up man!

eclipson
04-04-2005, 09:56 AM
W O W! :eek: I really really like where this is going, love that typical action pose! Keep it up man!

thanx man!:thumbsup:

Arc80
04-04-2005, 10:55 AM
what's up dude,

Thanks for the comments on my piece.
Yours is looking interesting so far. I'm liking the character designs and freakin interesting story dude. Maybe you should develop it later on. I'll keep checking your thread.

Cheers,
Archie
My master & servant entry (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=224331)

redfrog
04-04-2005, 11:01 AM
interesting story for the concept. I like it. Will be interesting to see your concept evolve..early pencils look promising. what were you planning for the background? Look forward to your next post.

eclipson
04-04-2005, 11:08 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6145/6145_1112609303_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6145/6145_1112609303_large.jpg)

just some minor changes, as i explained, the background will be demon lord's soldiers surrounding Neexa and her 5 demons, currently not sure of what mood to put, but will update this soon...

guys, c & c please,

thanx!

Tranchefeux
04-04-2005, 12:33 PM
Hi,
All my encouragement for your project, I waits in seeing more,
good luck.

GhostInTheMachine
04-04-2005, 07:01 PM
good work. I like the floating characters esp. in contrast to the HEAVY duty demon with the'dogs'

Goro
04-05-2005, 12:17 AM
nice characters.
Is there a hill in the background? cause otherwise those demons are floating...or the
horizon is placed to high.

good luck!

eclipson
04-05-2005, 06:49 AM
nice characters.
Is there a hill in the background? cause otherwise those demons are floating...or the
horizon is placed to high.

good luck!

woops! sorry, forgot to meantion abt the bg, yeap! 100% right, there's a hill on the bg, and demon lords soldiers gettin readdy to attack, thanx for reminding me:thumbsup:

cha0t1c1
04-05-2005, 06:57 AM
hey thnx for the comment...vry intense concept by the way...I love the composition(exploding with power), can't wait for the colouring....

userBrian
04-05-2005, 08:12 AM
I like the idea, very cool. Yes the emotion is coming out stronger.
The guy sitting in the upper left is cool, he must have some interesting
powers. Those demons in the background really add some deep dimention
and ramp up the threatening atmosphere. This will look great.
Good luck!
What is the floor gonna be like? Will it be rocks, bones, skulls, weapons?
Or a gentler place?

Zephyri
04-05-2005, 12:34 PM
I love the idea... this is the sort of thing that would translate well into a whole animated series! And the latest update is looking pretty promising too, I love the interaction between the five demons, they really look like they could be a formidable team. I just have one question... how many arms does the big demon guy with the cradle have? Cause it looks like he's cradling the baby with one, and then I can only make out two others... not that there is anything wrong with having three arms, it just caught me off guard. My fave character is the smaller demon guy with the blades, he looks very BROM ish, which is always good. Can't wait to see some colour!

sidchagan
04-05-2005, 03:40 PM
Good concept going, the five monsters surrounding the...baby (?) is a neat idea. I recommend you put the guy with the red spot on the ground though (in a sitting position would be my guess)- putting him on the big guy clutters it a little (dont move the guy with the green markings though)

Falcorr
04-05-2005, 04:48 PM
Hello!
Good work here :thumbsup: but to be honest i really enjoyd your very first sketch the most, but your recent one doesnt have any colors so guess ill have to wait to be sure.

Good LUX!

OrO
04-05-2005, 07:35 PM
really...can't wait for the coloring and shading

AlyFell
04-06-2005, 08:26 AM
What a really cool idea! Original and yes, emotional! This is going to look fab!

eclipson
04-06-2005, 10:55 AM
hey guys, sorry cant update this till the weekends, but i'll try my best to keep updating soon as possible.

sorry for not mentioning the characters positions, the lil characters with red and green spot, are floating, and big guy, he has 4 arms, i'll try to change the positions of the arms that are holding neexa's cradle in such way to be more clearer to see, this weekends, i'll update the colour versions,

and guys, thank you so very much for supporting me, u guys too, goodlux and i'll be checking all ur threads, u guys got pretty amazing work too :buttrock: ...i'll keep updating soon as possible,

thanx again guys, :bounce: :bounce: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

eclipson
04-06-2005, 11:00 AM
Good concept going, the five monsters surrounding the...baby (?) is a neat idea. I recommend you put the guy with the red spot on the ground though (in a sitting position would be my guess)- putting him on the big guy clutters it a little (dont move the guy with the green markings though)

hi sidchagan, actually, the guy with the red spot, he's floating, and i would love to move him to th ground, but he's gonna look very tiny and also, his blades is over his feet, that can't possibly allow him to sit on the floor, hope u get what i'm saying...appriciate ur idea, anyways....thanx for the comment :thumbsup: :bounce:

OrO
04-09-2005, 09:30 PM
those guys are really freaky...really good...:thumbsup: can't wait to see what colors you are going to use on the deamons

J2XA
04-11-2005, 12:36 PM
This is probably the best idea for the Master and Servants theme i have seen so far!
I do have one crit on the latest concept though, they all seem to bunched up, it looks as though Neexa is on the chest of the back demon instead of levitating in the cntre of them.

Hope this helps and i can't wait to see your next stage!!

If you want any feedback on anything please go http://www.j2xa.com/feedback/use/form3.html
and just send me a message and i will get back to you ASAP (please choose the option personal instead of business)

Good Luck!!

Arc80
04-30-2005, 05:30 AM
What's up dude. Just wanted to drop by and see if you posted some new stuff. HURRY UP DUDE :twisted: hehe, will be waiting man.

cheers

Djampa
04-30-2005, 06:59 AM
Hi :)

Good concept, nice sketch, we need to hurry up, I am pretty much behind you now.
Keep in touch, will track you.
Can't wait to see you WIP in the painting, it will really rock! I can feel it. :thumbsup:

Good luck!

TheFirstAngel
05-02-2005, 03:17 AM
wow you changed it all over. now the concept looks good for a go, burst it up mate, time flys!

junning
05-03-2005, 03:07 AM
For the concept no comment on it,
wait to see ur final work!!u can, dude!!^^

userBrian
05-04-2005, 07:05 AM
Come on dude! The popularity contest is almost over!

xric7
05-05-2005, 06:07 AM
nice idea and sketch.:bounce:
great work.:thumbsup:
can't wait 4more.:buttrock:

eclipson
05-07-2005, 12:53 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6145/6145_1115423597_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6145/6145_1115423597_large.jpg)

Here's the line art, did some more changes, making the poses of each characters stronger...man what a week, sorry for the slow progress guys, hope u guys could point out errors asap so i can correct them before proceeding to paintings...hehe...

wish me lux!

eclipson
05-07-2005, 01:01 AM
mistakes!!, i accidentally press submit again...nvm...foget abt it!

Arc80
05-07-2005, 04:13 AM
Guess who decided to post something new? Finally, hehehe. NIce baseline colour for each of the dude. Can't wait to see the painting version of it. Hurry up, 12 days and counting.

cheers

xric7
05-08-2005, 12:36 PM
hi..my friend.:)
very nice drawing,characters design and comp.:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
can't wait for color.gl.

anyway personally i do love the baby in the previous piece.he look charming with his psychic power but the new one he's look not uncommon.hehe.:D

TheFirstAngel
05-08-2005, 07:26 PM
Go jason go, burtst that nitro! your pets look great, just paint em to life!:scream: :twisted: :bounce:

eclipson
05-08-2005, 07:29 PM
Go jason go, burtst that nitro! your pets look great, just paint em to life!:scream: :twisted: :bounce:

Jason?...u sure u post to the right thread?... but thanx anyway!:bounce:

Addiso
05-08-2005, 07:47 PM
Just saw your character desing and I am really looking forward to your coloring.

Really cool forms on the creatures, reminds me of an anime superhero group.


- thx for your comments on my colorwork :)

the-mighty-m
05-08-2005, 07:57 PM
Love your characters. Cool composition! Your four-legged creatures are awesome!

demonicoz
05-08-2005, 07:57 PM
Thanks for dropping by on mine earlier bro By the way Your Line art Rocks!!
Love the composition and the sheer strength of your subjects. Start puttibg some paint on, so we can give you some proper crits. Good luck and keep the comments coming!

element5
05-09-2005, 12:44 AM
Hey Tora,

Just popped over to give support, great idea and cool line art.... Hurry not long to go :)

cheers

lutzw
05-18-2005, 08:59 PM
Eclipson,
I just wanted to quickly drop by to say thx for your comment at my thread during the challenge...
Cheers,
:) <- Lutz

TheFirstAngel
05-21-2005, 06:51 PM
Lol :argh: :banghead: :blush: me and names! still, i always loved your work and i hope you take your magic piece over to the WIP Section FANDY. sorry again, you have the right to find a silly nick for me and say it ONCE. :p
it WAS the right tread and exactly supposed to say what i wrote. so keep on going, finnish it. cuz your work was great always and it deserves your finnishing touch! keep it up!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

eclipson
05-24-2005, 06:30 PM
Lol :argh: :banghead: :blush: me and names! still, i always loved your work and i hope you take your magic piece over to the WIP Section FANDY. sorry again, you have the right to find a silly nick for me and say it ONCE. :p
it WAS the right tread and exactly supposed to say what i wrote. so keep on going, finnish it. cuz your work was great always and it deserves your finnishing touch! keep it up!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Thanx dude, yeah...i'll finish this, even though i'm kindda sad that i didnt have enough time to finish it, but i'll take my time to finish it now....haahah...i'll post it up when i'm done with it...

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