WIP dragon

[Matt_Forcum]

strike two

[Aarkon]

the texture look better now but i think the legs are a bit long IMO.
as far as suggestions maybe make the claws more glossy and maybe a metallic hue

[mr-doOo]

yep
for the claws, they are not textured, for the legs, i don t want them too small, but i will try something..

[LouisBrowne]

OOwww, I can't see anything. From your user bipmap I expect I'm missing out:mad:

[mr-doOo]

>>OOwww, I can't see anything. From your user bipmap I expect I'm missing out

this is geocities, you have to copie/paste the link... :(

[lildragon]

Geocities, sucks bud, why don't you just use either http://www.the3d.ws/ or http://www.alshaheen.net/artists/ no ads and you can link straight into the thread

cheers

[mr-doOo]

thanks lildragon... :)

[Threedeemer]

Very stylish dragon, I like the overall concept. The wings are especially impressive.

[Matt_Forcum]

i dont know man. I like your avitar alot, id expect a little more from this guy. he seems a little low poly, or something i dont know. he is lacking personality. I do like the nose alot though.

[popnGEAR]

looks like something out of a nice game :)

I like the style a lot, he looks cute and friendly :D.

[mr-doOo]

new update, juste some minor things to tweak and
i think the texture will be ok..
http://alshaheen.net/artists/le_fourbe/drag4.jpg

[Rabid pitbull]

well to me his head looks awful strange, i am of course no dragon expert. the arms are great the legs are good(all legs i guess:)) his body looks too human i think, the shape. his tail needs more texture i think as well.

I hope that is helpful.

[proton]

love the style of the head....very original!

[mr-doOo]

thanks all for your feedback
in first times i wanted it (his body)more like a mix panther/reptile
but the arms are a little human
i agree with you Rabid pitbull, the tail need more details
for the head, this is a second version, the first was more/too
conventional, and i really prefer this is less influanced by movies, pictures, ect... i hope :)

[mr-doOo]

an update....
http://alshaheen.net/artists/le_fourbe/drag5.jpg

[Matt_Forcum]

cool beans.

I really like how its comming along. I do think that the Black scales are a bit to dark. to contrasty. Perhaps if you lighting them up a bit. looking good though!

[chrislomaka]

very cool dragon.

the head reminds me a bit of some of the ones in legend of dragoon. (not a bad thing, mind you; i like)

and since people have beed commenting on the dark scales, i'll toss in my two cents worth: i like them, but...
-they should be lightened a bit. not much, but some... take your base color, and put black over it at 33% opacity shouls be about right.
-make them more nail-like... ie. shinier, and add some (bumpmap)streaks onto them (like our nails).

keep the updates coming :)

[mr-doOo]

some colors fix, the scales are less dark, and a test pose...

http://alshaheen.net/artists/le_fourbe/drag1.jpg
http://alshaheen.net/artists/le_fourbe/dragoon1.jpg

[hiko_]

superbe ! :)

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