Master and Servant 3D Entry: Bernardo Arroyo Lindig

[DigitalOmega]

Hey everybody! i am in, again, soooo... let say goodbye to all my free time again! enjoy the challenge and the best luck for all fo you!!!

btw: i will post my concept sketches as soon as i can get a scanner

Bernardo

[monsitj]

yeahhh! you again!!! how are you ? bernardo , can't wait for your high detail work as always
good luck and have fun!

[keetmun]

Man....you're back! Really enjoyed that last one, bring us some more!

Cheers, and yes to work we go!
:buttrock:

[Nathellion]

Your work was great in the BOXX challenge on threedy and again in the GSO challenge. Looking forward to watching this progress http://cgtalk.com/images/smilies/thumbsup.gif

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1111597615_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1111597615_large.jpg)

well, this is the first sketch, i am just exploring some ideas, i have an interesting story about this one, so please let me know if you like it.. anyways, i will post some more ideas i have when i finish the sketches..
good luck and thank you!!

[El Mexikano]

genial bernardo.--has escogido.--un ambiente de pelikula.--genial.--me gusto mucho.--el esketh.--sigue asi.--brother

[RandomTask]

I like the sketch, cant wait for the story....

[pitiwazou]

Good idea, the sketch is very good, good luck for this challenge ;).

[Universaldragon]

Hey! great concept, i like the composition!

[arturro]

great sketch! I love the mood there. Can't wait for some color schemes, and for 3d of course:)

[TheFirstAngel]

Hehe, subscription done. Taking seat and enjoys the ride. Best luck Bernardo! and of course all the fun, rockit mate!

[Neeno]

Really great concept... honestly.. scrolling down this is the best one so far... good luck dude

[ArtisticVisions]

Grear sketch, Bernardo. (why are there some many "robot/little girl" entries? :shrug: )

Look forward to seeing more. :)

[DigitalOmega]

hey everybody! thank you for your comments! i really apreciate them! this challenge will rock!!

now i am having some problems, i haveantoher sketch (will post tomorrow) and now i dont know wich one i will pick, please, stay tuned and tell me wich one you like more.. i think i have been doing too many robots for too much time, so this one will be completely different..

ok, the best luck on your threads, and happy easter! let´s start the hunting for the mutant rabbit!!

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1111866601_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1111866601_large.jpg)

hey, well, here is the other concept i told you, i dont know, this is something i haven´t done before so it may be a good idea to practice.. wich one you like the most? the robot or the dominatrix? i really wish i had time to do both!! so help me to decide!please!!

good luck and thank you!!

[BernardoDelgado]

ajaja mendigo clon enfermo, se me hace mas chido el 2º, sta mas original y mas cura, a darle :thumbsup:

[TheFirstAngel]

hola amigo loco, nasty kid. stop it and go icefishing :D lol just kidding. robot is more dramatic, dominatrix more nassssssssty. i like the funny concept, but the robot is sort of deeper, both are great, hard choice. if you are serious about a deep and epic piece, robot. if you just wanna have fun, nassstypic. sigh, looking over it tomorrow when back alive. keep it up my friend, cool concepts both :thumbsup: :argh: :beer: cheers

[keetmun]

Yes I agree both are great concepts, so I guess it's really up to you to decide which one you feel for more. In any case I'll be waiting for some good stuff from you!

:buttrock:

[Neeno]

Noth great and very kewl concepts might i add. I do like the 1st one better though (my opinion). I like a deep feel to an image so thats why i like the robot one more. Good luck i'll be watching to see what you choose and begin with.. kewl dude...

[cg219]

Nice sketches, I dont quite get the first sketch but it looks nice. I like the second one better though. Cant wait to see some stories on these.

[overcontrast]

hey nice concept bernardo.... i like teh second concept most.... its unique... keep updating, i really like ur works... wish to c some amazing stuff from u in the comming days.... c ya around :thumbsup:

[ArtisticVisions]

Hmm, hard choice; on one hand you have a dramatic concept, while the other is fairly humorous. :shrug:

Personally, I prefer the first concept over the other (love that perspective), but it's up to you. Either way, I'm sure it'll turn out great. :)

[TheFirstAngel]

looking over it now the second time and also try to remind this: The composition, body language, lighting, environment, atmosphere and facial expressions in the image itself should also be thoughtfully crafted to tell a powerful story that reaches out to the viewer.
the 1st has the potential to fulfill all points in a beautifull way. my personal choice, i'd go for the first one. keep it goin' Bernardo!

[ciscoleal]

I don't know. I'm a bit torn. The first one with the chick really does communicate Master and Servant very well. It's also very lively. The second I like because I love robots. I really like the sketch, very well executed. Theme-wise though, I think the robot needs more human characteristics so the audience cares more for'em. Think Iron Giant.

[Smooth-Criminal]

Hola Bernardo, un gusto verte de nuevo en la competencia, no hay mucho tiempo esta vez, asi que voy directo al grano, en mi opinion el segundo concepto es mas representativo y no quedan dudas para el espectador quien es el maestro, y las expresiones faciales son muy importantes en esta competencia, asi que yo iria con el segundo, pero tengo que admitir que la primer imagen esta muy buena incluso mejor que la segunda pero no esta muy clara para la idea de esta competencia, bueno espero que sea de ayuda normalmente no escribo tanto, pero no siempre se tiene la posibilidad de escribir en español!! las mejores de las suertes para ti.:thumbsup:

go for the second sketch!

[jddog]

Nice to see you again Bernardo... the second sketch is really outstanding :D
:wip:
jdd

[DigitalOmega]

hey everybody! thank you so much for your replies, i have made a decision, i am going to make the robot in 3d, and i get my tablet before the challenge finishes, i will make the "dominatrix" in 2d, i tried to make a model of the face of the man in 3d, but it is really hard to capture the expresion i have in the drawing.. (again, the struggle between 2d and 3d..) anyways i will start working in 3d very very soon, i will also try to develop further the look of the robot, because for my taste it is a little bit too feminine, i will change the weapon and other things too..

well it is really nice to see all my friends in here and i hope i can make new ones, good luck to all of you, i will be checking your entries soon too!

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1112147758_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1112147758_large.jpg)

well, here i have some concepts, i want this image to be more hard and more dramatic showing some big damage to the robot, as if it was fighting until total desactivation while trying to protect this really special kid. i know it´s not the most original story in the challenge, but he way i am going to put it togheter will make a difference, hope you like it!

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1112147972_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1112147972_large.jpg)

hmm the rendering for today, as you can see, i a going for darker atmosphere, if some of you guys have seen my works i tend to render too happy and colorful worlds, not this time ..
let´s see death and destruction, heroes and revenge gwahaha!!

[Matroskin]

Hi there, 3db2!
I see you're trying different ideas here...
Well, I like much the very first scetch, I mean it's style. Actually as I see you're developing that one now, isn't it?
If you'll maintain your scetche's style - that can come out a great work!
By the way, good placed lightning - warm and narrative I'd sayhttp://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon13.gif
I'll be back to see more your works!

[DaddyMack]

Hey there 3db2, this looks like it could be a really classic image.
Good luck realising your goal;)

[Versiden]

i really like your initial sketch.. cool concept

[artman50]

nice ! bernardo , u r using mental ray or what ?

[DigitalOmega]

hey, thank you for the comments, yes i used mental ray for this one, but i guess i will use brazil too, because mental ray doesn't have support for the smokw plugin i will use.. ahh today i will start the seriour modelling, it is going to be soo fun hehe. well happy modelling to all of you!

[ciscoleal]

I like some of the robots you've recently sketched. The top right one especially. Definately has that Iron Giant type of feel.

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1112483930_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1112483930_large.jpg)

hello! at least i had some time to start the modelling! i hope you like it, btw, i modelled this on 3d studio max that paint deformation tool is really interesting but a little slow, i really would like to see some improvments in this side.. well, good luck!!

[phyle]

this is awesome! youve got the melted plastic effect looking perfect!

[artman50]

te quedo de pelos , se pone interesante !! a verc omo vaz avanzando con esto, suerte

[Matroskin]

Heh, real good application of paint deformation. Should try as well:)
Very, very cool surface!!

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1112583205_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1112583205_large.jpg)

well, today i continued on the modelling, it is interesting, i modelloed everything on really high res (100k polys for the head, and 160k for the chest) it started to be a big problem for mi poor laptop, but i just used the optimze feature, and now it is about 60k for everything.. interesting stuuf i am learning with this thing.. wel good luck, and please tell me what do you think =)

[guismo]

wow, fantastic!
and you used max 7, with more then 100k poly, with the deformation tool and in a laptop???

i imagine the baby you have. i wish my pc could do half this...

[DigitalOmega]

hmmm, well is not exactly a baby.. it is a little old, it is a p4 2.4 ghz 512 ram, nothing too special, the thing is that i had to hide some of the polygons depening on wich area i was painting, that´s how i did it, you know you must adapt to the circumstances..

[Mike Nuts]

That robot is coming along very nicely :thumbsup: I like robots, especially broken ones... somehow that makes them look better. Great job on the plastic man!

[Neeno]

great and good expression in the agony that the robot might of add (if robots even have emotion) though it's good that you showed that.. z brush work is good.. impressed overall. He reminds me of Fender from the movie Robots by dreamworks not sure if you noticed it but i would've used him as reference for all types of breaks etc lol.. looks really good, gonna be a fantastic scene according to your concept.. Great stuff my friend keep it up

[soapy]

Wow, that model looks great so far, I really like it. It looks like he took a couple of shotgun blasts.

Good luck on the contest.
cheers.

[Climax]

• I 'll be damned! I love the Concept and Modelling! Great entry so far Bernardo! :thumbsup::thumbsup:

[jddog]

Really cool modelling on robot :thumbsup:
jdd

[adel3d]

Excellent progress!:thumbsup:
good luck!

[Versiden]

the model looks very realistic.. great job.. I'll try out the paint deform tool, looks cool.

keep it up

[overcontrast]

wwooh! this is awesome!!.. what did u do to him that he is all melted?... looks wicked!! gr8 job witht he modleing, i'll b keeping my eyes on this one for sure! :thumbsup:

[Grimreaper1981]

very realistic and clean modeling...it'll be good to shrink the polys down, i guess in your scene will be more than a head an a chest...:D

[UK3D]

Damn that's just the look I need for my dead robots. Excelent work can't wait to see where you take this. :thumbsup:

[sl1200]

impressive concept and beautiful progress(rendering)!good luck!:thumbsup:

[rattlesnake]

wow amazing modeling my friend...really top notch modeling here!!:bounce:

[DigitalOmega]

hey everybody, i am soo sorry for the lack of updates, too many things to do and too little time, but i will continue the modelling very very soon, keep tuned for the next updates!

Bernardo

[JamesMK]

Ah, a melting robot! Can't possibly fail - I love it so far :thumbsup:

[cruentus]

WoW!!! Amazing!!!

:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:

This rendering is so... so... REALISTIC!!!

I wanna do half this some day!!!

And the concept is so cool.

Keep going, 3db2. See ya

[alexichabane]

How's it going eh? Great modeling on your robot charater! The level of detail is amazing, and the damaged metal is particularly impressive. I like your concept skech as well, everything is composed nicely and story you are hinting at seems interesting. Quality stuff, keep it up. Alexi.

[Kanga]

This is probably the best blasted and melted effect I have seen so far.
Great job :thumbsup:

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1113677243_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1113677243_large.jpg)

hello! at least one update, i hope you like it, i guess i will have a little more time this week to work on this proyect, and well, there is a lot of work to do, but i think i will have enough time to finsih this on time.. good luck and let me know if you like it or not, mtw, i will post the story very soon, i think you might like it too..

[yellowman]

Hi Bernard,

I like your concept very much! Can't wait to see your final draft!:buttrock: Please Keep going:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: Cheers

yellowman

[rattlesnake]

hey Bernardo...really great...i have no crits...your modeling and concept is top notch...keep goin mate:scream::bounce::thumbsup:

[Neeno]

your concept has evolved into 3d .. so its nothing but next to Perfect :applause: ... fantastic . i say move on and quikly not much time left.. and i would absolutely love to see this piece completed... the robot is fantastic dude

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1114400417_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1114400417_large.jpg)

well, at least, another update, i know i have been lazy on the challenge, and the deadline is close, but i will finish this thing, actually i needed to like it a little more to feel like working on it, but i like it more now, and it seems worth a lot of hours of work to finish it. please, let me know if you like it, and what you would chege, it is always usefull!!

Bernardo

[CryingHorn]

Nice concept so far.. good luck

[BernardoDelgado]

como siempre tus shaders estan muy chidos, el modelo me gusta y el pelo tambien, solo talvez se me hace medio redonda la cabeza, y en el vestido agregaria mucho mas detalle porque parece que es del tamaño de una muñeca, se ve como de escala muy pequeña, bueno suerte en el challenge de mientras yo me pongo a darle tambien que me falta muchisimo jaja

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1114574084_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1114574084_large.jpg)

well, more updates coming, i added more detail to the dress and i textured it, i have so much left to do! but there is still time, for now good luck and let me know what do you think!

[AJ]

Coming along very nicely indeed.

It's hard to tell but the girls eyes seem a little wide to me - aside from that she looks top, I really like the bear motif! :D

[DigitalOmega]

hey, well i think that the eyes look weird because she doesn't eyebrows yet hehe, i guess i will have to paint over the model some dirt and the hair, and maybe do some corrections on the face, i will add the hands today and i will finish the robot's arms too.. well, thank you, and good luck!

[venum]

:thumbsup:
3db2:).
Nice concept for the challenge. The modeling of the robot is great. I like it a lot. It's actually promissing. The little have really nice expression. We can feel the dynamic in her dress. Good jobs.
I want too see more:twisted::twisted::twisted::twisted::twisted:

[mosconariz]

Wow, Great job you're doing here!

[artman50]

orale bernardo va de lujo ! que bueno que ya pudiste avanzar hehe , se ve muy chido el vestido y el pelo . el detalle del vestido lo pusiste = con push/pull o ya con z brush ??

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1114882368_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1114882368_large.jpg)

well, here is the gun, i wanted to do a huge gun since some time ago, and this was a good chance, it took me like 5 hours to model it, hope you like it! i will continue now with the girl, those hands are sooo difficult!!

[Neeno]

more good and continuous modeling from you... i love the gun.. looks really stylised for your character.. very very clean model... lets see some textures shall we or will you use a metallic shader?

[keetmun]

Man I can easily say you're one of the most underrated artists in this forum. You really deserve that Award Winner's gif under your name. This could be your time eh? Nothing much to crit, except maybe the girl's arms could be a bit more proportionate, but I'm sure you already know that.

Cheers to more good work!
:buttrock: :beer:

[venum]

3bd2 :thumbsup: Good Job.
nice Gun :scream:.

[parinya pattarajumnong]

great model and great concept.
I like it.
good luck

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1115086380_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1115086380_large.jpg)

ok, i have the backgorund now, the modelling is almost done, now i still have to add some rubble around, the robot´s legs, and some stuff here and there, and then the texturing, it is going to be really hard, and sooo little time, i am going nuts!! wish me good luck to finish this thing on time!

[DigitalOmega]

btw: keetmun (member.php?u=86237): thank you very much for the compilements, i wish i will have that little gif under my name this time hehehe

and everybody, thank you for your posts, i really appreciate them, as always let me know if you like it or not, it important to know your opinion too!

[venum]

:thumbsup:3db2. Ibteresting set. That mean Your robot is a giant. I like the yellow light source from the right, you should keep this idea for the light ambiance. It's gonna be good great work! :applause:

[jddog]

amazing model and the scene come really nice up !
jdd

[ilusiondigital]

Wow, a very good image, love the fallen robot

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1115503890_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1115503890_large.jpg)

well, here is the latest image, i have 11 days to finsh this, i guess i will have enoug time, but i must hurry, i hpe you like it =)

[mmoir]

Hey Bernardo,
That is one big robot, nice intricate model . I find the lighting in the last image a little too dark. Good job and I look forward to the finish of this.

[3dRaven]

3db2 Great detail on the robot. Can't wait till the girl joins the scene. It's a bit too drowned with shadows. Give it one strong light source

[overcontrast]

really u got some amazing works there... very impressive works... keep going buddy, i'm liking it.... :thumbsup:

[aBlackEgg]

cool Lights -- You surely got a mood there.
Keep it uppppupuppu

myEntry (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=231942)

[TheFirstAngel]

damn, fantastic modeling mate! Love your silly high amount of details and the great allover power you have! Just dont let it vanish too much in the dark, cuz on your strong models, there's nothing to hide! Keep on Rocking Bernardo!

[venum]

great work! the modeling is really good actually!:thumbsup:

Can't wait to see the next step:wise:

Take of the lighting. the different pool of light need to be clever.
:applause:

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1115703323_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1115703323_large.jpg)

well, here are the first textured shots, i have a very very tight schedule to finish this if i want to do it on time, but it seems it´s going to be ok,

all the textures here are done in high resoltion up to 3500 px, since the final render will be huge, i dont want to have problems with the textures. god bless photoshop and the blending modes hehehe, i used some resources from the internet, if you want to find anything it can be really easy there.

for now enjoy, and tell me if you like it!

[monsitj]

heyy! you amaze me again bernado! nice quality rendering come out again!! good luck to you!

[venum]

:thumbsup: Really nice texture!

Take care of the floor.

Really nice work!

:applause::D

[artman50]

bernardo felicidades . t esta quedando muy muy padre. espero que termines a tiempo.. hechale ganas t hechamos porras desde puebla hehe.. voy a estar pendiente a ver como queda... hechale ganas!

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1115788286_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1115788286_large.jpg)

well, today a lot of work done! it should be like this everyday hehe, but well, i finished (almost) the bg, and added the smoke, just as a test to see how it looks like, it might need more detail, but it´s ok, tell me if you think it looks correctly, it will be very usefull!

[venum]

:thumbsup:Great work 3db2.
I think you should spend more time on the lighting to give a really nice
ambiance. I don't like these smoke. they are to flat, thin. They look like just
cigarette smoke. But the idea is interesting. Spend more time on the lighting
and then work on the smoke. take of the ground. The texture look like pixies,
maybe you need to scale the texture. The scale between the rock rock of the
ground doesn't make sense with the door. There is a scal issue. On my opinon it
should be 5 or 10 times smaller, and it's a minimum.
You've got a real nice concept.
:applause::buttrock:

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1115943487_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1115943487_large.jpg)

ahh, render render render, i love to do this hehe, i played yesterday, and i got this lighting, i guess it will be nice contrast and have good ambience, is heavily color corrected in ps, but i will add the volume light in 3d, this was just a fake, if you have any C&C let me know.. hmm i still have to correct that floor..

[venum]

:thumbsup:waow!

what a nice ambiance, it's really promissing.
A comment. the smoke should get the light and the shdow of the scene. Brighter and transluscent into the volumetrique light.
it's a great step
:thumbsup::twisted::buttrock::applause:

[BernardoDelgado]

la vdd q se ve muy perrona la 2º q pusiste, esa iluminacion le vendrá de maravilla, apurale q keda muy poco che clon :thumbsup: suerte.


PD: avientame un post ajajajjaja

[JRBRAZ]

Very good work :thumbsup:

This last update in backgroud is really cool. :bounce:

[fer3d]

Hey, I didn't see this thread before! It is looking fantastic!

Keep it up, man! Felicitaciones, compadre!

fer

[mosconariz]

¡Vientos brother! Esto está rockeando duro :buttrock:

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1116103204_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1116103204_large.jpg)

well, i am almost done with the texturing, unfortunately i cant show the whole model because it takes looong time to render, but it seems i will finish this on time, hmm more textures, and less talk, c ya later!

[venum]

:)
I'm in hurry to see the final render 3db2.
:thumbsup::buttrock::applause:

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1116108763_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1116108763_large.jpg)

hey, well i was able to render the robot, (17 minutes, i thought i was going to be a lot more on my poor laptop..) anyways please, tell me what do you think, i guess i still have some time for tweaking here and there hehe

[artman50]

que tal pues el arma se ve muy bien , y las piezas internas de la pierna pero el recubrimiento exterior hmmm.... tal vez se veria mejor con una textura de metal limpo de base y amolarla desde los hoyos hacia afuera como metal quemado despues meterle raspones y cosas asi . la que esta ahorita parece que huviera explotado solo algo a su derecha , y se ve bien pero entonces darle mas contraste entre lo que esta afectado por el calor y lo que no , y aparte quemar alrededor de los huevos esos ... mi humilde opinion.. y hechale ganas que si no acabas t toca pamba

[mmoir]

Hey Bernardo,
Your textures are looking great:thumbsup: ,you are going to have another great piece. Good luck with finishing this off.

[DigitalOmega]

hey thank yuo for your replies, ahh i have been finsihing this thing for the last 10 hours.. it´s really crazy! but well i am having fun and i will keep going..

y bueno, de las texturas.. pienso añadirle detalles como las partes quemadas en ps, ya que el material del metal es bastante complejo, y un layer mas y le daba la muerte a mi pobre maquina, pero si, tiene que verse quemado, ademas de que tendra algunos detalles por aqui y por alla.

deseenme suerte hehe

Bernardo

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1116128545_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1116128545_large.jpg)

a lot of work today, 12 hours, but it´s worth it, here is the latest render, i am just getting ready to make the full res render, i am getting crazy torturing my computers!!

[venum]

:) If you're torturing your computer to make a beautifull challenge, carry on. It's worth it.
where is the little girl. She's still not here.
The lighting: ou've got volumetric lights. We can see them go down from the left to he right. On the wall and the door, we can see the light but not on the robot.
3 days to go.
:thumbsup::twisted::D:applause::buttrock::love:

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1116215424_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1116215424_large.jpg)

well, here it is, i need more color correction, model the hands of the girl (i am sooo lazy!) and do something about that smoke, if i dont like it at the end, i guess i will just erase it.. well let me know waht do you think, if you like it or not, etc etc..

[DigitalOmega]

Hey, venum, thank you so much for your support, you have been very helpfull and inspirational in this challenge! and well, in the lights, i actually made the light that comes from the upper right side of the image to ignore the robot, because in the places where it touched the robot looked like crap (too oversaturated).. i hope not everybody will notice it hehehe..

thank you!

[venum]

:thumbsup:

I'm really glad to see the girl at last. But maybe it's not the best position into the comp, especially after the strong feeling I could have when I saw the sketch.
otherwise great great work! I like it a lot1
:scream::deal::love:

[artman50]

orale las texturas se ven realmente bien ! contrasta mas con el bg en lo del humo tienes razon no convence tal vez pintado encima ? no se . y la monita se ve genial en la esfera de enerfia o lo que sea hehe podria estar volando? o mas arriba , al centro derecha junto al hueco del pecho, sin taparlo . pero bueno se esta viendo muy bien . suerte :)

[DigitalOmega]

huh huh, i am just doing the final comp, it horrible to work in this pc with a big psd file... it takes like 4 mins to save.. anyways, i will consider change the position of the girl a little bit since its better if i just have her floating a little over the gun..

the smoke is still on hold, i am finishing rendering the last test, if it doesn´t add anything to the image i will just forget it hehe, let´s see..

for now i need a little bit more caffeine and more smokes, and keep working...

thank you for your replies!

Bernardo

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1116309159_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1116309159_large.jpg)

well, here is the comp, this is the one in high res, the only thing left is color correct that girl, and paint some details here and there, let me know if you like it!!

[arkinet]

wow!!... but m not sure about the smoke... maybe jst a haze or make it thinner? overall, its great!!:thumbsup:

[venum]

:scream: Great job!
I'm still don't like the smoke. But who's care?
I like it, anyway
:deal::love::applause:

[xric7]

wow..
realy cool effect.:bounce:
great work.
keep going.
cheers.:buttrock:

[jddog]

wow this is really a nice and fine work, bravo... :thumbsup:
the image like this for me is really great, no observation do to

:applause:
jdd

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1116368992_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1116368992_large.jpg)

hey, i am almost done, this is an image with the layers i used on the final composition, ambient occlusion, diffuse, volumens, smoke, etc etc.

the diffuse layer, took about 14 hours to render with brazil, hdri lighting, and GI, the occlusion layer was done in mental ray, and all the textures were done in photoshop, i used a plugin from nvidia to generate normal maps form bump maps, and it helped a lot hehe i guess there are a lot of stuff i can say about doing this image but for now, just wait like 5 mins until i get the final one hehe

Bernardo

[DigitalOmega]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1116369653_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/6094/6094_1116369653_large.jpg)

at least! here it is, finsihed!, this weekend was insane trying to finish this image, 34 hrs in 3 days, but at the end i enjoyed it a lot, hope you enjoy it too, and see you in the voting!
by the way, i will post the explanation of the history for this image very soon, stay tuned!

thank you everybody for your posts! the are really inspiring! and see you in the next challenge!!

Bernardo

[lotaH]

Good Work, Man!!!

Congratulations!! Good luck! :thumbsup:

[]'s

[arkinet]

nah, i dnt need the history dude, i simply enjoy your image, really astonishing... cant say a word. Good luck btw!!:thumbsup:

[BernardoDelgado]

che clon! jaj pues te kedo muy perrona, la textura del robot se ve chidisima solo pense q habria mucho humo en el ambiente como turbulencia y se ve como raro en el pelo de la niña no??:D como el alpha. Jaj pero que mas da la imagen kedo de poka suerte en la votacion!!:applause:

[Lemog]

Shame on me Bernardo... coz I don't see your thread before...

and what I see... a top notch realization... congratulations for your subject and also for you final picture... an incredible design for a fantastic mood, and a real good feeling... I love your image mate, really :thumbsup:

You're in my selection of the best entries... bravo :applause:

[grooshka]

whoa! a great one here! nice composition and amazing mood created with afternoon lights. maybe just those shadows created by sunlight could be less sharp. really superb image. bravo!

[ilusiondigital]

Bernardo, you make a very good and interesting image, friend. Enhorabuena and good luck

[InTerceptoV]

Really different from other images. The mood of the image is great.

[DigitalOmega]

hey, thank you very much for your encouragment! i know this image is a little bit wierd, because i have some issues with the lights, and that girl hehe
anyways, wish me luck for the voting, let's see who wins this challenge =)

good luck in your entries!
Bernardo

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