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03-22-2005, 10:23 PM
Bahadir Baris Ozsoy has entered the Master and Servant 2D.
Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6078)
Latest Update: Final Image: Final Image
and the final image...
03-26-2005, 09:57 PM
Hi and good luck everybody!
Here is my first concept for the challenge.
I inspired by shepherd an his sheep dog when I made firt doodles.
Then I redesigned them.
03-26-2005, 09:59 PM
03-26-2005, 10:45 PM
Very good sketches. Shepherd idea is brand new concept for many contestants here :) good job.
Hosgeldin, kolay gele.
03-27-2005, 06:54 AM
Good sketches. keep it up.
Good luck to you :)
03-27-2005, 07:15 AM
nice sketches, keep it up man,
03-28-2005, 11:58 AM
good concept and drawing.
çoban efendi ve yaratığı, iyi fikir bence.
concepti görünce aklıma bazı anadolu efsaneleri geldi. karakaçoloz, ya da adamotu gibi mitolojik yaratıkları da işe katıp, zaten vahşi görünümlü yaratığa çobanın tam hükmettiği (atıl kurt) bir an olabilir gibi geldi. ama benim aklıma geldi bunlar, inşallah bir şeyler çağrıştırır sana.
anyway, i am waiting to see more from you. wish you will get a good result.:thumbsup:
03-28-2005, 12:03 PM
thats one mean sheep dog :) god knows what the sheep look like? good idea nice to see something diffrent.
03-28-2005, 01:29 PM
cizim cok guzel, ellerine saglik!!
the idea is really original, i agree with others! Making it as a fantasy element is even better ;D
what are you planning on putting in the bg? just empty plains or are you gonna fill it up?
your drawing style is very nice as well!!
iyi sanslar!! ;)
03-28-2005, 08:13 PM
Thank you everyone for your nice comments.
aslında senin dediğine benzer bi iki eskiz yaptım ama henüz adamakıllı şeyler çıkmadı. Bakalım, zamanla çıkar heralde :)
digiscape: see soon... :) thanks
Silveraxe: This drawings is to put up the characters. But I have different composition for the final image. Thanks
03-28-2005, 08:19 PM
colored sketch for the shepherd character...
03-28-2005, 08:35 PM
Love the rendering on it so far. Very impressive and I wanna see the beast now!
03-28-2005, 08:40 PM
kendi kendime ilk yorumum "ohaa" oldu :D
this looks "amazing"!! *shuts her wide open mouth* :D the coloring looks breathtaking, i can't wait to see the finished piece!!
ps: the coloring style reminds me of todd lockwood's work n___n
03-28-2005, 09:23 PM
good luck in the challenge.
03-31-2005, 07:20 PM
Colored sketch for beast.
03-31-2005, 07:24 PM
04-02-2005, 07:29 PM
its all about the pan's overall charisma...good work!
04-03-2005, 07:40 PM
Thank you NOOB! and Gökhan...
04-03-2005, 07:41 PM
Some sketches for the master's pose...
04-04-2005, 11:55 AM
like beast scetch so other scetches too..
Çizimlerin gerçekten harika umarım zamanında bitirirsin
04-04-2005, 12:39 PM
Thank you Gelroth..
Sağolasın. Daha zaman var, bitiririm sanırım :)
04-04-2005, 12:42 PM
Shepherd and his sheep dog is ok. Now, the sheeps...
Ok, no sheeps. Because our shepherd is "the Shepherd of the cursed souls who cant leave this world"
04-04-2005, 09:30 PM
At last I costituted the composition.
04-05-2005, 08:46 PM
Ok. I think, I am going on a little slow.
This is the color scheme. While you checking it out, I am going to proceed with the final work:)
04-05-2005, 08:50 PM
goin slow?? we still have a month and a bit,take ur time.
04-05-2005, 08:56 PM
You're going really good man. good luck :thumbsup:
(guzel gidiyor baris, eline saglik)
04-05-2005, 09:01 PM
You are on a right way! just go ahead... grats!
04-05-2005, 09:35 PM
I like the chosen palette and the back lighting. It has good ambience.
the new concept is comming together nicely... the colors are a bit grey at this point.
will come back soon to check out more updates!
04-06-2005, 08:01 PM
NOOB!: Most of challengers coloring WIP, therefor I feel I standing back:) Yes you'r right we still have enough time:) Thanks
Atmospheria: Saolasın Emrah, beğendiğine sevindim.
Slav : I am indecisive about the colors, thanks.
Kornel, Gamoron: Thanks guys..
04-06-2005, 10:52 PM
Dude! Great sketches and concept art! Very nice... and I love the composition and colours you've chosen. Keep up the great work, and I'll be back to check for updates!
04-06-2005, 11:27 PM
Nice ! My suggestion is to try to put some more emotion in the master. have him in a fighting stance or something..Just fool around with it and see what different postures can do to strengthen your allready astounding composition!
04-07-2005, 09:32 PM
looking good.:) and good brush strokes.
good luck.i'm waiting your next update
04-09-2005, 03:51 PM
Bravo Bahadır,çok iyi.:applause: Bol şans wede rastgele ...:thumbsup:
04-09-2005, 10:27 PM
looks really great!
04-11-2005, 08:44 PM
Thank you guys!
CoreyArtE: I will add some emotions to the master in the final coloring...
04-11-2005, 08:49 PM
Here is the line art...
04-14-2005, 08:04 PM
04-14-2005, 08:15 PM
04-18-2005, 01:11 PM
nice consept bro...ı really like it...good coloring in sky.....kepp it up.:buttrock:
04-18-2005, 01:44 PM
04-18-2005, 02:01 PM
I like the colors you have chosen for your sky, very nice. Keep it up.
04-18-2005, 09:18 PM
Korayarts, Firestorms and Cerebr4l Thanks Guys
04-18-2005, 09:23 PM
I applied some details and contrast...
04-18-2005, 09:28 PM
And chracter positions...
04-19-2005, 10:04 AM
iyi gidiyor ellerine sağlık....
04-19-2005, 11:05 AM
Your background is beautiful and your sketch too!! I wait for colors in caracter and i'll return to see evolution...Good luck:)
04-19-2005, 11:15 AM
04-19-2005, 01:33 PM
This sky kills me. It's really impressive; so much light and strength.
Waiting for characters.
04-25-2005, 03:27 AM
Thanks for recent kind replies!! :)
04-25-2005, 03:29 AM
04-25-2005, 03:31 AM
close up from characters...
04-25-2005, 03:34 AM
...and detail from master.
04-25-2005, 04:43 AM
ur work looks incredible...I just saw ur thread, there are so many talented artists here...may I suggest something: can you strengthen the shadows on the folds...reat job otherwise...
04-25-2005, 08:47 AM
son yaptıgın iş süper olmuş....
last work is very nice. Keep it going.
04-25-2005, 09:32 AM
I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for your suggestion.Actually thats a common problem o' mine,there is a lack of contrast in the most of my works..i hope to getover it by practicing more and more
Eyvallah Ozan saolasın...
04-25-2005, 10:33 AM
Cool man. Love the costume and the rune stick. :thumbsup:
04-25-2005, 10:43 AM
oh yeah! the master look good! g:thumbsup: reat job!..but the "slave" should maybe look a little more agressive..and he should maybe look at his master...
Keep it up and good luck!!
04-25-2005, 10:53 AM
Wow, very cool colour, a lot of harmony. Like the expression of the master. Hope to see more, mate
04-25-2005, 08:36 PM
Your colors are sympathetic nerves, perhaps makes attention with the folds of clothing if not very cool.
04-26-2005, 10:42 AM
Superb work with colors. Will you add some fresnel-like effects to the edges of the characters (esp the skin of the beast) so the edges will be more visible and they don't fade away into the sand? Or will you keep the black outlines (which is still fine)
04-27-2005, 12:59 PM
Tariq12: Thanks man!
Fiolka Alexandre: Maybe i can make the beast more aggressive but its impossible to look at master.Cuz its against the montagne .You have to check out my sketches and u'll see where the beast is lookin at. Thanks...
ilusiondigital: Thanks man!
Tranchefeux: Instead of darkening the cloth i'll add more light to some places, thats all. Thanks...
Hesido: For my opinion, in some places, figures will mix with place by fog, smoke and light effects.. and black lines are only assistence to the picture. Thanks...
04-28-2005, 02:47 AM
a bit bothered by the creature. left paw and teeth. i think when beasts snarl they show mostly front teeth? light on the staff can still be a bit more intense?
youve got a mastery of colors and youre doing great. cheeers maaaan. :thumbsup:
04-29-2005, 09:05 AM
You took your painting a long way already -- good work! The posture of the master and his beast seem to be so much more energetic now.
I'd agree with cha0t1c1: maybe you'd need to work out more shadow-plays on the clothing (esp on the shirt) to achieve more contrast and realism. I think you already chose light coming from two sides when considering the face and the gown -- so don't forget this when working on the folds...
About the herded souls: maybe the concept of souls being herded would be more obvious when there is more than one hovering around? Just an idea, don't harm your whole composition...
:) <- Lutz
05-02-2005, 06:17 AM
jugeras, lutzw: Thank you guys! A will take your comments into considiration...
05-02-2005, 06:23 AM
I added more details..
05-02-2005, 11:56 AM
Hi, good progression on your painting the colors and environment are
always cool, and the sky that it success, go, go for the
Nice dymanic clouds!!!It´s color is wonderful
05-02-2005, 05:06 PM
very well rendered especially the clouds,nice dynamic pose for both the characters as well as the angle..great piece of work all and all~keep it coming:)wish u luck here
05-02-2005, 07:18 PM
Thank you very much guys!!
I keep on...
05-02-2005, 07:21 PM
Detail from master...
05-02-2005, 07:34 PM
I really like the color scheme you have going on here. The character design is great, plus the sky gives me a feeling that something is about to happen... Cool stuff! http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon13.gif
05-03-2005, 03:00 AM
Bahadir, very nice work, I just love your colors, I don't know what it is but I feel like an insect attracted by a lamp when I look at those colors.
05-03-2005, 06:21 AM
iyi şanslar bahadır
05-03-2005, 11:04 AM
the work on the textures of the cloths is very great, good work
05-03-2005, 02:47 PM
Nice Update. Anxiously waiting for "the soul" you mentioned earlier..
05-07-2005, 10:05 AM
Lovely drawing style! :thumbsup:
05-10-2005, 07:33 AM
freakjc, arlutik: thank you for your kind comments
dekal: sana da bol şanas la...
MDN67: Thanks man!
Hesido: i started it already
05-10-2005, 08:46 AM
Hello Akrep!! What's going on?..:) Your caracter looks very good:thumbsup: maybe, just a detail, You should add pupils in his eyes, but very slightly..Just to suggest them...In order to give him a more demoniac feeling and to avoid entirely white eyes ...
05-10-2005, 06:37 PM
Fiolka Alexandre: I am planning to leave it as it. But why not:)
05-10-2005, 06:41 PM
Little more details and begining of the soul painting.
05-10-2005, 06:48 PM
cok güzel oluyor hocam ellerine sağlık. "master and servant" taki en iyi çalışmalardan biri bence. daha da iyi olcak inşallah kolay gelsin
05-10-2005, 07:59 PM
I like your composition and lighting. Good luck for the end of the picture.
05-10-2005, 08:04 PM
good work, i like this. i wont crit for the sake of it - enjoy the challenge! :D
05-11-2005, 06:54 AM
Seccad: Çok saolasın elimden geldiğince iyi olmasına çalışıyorum:)
authentic, GhostInTheMachine: Thanks guys
05-11-2005, 08:24 AM
Hey Akrep, this is turning out to be really well indeed.
Noticed one thing, the creatures right foot's 'thumb' nail is short but the left foot has a really long nail (which looks better). Maybe evening them out would be a nice touch?
05-11-2005, 08:30 AM
great atmosphaire you have created...i like the colours you used and the main caracter is super...good luck
05-11-2005, 09:40 AM
Cok guzel gidiyor, ruhu da merak ettim baya:) Looking great so far. Good luck!
05-11-2005, 09:45 AM
:eek: ........................very good work!
05-13-2005, 04:07 PM
Close up from soul...
05-13-2005, 04:11 PM
Hesido: Tamam kardeş saolasın. Bi ayar çekerim one:)
Kerem: Buyrunuz ruh da bööle bişe:)
agios and anostudio: Thanks Guys!
05-13-2005, 04:13 PM
Lovely technique... the clouds and figure are just great.
And i like the latest detail... look forward to seeing him in the scene...
05-13-2005, 04:26 PM
Cool style, I love the clouds too. reminds me of traditional oils. Only crit is that the 'soul' could use a little more contrast.. or maybe lighten the darks to give the whole figure a lighter key. Another thing, it looks a little monkey like, is this intentional?!
Nevertheless, it looks amazing and your level is much higher than mine, so who am I to crit? :D Feel free to ignore me.
I'll be keeping an eye on this....keep it up!
05-13-2005, 06:13 PM
duddlebug : Thanks Man!
you catch the right point
its true that the soul looks like a monkey,maybe i wouldn't notice it if you didnt say..thanks a lot
05-15-2005, 11:51 AM
little more details...
05-15-2005, 10:03 PM
i tried to change the expression of the soul's face,i think now it doesnt look like a monkey that much. :)
05-18-2005, 02:35 AM
here is final coloring...
05-18-2005, 02:44 AM
and the final image...
05-18-2005, 03:57 AM
wonderful piece!!:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
very beautiful color and great comp.:thumbsup:
love ur sky and characters a lot.
best luck to u.
05-18-2005, 06:04 AM
Bahadir , güzel sonuclandirmissin tebrik ederim , sana basarilar dilerim :thumbsup:
05-18-2005, 10:03 AM
Nice finish! :)
There is a striking resemblence to Willam Dafoe, with that soul!
Gerçi baş barnak konusunda beni dinlemedin ama neyse :D:D
05-18-2005, 02:14 PM
xric7 :Thanks Man! :bounce:
sablebrush: eyvallah hocam saolasın:thumbsup:
hesido: yok sana barnak marnak :)
and GOOD LUCK EVERYONE!!!:buttrock:
06-01-2005, 01:00 PM
nerelerdesin olm? bi ara lem!
06-10-2005, 05:56 AM
I've been looking at the image Backgroun_3 for ten minutes now, it seems. Same old song: I don't know how I missed this one.
It's astonishing that something so bereft of inhabitants can be so moving. It's one of the finest skies I've ever seen painted, and I've seen a quite a few.. Your final image is, to me, a strange and beautiful mix of the fantastic, the fairy tale, and the legend. I don't pretend to know what it all means, but that is part of the beauty. I wish you much much good luck with the challenge.
06-10-2005, 05:56 AM
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