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Akrep
03-22-2005, 11:23 PM
Bahadir Baris Ozsoy has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6078)

Latest Update: Final Image: Final Image
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1116384250_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1116384250_large.jpg)

and the final image...

Akrep
03-26-2005, 10:57 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1111877869_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1111877869_large.jpg)

Hi and good luck everybody!

Here is my first concept for the challenge.
I inspired by shepherd an his sheep dog when I made firt doodles.
Then I redesigned them.

NOOB!
03-26-2005, 10:59 PM
excellent drawings!!

blakbird
03-26-2005, 11:45 PM
Hi there
Very good sketches. Shepherd idea is brand new concept for many contestants here :) good job.

Hosgeldin, kolay gele.

ninox
03-27-2005, 07:54 AM
Good sketches. keep it up.
Good luck to you :)

eclipson
03-27-2005, 08:15 AM
nice sketches, keep it up man,

GoodLux!:thumbsup:

meykurt
03-28-2005, 12:58 PM
good concept and drawing.
<tr>
çoban efendi ve yaratığı, iyi fikir bence.
concepti görünce aklıma bazı anadolu efsaneleri geldi. karakaçoloz, ya da adamotu gibi mitolojik yaratıkları da işe katıp, zaten vahşi görünümlü yaratığa çobanın tam hükmettiği (atıl kurt) bir an olabilir gibi geldi. ama benim aklıma geldi bunlar, inşallah bir şeyler çağrıştırır sana.
<tr>
anyway, i am waiting to see more from you. wish you will get a good result.:thumbsup:

digiscape
03-28-2005, 01:03 PM
thats one mean sheep dog :) god knows what the sheep look like? good idea nice to see something diffrent.

Silveraxe
03-28-2005, 02:29 PM
cizim cok guzel, ellerine saglik!!

the idea is really original, i agree with others! Making it as a fantasy element is even better ;D
what are you planning on putting in the bg? just empty plains or are you gonna fill it up?
your drawing style is very nice as well!!

iyi sanslar!! ;)

Akrep
03-28-2005, 09:13 PM
Thank you everyone for your nice comments.

meykurt:
<tr>
aslında senin dediğine benzer bi iki eskiz yaptım ama henüz adamakıllı şeyler çıkmadı. Bakalım, zamanla çıkar heralde :)
<tr>

digiscape: see soon... :) thanks

Silveraxe: This drawings is to put up the characters. But I have different composition for the final image. Thanks

Akrep
03-28-2005, 09:19 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1112044776_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1112044776_large.jpg)

colored sketch for the shepherd character...

kyphur
03-28-2005, 09:35 PM
Love the rendering on it so far. Very impressive and I wanna see the beast now!

Silveraxe
03-28-2005, 09:40 PM
kendi kendime ilk yorumum "ohaa" oldu :D

this looks "amazing"!! *shuts her wide open mouth* :D the coloring looks breathtaking, i can't wait to see the finished piece!!

ps: the coloring style reminds me of todd lockwood's work n___n

YusufArtun
03-28-2005, 10:23 PM
good luck in the challenge.

Akrep
03-31-2005, 08:20 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1112300431_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1112300431_large.jpg)

Colored sketch for beast.

NOOB!
03-31-2005, 08:24 PM
wow..nice beast!

gokhanhepsen
04-02-2005, 08:29 PM
its all about the pan's overall charisma...good work!

Akrep
04-03-2005, 08:40 PM
Thank you NOOB! and Gökhan...

Akrep
04-03-2005, 08:41 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1112557284_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1112557284_large.jpg)

Some sketches for the master's pose...

Gelroth
04-04-2005, 12:55 PM
like beast scetch so other scetches too..

Çizimlerin gerçekten harika umarım zamanında bitirirsin

Akrep
04-04-2005, 01:39 PM
Thank you Gelroth..

Sağolasın. Daha zaman var, bitiririm sanırım :)

Akrep
04-04-2005, 01:42 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1112618541_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1112618541_large.jpg)

Shepherd and his sheep dog is ok. Now, the sheeps...
Ok, no sheeps. Because our shepherd is "the Shepherd of the cursed souls who cant leave this world"

Akrep
04-04-2005, 10:30 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1112650217_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1112650217_large.jpg)

At last I costituted the composition.

Akrep
04-05-2005, 09:46 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1112733974_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1112733974_large.jpg)

Ok. I think, I am going on a little slow.
This is the color scheme. While you checking it out, I am going to proceed with the final work:)

NOOB!
04-05-2005, 09:50 PM
goin slow?? we still have a month and a bit,take ur time.

looking gud.

emrahelmasli
04-05-2005, 09:56 PM
You're going really good man. good luck :thumbsup:
(guzel gidiyor baris, eline saglik)

kornel
04-05-2005, 10:01 PM
You are on a right way! just go ahead... grats!

cheers: Kornél

Gamoron
04-05-2005, 10:35 PM
I like the chosen palette and the back lighting. It has good ambience.
:beer:

Slav
04-05-2005, 10:37 PM
the new concept is comming together nicely... the colors are a bit grey at this point.

will come back soon to check out more updates!

Akrep
04-06-2005, 09:01 PM
NOOB!: Most of challengers coloring WIP, therefor I feel I standing back:) Yes you'r right we still have enough time:) Thanks

Atmospheria: Saolasın Emrah, beğendiğine sevindim.

Slav : I am indecisive about the colors, thanks.

Kornel, Gamoron: Thanks guys..

artjunkie
04-06-2005, 11:52 PM
Dude! Great sketches and concept art! Very nice... and I love the composition and colours you've chosen. Keep up the great work, and I'll be back to check for updates!

Cheers!

CoreyArtE
04-07-2005, 12:27 AM
Nice ! My suggestion is to try to put some more emotion in the master. have him in a fighting stance or something..Just fool around with it and see what different postures can do to strengthen your allready astounding composition!

goktugg
04-07-2005, 10:32 PM
hi ~Akrep
looking good.:) and good brush strokes.
good luck.i'm waiting your next update

Basarılar,Bahadır

wulpecula
04-09-2005, 04:51 PM
Bravo Bahadır,çok iyi.:applause: Bol şans wede rastgele ...:thumbsup:

Mordalles
04-09-2005, 11:27 PM
looks really great!

Akrep
04-11-2005, 09:44 PM
Thank you guys!

CoreyArtE: I will add some emotions to the master in the final coloring...

Akrep
04-11-2005, 09:49 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1113252567_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1113252567_large.jpg)

Here is the line art...

Akrep
04-14-2005, 09:04 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1113509051_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1113509051_large.jpg)

Background painting...

Akrep
04-14-2005, 09:15 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1113509700_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1113509700_large.jpg)

I'm painting...

korayarts
04-18-2005, 02:11 PM
nice consept bro...ı really like it...good coloring in sky.....kepp it up.:buttrock:

Firestorms
04-18-2005, 02:44 PM
Good Luck

Başarılar

Cerebr4l
04-18-2005, 03:01 PM
I like the colors you have chosen for your sky, very nice. Keep it up.

Akrep
04-18-2005, 10:18 PM
Korayarts, Firestorms and Cerebr4l Thanks Guys

Akrep
04-18-2005, 10:23 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1113859419_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1113859419_large.jpg)

I applied some details and contrast...

Akrep
04-18-2005, 10:28 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1113859693_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1113859693_large.jpg)

And chracter positions...

Ozanosfer
04-19-2005, 11:04 AM
iyi gidiyor ellerine sağlık....


good luck!...

Vectorius
04-19-2005, 12:05 PM
Your background is beautiful and your sketch too!! I wait for colors in caracter and i'll return to see evolution...Good luck:)

aturkone
04-19-2005, 12:15 PM
Başarılar...

authentic
04-19-2005, 02:33 PM
This sky kills me. It's really impressive; so much light and strength.
Waiting for characters.

Akrep
04-25-2005, 04:27 AM
Thanks for recent kind replies!! :)

Akrep
04-25-2005, 04:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1114399765_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1114399765_large.jpg)

painting...

Akrep
04-25-2005, 04:31 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1114399883_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1114399883_large.jpg)

close up from characters...

Akrep
04-25-2005, 04:34 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1114400088_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1114400088_large.jpg)

...and detail from master.

cha0t1c1
04-25-2005, 05:43 AM
ur work looks incredible...I just saw ur thread, there are so many talented artists here...may I suggest something: can you strengthen the shadows on the folds...reat job otherwise...

Ozanosfer
04-25-2005, 09:47 AM
son yaptıgın iş süper olmuş....

last work is very nice. Keep it going.

Akrep
04-25-2005, 10:32 AM
cha0t1c1:

I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for your suggestion.Actually thats a common problem o' mine,there is a lack of contrast in the most of my works..i hope to getover it by practicing more and more

Ozanosfer:
Thank you!!
Eyvallah Ozan saolasın...

Tariq12
04-25-2005, 11:33 AM
Cool man. Love the costume and the rune stick. :thumbsup:
Cheers,
T.

Vectorius
04-25-2005, 11:43 AM
oh yeah! the master look good! g:thumbsup: reat job!..but the "slave" should maybe look a little more agressive..and he should maybe look at his master...

Keep it up and good luck!!

ilusiondigital
04-25-2005, 11:53 AM
Wow, very cool colour, a lot of harmony. Like the expression of the master. Hope to see more, mate

Tranchefeux
04-25-2005, 09:36 PM
Your colors are sympathetic nerves, perhaps makes attention with the folds of clothing if not very cool.
:bounce:

hesido
04-26-2005, 11:42 AM
Superb work with colors. Will you add some fresnel-like effects to the edges of the characters (esp the skin of the beast) so the edges will be more visible and they don't fade away into the sand? Or will you keep the black outlines (which is still fine)

Akrep
04-27-2005, 01:59 PM
Tariq12: Thanks man!

Fiolka Alexandre: Maybe i can make the beast more aggressive but its impossible to look at master.Cuz its against the montagne .You have to check out my sketches and u'll see where the beast is lookin at. Thanks...

ilusiondigital: Thanks man!

Tranchefeux: Instead of darkening the cloth i'll add more light to some places, thats all. Thanks...

Hesido: For my opinion, in some places, figures will mix with place by fog, smoke and light effects.. and black lines are only assistence to the picture. Thanks...

jugeras
04-28-2005, 03:47 AM
a bit bothered by the creature. left paw and teeth. i think when beasts snarl they show mostly front teeth? light on the staff can still be a bit more intense?

youve got a mastery of colors and youre doing great. cheeers maaaan. :thumbsup:

lutzw
04-29-2005, 10:05 AM
Hi Bahadir!

You took your painting a long way already -- good work! The posture of the master and his beast seem to be so much more energetic now.

I'd agree with cha0t1c1: maybe you'd need to work out more shadow-plays on the clothing (esp on the shirt) to achieve more contrast and realism. I think you already chose light coming from two sides when considering the face and the gown -- so don't forget this when working on the folds...

About the herded souls: maybe the concept of souls being herded would be more obvious when there is more than one hovering around? Just an idea, don't harm your whole composition...

Cheers,
:) <- Lutz

Akrep
05-02-2005, 07:17 AM
jugeras, lutzw: Thank you guys! A will take your comments into considiration...

Akrep
05-02-2005, 07:23 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1115014997_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1115014997_large.jpg)

I added more details..

Tranchefeux
05-02-2005, 12:56 PM
Hi, good progression on your painting the colors and environment are
always cool, and the sky that it success, go, go for the
continuation. :thumbsup:

gu
05-02-2005, 03:25 PM
Nice dymanic clouds!!!It´s color is wonderful

Gus

ms@zx
05-02-2005, 06:06 PM
very well rendered especially the clouds,nice dynamic pose for both the characters as well as the angle..great piece of work all and all~keep it coming:)wish u luck here

Akrep
05-02-2005, 08:18 PM
Thank you very much guys!!
I keep on...

Akrep
05-02-2005, 08:21 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1115061706_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1115061706_large.jpg)

Detail from master...

joshcaez
05-02-2005, 08:34 PM
I really like the color scheme you have going on here. The character design is great, plus the sky gives me a feeling that something is about to happen... Cool stuff! http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon13.gif

arLutiK
05-03-2005, 04:00 AM
Bahadir, very nice work, I just love your colors, I don't know what it is but I feel like an insect attracted by a lamp when I look at those colors.

Awesome work.

dekal
05-03-2005, 07:21 AM
iyi şanslar bahadır

MDN67
05-03-2005, 12:04 PM
the work on the textures of the cloths is very great, good work

hesido
05-03-2005, 03:47 PM
Nice Update. Anxiously waiting for "the soul" you mentioned earlier..

O.Martin
05-07-2005, 11:05 AM
Lovely drawing style! :thumbsup:

Akrep
05-10-2005, 08:33 AM
freakjc, arlutik: thank you for your kind comments

dekal: sana da bol şanas la...

MDN67: Thanks man!

Hesido: i started it already

O.Martin: Thanks!

Vectorius
05-10-2005, 09:46 AM
Hello Akrep!! What's going on?..:) Your caracter looks very good:thumbsup: maybe, just a detail, You should add pupils in his eyes, but very slightly..Just to suggest them...In order to give him a more demoniac feeling and to avoid entirely white eyes ...

Akrep
05-10-2005, 07:37 PM
Fiolka Alexandre: I am planning to leave it as it. But why not:)
Thanks anyway...

Akrep
05-10-2005, 07:41 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1115750461_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1115750461_large.jpg)

Little more details and begining of the soul painting.

seccad
05-10-2005, 07:48 PM
cok güzel oluyor hocam ellerine sağlık. "master and servant" taki en iyi çalışmalardan biri bence. daha da iyi olcak inşallah kolay gelsin

authentic
05-10-2005, 08:59 PM
I like your composition and lighting. Good luck for the end of the picture.

GhostInTheMachine
05-10-2005, 09:04 PM
good work, i like this. i wont crit for the sake of it - enjoy the challenge! :D

Akrep
05-11-2005, 07:54 AM
Seccad: Çok saolasın elimden geldiğince iyi olmasına çalışıyorum:)

authentic, GhostInTheMachine: Thanks guys

hesido
05-11-2005, 09:24 AM
Hey Akrep, this is turning out to be really well indeed.

Noticed one thing, the creatures right foot's 'thumb' nail is short but the left foot has a really long nail (which looks better). Maybe evening them out would be a nice touch?

agios
05-11-2005, 09:30 AM
great atmosphaire you have created...i like the colours you used and the main caracter is super...good luck

kerembeyit
05-11-2005, 10:40 AM
Cok guzel gidiyor, ruhu da merak ettim baya:) Looking great so far. Good luck!

anostudio
05-11-2005, 10:45 AM
:eek: ........................very good work!

Akrep
05-13-2005, 05:07 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1116000457_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1116000457_large.jpg)

Close up from soul...

Akrep
05-13-2005, 05:11 PM
Hesido: Tamam kardeş saolasın. Bi ayar çekerim one:)
Kerem: Buyrunuz ruh da bööle bişe:)

agios and anostudio: Thanks Guys!

duddlebug
05-13-2005, 05:13 PM
Lovely technique... the clouds and figure are just great.

And i like the latest detail... look forward to seeing him in the scene...

paperclip
05-13-2005, 05:26 PM
Cool style, I love the clouds too. reminds me of traditional oils. Only crit is that the 'soul' could use a little more contrast.. or maybe lighten the darks to give the whole figure a lighter key. Another thing, it looks a little monkey like, is this intentional?!
Nevertheless, it looks amazing and your level is much higher than mine, so who am I to crit? :D Feel free to ignore me.

I'll be keeping an eye on this....keep it up!

Akrep
05-13-2005, 07:13 PM
duddlebug : Thanks Man!

paperclip :
you catch the right point
its true that the soul looks like a monkey,maybe i wouldn't notice it if you didnt say..thanks a lot

Akrep
05-15-2005, 12:51 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1116157891_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1116157891_large.jpg)

little more details...

Akrep
05-15-2005, 11:03 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1116194631_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1116194631_large.jpg)

i tried to change the expression of the soul's face,i think now it doesnt look like a monkey that much. :)

Akrep
05-18-2005, 03:35 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1116383708_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1116383708_large.jpg)

here is final coloring...

Akrep
05-18-2005, 03:44 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1116384250_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6078/6078_1116384250_large.jpg)

and the final image...

xric7
05-18-2005, 04:57 AM
wow..
wonderful piece!!:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
very beautiful color and great comp.:thumbsup:
love ur sky and characters a lot.
best luck to u.
cheers.

sablebrush
05-18-2005, 07:04 AM
Bahadir , güzel sonuclandirmissin tebrik ederim , sana basarilar dilerim :thumbsup:

hesido
05-18-2005, 11:03 AM
Nice finish! :)

There is a striking resemblence to Willam Dafoe, with that soul!

Gerçi baş barnak konusunda beni dinlemedin ama neyse :D:D

Akrep
05-18-2005, 03:14 PM
xric7 :Thanks Man! :bounce:

sablebrush: eyvallah hocam saolasın:thumbsup:

hesido: yok sana barnak marnak :)


and GOOD LUCK EVERYONE!!!:buttrock:

dekal
06-01-2005, 02:00 PM
nerelerdesin olm? bi ara lem!

AdrielaSakamoto
06-10-2005, 06:56 AM
I've been looking at the image Backgroun_3 for ten minutes now, it seems. Same old song: I don't know how I missed this one.

It's astonishing that something so bereft of inhabitants can be so moving. It's one of the finest skies I've ever seen painted, and I've seen a quite a few.. Your final image is, to me, a strange and beautiful mix of the fantastic, the fairy tale, and the legend. I don't pretend to know what it all means, but that is part of the beauty. I wish you much much good luck with the challenge.

A. Sakamoto

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