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PeterPuppet
03-22-2005, 09:12 PM
Péter Józsa has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=6046)

Latest Update: Coloring WIP: the archers
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115651830_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115651830_large.jpg)

I think I´m not gonna be able to finish this in time. hm... anyway, here´s a little update. Hope you like.


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
03-22-2005, 09:28 PM
Well girls and dudes, good luck to everyone...

looking forward to this.:twisted:
...in a very peaceful way of course. Love ya all.

PeterPuppet
03-22-2005, 10:23 PM
dudes, have fun all... let´s forget the past. cya

peace, pete

Adamos
03-23-2005, 07:16 AM
Good start, now let's see those 5 steps!

PeterPuppet
03-23-2005, 08:05 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1111608325_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1111608325_large.jpg)

All right, my brain goes turbo... here is a first sketch. This guy belongs to the "demons from hell" group, actually he´s the "representative". More later. c&c alway welcome hovewer I know that this guy has some serious anatomy-issues... hehe nevermind. Just a quick sketch, right?

PeterPuppet
03-23-2005, 09:55 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1111614954_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1111614954_large.jpg)

There we go as promised... The "representative" of god´s army. These titan´s are gonna fight each other I guess...
c&c is still welcome.

Tranchefeux
03-24-2005, 06:00 PM
Hi

All my encouragement for new challenge
Good luck

PeterPuppet
03-29-2005, 04:33 PM
Thanx Tranchefeux, same to you.:)

Squibbit
03-29-2005, 04:34 PM
hey very interesting idea there ! :thumbsup:

AlyFell
03-29-2005, 04:42 PM
Wow! Distubing looking characters... I look forward to seeing the layout and what your going to do with them! :D

PeterPuppet
03-29-2005, 04:42 PM
Hey Squibbit,
Thanx man. I kinda needed this. Makes me sure I don´t miss the theme. hehe
Love ya

Hey Posh,
Love ya, too... love everybody. More to come soon.


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
03-30-2005, 01:31 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112189478_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112189478_large.jpg)

Here we go... This is my official "concept sketch" milestone for now. Lines are on the way.

PeterPuppet
03-30-2005, 04:28 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112200130_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112200130_large.jpg)

There we go the lines... Here´s the story:

In life every one of us is either servant of good or servant of evil. But soon comes the final day, the day of judgement where the fight begins between the army of god and the demons of hell and a master will be born, the master of the world, his intensions depending on which side had the best support, the strongest leg, the biggest power. It´s up to us now to change the world and to become masters of our destinies, Amen.

Yo, that´s it... Let´s get some colors.

peace, pete

PeterPuppet
03-30-2005, 10:51 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112223108_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112223108_large.jpg)

I just wanted to make the expressions of the chars clear to myself. I´m wondering about what kind of background I should use...

peace, pete

Adamos
03-31-2005, 08:10 AM
Szevasz Petya!

Mi ketten egy színvonalat képviselünk, úgyhogy biztassuk egymást! Hajrá! :)

A Kornéltől meg tanuljunk! (bárós) Elmagyaroskodunk itt egy kicsit magunkba hehe!
Apropó :mit csinálsz Te Németbe? Ha nincs hozzá közöm, nem szóltam. Akkor most egy angol hozzászólás is:


Yo Pete!

Keep on sketching and coloring, I hope you can manage to put down exactly what's in your head! I like your mutated angel/demon! Is that God = master? and the devil = the servant?

Cheers.

PeterPuppet
03-31-2005, 08:40 AM
Na akkor hajrá! hehe... úgy tünik ma magyarok napja van (mindegyikönk az elsö oldalon:) ), hamár tegnap nem volt az:D . Hogy mit csinálok itt kint? Tanulok... naja átmenetileg...


Yo Ádám,

Yeah god´s about to become master of the world and devil´s about to die. Well, if the folks decides like that. If not, devil is destroying the church in his hand and killing god... hehe I´m tired and talking bulls**t.


peace, pete

Squibbit
03-31-2005, 08:50 AM
lol , than 'amen' on the blade rules!

komaroml
03-31-2005, 09:27 AM
Hi Pete!

I am looking forward the final coloring...

Nem csak a top-pon maradasert ..:)

Laszlo

BrutalMonk
03-31-2005, 10:50 AM
Hi there! Good luck for the hungariens :D
(Nagy jó az ötlet teccik h olyan "fura", ezalatt az embervégú angyalt értem :))
Do you use wacom?
I have a newbie genius thing but i dont realy use it cos there is something wrong in it.
I cant draw a normal straight line...it is always pinny :'(
BTW
Let' see some updates, have a nice painting!
Dave

kornel
03-31-2005, 11:01 AM
Hi Péter!I love much your double-minded creatures! That's a good idea...

(viszont én nem tennék a háttérbe várost - hacsak nincs nagyon sok időd - mert azt jól és szépen megcsinálni.... inkább valami misztikus-fantasy tájat, ahol a két pólus érezhető...?)

cheers: Kornél

PeterPuppet
03-31-2005, 11:27 AM
@Squbbit: cheers:bounce:

@Laci: Yo, viszont!

@Dave: Yeah I´m using wacom. Oh and thanks!

@Kornél: Gondoltam a tájra én is, csak attol félek, hogy akkor emberhiány miatt eltérek a témátol. Ezért akartam egy totál lerombolt várost ábrázolni ezekkel a kis szurkolókkal. Különben öszintén szolva egyáltanlán nem vagyok elégedett ezzel a képpel, úgyhogy azt hiszem újból kezdem. Nem szeretném leszúrni az ördögöt, mert akkor az egész elveszti mester-cseléd értelmét. Inkább meglovagoltatnám az anygyalt, csak akkor szegény emberkének a túlsó oldalon kitörne a nyaka:twisted: . Most öszintén szolva nem tudom, mihez kezdjek, csak azt hogy ezt a két figurát meg szeretném tartani. De kösz a motivációt!


I must say, I don´t really like what´s going on in my pics, so I´m gonna make a new concept soon. Well, I´m gonna think about one. If someone has a good suggestion what kind of pose I should use for them, please feel free... until that, my name is BRAINSTORMING!



peace, pete

PeterPuppet
03-31-2005, 08:34 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112301242_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112301242_large.jpg)

A very, very quickly done sketch. This is my new idea.

NOOB!
03-31-2005, 08:43 PM
thats looking pretty nice!

PeterPuppet
04-01-2005, 12:12 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112357530_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112357530_large.jpg)

Just coloring a little bit. I changed parts of the armor of the soldier...
The gas mask still needs sone tuning.

PeterPuppet
04-01-2005, 12:14 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112357677_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112357677_large.jpg)

In the sense of education, I made a closeup of the guys head. Easy to make out that it´s made a 100pro with oilpastel-brushes.

Adamos
04-01-2005, 01:43 PM
Very expressive eyes there Buddy!

So what's up with your God vs The Devil concept? Rethinking it? Good. Take your time. Kornél had a point there concerning the BG. looking forward to your progress.

písz

PeterPuppet
04-01-2005, 04:57 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112374651_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112374651_large.jpg)

Dudes, I have found something that might be hm... probably of interest... well, I´m posting it anyway. Usually, I don´t keep my RIFs, but make BMPs out of my current proggress and I continue working on that.(don´t ask me why, bad habit). But this time I found something... Hope you like hehe... oh yeah: "In the name of education" and...

peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-01-2005, 05:02 PM
Hey NOOB!,

Thanks for the encouragement!


Ádám buddy-boy,

The angels aren´t skipped, I´m just putting humans and emotion into the foreground. It´s still JUDGEMENT DAY:twisted: ...


Any crits and comments welcome (as always...:D )



peace, pete

oatz
04-01-2005, 10:26 PM
I did find your combined minds really intriguing cause I haven't seen anything like it in posts around here. Don't know where you're headed with your recent sketches but I can see some potential there.

NOOB!
04-01-2005, 10:27 PM
great paints man!

CoreyArtE
04-01-2005, 10:28 PM
woah thats pretty dynamic...and it tells a story, very nice very nice:bounce:

PeterPuppet
04-02-2005, 11:23 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112441005_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112441005_large.jpg)

I don´t know what I´m doing. Dudes, I need a great idea!


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-02-2005, 11:32 AM
and thanks again for your nice comments! :thumbsup:

oaz: You are right. The only thing I worry about them is, that I don´t have no real humans in there. I´m gonna think about it again... But thanks for dropping by!

NOOB!: Thanks man!

CoreyArtE: Telling stories is imo very important. The only problem is, that I tend to leave theme hehe... Thank you, too for your kind comments.

They are most welcome and highly motivating!


peace, pete

am7
04-02-2005, 02:03 PM
Ay Ay! this really caught my attention! I love this perspective/composition you've got, your front characters show good silhouettes. But perhaps you should try to make out even better facial expressions on you'r characters, as your composition doesn't leave much room for "body language"?

I'll be watching this! :)

PeterPuppet
04-02-2005, 07:27 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112470034_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112470034_large.jpg)

I´ve been sketching again... The "AMEN-BALDE" is back hehe... Tell me what you think!

choptider
04-04-2005, 10:15 PM
i thaught we have to put human character?
good brush!
and by the way you should put a link to your thread 2D challenge ,in your signature.

PeterPuppet
04-05-2005, 03:04 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112709891_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112709891_large.jpg)

I just had this great idea. roughy rougyh ugly, but great. I think this is what I´m gonna go with. It covers everything I wanted. Love, action, Amenblade and the doubleminded creatures. cheers


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-06-2005, 08:03 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112814215_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112814215_large.jpg)

I just began to set up the whole scene and give a basic colorsheme to the characters for easyer coloring later on. What do you think?


peace, pete

kornel
04-06-2005, 10:09 PM
Unique idea!

-szurkolok, hogy sikerüljön... ha bármilyen segítség kell priviben bármit...

I'm waiting for the next step...

cheers: Kornél

PeterPuppet
04-07-2005, 08:01 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112900459_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112900459_large.jpg)

This is my lineart-milestone. I know it is nothing special and not very clean, but hell, that´s how I work hehe... The final result is important, right?

PeterPuppet
04-07-2005, 08:09 PM
Thanks Kornél:thumbsup:

Az ajánlatodat nem felejtem el, arra mérget vehetsz. Még megbánod amit írtál:twisted: ;) . Én is remélem, hogy sikerül ezt befejeznem. Mármint idöben hehe... Kösz mégegyszer!


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-07-2005, 08:14 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112901290_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112901290_large.jpg)

This is my final "concept sketch" milestone. Hope you like. I thought about making the hair of the woman golden and I´m still thinking about the bachground, so ít´s not really final, but the rest is gonna be done during coloring process, so...

And thanks again everybody who drops by!
Love ya...


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-09-2005, 12:50 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113047412_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113047412_large.jpg)

I just changed my mind, because there is too many wings going on in the 2d-challenge, so I´m switching concepts. 2d-goes 3d and 3d goes 2d. First I´m gonna do 2d I guess and I if have time left, I´m doing 3d.


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-09-2005, 03:36 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113057416_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113057416_large.jpg)

This is what I have in mind. I don´t know if anyone can figure out what´s going on in there, but I can explain:
This is a day of a servant. Beginning from the left side (morning) to the right side (night). First this guy is working, than it´s getting too hot for him and he lets his sheep work (cut the hair of the big guy), -who was sleeping until that- and he plays his flute under the tree. The last time we see him, he´s trying to get an apple from the tree, which´s to high, so his master (the big guy) helps him. I mean the big guy wants him to survive (which he can´t do without food) and cut on his hair. Well night is night, everybody sleepin´. Hope you like...


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-09-2005, 08:06 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113073608_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113073608_large.jpg)

I changed back... I´m confused, kinda not satisfied with anything today... sorry about that. Here´s a try (kinda sucks) with the colours on the woman...
Well,... ugh... yeah...


peace, pete

NOOB!
04-09-2005, 08:08 PM
hey man,looking great,nice nipples.hehe

Vahn
04-15-2005, 11:07 PM
i like the last layout ... i hope u stick to that m8 :)

Adamos
04-15-2005, 11:15 PM
Szervusz Kérlek Alássan!

Jó látni, hogy nem engedsz az egyedi anatómiádból, hát ne is, mert nekem bejön ez a "közös törzshöz tartozunk" fíling! Szóval üssed, mert már alig egy hónap van hátra és az pedig szinte sömmi! Sok sikert az apokaliptikus háttér elkészítéséhez! Kornél tud tanácsot adni égbolt szerkesztést illetően! :)

Na gyűrjed!

Szevasz!...

The concept is really one of a kind! Good luck on the rest!

Adam

PeterPuppet
04-16-2005, 05:51 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113670267_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113670267_large.jpg)

I´ve been doing a new sketch, because (as already mentioned, imo there is too many wings and fantasy-stuff going on in here). It´s about Humanity (big face) and its eternal suffering from war (small guy) since the beginning of time... forever(?) (That´s why he has all those different styled armory and weapons on). Hope you like, I do hehe...


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-16-2005, 07:27 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113676076_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113676076_large.jpg)

I just cleaned up my sketch. This is my line art-milestone. Crits, comments welcome.


peace, pete

NOOB!
04-16-2005, 07:51 PM
nice idea,lets see more!

PeterPuppet
04-17-2005, 11:12 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113732739_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113732739_large.jpg)

I had a little time yesterday. This one is for you, NOOB!. Thanks for the encouragement!


peace, pete

NOOB!
04-17-2005, 11:25 AM
hey man,luvin the coloring style,the strokes look great.



hmmm i might try sum of em strokes in mine....hmmm

PeterPuppet
04-17-2005, 11:28 AM
Oh, I forgot to thank Vahn and Adamos. You dudes are great.

Vahn: Ich freu mich, dass es dir gefällt, aber ich verschiebe die Idee bis auf Weiteres, weil ich mir viel Zeit dafür nehmen will. ;) Ich hoffe, du magst auch meine neue Idee.:)


Ádám bátyám: Szeavsz! Örülök, hogy bírod elözö képemet, de úgy döntöttem, hogy mást csinálok, mert sok eröt és idöt és szeretetet:D és ... és ... stb-t. szeretnék beléje fordítani és éppen most ezekböl van a legkevesebb... Naja, szereteten kívül persze :love: ... Remélem ez az új ötlet is bevág nálad. "Na akkor nyomjuk Bélabá" (Most láttam a Kontrollt DVDn és megörülök az elsö fél óráért.. hahh). Na akkor nyomjuk. Legalább egy magyar döntösnek köne lennie, nemde?:bounce:


Kornél: Ez az utolsó két mondat neked is szól!!!



peace, pete

NOOB!
04-17-2005, 11:28 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112223108_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1112223108_large.jpg)

I just wanted to make the expressions of the chars clear to myself. I´m wondering about what kind of background I should use...

peace, pete

hey pete i must say,i really like this one,i think if the main characters where in more dynamic poses it could work really well.

PeterPuppet
04-17-2005, 11:35 AM
Hey NOOB!. Thanks for the nice comment first:thumbsup: .

There are two problems I had with that sketch. 1.: There weren´t really any real humans in there and the other thing was that it would have taken a 2 months minimum to do that one properly. I am sure to do that one later on, but not for this challenge I think. I´m gonna realize every sketch I did in here one day, I guess:) . Oh and you too keep it up man! I love your style!


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-17-2005, 02:26 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113744393_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113744393_large.jpg)

There we go an update... The light isn´t quite defined yet, but who cares about light anyway, right, hehe? This concerns the armor which really sucks... godda make it new but I´m not really in a mood like doing it, so I began with the big face... Crits and Comments welcome...


peace, pete

NOOB!
04-17-2005, 03:11 PM
work on the lightsource..lol

looking great so far!

Adamos
04-17-2005, 04:24 PM
Hey Pete!

I like this one the best!

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113744393_large.jpg


Tetszik ez a megközelítés, és szerintem is sok van a démonokból, de legalább a Te démonod eredeti volt (kecske és káposzta is megmaradt volna), de ez utóbbi háború (nagyfejű diktátor kontra tehetelen kisember még jobban tetszik!

Tudod, hogy ezekhez az úgymond világpolitikai nézetekhez a régi kommunista plakátokból meríthatnél dinamizmust, meg erőt, mert azok aztán ki voltak találva, bár akármelyik hadiplakát ki volt találva (az "Uncle Sam wnts YOU for U.S. army)

http://www.honc.de/img/honc/i-wantu.jpg


...is pontosan erről szól!

Igazságtalanság! Diktátorok erőszakossága, és a másik végén az áldozat: a kisember. Sztem ezt kéne megfognod...de gondolom ez is a célod!

Az a fegyver talán egy kicsit túlzottan tuning, de majd meglátod, az arckifejezéseken dolgozz! melyik mit akar sugározni, ajánlok egy-két képet a neten Hitler szónoklás közben...


http://www.pitt.edu/~aps1/hitler.jpg

PeterPuppet
04-17-2005, 05:06 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113753985_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113753985_large.jpg)

I added a sketchy background... What I want to achieve is that behind the two guys everything is destroyed (that´s why smoke is going on) and the direction the guys look at (actually only the little guy) is still clear, blue and ready to be destroyed. I know it´s not quite clear and blue yet, but it´s almost what I want to have. Tell me what you think.


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-17-2005, 05:20 PM
Thanks NOOB!, I´m always happy to read your posts here:) .


Ádám, Ádám:) : Postod nagyon jókor jött hogy öszinte legyek. Éppen perfekt anti-háborús beállítást idézett elö bennem ez a két kép. A nagy fej szimbolikusan áll az emberiségnek és még tele fogom rakni kosszal, sebekkel, golyójukakkal... A kisember arcán még dolgozok, mert én se vagyok kifejezésével elégedett... Kösz és szevasz. Várom a te updateodat!



peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-17-2005, 06:14 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113758090_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113758090_large.jpg)

Not much changed, just the tone of the background... Just as I wanted it to be... :) hope you like.


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-19-2005, 03:54 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113922498_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1113922498_large.jpg)

I worked on the background and on the big face a little. Tell me what ya think.


peace, pete

profg
04-19-2005, 10:31 PM
Helló, tetszik ez a festmény. Az utóbbi pár képen viszont mintha a kisebbik csávónak le lenne vágva a jobb lába. Legalábbis szerintem a fegyver mögött látszódni kéne valaminek...

There's some problem with the right leg, won't be difficult to work out, i guess. Good luck with your image.

NOOB!
04-19-2005, 10:34 PM
i don't like how his right leg just dissapears.

apart from its looking great so far.!

PeterPuppet
04-20-2005, 02:19 PM
Hehe... yeah, the leg disappeared because I was just working on it at that time and as it didn´t look quite good yet, I blended that layer out for those pictures:)

Thanks anyway. I´m glad you like it, however I´m thinking about a new concept again... hehe... not quite sure yet, which one I´m gonna do...

Sketch is coming soon:thumbsup:


peace, pete

kornel
04-20-2005, 04:28 PM
Hello Pete! this comp a bit strange, but interesting...

Kíváncsian várom a folytatást...

hali: Kornél

PeterPuppet
04-20-2005, 05:21 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114014063_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114014063_large.jpg)

There we go... This is my newest idea. I think this covers the theme the most and I can go quite far with it.

What we see are two men. The one guy is shooting at something and to do that he´s leaning at his servant "friend". The servant is sitting on a box filled with ammo and a gun between him, but instead of help the other guy out, he´s reading a book while he´s backed up from the attackers by his buddies body... The shooting guy´s gonna take a quick look and just realize, that his "intelligent and well educated friend" doesn´t really care about him and that in reality he is the servant... Now transfer this to our world and you´ll see what I´m talking about. If you don´t understand, you can be happy because this doesn´t concern you ;).


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-20-2005, 08:15 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114024542_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114024542_large.jpg)

I worked on it a little... How do you like? I know it´s still very sketchy, but... time can heal any wound, right ;)


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-21-2005, 04:43 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114098220_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114098220_large.jpg)

I´m just going crazy with this... Painting his body was sooo much fun so far :) Tell me what ya think so far!

peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-21-2005, 04:48 PM
Hey Kornél!
Mindig öröm tölt el, ha véleményedet látom threademben. Kösz:) .


The body is quite messy yet, I know, but it´s still just a sketch. I´m just experimenting around a litlle bit. Any comments or suggestions welcome!


peace, pete

ms@zx
04-22-2005, 06:54 PM
nice going mate,cool changes too,i think its slightly too obvious to show the rib bones ..
just a personal preference ,i like the 1st concept more.:)

PeterPuppet
04-22-2005, 09:02 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114200174_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114200174_large.jpg)

It´s update time... hehe. I changed the concept, well the whole idea is different now. I replaced the reader by ... (secret, you´ll see him in the final concept). What I can tell you is why I took off his cloth. It´s because it´s 6 o´clock in the morning and the guys are attacked by aliens, so he´s gonna wear only his shorts. ;) funfun


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-22-2005, 09:18 PM
Hey Michael!

Good to see you posting here! Oh yeah, the rib bones: Little bit hardcore, right? hehe. That´s just for the sketch. Actually, he doesn´t have any skin on his body yet (excepted his head and hm.. "roughlegs", as they are easy to render). I´m always starting on nacked bodies like this. It´s easyer for me to set up the lights and paint the shadows later on this way.:)
Thanks for the nice comment! I´m sure you gonna like my new concept more than you like the first one:) .Cya bro



peace, pete

xric7
04-25-2005, 04:03 PM
wow..
realy cool idea & nice comp.
good luck

AirbORn
04-25-2005, 04:29 PM
I like your idea. To tell you the truth I wasn't a fan of it at first, mainly because I didn't see the relationship between master and servant. My guess is that the guy is shooting at god or something, perhaps he is mad at him? I don't know. I hope that my impression isn't silly. Anyway, I think once you tighten up the detail you'll have yourself a beautiful piece my friend. :)

kacorkiraly
04-29-2005, 01:03 PM
üdv!

tökjóegyéniek a figurák!

meg igenjóleltalált ezazuccsó pisztoyosis.

interesting ideas. (in centre with war, fight and evil)

PeterPuppet
04-29-2005, 01:05 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114776346_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114776346_large.jpg)

Here we go again. I guess this is my last concept as I won´t have time to do a new one ;). It´s exactly the opposit to my last one (war). Yeah, guess twice: this is about peace. C´mon guys, let´s be a little more optimistic. I hope you like. Tell me what you think!


peace, pete


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-29-2005, 01:16 PM
xric7: Thanks, however I think you weren´t serious about that "wow". ;)

AirBOrn: Thank you, too. I must be honest, I havent checked out your thread yet, but I´m gonna do right now.

kacorkirály: Kösz a bíztatást!



Crits and comments always welcome.



peace, pete

PeterPuppet
04-29-2005, 07:02 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114797774_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114797774_large.jpg)

There goes my lineart. It´s basically my concept sketch, but with little tweaks like on the sky, on the face of this guy and on his clothes. Behind the guy, there´s gonna be a big explosion.
I want to bring in more action and drama. On the other side, I want to keep it humorous, so the background´s gonna be pretty blured. Hope you like.
Tell me what you think.


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
05-01-2005, 12:52 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114948323_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114948323_large.jpg)

Yeah, I finally reached coloring-wip-milestone hehe. I changed his face a little (there´s still much work to do) and his pants. If I´ll have time, I´m gonna paint an airfight in the background, but the main characters first. Hope you like. Tell me what ya think.


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
05-01-2005, 05:53 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114966375_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1114966375_large.jpg)

I´m going crazy with this. I know that this whole scene is out of focus and totally scary to watch, but I can fix that later on. I just felt like showing where I´m going hehe Crits and comments welcome.



peace, pete

NOOB!
05-01-2005, 06:25 PM
really great,i like this,but the angle may be a bit too *out there* may rotate it so it looks diagonal.

PeterPuppet
05-01-2005, 07:49 PM
Hey NOOB!,

thanks, but I don´t really get what you mean with *out there*.



peace, pete

Maginnis
05-01-2005, 08:35 PM
man that's crazy! i love it, i think really polishing out the whole background scene into a tighter composotion will really take this thing to the next level. experiment with the placement of the planes, parachutes, smoketrails, etc. also i think his two arms are too stiff and too parallel, perhaps have one of his arms holding the bird and another a gun, and bend one of em a little bit. he's a real man of action shooting guns and grabbing birds while falling to the earth:)

edit: oh yeah I see that you have searchlights in there, don't worry about putting those in unless you plan on doing a darker time of day. right now they seem a bit out of place

spacesnail
05-01-2005, 11:18 PM
At last i find some time to look at your work
Great piece and great technique :arteest:

Maybe you can add some more birds trying to keep him flying (or slowering his fall) ?
This would show more master & servant relationship ?

Cheers

Manu (lazy and tired)

PeterPuppet
05-02-2005, 08:25 PM
Hey Megginis: thanks for the nice comment. The jellow lines are supposed to be gunfire, no spotlights, hehe.:) Thx again!

Emmanuel: thanks bro, I´ll try to give my best.



peace, pete

NOOB!
05-02-2005, 08:27 PM
Hey NOOB!,

thanks, but I don´t really get what you mean with *out there*.



peace, pete

i mean its kinda of an eye strain,i have to turn my head to see whats happening properly

but its still a great image!! keep at it!

nice update btw!

PeterPuppet
05-02-2005, 08:32 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115062365_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115062365_large.jpg)

sry guys, here we go. No big changes, just on the zeppelin. Hope you like.

NOOB!: I´m gonna try to fix the angle and thanks!


peace, pete

NOOB!
05-02-2005, 08:45 PM
u don't have to change a thing if u don't want to,its only my opinion.

PeterPuppet
05-04-2005, 05:16 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115223384_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115223384_large.jpg)

I did it again. New concept.


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
05-04-2005, 07:05 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115229949_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115229949_large.jpg)

Just to get over this quickly.


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
05-04-2005, 09:12 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115237544_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115237544_large.jpg)

The guy wants to learn how to fly and the bird is his master and servant as he helps him if he´s falling.


peace, pete

Gdinnye
05-04-2005, 10:58 PM
Mit akarsz te Józsa gyerök ez az utolsó képed a lefelé lógós csókával nagyon jópofi.

Drukkolok mindenkinek mert jó buli ez itt.
Good luck everybody.

Gdinnye
05-04-2005, 11:01 PM
Kár hogy a fickód kevesebb reménnyel indul a tanulásban mint a mestere,de az ötlet tetszik a sok ölős-harapós-véresszájú között.

PeterPuppet
05-05-2005, 12:04 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115291088_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115291088_large.jpg)

Little tunings on both of the characters. I´m working on the hands and the background right now.

(Edit): The feet need to be fixed, too. I know that. More to come soon.


Hey, Tommy, örülök, hogy teccik. Te miért nem veszel részt a buliban?



peace, pete

PeterPuppet
05-05-2005, 02:54 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115301235_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115301235_large.jpg)

This is the kind of backgound I was thinking of, but now I want something little more green with more nature. Well, I don´t know. What do you guys think?


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
05-07-2005, 12:57 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115467018_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115467018_large.jpg)

...

PeterPuppet
05-07-2005, 12:59 PM
double post, sorry about that.


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
05-07-2005, 01:01 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115467296_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115467296_large.jpg)

I uploaded the same image again exidentally. Sorry about that. This is my lineart milestone.


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
05-08-2005, 02:16 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115558195_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115558195_large.jpg)

I had a little time to work on my archer-guy. Hope you like.

EDIT: I just realized, that the head is too small :) Gonna fix it right away.


peace, pete

PeterPuppet
05-08-2005, 05:20 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115569250_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115569250_large.jpg)

I fixed the head and the arm. There are still some proportion issues in it. I´m gonna fix those later. Hope you like.



peace, pete

PeterPuppet
05-09-2005, 04:17 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115651830_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/6046/6046_1115651830_large.jpg)

I think I´m not gonna be able to finish this in time. hm... anyway, here´s a little update. Hope you like.


peace, pete

NOOB!
05-17-2005, 09:15 PM
when did u start a new one? why did u start a new one? the last was great.

if u don't make it,i'll seeya next time.

good luck for now!

PeterPuppet
05-17-2005, 09:20 PM
Uh, I just don´t have time for this. Yeah cya nex time maybe. :) I wish you luck NOOB! and everyone else, too. It was a great challenge:thumbsup:



peace, pete

Adamos
05-21-2005, 04:30 PM
Would've wanted to check a final of this one, nevermind, there will be other challenges,

Gondolom sok dolgod akadt, nem baj, lesz még Budán kutyavásár! Jó volt együtt küzdeni!

Csákó-Pákó

Ádám

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