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olya
03-22-2005, 05:41 PM
Olga Barkhatova has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=5978)

Latest Update: Final Image: In the fear slavery
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1116297817_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1116297817_large.jpg)

Every person is a master of something or somebody. You play with your toys in the childhood. You subdue animals, machinery, even people once you have grown up. But you are also a slave. The questions are "whose" or "what"?

An ancient philosopher said:
"One could be a slave, but he is still free. He is a slave! But show me who is not. One is the slave of his lust, another -of greed, third - of ambitions, but everybody is the slave of fear."

Thank you everyone!!)

olya
03-22-2005, 08:57 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1111525063_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1111525063_large.jpg)

I think....

Mordalles
03-22-2005, 09:04 PM
wow, looks great. cant wait to see your progress.

DyslexicDan
03-22-2005, 09:35 PM
Ooh nice face. Look forward to seeing your progress

Nehym
03-22-2005, 09:42 PM
Looks good as far as it is right now. :) I like the small expression you managed to give her with not that many lines.

I think it is somewhat easy to guess (somewhat) the general idea behind this sketch, butfutre might be holding some surprises.

Will check back your thread for the progress. ;)

olya
03-23-2005, 07:19 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1111605580_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1111605580_large.jpg)

Thank you for replies)
I wanted to tell more, but my english not so good.

NOOB!
03-23-2005, 07:34 PM
oh man,dogs and there owners seem to be a popular theme.

*thinks about changing his concept*

gud luck looks good for now!

DimitrisLiatsos
03-23-2005, 10:19 PM
Beautiful theme Olga ...very neat pose too...subscribing! ..have fun

Squibbit
03-23-2005, 10:34 PM
hey this looks very nice ! nice doggy,niiice..

NinjaA55N
03-24-2005, 12:22 AM
Nice and classic pic is about to be created. I cant wait for ur further submissions. What will be the story about?

leuparaleu
03-24-2005, 02:15 PM
beautiful composition. this may become a great picture. can't wait to see more. good luck !

NYC77
03-25-2005, 08:23 PM
So Far, So Great! Good luck.

ozhaver
03-25-2005, 08:32 PM
I like the triangular composition! I'll keep watch. The doggies face is lovely! XD

marcheen
03-25-2005, 08:35 PM
that dog looks really nice. can't wait to see more...

olya
03-30-2005, 05:06 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1112159163_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1112159163_large.jpg)

Every person is a master of something or somebody. You rule your toys in the childhood. You can subdue animals, machinery, even people ones you have grown up. But you are also a slave. The questions are "whose" or "what"?

An ancient philosoper said:
"One could be a slave, but he is still free. He is a slave! But show me who is not. One is the slave of his lust, another -of greed, third - of ambitions, but everybody is the slave of fear."

Claireabella
03-30-2005, 06:00 AM
Hi Olga. Looks fantastic as it is...! Good luck. :thumbsup: Claireabella

olya
03-31-2005, 05:35 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1112247341_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1112247341_large.jpg)

Thank you everyone)))

cha0t1c1
03-31-2005, 05:54 AM
the face of the woman looks more worried than powerful, what if you tried a smirk, just a thought, very tense composition, keep it going, I love te blackhole sense in the colouring(very doomsday). I think It'll be my doomsday with those k-9's, look at all those teeth, so much anger :D

tilite
03-31-2005, 07:24 AM
ohh look at that... just subscribed:thumbsup:
this is going to be a cool piece.. ur a fast mover. i disagree the face is fine, its those brutal necks on the dogs im worried about. if those proportions are what u want u'll need to make the rest of their bodies extremly muscular. is that an extreemly long train on the chicks dress??... nice touch
great film nior colors.... all the best

Pshygon
03-31-2005, 07:27 AM
This is a beautiful painting and a awesome concept. Cant wait to see the final!

TheFirstAngel
04-01-2005, 09:34 PM
wonderfull work, very strong n cool. wish you best luck and loadsa fun. cheers

olya
04-06-2005, 06:28 AM
Thanks))
Yes... I did not like the first dog I have changed it.... I did not want to do the woman powerful.

olya
04-06-2005, 06:35 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1112765701_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1112765701_large.jpg)

Thanks))
Yes... I did not like the first dog I have changed it.... I did not want to do the woman powerful.

Tariq12
04-06-2005, 10:47 AM
Hey Olya, this is looking very Luis Royo, Great Stuff.
T.
My Master & servant : http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=222506

My Web Site : www.tariqart.com

Battle Angel : http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=203795&page=1&pp=15&highlight=battle+angel
:thumbsup:

MDN67
04-06-2005, 10:51 AM
very good concept, very good drawing and very good choice of color, a single small criticism, I do not know which race of dog you chose, but I find that the forehead is too much small with regard to the machoire, except it a very beautiful image, good work

bdblok
04-06-2005, 10:55 AM
hi!

thats a great idea, and nicely done! although i think there are too many dogs around now!

keep going! :)

nebezial
04-06-2005, 01:16 PM
this is a scary image, seriously, the faces of those dogs are incredible, the girl is awesome, but ive seen many girls, it is the dogs here that send the cold shivers down my spine:eek:

GhostInTheMachine
04-06-2005, 01:27 PM
the scene is looking good! your [mistress] is very well done and her dogs work well too. mb you could have one skulking (head low, looking shifty- the hyena look) cos thats always unnerving.
ive come across a scene just like this! i was halfway into my 9 mile run around this forestry when i came around a bend inthe track and saw all this weird movement in the track way ahead. after a second i realized it was a woman with about ten or more dogs - not little dogs either, german shepheard and and the like, big animals. i turned around.
:argh:
good work! :thumbsup:

R-K
04-06-2005, 01:47 PM
:eek:

scary!

tilite
04-06-2005, 02:09 PM
those dogs are pritty brutal. i love them.

cant wait for u to update again, when? and what are u working on?

Arc80
04-06-2005, 02:54 PM
WHAT's up,

Nice piece. Love the dog and the female character. Very dark and sexy.
I'll be keeping up with your thread.

cheers,
Archie

W-I-L
04-06-2005, 02:56 PM
The dark is great.

a very symetrical pice.. did u mean for that?

sidchagan
04-06-2005, 07:11 PM
Lookings good, the colors and mood are dark and well suited. I do think the dogs' faces look too similar though. Plus, the one in front has a really broad face, but the body is so slender that it doesnt seem to match.
Good work on the girl too, the pale tone goes well.

artjunkie
04-07-2005, 12:06 AM
Nice concept and sketches. Love your painting style too... dark and dangerous! Keep up the good work! Cheers!

CoreyArtE
04-07-2005, 12:09 AM
this reminds me of a picture linda did, Really sweet colors, nice use of dark browns !

olya
04-07-2005, 07:45 PM
Thank for comments!

olya
04-07-2005, 07:58 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1112900304_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1112900304_large.jpg)

Background and more details

W-I-L
04-07-2005, 08:00 PM
getting better and better... i am scared!

spacesnail
04-07-2005, 08:08 PM
Hello Olga

wow you're doing a great job:thumbsup:
May I do a little crit ? The girl's left eye seems a little strange, like she is not looking at the same point...
All my congratulations for the gothic mood :bounce:

Keep it up

Snail

spacesnail
04-07-2005, 08:18 PM
Hey I've just taken a look at your award winning picture. Very impressive work.
And what a surprise to see some similarity in mood, color scheme, etc...
As we say in France : "Quand les grands esprits se rencontrent". Funny coincidence.:thumbsup::shrug:

Snail

ANARKY
04-07-2005, 09:20 PM
This is a lovely looking image, the tone and colours work very well. The girl has a very nice look to her, the hair being a particularly good part.
As has been mentioned, I would vary the dogs faces, keep the front one as is, but change the others, put them at different angles etc.
Also, get some reference for the dogs as the anatomy looks off to me. I can see your going for a beefed up Mean Devil Dog type feel, but the anatomy needs to be there for it to really work.

Otherwise this is a really nice image and is comming on very nicely.
Good luck!

walrus
04-07-2005, 09:24 PM
It's looking very nice so far. Very creepy mood, and the dogs' faces are just viscious!
I completely agree with spacesnail about her eyes appearing a little odd. I think the hilight on her left eye (the screen-right one) is making that eye appear like it's looking further to the screen-left than you intended, and perhaps shrinking that hilight could help some. But wonderful piece either way, and good luck with it!

-mike

Claireabella
04-08-2005, 09:12 PM
Hi, I still love this piece just as it is............... :applause: Claireabella

OrO
04-10-2005, 05:42 PM
i love the colors!!...gloomy...great job!:)

olya
04-11-2005, 08:12 PM
Thank you evreone!!:)
Yes ....I have changed eyes... Also has made changes of the first dog.

olya
04-11-2005, 08:15 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1113246932_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1113246932_large.jpg)

..more changes

olya
04-11-2005, 08:38 PM
>> CoreyArtE....this reminds me of a picture linda did..>>> Which and than????

spacesnail
04-11-2005, 08:58 PM
I must say I prefer the look you gave her. She seems looking through the watcher.
Nice job !:thumbsup:

walrus
04-11-2005, 10:00 PM
Nice work, that works a lot better now, imho. Are you done? Is there anything else to do on this beauty?

-mike

arLutiK
04-12-2005, 01:48 AM
Very nice work Olga, awesome mood :thumbsup:

tilite
04-13-2005, 09:10 AM
awesome master and background... excellent mood
if u have finnished and do have a bit of time left... i sugest going over the train on the dress and the dogs... try and add some detail and get rid of those highlights

olya
04-13-2005, 04:35 PM
Thanks guys,
I have not finished.... I do more details.

Squibbit
04-13-2005, 04:41 PM
why aren't the dogs smiling ? aren't they happy dogs ?

olya
04-15-2005, 06:36 PM
Squibbit> they are smiling :)

olya
04-15-2005, 07:03 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1113588232_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1113588232_large.jpg)

I have mixed dates, and have almost finished work not by May, 18 /April, 18)

melkao
04-15-2005, 08:04 PM
:eek: Wow man it look pretty dark and dangerous , i never would ask her telephone number.
nice:thumbsup:

Dulshad03
04-15-2005, 08:23 PM
great colours and a great dark mood.
I like your style, it reminds of something that i have never seen before. Almost like a DE JA VU. If you know what I mean.http://cgtalk.com/images/smilies/buttrock.gif

fensterer
04-15-2005, 09:27 PM
I like the dog's expressions. Also the clouds look fantastic. I think maybe her arm is a bit too long but that just could be the style. Nice work!

victim335
04-15-2005, 10:50 PM
I'm ashamed that I missed this thread! Wonderful work. /Molodets Olenka/ <-if you don't understand well just skip it :thumbsup:. Some suggestions, once again, as usual want to give some personal visions (you may omit them, I just can't sit silently, when I get excited): The girl has some red stuff in her hair. It woud be nice to see some small red elements on the dogs too. Like um - red eyes, or red pieces of cloth tied to their paws/necks or bright red wounds. It seems to me it will underline the connection of master-girl and her servants.

ozhaver
04-15-2005, 11:45 PM
I think perhaps the dog in the front could use sharper edges. ^_^

Mordalles
04-16-2005, 12:07 AM
yeah, your pic is really coming to life. i love it so far.

olya
04-18-2005, 04:53 PM
Thanks everyone! Thanks for the help.
Spasibo Sasha!))
Can be a hand make more shortly.... Now she seems to me long too

xric7
04-18-2005, 05:10 PM
oh wow..
great work:bounce:
& thanx

my master and servant 2d
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=227677

Miyagu
04-23-2005, 08:19 PM
beautyful.. :) the red feathers are a nice touch! :thumbsup: canīt wait to see it finished!

olya
05-16-2005, 02:53 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1116208413_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1116208413_large.jpg)

I want send final image.... but all my image which a send before now disappear. My profile - empty. What can I do?????

olya
05-16-2005, 03:23 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1116210208_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1116210208_large.jpg)

Every person is a master of something or somebody. You play with your toys in the childhood. You subdue animals, machinery, even people once you have grown up. But you are also a slave. The questions are "whose" or "what"?

An ancient philosopher said:
"One could be a slave, but he is still free. He is a slave! But show me who is not. One is the slave of his lust, another -of greed, third - of ambitions, but everybody is the slave of fear."

Claireabella
05-16-2005, 08:44 AM
Hi Olga. I really love this piece of work. Good luck. :thumbsup: Claireabella

Squibbit
05-16-2005, 09:40 AM
Squibbit> they are smiling :)

Of course! A veil drops from my eyes, such
pretty smiles!

olya
05-17-2005, 03:35 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1116297333_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1116297333_large.jpg)

additional line art

olya
05-17-2005, 03:43 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1116297817_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5978/5978_1116297817_large.jpg)

Every person is a master of something or somebody. You play with your toys in the childhood. You subdue animals, machinery, even people once you have grown up. But you are also a slave. The questions are "whose" or "what"?

An ancient philosopher said:
"One could be a slave, but he is still free. He is a slave! But show me who is not. One is the slave of his lust, another -of greed, third - of ambitions, but everybody is the slave of fear."

Thank you everyone!!)

TheFirstAngel
05-21-2005, 06:09 PM
Olga, just came to congratulate you on your most beautifull and great final piece! i really love your way to draw, its soft fluent dark and epic, as well as most elegant! all my best wishes on the final and keep on rocking!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

melkao
05-23-2005, 02:46 AM
great scary final image man good luck:thumbsup:

Slav
05-23-2005, 07:22 AM
good luck olga. :)

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