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Floriz
03-22-2005, 02:33 PM
Floris Spronk has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=5905)

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: Master sketch
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5905/5905_1112128205_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5905/5905_1112128205_large.jpg)

A sketch of the master, he is in a wheelchair.. Maybey because of an attack of his servant.. I will try to show signs of an previous escape of the servant.. The TV-screen shows his servant in action.. It\'s what makes him happy :P Ah well, im still trying to make a decent compositing.. THe servant mech has to get a prominent place in the background.. But I still don\'t know how :)

MDN67
03-22-2005, 02:42 PM
welcome and good luck:thumbsup:

Floriz
03-22-2005, 02:43 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5905/5905_1111502620_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5905/5905_1111502620_large.jpg)

Hey :) Just a first sketch (very colurfull.. I know ;) :P It's pretty hard to make a robot look evil ;) But i'll see how it goes :) Finally something i can motivate myself to finish :)


Thank u MDN67 :)

MDN67
03-22-2005, 02:44 PM
it's a really good comic's style i wait the next skretch

NOOB!
03-22-2005, 02:50 PM
haha looking good!! keep it up

MetasynMan
03-22-2005, 04:42 PM
I love the concept & the look on the "master's" face is great. Good luck in the challenge!

pencil-head
03-22-2005, 10:52 PM
FYI, I don't know if you know this but you need to have a human in your image.
Q: Does one of the characters in the Master and Servant relationship need to be human?
A: Yes - absolutely. One of the characters needs to be human - doesn't matter whether he/she is the master or servant.

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=219957

I like your robots though.

Floriz
03-23-2005, 02:37 PM
:blush: Okey... now I feel pretty dumb :P I didn't read the rules that good I guess :P I'll have to make the master figure human.. Problem is I don't habe any expierence in drawing humans :( So I have about 50 days to learn ;) Thank you alot for telling me :)

AirbORn
03-23-2005, 02:44 PM
Looking good :)

I think making the eyes red would give it a move sinister appearance. So far I like the relationship, but something inside me wants to see the big robot doing something. :P I don't know what it can do, but I'll check back soon and see what else you cook up. :)

Floriz
03-23-2005, 04:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5905/5905_1111595099_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5905/5905_1111595099_large.jpg)

.. Just experimenting.. Now I have to work on the human Master character.. I might do an engineer or something.. I'll see :) What do you think of this one?

walrus
03-23-2005, 05:17 PM
Nice work! I like the proportions of the head and torso a lot, and the lighting is great! The arms feel very non-functional to me: They don't feel like they could bend, for one thing, and the connection to the shoulders feels weak compared to the anatomical strength of the upper body. But it's also early, I know you'll refine it more. Good luck with it!

-mike

Floriz
03-25-2005, 09:44 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5905/5905_1111743887_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5905/5905_1111743887_large.jpg)

Hey! Two more tryouts, Should the master be on top? Laughing? Or In front of his controle center or something.. The background?Now It's an empty garage but maybey it could be a destroyed city.. I'm still trying ;)

CoreyArtE
03-25-2005, 09:50 AM
Woah I really like this one!

tadbit
03-25-2005, 10:21 AM
Hey Floriz. Just like old times at 3DFC. Well back then it was 3D. Good stuff so far. I like the left one.

applejak
03-25-2005, 07:15 PM
great start, i like the one on the left, the composition is very centralized which is fine but think about ways to decentralize, you should definitely add objects in the foreground, maybe the robot is standing in a cluttered room full of boxes, electronic equipment, etc. the opening behind the robot could be the space between buildings or just make the window taller, good luck

simonjaap
03-25-2005, 09:36 PM
yowyowYOW ma pal floriz.. good luck man! great to see you doing this.. i'm trying the 3d part.. but it's kind of hard (havent got anything done yet either..) lets see what we can make :) and plz finish it properly eh :twisted:

sidchagan
03-25-2005, 11:46 PM
Hey there,
You've got a good concept going, I liked the last 2 you posted. I think it'd be better to go with the one on the right, since the added color and objects make the drawing more...alive. The guy should definitely be laughing though, give him a more maniacal look. You might wanna make the actual drawing taller too, since the focus is dead in the middle.

Floriz
03-26-2005, 07:23 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5905/5905_1111864993_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5905/5905_1111864993_large.jpg)

Just sketcing.. I want the servant to be captured because he is so dangerous his own master is afraid of him..

Floriz
03-29-2005, 08:30 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5905/5905_1112128205_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5905/5905_1112128205_large.jpg)

A sketch of the master, he is in a wheelchair.. Maybey because of an attack of his servant.. I will try to show signs of an previous escape of the servant.. The TV-screen shows his servant in action.. It\'s what makes him happy :P Ah well, im still trying to make a decent compositing.. THe servant mech has to get a prominent place in the background.. But I still don\'t know how :)

TheFirstAngel
04-01-2005, 10:36 PM
cool update. lol, that "stephen hawkings meets the incredibles" looks promissing. how bout a big screen, like thest things they have in nasa n stuff, and a visable controll terminal maybe, to give the servant more relation to his master...

keep it up, like thus so far! wish y goodluck and loadsa fun
cheers

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